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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrah.

wow awesome update..thanx dear 😊poor abhay..anyway continue soon..sweety sure dear wl try to update soon😊:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: minibsp2007

👏Wow...very nice thanx dear 😊 glad u liked it 😊can't wait for the next part.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: minahil1997

owesom heena!!!! thanxxx minzzz😊


finally abhay knows that pia is pergnant with his child... the child is connecting herself to abhay... i hope abhay realizes this and go back to pia to be with her and tell her how much he love her😳...hmm he wl surely go bt whether he wl able to confront her on nt...for this wait till nxt or may nxt 2 nxt part mathili ahh!! * deep sigh* , wat to say about her , she can never change😡.never😆.. she wanted powers and not abhay always... poor abhay... the update was fabulous awww tahxn swtss and now i m eagerly waiting fr next update ... continue soon🤗sure wl try to do🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gals_11

Woww yaar Beautiful update.thanx dear😊. Dis getting intresting.glad u r liking it.😊 aww I loved d last convo btw Abhay n his daughter Angel.😊. Hope Abhiya 'll meet soon..wait till nxt part Continue soon sure plz..thanx for d pm ma pleasure😊..lol.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MyAngelAbhay

Awwwsssumm!!thanx dear😊 Loved it! gald u loved it😊 Infact,i luvd al da chps! thankuuu so much Felt bad 4 Abhay! 😭 😭 😭 Can't wait 2 read da next chp!! Update soon sure wl try to do so😊 n plz do add me 2 ur pm list.. 😊 ofcourse😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

Awesome! thanx shalini😊That metz wanting pia's child for powers is somewhat close to my ff. yup quite same But its unique n really fabulous thanx dear😊. Hate this bitch metz n her evil brains. But when are Abhiya meeting honey? very soon ...or i cn say in nxt part 😊Dying for them to meet 😆.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update thanx dear😊
loved abhay and baby convo awww glad u liked it😊
cant wait 4 next part
con soon sure😊
thanx 4 pm ma pleasure 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Omg...cat is out of the bag...I mean .Abhay knows abt piya n the child...Im dancing.Well I was visualizing the scene...😉😉😉...Abhay's reactio ...Haila...Aur handsome lag rha hai...😛😛😛..omg...u knw ur comments r just woowww...i cn't stop mydelf frm laughing 😆..its so damn gud to read ur comments 😉.Hope Abhay reaches Piya soon...ofcourse warna i m sure tum use pia ke paas khud pocha dogi 😆😉

N metz...cn I kill her .ya u cn bt let me do d honour😆.😉.She is sooo sweet...😉😉😉...Public forum hai...Gaailya dena mana hai...😆😆😆..do one thing mujhe pm karke bta do which galiyan u want to give her 😆.I think she know abt Piya n the child as the child has already connected 2 her Daddy dearest...So danger n Savior r cmg..at this time just cn say wait n watch😉.Child ki entry late karwana...Gussa mat hona...Pehle abhiya romance dikhana...😆😆😆.hehehehehehehe...for sure😉😆
U write sooo well ki mujhe poori picture saamne dikhti hai...😃😃😃...awww so swt of u u said dat😊
Accha apni writing ki aur tarref sunna chahti ho to jaldi update karna...Awesum update...yes bose😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rashika27.1997

amazing dear thanx hun😊

its really very toching gald u r liking this story😊
plz pm me when u update plz plz sure😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

