#7 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Skta Hai???(AR)note-155 - Page 55

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Posted: 13 years ago
Bichhu mere naina...badi zehereeli akh maare
Kamsin kamariya saali ik thumke se lakh maare☺️

Note hajaaron ke...khulla chhutta karaane aayi
Husn ki teelli se beedi-chillam jalaane aayi😍

Aaayi ! chikni chameli...chhup ke akeli..pauwa chadha ke aayi



Jaaneman upadte degi tu yaa main aur item dance karun?🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
koi ni mele shaath kehlta...😭 na koi update deta hai..
main bhi gaane hi gaunga idhar

Ammi ammii...betu ka dil tumpe aaya ammi...
tele ko main dunga chummi..
tu hi toh meli jaan hai..jaan hai..jaan hai
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dil diya aitbaal ki hadh thi
Jaan di tele paal ki hadh thi
mal ge hum khuli riii aankhe
je tele intjaal ki hadh thi..

hadhh ho chuki hai aaaja..jaan pal bani hai aajaaa
mehfil saji hai(akele) aaaja...teli kami hai aaajaaa...

dale na ho jaye kahin del na ho jaye😭

Aaajaaa jaaneman😍

dekho maine dekha hai ek sapna..phoolon ke shehar mein ho ghar apna
kya samaa hai..tu kahaaan hai.
aaajaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-219

Armaan mumbled "happy marriage anniversary jaan" in riddhima's ears, riddhima just nodded with closed eyes and kept on losing herself in his engulf, armaan waited for her wishes..

A: riddhima happy anniversary.. (little loudly but riddhima again didn't respond) riddhimaaa.. (he loosened his grip around her waist as he wanted to see riddhima)

R: (instantly) armaan aise hi pakde rakho thodi daer.. (she herself holds his hands and placed them at the back of her waist, armaan pulled her tightly, after few minutes) waada karo armaan, phir se aisa kuch nahi karoge mere saath, mujhe pichle dino ki tarah til-til karke marne pe majbur nahi karoge, mujhe tum aise hi maar doge to mai khushi-2 mar jaungi, par tumhari ignorance nahi bardash hoti mujhse, tumse dur nahi reh sakti, inn baaho se dur nahi reh sakti, tum kyu bhul jaate ho armaan ki tum aur mai ek hi hai,

tumse dur rehkar mai aadhi dhuri reh jaati hun, kuch nahi rehta mujhme, tumhari baahein mera ghar hai jo mujhe security deti hai ki ab mujhe koi gam, koi pareshani nahi chuu sakti aur tumne mujhe ussi ghar se itne time tak alag rakha, socho mai kaise rahi hoyungi iss ghar ke bina, aisa imtehaan na liya karo mera armaan aur ab mai waise bhi aur imtehaan nahi de sakti, aisa nahi hai ki mai tut gayi hun, par haan thak gayi hun, bas ab tumse pyaar karna hai, saara din tumhari baaho mai rehna hai …

A: mere liye bhi to tumse dur rehna asaan nahi tha na riddhima, par phir bhii mai tumhe waada karta hun ki mai aisa kabhi nahi karunga, mai aisa karne ki gunjaish ab aane hi nahi dunga, tumhari kassam tumhe mujhe itna pyaar karne ke liye majbur kar dunga ki tum apni feelings ke saath compromise aur meri khushiyon ke liye sacrifice karna bhul jaogi..

R: tumhari hun, apni jindagi ka blank cheque kabka tumhare naam kiya hua hai, jo bhi karna hai karlo mera, bas uss cheque mai mujhse dur hone ka koi option mat rakhna, tumhare saath rehkar jitney marji imtehaan de sakti hun, par tumse dur hone ka imtehaan hua to wo dene se pehle hi...

A: (cutting her) tumse dur hone waala option tha hai kab mere paas, hota to 11 saal se tumhari ghulaami thodi karta, kab ka bhaag gaya hota… (he smiled, riddhima hits him slightly)

R: happy marriage anniversary armaan, bhagwanji ka mai kabhi bhi shukriya nahi kar paungi, unhone meri kismat bahut waqt lagakar likhi hogi jabse tumhara naam meri kismat ke panno par aaya hoga… mai.. (she stopped when felt armaan looking at her intently, armaan slightly caressed her lips)

A: tumhe bolne ki bahut aadat hai… (saying so he covered the distance between their lips, riddhima too quickly responded as she's longing for this moment since long, armaan clutched her more tightly, riddhima moved her hands in his hair, both were tired and were not able to stand properly still they're not ready to break the kiss, armaan slightly raised riddhima and kept on moving little back till his legs touched the end of bed, he sits on bed making riddhima sit on his lap, both were trying to justify themselves that they missed more than the other one, both were not ready to leave as if there will be no tomorrow then reluctantly armaan moved back as he could feel riddhima needs to breathe, riddhima made a bad face and tried to pull him back with closed eyes, armaan kisses on her cheeks and with upheavaled breathes) relax…

