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Posted: 14 years ago

~Immoral WORLD~

PART 8




Geet "hamne kabi puca nahi!"

Chamily "toh aj puclena!"

Geet "alright"

As they silently ate, the thunder was the music. It is a cold night. Geet shivered and covered her self tight with her thin dupatta. She now and then looked at the car, just making sure he is alright in there. She felt guilty leaving him. He sure will be fine...

Chamily "whats wrong with you? And where is your jumper? You will catch a cold!"

Geet "nahi! Hame tik hi!"

Chamily "geet!" she snaps.. "& what type of husband you have, you are shivering in cold here and he in the car, warm.."

Geet "isme uski ka galti hi, au tori hamse kha aisy javo!"

Chamily "geet! Geet! Geet!.. Uff what will I do with you?" she ignored her... And concentrated on her food. Another thunder made her jump...

Geet somewhere have completely forgotten about the incident that have took place month back. She was happy again in her life... But she felt like telling him the truth before he finds out from someone els...

Geet "chamily... I want to tell him everything."

Chamily "about what?" she was shoving lots of food in her mouth...

Geet "about my!"

Chamily "no! You won't say anything... Nothing. Imagine what if he leaves you after that" geet did not like that thought. "No men will like his wife been touched by someone els before!"

Geet nodes silently...


Maan sat in the car, trying to phone every possible place, trying sault out some work and detective to find any information about his brother, but in vain nothing. Where was he? & what happen to him?

Geet and chamily comes in. Geet socking wet... Maan looks at her. He was certain she will catch cold...

Maan "we are resting in a near by lodge. Its to late, & its raining. Maan ordered the driver to go some khurana house... Geet wondered who is this khurana...

The lodge was no other then maans. His granddad made it when they used to live here, someone did sell it off but maan have brought it back. He planned to bring everything back.

Geet "hame koi ajnabi jaga pe rahynge?"

Maan "its no stranger, its someone I know! & no one lives there we will be perfectly fine."

Geet nodes, she can believe anything of maans with close eyes... She will never ask him twice or doubt him. Geet smiled at him, which he even fail to understand, why exactly she was smiling...


When the car came by the gate it was stopped by security guards, no stranger was allowed, and surly no handa car. Maan puts his window down, and tells him to allow, the guard was about to salut him, but he stops, somewhere chamily found that suspicious, while geet completely lost in maan, she barely cared, she did not care for money, wealth or she had any intention to even use them, she was brought up in a poor condition after her father death... Maybe then she had trouble but chamily have even taught her sleep under a broken house...


Driver parks the car, maan walks in flowed by geet and chamily, it was a nice small lodge... It looked like it have not been used for long time, but the condition was perfect.

Maan showed chamily her room while geet and maan walked in to there bedroom...


Maan "go and change, you will catch cold..." geet nodes silently... Suddenly few lighting brought some attention... Geet jumped in maans embrace...

Maan "its just lightning! Don't worry!"

Geet "hame bohot dar lagta hi!"

Maan frees her then opens her luggage, taking her cotton white night dress out... "were this..." she nodes and was about to walk in to the bathroom...

Maan "you can change here! I will be back any minute.." he walks out leaving the door close... Geet quickly takes her kurti off then her pants along with her inner... Drying her skin with a towel. A chile wind passed through her when maan suddenly opens the door. Her cheek went bright red as she stood there silently. Nude... Maan have lost the count that how many time he have tasted every parts of her body yet, here she is standing there nude, making him week just by looking...

Geet did not have the ability hide her self when maan slowly walks in, locking the door behind him, his each step increased geets heartbeats. She just was not sure what to do , or what to say... "ap... Hame.. Laga..." geet takes few step back, finding her self against the bed... She have dropped her towl in fear... Maans index finger came by and stroked her cheek.

Maan "you are so naive!" he somewhere did not like the idea of fooling her, and somewhere he knew well that how much she is effecting him, this is more then attraction... He remembers from the first day... Day one... Then she had pain, now there is only lust in her eyes for him...

Geet "ap hame aisy math dekiye... Hame kuch hotahi!" she whispered in a innocent voice... She could barely look at his eyes in sigh. Her ceek was turning red with each passing by second...

Maan "ka hotahi?"he asked, stroking his hand down to her asset... Stroking , playing... Geet shivered, yet it was pleasurable...

Geet "hame pata nahi!"

Maan "toh pata karo!"geets makes a baby face, still dare not look at him. His seductive voice was melting her, while it was driving maan insane. She is hell of a beauty... How could anyone regist her.

Maan quickly picks her up nailing her to the bed, taking his belt off in hurry & filling her in with him... Geet laid there moving along with him...enjoying every moment.

She hugged him tight with wispear... "ap hame chorkar math javo... Ham mare jange.." the sound did not reach maan as there sweet moan sounded way better...


Morning after, geet felt the sourness. She was on maans chest... She smiled... Hugging him tighter. He was the best thing that ever happened to her... In every way... How could she express her care towards him...


She quickly gathered her cloths then went to the bathroom for shower... Meanwhile maan wakes up, stretching him self, the dark cloud still covered the sky, but there wasn't much rain as last night. He really needs to be in HP now, but now the night worth it. He looked round for geet, then his eyes stopped on the bathroom door. Locked. She must be taking shower. Maan closed his eyes... Her every gasture was making him week. He really did not like that. Not at all...



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Posted: 14 years ago
Yippee me first::
Awesome update
Loved it x
Awww so maan is somewer feeling guilty for doing all this to geet
Hope he starts to luv geet as much as she luvs him
Geet should tell him the truth or he would think that geet cheated on him...
Oooh so chamily got suspicious wen that guard saluted maan
Cont soon Xx...
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Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 8
Like maan
He startted to get confused :) liking that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
I just hope that maan will not use geet and throw away when his work is completed!...
feeling sorry for geet!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
plzzz dont hurt geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls mann dont fool geet
she cant live with u
understand her
but pls
dont leave her pls
we cant see her in sad again
plsss
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
loved it
is maan is in love with her or only lust
pls dont make her hurt
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet must b shuttered when the reality of this immoral world will b came out...this maan is so direct...he knows he is here for some missions and he is using geet but he is making love with her...really immoral everything...even geet is hiding truth to maan...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsum...gr8 parts...thnq so much 4 d double update... <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan is changing due to her innocence another nice update

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