part-4


DAD... d time stopped there only for abhay...
he just took a moment to picturise d face of her princess mom in his mind n heart...he knew somewhere in his heart dat only she cn b d one...few rules r same in vampire n human world...he never went so close to nyone xcept HER in his whole life of 100 of yrs.n nt even bf4 dat wen he was human...his pia...d mom of his princess...his heartbeat...nw d only reason of his living...n d only ray of sunshine in his dark life...
n abhay again tried to connect to his angel...his heart was filled wid thousands of emotions...he wanted to b there wid his daughter n her mom...those unsettling emotions were forcing him to reach his destination at dat moment only...bt then he controlled them n concentrated...coz he knew her angel was so young dat it might b getting diifcult 4 her to get connected...although he understood she has gt uparallel powers dat no one cn hold in this whole vampire clan...coz he had never heard abt this kind f connection...bt he was sure this cn't b lie or some magical game...coz he was feeling d presence of pia
angel- dad y u r nt her wid me n mom...??
abhay(trying to control his emotions ..he felt pian at d most innocent n very first question of his angel, he was out of words for few moments< bt then he re collected himself n answered his angel's question) don't worry ma angel i wl b there asap...just till then take care of urself n ur mom...i love both of u n reli sry for d whole time i was nt wid u guys bt nw i wl b coming there ...
angel- yepieee...dad i wanna talk more bt nw mom is feeling sleepy...she wants us to sleep nw...v both av our pasta nw...n i always make her to feed me at unusal times n don't knw hw many times a day. bt u knw she is d best...bye dad angel loves u n mom n there pia dozed off n ofcourse angel also...
abhay( was on 9th sky) - luv u angel...g'nite ...av a sound sleep love...luv u pia...
n abhay was trying to control his happiness...he couldn't believe dat GOD cn ever b so kind to a vampire .........
abhay( to himself)- it means she still loves me, otherwise y is she never nutriting ma child in her womb...she loves me...i just need 1 chance pia...i wl make everything perfect in our life ...me, u n our angel...
abhay went to haseena n hugged her...haseena was surprised n happy also dat after so many days abhay came to her like this...
haseena while patting his back..abhay r u ok...
abhay (while still hugging her)- mom...i m going to become dad soon...
haseena was shocked after listening wat abhay said while taking a step bck n facing abhay...
haseena(still confused)- wat r saying abhay...
abahy(wid his best smile)- mom do u remember i told u abt dat voices which i was hearing frm last few days...dat was none other than ma angel...she was trying to connect herself wid me n today she did it...
haseena- how cn u b so sure abhay...don't forget this is a vampire world n anyone cn play this kind of game wid u
abhay- no mom this is true...i cn feel this...i cn feel her presence through ma angel...i cn feel pia's presence mom...this cn't b a lie...
haseena( was still worried) coz she was seeing d consequences of this whole thing bt abhay was so lost in his perfect world...dat it was impossible for him to realise dat how difficult this is going to b for him also..he was behaving so like human which ofcourse he was nt n being his mom haseena didn't want to take away his son's happiness by telling him abt d consequences
haseena(to herself)- abhay how cn u forget this wl bring mathali back ...n pia's life is already in danger...how cn she think of carrying a vampire's child in her womb...this wl cost her by ending herself into a vampire or may b she wl end up her life forever ... which u wl nt b able 2 bear abhay..."pia is ur life...i cn sense how much pia loves u also!!!
abhay(by holding her frm her shoulder) y r u so lost...
haseena(lieing) - i m happy for u son...she is ur life...
abhay -yes mom she is ma life n i m going to get ma life back...i m going to new jersey mom...she is there
haseena(she was still at unrest- new jersey??? bt y dat place
abhay- yes mom she is there n i m going there!!!
haseena just nodded in affirmation , she didn't want to say nything at dat moment...coz watever wl b d consequences...abhay needs to b wid pia nw
..................