R: (coming back in senses and with half opened eyes looked at armaan, then moving her arms around his neck and slightly pulling him, then hissing near his ears slowly slowly as her breathes were still not balanced and was not able to speak properly) abhi to sacrifice na karne ki itni badi badi baatein ki jaa rahi thi, phir khud hi bhul gaye, bade dogle hote hai tumhare rules, mere liye kuch aur, khud ke liye kuch aur… (armaan looked her confusingly) mai tumhari jagah hoti aur mujhe pata hota ki tumhe mujhse jayda oxygen ki jarurat hai to bhi mai tumhe na chodti(she's talking about kiss) kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tumhari oxygen ka kaam mai ache se kar sakti hun, unlike tumhari tarah jisne pehle mujhe 1 mahina tadpaya khud se dur rakhkar..(armaan widened his eyes) phir bhi tumhe lagta hai ki tumse jayda mujhe oxygen ki jarurat hai, ab bolo kaha gayi hak ki baatein..(armaan shaked his head with a sweet smile, then holds her tightly)

A: sochlo mera asli junoon saamne aa gaya to tum aaj hi tut jaogi…

R: mujhe kyu nahi yaad aata ki maine kabhi tumhe khud ko todne se mana kiya tha…

A: dekhlo abhi bhi, insaan se bhuke sher mai badal gaya to tumhare liye sambhalna mushkil ho jayega (while sloping his finger from her forehead down to her chin in a zig-zag manner, making riddhima tremble a bit) you know jab sher bhukka hota hai to wo nahi dekhta ki wo kaha aur kaise khaa raha hai, phir to uss jungli sher ko paet bhar jaane ke baad hi hosh aata hai…baad mai mat pachtana, beech mai rokna chahogi to bhi rok nahi paaogi….

(riddhima trembled more hearing his words and when armaan touched her neck with lips, riddhima clutched him tightly…) tumne kuch kaha nahi???(Before riddhima could look him,his cell started ringing, riddhima slightly got detangled, armaan pulled her back and took out his cell, seeing ritu's name on screen) 11 saal mai bhi iss chipkali ki aadat nahi gayi, kababa mai haddi hi rahegi ye hamesha… (saying so he placed cell on his ears)

A: haanji deviji ab konsi aafat aa gayi???

Ri: armaan riddhima kaha hai?? Puri ship par usse dhund liya par wo kahi par bhi nahi hai, uska cell bhi switch off aa raha hai, bache bhi nahi hai room mai, sab theek to hai na??? teri aur riddhima ki koi ladayi to nahi hui hai?? Vedic ko bhi doubt ho raha tha aur riddhima bhi aaj pareshan si lag rahi thi.…

A: achaaa??? Riddhima pareshan thi??? (he looked at her) mujhe to wo kissi angel se bhi pareshan nahi lag rahi, mast hai meri god…d.. (riddhima hits him, he winked)

Ri: kyaaa???? (confused)

A: kuch nahi….

Ri: matlab riddhima tere paas hi haina… (armaan nodded) jara meri uss se baat to karwa, hum sabko pareshan karke khud tere saath ghumne nikli hui hai… (armaan handled phone to riddhima)

R: helloo…

Ri: hello ki bachi, mil tu mujhe jara, teri band na baja di to mera naam bhi ritu nahi, mujhe kaam pe lagakar khud masti kar rahi hai apne patidev ke saath, sharam nahi aati….

R: mastiii??? Yaha par meri jaan par bani hui thi aur tujhe lagta hai mai masti kar rahi thi, by the way gussa to mujhe hona chahiye, tujhse aur vedic se, armaan ki bahut help ki na tum logo ne mujhe bewkuf banane mai… (armaan who's playing with riddhima's hair quickly snatched phone from her hand, riddhima looked him, he mumbled "sshhh, kissi ko kuch nahi pata")

Ri: kya matlab??? (then widened her eyes) kyaaa kayue ko pata chal gaya ki tune uske liye surprise theme party plan ki hui thi???? Dekh maine seriously kayue ko kuch nahi bataya, iss vedic ne hi bhanda phoda hoga, mai to ab bhi chup chuppa kar tere room mai sab dresses rakh kar aayi thi ki armaan ko na pata chal jaaye teri theme ke baare mai, tere saath saath mujhe bhi uske expressions dekhne the tere surprise ke baad, par vedic ne saara kaam kharab kar diya, armaan ko sab pata chal gaya kya??? Tu bol kyu nahi rahi kuch…

A: (while looking at riddhima) ohh mere liye surprise theme party.. (now riddhima widened her eyes and looked at armaan, then hits her head) plan ki hui thi?? Not bad…(from ritu's hand cell dropped) abhi tak to mujhe nahi pata tha par ab pata chal gaya aapke dwara, thanku… (riddhima makes a face and took phone)

Ri: sorry mujhe kya pata tha ki kayue ne cell le liya..

R: its ok ritu, waise bhi party cancel karni padegi..

Ri: (shocked) kyu?? Tu pagal hai kya?? 1 mahine se itni mehnat ki iss party ke liye aur ab cancel karne ko keh rahi hai.. kyu???

R: wo actually hum log kahi phas gaye hai, waapis pahunchna mushkil ho jaayega, agli baar pucka same theme party rakhenge, no matter what.. (she glared at armaan, ritu nodded reluctantly) tu chahe to hume anniversary wish kar sakti hai, agar chahe to, koi jor jabadasti nahi hai… (ritu bites her tongue then wished them and cuts the call)

A: challo… (he pulled her)

R: (surprised) kaha??