nxt morning was beautiful...it was raining in new jersey...n pia opened her eyes...welcoming d beautiful morning...her heart was filled wid joy...things were getting a bit normal in her life...jamey and kabir were there wid her..jamey joined her office...
pia moved towards d bolcany of her apartment...n she made her self comfortable on d woodern chair ...admiring rain drops wid her beautiful chocolate brown eyes...wen someone brought a mug of coffee infront of her eyes..n she looked at d hand...n while passing her beautiful smile she said thanx jamei
jamei- u r welcome darling!!!...so how r u feeling...
pia- oh gr888...i just love d rain...n i m reli feeling something special is going to happen today...
jamei- ya may b kabir wl find out a sensible gal
pia( while giving a cunning smile) ahem ahem...khuch jal raha hai...
jamei(got what pia was trying to say)- nthing is burning...so better nt try to use ur silly stupid brains here
pia- as if...i m d only one wid silly stupid brains n wat abt ur silly stupid heart..who is falling for kabir...i cn c dat...
jamei-nthing is like this pia...just kabir is a very swt n nice human being...n v r just gud
pia- frndsss (in a sarcastic way)..jamie don't lie.. , atleast don't lie to me...
jamei( this time quite serious)- pia...there is no word like love exist in ma dictionary..u cn't forget who am i... i cn't put kabir's life in danger coz of me...sooo
pia(got jamie's point n feeling bad)- jamie falling in love is nt in our hand...(while putting her hands on her like a support) n i reli appreciate ur concern ...bt believe me give a chance to ur life..
jamei was looking directly in pia's eyes
pia(understood where she was heading)- don't even try to bring ma xample in front of u..dats an another story (she was hurt bt tried to b normal)-
jamie- let it b pia...n most important wat he feels abt me...no one knws..so let him decide first then i wl think abt it...n smile returned on both d faces...
pia- let me tel u jamie don't xpect nything frm dat stupid..u knw na how he is...carless n stupid like a child...
jamei(while laughing)- i knw..lets go otherwise v vl get late...
pia- ya sure...i av to go early coz i av my meeting wid mr. walker...
jamei--ya sure ...so ma'am u go n get ready...till then i wl prepare breakfast for us...
pia- no jamie..i wl av something on my way...even i m nt in a mood to av something...n ya i wl take care of myself(pia specifically mentioned d last line coz she knew jamie wl start a lecture, dat she should take cr of herself n blah n blah_)
jamie smiled at her last few words...ok ok...go get ready otherwsie u wl get late!!
after almost 30 min pia was ready to leave
jamie gave her a hug ...tk cr babes n al d best for meeting...
pia smiled ...thanx jamie n ya u knw wat "love is too young to knw wat concience is" n she winked at jamie...n left
jamie took few seconds to unerstand what she meant...she replied almost to make pia listen...miss shakespeare...c u at d office...
............
pia's meeting went well wid mr walker, she got d contract n after dat she went to pizza parlour n after aving her first meal of d day she left for d office...
at d office...she told kabir n jamie abt d meeting n also dat jamie n kabir together going to work on this project...
kabir- u knw chimpunk i love u ...if u wouldn't av been here ...pta nahi mera kya hota...
pia(while giving a side smile)- shoot KR...wat do u want frm me nw...
kabir-- awww...look u knw me very well...while putting his arms around her shoulders...actually na...i av ma date wid mia today so cn u pls make a design for this project(while handling a file to pia)
pia's jaw dropped n jamie was nodding her head in disbelief- now who is this mia pia asked...
kabir..0h miaaa...arey don't u remember wen we four went to reverb ...there i met her n it took whole month to me to convience her for a simple date...
pia (while giving a hit in his stomach frm her elbow)
kabir(like in pain)- ouch pia...
pia- KRRR
kabir(while mAking puppy faces) ok paka this is d last one...
pia- no
kabir- nw shifting his gaze towards jamie...
kabir(again wid her puppy looks)- jamie plsss convience her..for me plsss
n here jamie..how could she say no to kabir
jamie while assuring him just by d movement of her beautiful sharp eyes...
jamie moved towards pia who was standing few steps away frm her..
pia- no way jamie...no point ...i m nt going to do his work..coz of his some stupid date
jamie- plS pia ..i wl help u wid this project..this time for me
pia(finally)- ok jamie bt this is d last time...
kabir- ya promise nxt i wl take jamie wid me on d dat n surely then u wl nt sy no he said bluntly widout any realisation
pia n jamie's jaws dropped.again..
while kabir gave a tight hug to jamie...n left d place...while winking at pia...luv u chipmunk...n ya jamie u av beautiful eyes
pia- av fun KR
pia while looking towards jamie who was lost somewhere in her own world...n pia snapped her finger infront of her eyes..if u r done wid ur staring session...cn v go back to d work miss beautiful eyes
pia passed jamie while giving her best teasing smile...
jamie...piaaa
...
in d evening...
jamie- pia...i m going for my dinner...
pia understood dat she was talking abt her animal hunt...
pia- take care jamie n come back soon
jamie- ya sure bt may b i wl get late , so don't wait for me... i av my keys wid me... n av ur dinner properly...
n she left...

after few hours pia also reached her apartment...it was quite hectic day for her...bt still she was happy coz of d perfect weather outside n finally her life was coming on track
n pia entered her apartment n switched on d lights..n she felt some one's presence n a familiar scent, she saw here n there bt there was no one (pia to herself...wats wrong wid u pia...d apartment was locked).n she directly moved towards kitchen for aving some water
while moving towards kitchen she was talking to her angel
pia(placing her hand on her stomach )- angel i m so sorry today i was reli busy so i didn't get a chance to talk to u...bt i promise v wl av long chat after d dinner...n i knw dat u r hungry n i knw wat do u want to av nw...something indian...right...bt i must say angel u r very naughty (while taking out a bottle frm d fridge)...i av grown different taste buds wid in a 1 month...i don;t knw frm where do u av got such different tastes coz i was never like u n i m sure u r just like ur... n she stopped there...n realised wat she was abt 2 say...bt there was sumone else who was present there n completed her sentence...she is just like her dad...d voice said...n pia's feet frozed there only...d voice...dat melidous voice...she cn recognise dat voice in millions...she knew who was there...his scent was there...she didn't want to turn around...bt she could feel dat he was taking his steps towards her...
her legs were shivering...her mind stopped working n her heart beats...there was no control of pia on them...n finally she turned around...n while moving her gaze slowly frm d ground towards d person who was standing in front of her...n abruptly she took a step back n she took support of d fridge...otherwise she might av fallen on d ground ...there was complete silence n only voice was of her heart beats
pia..while looking directly into those blue eyes..aaa..ab..abhay...
abhay(while looking at her wid those passionate eyes)-pia...n there was long eye lock b/w them...there were no need of words b/w them...their eyes were talking enough to tell wat they were feeling at dat moment
tears welled up in her baby brown eyes...n he removed d distance of dat single step b/w them n hugged her while pulling her into his arms (bt carefully)
n there they both were standing ...time had stopped for them...pia was crying out her heart...n abhay was creasing her back...dat hug was filled wid all emotions love, pain, need, desire...n
after few minutes...pia came to her senses..her head was still on abhay's chest. they were holding each other as tight as they could b...both were holding their life in their arms...
bt then pia suddenly moved away frm him wid a jerk (reality hit her dat wat she was doing)...n again standing at d same position...
pia(re- collecting herself, pain n anger returned in her eyes which were turned red due to crying..)- abhay
abhay (looking directly in her eyes n took a step ahead bt he was hurt by looking at d pain n anger in her eyes)-pia
pia(nw wid full strength n pointing him to stay there only)- u listen to me abhay raichand...i knw how av reached here...i knw u knw d truth dat i m preganat wid ur child...bt let me tel u onething u don't av ny right on my child...she is just mine...n (pia started feeling sudden pain in her stomach..while placing her hands on her stomach) n (she closed her eyes in pain)
on d other hand abhay heard his angel..dad pls tel mom nt to get angry...i cn't hold these emotional pangs...it hurts me n i wl end up hurting her...pls dad stop her...pls...
pia..just leave..(tears started rolling down her checks..) .
abhay was so confused to get nything n he just took another step towards her n while taking her face delicately in his both hands widout wasting another moment...he softly placed his lips on her...as their lips met...a spark ran throw their bodies...they both knew dat they were craving for each other...dat kiss was full of passion..pia who wanted to move away couldn't stop herself under his passion n finally she slowly lifted herself by standing on her toes...her hands suddenly moved throw his silky soft hair n his hands firmly placed on her waist supporting her...both were totally lost...n it was raining outside... n at dat moment they didn't even feel d need of air ..they just wanted each other...d moment of pain turned into d moment ecstasy...
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Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago

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