A: waapis ship par..

R: kyuuu???

A: mujhe sach mai nahi pata tha ki tum kuch plan kar rahi ho, maine iss option ko mind mai rakha hi nahi ki tum bhi to kuch plan kar sakti ho na, tumhari bhi to anniversary hai, sorrryyy….

R: armaan kuch nahi hota, jaan bujh kar tum aisa karogo bhi nahi na, karoge bhi to bhi tumhe hak hai…

A: challo waapis chalte hai, mujhe hamari party attend karni hai.. (he again pulled riddhima, but she didn't move) riddhima challo na please, mujhe apne plans mai jara sa bhi change ho tabhi problem ho jaati hai, phir tumhara to saara surprise.. (she placed her hands on his lips)

R: armaan seriously mujhe koi farak nahi padta, surprise tumhara ho ya mera baat to ek hi hai na, tera-mera to kuch hai hi nahi, hamara hai sab…

A: par party…

R: phir ho jaayegi, saari jindagi padi hai…

A: are you sure???

R: haan baba…. tumhara hi sirfira aashiq apne pyaar se Tumhari mehnat par mitti dale (mehnat kharab karna) to uss mehnat mai bhi chaar chaand lag jaate hai, aisi saugaat bhi to khushnaseebo ko hi milti hai…. (armaan pulled her in a hug, riddhima too hugged him) I love you… (armaan just nodded, riddhima detangled from him and looked him while hands on waist, armaan looked at her questionably ) mera gift.. (she forwarded her hand, armaan too forwarded his hands indicating he's nothing, riddhima makes face, armaan turned her and tied one strip around her eyes) ye kya??

A: ssshhh…. Socha tha subah ye surprise dunga, kyunki iss pal ki maine na jaane kab se wait ki thi par ab intejar karna mushkil hoga, specially tumhe itna rullane ke baad aur ek achi khaasi party kharab karne ke baad ab for a change kuch acha karne ki jarurat hai… (he smiled and handled her something, riddhima wanted to say something) please ab ye mat kehna ki armaan tum subah hi surprise dena, sab kuch acha hi ho raha hai.. wagarah wagarah… (riddhima makes a face)

R: to ye to bata do ki jo tumne mujhe haatho mai pakdaya hai uska mujhe kya karna hai??

A: isse change karna hai, abhi, issi waqt.. (in a strict tone)

R: khud hi change kar do, mujhse ni hoga aankhein band karke kuch bhi.. (with bad face)

A: aaj last time khud change karo, uske baad ye meri hi duty hogi…. (armaan pushed her in one corner and did curtains, then from reflection he kept on guiding her, when she changed her upper, armaan goes in and made her wear some skirt type of thing, then asked her to remove underskirt of saree from bottom, riddhima's totally confused as to whats happening but one thing's very sure that the skirt which she's wearing was veryyy heavy to handle, then he made her sit on bed and quickly made her wear bangles and rest of the things, riddhima thought to not to use her brains, finally when she felt something heavy's being tied on her head)

R: armaan mujhe bataoge ki ye sab ho kya raha hai…

A: sshhh… (he tied something on her nose, riddhima tried to raise her hand to check what is it, but armaan holds her hand) naaa.. abhi nahi… bas 10 minutes aur… (armaan made her wear her sandals) riddhima ab mai tumhari aankho se patti remove kar raha hun, par jab tak main a kahun tab tak tum apni aankhein nahi khologi..(riddhima promised him,after removing strip he asked her to move forward while he's holding her from her arms, but hardly riddhima moved a bit, she's on the verge of falling, armaan holds her from her waist) dhyaan se…

Armaan then without thinking twice picked her up in his arms, don't know what happened to riddhima, all of a sudden she started feeling very anxious, very nervous yet was happy, as if butterflies were playing in her tummy, her heart beats were also eratic, she moved her arms around armaan's neck and placed her head near his heart, his heart's also banging against his chest's wall,

riddhima thought "aisa kya hone waala hai, kyu ye itni alag si feeling hai, kuch na jaante hue bhi ye feelings itni jaani pehchaani si kyu lag rahi hai, armaan bhi stable nahi hai, aisa kya hoga jo hum mai excitement aur ghabrahat dono bhada raha hai, after 10 minutes armaan placed her down on floor, then made her turn in particular direction and asked her to open her eyes slowly slowly,

riddhima could feel his heart beats getting more louder, riddhima holds his hand and started opening her eyes slowly slowly, first everything's very blurry as it's night and her eyes were still trying to adjust its vision, then finally she saw some leaves which were moving to and fro fastly due to wind, after a moment she stopped out of shock when her gaze fell on wall as leaves moved up, soon leaves again covered the wall, riddhima in daze raised her hand and removed the leaves, then again read the wall, it's written

"RIDDHIMARMAAN MALIK NEST…

HEAVEN FALLS HERE"

Riddhima caressed the writing, still in shocked mode, then saw the hands of haldi in which one's of armaan and second's of hers, tears started forming in her eyes as many memories started coming in her mind, she's still trying to digest the fact that she's standing in front of THEIR home in Mumbai, home from where they started their journey of love, home which's actually their home in true senses, home which they left 3 years back, home which she misses badly, she'd LEAST LEAST expected that she'll get her home, her temple of love back as surprise from armaan,

she looked at armaan with moist eyes and found him standing with liquid sindoor thaal in his hands, he asked her with eyes to dip her hands in thaal and then put a stamp of her hands on right wall, riddhima's not in a state to say anything, she just dipped her hands and turned towards wall, armaan too dipped his hands and placed thaal on small table,

looked at riddhima who's looking at her hand prints on wall, he passed his arms from the gap between riddhima's arms and waist, then placed his hands over the riddhima's hand print, then slightly kissed riddhima on her cheeks, when riddhima didn't move, he took her hand and placed on door and slightly pushed it..

A: (in her ears) riddhima pichle 5 saal tumhari jindagi se permanently delete hone jaa rahein hai, bas tumhe sab khushiyon bhari baatein yaad rahe baaki sab tum bhul jao… (he waved his hand over her head as if doing some magic) hum phir se wahi se sab shuru karenge, ussi din se jab tum mere aane ka intejar kar rahi thi aur mai tumse milne ka.. farak ye hai ki mai tumse mil chukka hun aur ye ghar tumhare aane ka intejar kar raha hai..

He made riddhima entered in, as soon as she stepped in, rose petals started falling over her, riddhima's surprised, then took a step forward and found a boundary made of small small hearts with the help of candles and in between the path, rose petals were scattered, suddenly a memory flashed in her memory, when 5 years back she's waiting for armaan on valentines day, she had decorated house in the same manner, she looked at armaan with shock, where as he flashed his dimples,

now she understood the meaning of his words which he said a moment ago, armaan holds her and made her move, riddhima's looking around with tears in her eyes, she looked at armaan questionably when he stopped her with force, armaan asked her to look forward, she looked and realized that she's on the verge of hitting table that's why he stopped her, all of a sudden her moist eyes turned into a surprised one leaving all the thoughts aside,

then surprised eyes changed into smiling eyes as she found the statue of her and armaan on table, the same statue which she made for armaan 5 years back and it got broken on valentines day, she picked up statue and again flooded with memories, her grip around statue started loosening as she got more engrossed in memories and statue falls from her hands, she's shocked and screemed "armaaannn.." and looked down with fear but found armaan already holding the statue, he smiled and placed statue on table, riddhima instantly hugged him tightly…

A: (caressed her head) sab kuch perfect hai aur sab kuch perfect rahega jaan, believe me… (riddhima nodded and suddenly noticed 2 dozen of bangles in her either hands, she's surprised and realized she didn't have a look of herself , she detangled from armaan and looked her hands, before she could look down armaan turned her and asked her to look in front, riddhima's again shocked seeing herself clad in wedding attire, now she realized why she's feeling so heavy when armaan's making her ready, armaan shaked his head) tumhari aankhein hamesha itni badi badi kyu ho jaati hai..

And he wrapped his arms around her tummy, riddhima noticed that he too was wearing the same sherwani which he wore in marriage, she'd many queries in mind, she wanted to digest everything properly but was confused that which thing should be digested at first, then her mind again stopped working when her eyes looked in mirror, her heart skipped a beat and filled with pride when saw herself standing with armaan, she can bet that she didn't look this much beautiful ever not even on her wedding day, she questioned today she's looking more beautiful then her marriage day that too without any make-up, why?? Pyaar to tab bhi tha bahut saara aur pyaar ab bhi hai.. then what's the difference?? But didn't get answer from her heart, she came out of thoughts when armaan pulled her…

A: challoo… (riddhima looked him questionably) panditji wait kar rahein hai…. (riddhima again confused)wo 3 saal baad ghar mai aayein hai, wedding anniversary bhi hai to chotti si pooja hai sirf wedding couples hi karte hai, tabhi to aapko itna sajaya hai, nayi jindagi shuru hone jaa rahi hai, phir se nayi kahani likhi jaayegi to socha ki isse for a change pooja se shuru karte hai.. (he smiled)

R: (holds his hands) lets get married armaan.. (this time armaan looked at her with badi-badi aankhein) mujhe phir wo sab feel karna hai, aaj nayi jindagi shuru kar rahein hai na to mujhe naye sire se phir se apna bana lo, phir se wo 7 vachan, phir se wo maang bhar do, waise bhi dulhan to tumne mujhe bana hi diya hai to aaj saari suhaag ki rasmein bhi puri kar do, mujhe phir se apna bana lo… pleaseee… (armaan nodded, riddhima hugged him with moist eyes)

A: pehle batati ki tum mujhse shaadi karna chahti ho, phir mai ye sab prepone na karta..

R: kya matlab???

A: matlab mere dil mai ek khwahish thi shaadi se pehle ki mai tumhare saath ek night spend karu, you know like that… (he slightly rolled his hand on her tummy, making her shiver) 11 saal pehle to tumne mujhe aisa karne ka mauka diya hi nahi, par aaj to meri ye wish puri ho sakti thi... kya kehti ho?? postpone kar dein pooja, room bhi taiyar hai… (he winked, riddhima hits him lightly mumbling "dhatt" and blushed) oeee hoyeee….

panditji called armaan, armaan holds riddhima's hand and took her in lobhi, riddhima looked around longingly, nothing's changed, they're not here for 3 years but still each and everything was giving them the feel of belongingness, still the air of their home was having magic, their home's still having the essence of their love, she felt as if they had never left from here,

she found "her image running and armaan's image trying to catch her, armaan trying to do romance with her, she manaofying armaan, armaan taking care of her during pregnancy, baby shower, doing masti with water" riddhima with wide smile kept on twirling looking at their images, panditji looked at riddhima with surprise, armaan can understand riddhima's feelings, so he asked panditji to prepare for pooja and he'll bring her, panditji nodded, armaan goes to riddhima and holds her hand, she came in present

A: challo shona, panditji wait kar rahe hai..

R: armaan tumhe bhi najar aa raha hai, wo dekho tum kaise mujhe gila karke bhaag rahe ho aur mai tumhare…

Armaan stopped her, she looked him, finally images disappeared, armaan took her and made her settled near hawankund, smile kept on playing on riddhima's lips, panditji started with little hawan, then asked them to exchange garlands, both looked at each other with all the love and then exchanged garlands, panditji asked them to stand up for pheras, armaan stood up then made riddhima stand carefully, she's trembling badly, armaan holds her hands tightly, panditji started reading vachans but both were in their own world,

again ready to take vows which they took 10 years back, the only difference was that "10 years back when they took these vows they didn't understand its underlying meaning but these 10 years taught them the meaning of their 7 vows", armaan and riddhima together mumbled all the vows, simultaneously cherished all the moments spent together, panditji asked armaan to fill her maang, armaan did so,

riddhima kept on looking with tears and love, panditji asked riddhima to remove her old mangalsutra, riddhima did so, armaan made her wear new mangalsutra, panditji said that pooja's complete along with their marriage, both smiled and took aashirwaad from panditji, then riddhima turned and touched armaan's feet, armaan tried to stop her in middle but still she touched them, armaan took her in a hug, both were on 9th cloud today,

riddhima caressed her mangalsutra, armaan placed his dupatta on her shoulder and asked her to go up in their room, he'll come after dropping panditji.. riddhima slightly nodded, she's totally lost, recalled her last 4 hours, still she's not believing at the turn of events, her moving out from ship, little did she know that the city which she's considering a stranger place will turn out to be her own city,

she recalled when driver stopped the car, how she moved in hut, now she came to know that she entered in their own house and that hut was the room on terrace, then she thought "armaan ne sab kaise plan kiya hoga?? Kaise uske dimaag mai ye idea aaya, kaise wo ye karta hai, uske surprises hamesha mere hotto par taala laga dete hai, jaha par mera surprise dene ka level khatam hota hai, waha se armaan ka surprise dene ka level shuruu hota hai, kaise karta hai wo ye sab hamesha.. kaise mai iss ladke ko pyaar karun??? Ek din ye apne pyaar se meri jaan lekar hi chodega..

she looked towards stairs which were fully decorated with small colorfull bulbs and steps were full of balloons, then she looked towards their room, her heart started beating loudly, she holds her lehenga and placed her feet on first step carefully, then somehow crossed stairs and moved towards her room, again memories started coming in her mind, she stopped in front of their room and caressed the door and their photo that's hanging on door, she heard some voices coming from room. "aahh armaan chodo mujhe", "riddhima kuch sunayi nahi de raha, network problem..", "armaan mere paas na aana", "riddhima mujhse dur na jaana.."… riddhima smiled hearing these voices, she again caressed the door, then opened it and entered in slowly slowly…

To be continued…

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Part-220

As soon as Ridhhima opened the door, song started playing "der lagi aane mai tumko shukar hai phir bhi aaye to, aas ne dil ka saath na choda waise hum ghabraye to, aaiye aapka intejar tha.. aaiye aapka intejar tha…", riddhima smiled surprisingly and remembered her welcome on their engagement day, then entered in room, again rose petals started falling over her and one very big teddy suddenly falls in front of her, first she got scared,

then looked at teddy and took a relaxing breathe and very lovingly picked up the teddy and again drops the teddy out of shock when heard " aap aa gaye, aap aa gaye, aap aa gaye" with claps in background, this voice was coming from teddy, riddhima shaked her head and picked it up again mumbling "ye armaan bhi na", then hugged teddy and then looked around and her heart skipped a beat yet again,

she's standing in her…naaa.. their room, she inhaled deeply with closed eyes and serene smile on lips trying to get the feel of her room, trying to settle the essence of their room in her breathes, she laughed at her madness but still she's feeling great, she opened her eyes and was surprised to see little hearts falling on her, she smiled and opened her arms, then twirled a bit out of happiness, then touched everything with all the love, she goes in dressing area and looked at mirror,

but was surprised to see armaan standing at her back, she turned quickly but didn't find him, she shaked her head with a smile realizing its their room "armaan na hokar bhi har jagah hoga iss room mai", what she's feeling right now cant be expressed in words, she's so relaxed and calm from inside, she can bet that no other house can give her this feeling "chahe phir wo ghar luxuries se kyu na bhara ho.."

she moved out and goes to store room and was surprised when she opened the door as store room was changed into a big room and looking at the cartoon pictures and bright colors she realized that its children room, she checked the room and excitedly goes near bed which were in mickey mouse and Donald duck form, saw aarish and angel sleeping peacefully on either beds, she smiled widely again thinking how did he planned everything, who gives him such ideas, then caressed both of them and bends down to kiss her children, when she's kissing angel, she slightly got disturbed as her nose pin did little tickly on her face,

riddhima quickly patted her but due to her bangles she got more disturbed, riddhima bites her tongue and looked at her attire, then gave flying kiss to both of them and quietly moved out so as to not to disturb their sleep and finally she saw their basket bed which was fully decorated with flowers and on bed "welcome jaan" was written with different color flowers

and looked at the floating candles which were on either side of the bed on side tables, one side "happy 11th" was written with candles and other side "wedding anniversary" was written, each candle was creating an intoxicating smell forcing her to loose her senses, she sits on bed and caressed the bed lovingly, then closed her eyes and many memories again flashed in her mind, sometimes it made her smile and sometimes it made her blush badly,

she's completely lost that she didn't realize when armaan entered in room, armaan looked at her and called her but she didn't respond, armaan's going towards bed but stopped thinking to first change his clothes as he's feeling quiet uneasy, he goes in kids room and kisses them, then took out his clothes and goes in dressing room, while removing his sherwani he says "riddhima hamari almirah filhaal ke liye bacho ke room mai hi set karwa di thi, mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha to socha..",

he stopped as his gaze fell on riddhima, his heart skipped a beat when saw her angelic face which was totally red, from his hands his t-shirt dropped, he for the first time looked at her thoroughly from top to bottom as when he's making her ready his heart's thumping thinking about riddhima's reaction on seeing the actual surprise and he didn't look her properly but now his mind was free as it had performed all the tasks which it was supposed to do and mind has already handled the control to his heart saying "I had carried out my tasks now its your turn, you can start with your tasks now",

he kept on looking at her, she smiled remembering something, armaan heart beats raised to maximum, he slowly slowly makes a move towards bed, then sits very close to her, then slightly removed her dupatta from her left side of face as it was acting as a barrier between her face and his eyes, riddhima came in present with his touch and looked him, her eyes were full of shyness and happiness which made armaan even more crazy, he starting losing himself, before riddhima could fully understand anything his lips touched the dim between her neck and shoulder, making riddhima closed her eyes, her lips trembled and she holds armaan's side arm tightly,

armaan sensuously moved his finger from her neck down to her chest sending shivers deep down in her body, then he again kisses on her neck this time a long one, riddhima holds flowers chains that was hanging around bed and falls on her back with lower half on bed and upper half's towards ground in air, armaan moved his fingers on her tummy which's exposed to him, then leaves few wet kisses on it, riddhima out of tingly pulls the chains tightly making all the flowers fall on them making armaan more mad,

he pulls riddhima up by holding her hands, riddhima opened her eyes and looked in his eyes which were burning with passion, she slightly caressed his cheeks and again shivered deeply when he pulled her closer and traced her lips with his thumb, riddhima gulped trying to fight with the tickly in her body,

armaan while caressing her face mumbled "ek aur baat hai bhuka sher jisse khaane waala hota hai na uski permission nahi leta ki wo usse khaa le ya nahi, uski permission ki sher ko jarurat nahi hoti, sher seedha attack karta hai, pata hai kaise???" riddhima closed her eyes as she saw armaan coming close to her, armaan smiled, riddhima opened her eyes as felt no movement from armaan, armaan's still looking at her and instantly mumbled "lets dance"

R: (in confusion) kyaa???

A: haye raama ye kya hua, kyu aise mujhe satane lage… (he nibbled on her neck slightly, then)

R: (remembered his dance with vaishali) jaao na vaishali ke saath hi dance karo, mujhe nahi karna koi dance aur iss song pe to bilkul bhi nahi...

A: jhuttii… aaj bhi tumhe jealousy hoti hai mera kissi aur ko dance partner dekhkar… (riddhima makes a face) anyways maine uske saath dance ni kiya tha..

R: haan meri to aankhein kharab thi, ya phir floor par tumhara bhoot nach raha tha…

A: tumhari aankhein to kharab ho hi gayi hai, kyunki maine nahi mukul ne dance kiya tha vaishali ke saath..

R: armaan dekho jhoot bolkar mera mood spoil mat karne ki koshish karo, dance kiya to kiya na, mai kaha kuch keh rahi hun…

A: par tumhari kaan aur naak se nikal rahe dhuyein bahut kuch keh rahein hai.. (he winked, riddhima looked other side) seriously maine uske saath dance ni kiya, jaise hi song announce hua tha aur lights off hui thi,maine mukul ko bula liya tha, tumhe issliye nahi pata challa challa kyunki mukul ki back tumhari taraf thi…

R: (not believing) aur tum kya kar rahe the? (in taunting and annoyed way)

A: mai tab sheeshe mai se apni pyaari basket ki aankhon se jharna behte hue dekh raha tha.. (he pulled her in a side hug) aur dekh raha tha kaise dupatte ka kachumbhar nikala jaa raha tha, tabhi to vedic ko tumhe lene ke liye bheja tha, socha seedha jaakar to aansu ponch nahi sakta to….. (riddhima hits him)

R: tum bahut bure ho..

A: shuru se hi… (riddhima smiled a bit, then again shaked when armaan pinched her on lower back…)

R: (inhaled deeply) armaaannn…

then looked him and while going close to him she picked up flowers and threw it on his face, then smiled and quickly rushed in dressing room, armaan smiled and followed her in dressing room, riddhima's standing in front of mirror, armaan holds her from her waist, riddhima tried to move but he holds her more tightly and removed her duppatta, threw several lines of kisses on her neck, riddhima turned her neck other side while gulping and holds her arm with her other hand to control the storm running in her,

armaan simultaneously kept on unpinning her dupatta, then removed her maang-teeka and earings while kissing on her ears, then removed pin from her juda and let her hairs fall on her shoulder, then he clutched her more tightly and dug his teeths in her neck while caressing her bare tummy making riddhima loose her senses, she holds his hands but he didn't stop, kept on hurting her badly with his teeths yet she's getting satisfaction,

after a bit he looked at her in mirror, she too looked him, then at her neck which was total red, armaan's eyes were literally flooding with passion and madness, he turned her with jerk and holds her hair then pulled a bit down so as to expose her neck and again he hides his face in her neck showering series of kisses, riddhima closed her eyes and trying to fight with the havoc which he's doing on her right now she moved her hand on his hair and kept on moving her fingers in it but pulled his hair tightly and lil cries when he cuts on her skin,

armaan looked at her this time with slight concern, riddhima slightly shaked her head with a bit smile, then turned while hmming tune, she took lipstick and draw kissing lips on mirror, armaan caressed her back while touching her skin in between the doris of her blouse, riddhima started hmming words while preparing her body enough to stand with his passion, she's doubting if her body's ready to face his passion, if its ready to take all his craziness on itself…

R:

(dont forget to switch on the music or reading the lyrics before reading the description)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(armaan looked her from mirror, riddhima too looked him, then looked down, armaan turned her)

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe

Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan

(riddhima looked in his eyes which were full of desires and longing, she trembled yet again, then placed her hand on his eyes, armaan moved his head lil up so that her hand slipped from his eyes to his lips and he kisses on her hands)

Yeh Pal Hai Apna, To Iss Pal Ko Jee Le

Sholo Ki Tarha jara Chal Ke Jee Le

(riddhima moved her hand in his hair and slightly pulled him towards her shoulder and moved her another arm around his waist, she placed her head on his chest, armaan pulled her sleeves down slightly and kisses on her shoulder, she gasped)

Pal Jhapakte Kho Na Jana

Chuke Karlo Yakin Na Jaane Yeh Pal Paaye Kahan

(riddhima pulled his hairs making him groan and looked at her, she with eyes said after this moment don't try to disappear, today again I'm freeing my desires from prison, in future don't ask me to again put them in prison, armaan smiled and again on the verge of tasting her skin but riddhima stopped him with her kisses on his neck and then she sucked his shoulder, armaan gasped and clutched her waist)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan…

(riddhima moved her arms around his neck and swinged by twisting her body towards ground)

Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai

Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai

(armaan traced her jawline with his tongue making her quiver badly, she looked up towards ceiling, armaan traced her neck and as soon as his tongue slightly touched her chest she hissed and turned as found difficult to fight with the feelings which she didn't face from the past 5 years)

Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin

Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan

(armaan threw her hair forward and kisses on her back, riddhima leans her head on mirror, tried to clutch mirror but in vain, armaan opens the knot of her cholli with teeths while caressing her side tummy, as his hands touched her delicate body a spark of tickly and beautiful yet breath taking pain ran from top to bottom in her body)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(she immediately turned her, then with lost senses she moved her hand on his face slowly slowly, armaan kissed her hands, then bit on her finger, riddhima pulled his hair, then twirled her body twice without loosing her body contact with armaan and stopped at the back of him, from his shoulder looked him in mirror)

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe

Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan

(he's still looking her with killing eyes, riddhima placed her hand on his eyes, armaan removed her hand, riddhima slightly bends down so as to hide herself at the back of him,then moved her arms below his arms and placed her head on his back, leaving little kisses on his back, her hot breathes that was touching his skin was already creating a storm in him, then her song's making him crazy, her beautiful skin was making him wild and finally when her passionate eyes joined hands with her burning body added more fuel in fire..)

He turned instantly and picked her up in arms and moved towards bed while opening her nosepin with his mouth, riddhima holds his vest, armaan settled her on bed, riddhima tried to roll but he makes a cage around her with his arms, riddhima looked him, then pulled him down over her, armaan removes her few flicks from her face then nibbles on her ear lobe making her loose her senses yet again, then slowly slowly moved towards her lips, first he kept on teasing her by touching her lips with his tongue then showering kisses all over her face, then again touching her lips with tongue this time for a bit longer time and as soon as riddhima's ready to respond he quickly changes his place of kissing..

Riddhima got impatient and pulled him down from his vest and eagerly covers the gap between their lips, armaan groaned when she bites his lower lip, armaan completely settles over her and take a turn such that riddhima's on top then complelled riddhima to move her tongue in between his lips and he carefully bites her toungue making her groan and side by side he kept on lossening the doris of her cholli, then he rolled such that riddhima's under him,

both were high at passion giving tough competition to each other, riddhima's eyes were closed, armaan went down while leaving a line of kisses on her jawline, neck, then caressed her tummy, armaan looked at riddhima to read her expressions, then winked naughtily as found her with closed eyes completely lost, suddenly riddhima opened her eyes with shock as she felt his lingering around her navel,

riddhima looked down and holds his vest tightly trying to bring him up as she knew what's coming up next, armaan looked at her again, riddhima pleaded "nahi armaannn", armaan makes his face like "Bhukka Sher" and showed his teeths to her, with in a second riddhima jumped as if she had touched electrical wire when felt his sharp teeths around her navel, riddhima kept on hitting bed sometimes clutting his hair tightly and sometimes pulling bed sheet but he didn't stop rather he dug his teeths more in her,

riddhima kept on mumbling his name but in vain, the main torture started

when he placed his elbows on her thighs above her lehenga, riddhima instantly digged his nails in his back, armaan put more pressure on her thighs taking all her breathes and senses away, riddhima cursed her body for letting him know all her sensitive points and now he's taking her advantage full on, where as armaan's again ready to give her pain for she pained him by digging his nails in his back,

he tightly moved his elbows down from her thighs to her legs giving her his elbow massage, riddhima's tummy literally fluttered like a bird out of unbearable pain, armaan slowly slowly started moving up in between opening the knot of her lehenga, he reached near her face and again kissed her tightly leaving both of them breatheless, armaan as soon as pinched on her tummy, she holds his hand and took a turn before he could do more damage on her,

then settled on his tummy and looked him as if saying "ab kaha bachkar jaaoge", saying so she lightly moved her finger on his chest making him shake, then bends down such that her hairs were making curtains around their faces, armaan moved his hand around her waist and pulled her down riddhima breathed deeply and in return leaves her hot breathes all over his face, armaan goes crazy and pulled her hairs tightly, riddhima smirked and bites on his ears making him hiss,

then she showered many kisses on his jawline then bites on his neck taking his heartbeats away, armaan clutched her immediately, riddhima did tickly in his tummy with her chin taking his breathes away for a moment, then she slowly slowly leaves a line of wet kisses on his chest, bites him where she knows that it will shake him badly, when armaan was not able to take her teasing any more, he pulled her, she tried to protest as she knew what's coming up next but she goes weak in armaan's manly hold,

armaan took a turn and moved over her, then while nibbling on her lips his hands started caressing the lines of cholli, riddhima shivered thinking about her immediate future, she shaked her head looking at armaan with high heartbeats, her hot breathes touched his ears which made him loose his senses completely, in order to divert her mind, he sucked the dim below her collar bone and his hands started moving inside her cholli,

riddhima gasped, for a second she didn't understand that what she should do at present, as the waves, gitters that was running in her body was making his touch unbearable for her but the problem was that she was still getting heavenly feeling, though armaan's hands were destructing her inner side, yet her soul's dancing with pleasure, her breathes were literally asking her if they can move now but armaan's hands and teeths were stoping her to answer back,

riddhima tried to holds her hand but as usual remained unsuccessful, riddhima just holds his back and her nails kept on entering in his skin provoking him more, both were following the rule of "give and take", jitna dard tum mujhe doge utna hi dard sutt(interest) ke saath hum tumhe waapis karenge, but this pain was sweet pain, the pain for which they had waited for long, armaan slightly raised her cholli, riddhima holds his hands tightly and shaked her head pleadingly out of shyness,

though she'd changed her clothes in front of him many times but that time she hardly had a fight between madness, passion and pain, but today trio were already fighting then she's unsure if she would be able to control the blizzard when two thirsty, hungry and burning bodies will meet, it's already doing tickly all over her, armaan removed her hands, then pulled comforter over them and finally while kissing on her forehead he removed her cholli, riddhima closed her eyes tightly out of blushing, she's feeling as if she's lying under him for the first time,

armaan too removed his vest, both shaked deeply when their upper torsos met, armaan kept on caressing her back but riddhima's completely senseless to react, after a bit when armaan kissed her on eyes she finally took a little breathe and opened her eyes, tears were already flowing from her eyes, she moved her hands at the back of him with eyes saying " I love you like hell, you completes me in anyway", armaan sucked her tears, riddhima kisses him,

after exploring upper torsos of each other and playing with each others heart beats fully finally the last barrier of clothes were also removed which were covering their legs and was preventing them from becoming one, both stayed in still position for few minutes letting their body to relax as they met almost after an eternity, may be 5 years were very small in front of eternity but only their bodies,

their souls knew how they lived without each other, it's like eternity for both of them and now finally they met first their bodies wanted to believe on this, they wanted to remove their insecurities and they wanted to make new promises as well, armaan kept on caressing her legs with his legs so as to make her comfortable, then kept on showering sweet and lovable kisses on her face,

when he felt that she's relaxed, he again turned into a "bhukka sher", he played with her body full-on making her moan, making her scream, making her whimper but at the end he could see her madness which was demanding more and more of him, riddhima when controlled her breathes was ready to give him the same pain, though she didn't play with his body full-on but yes she did take his breathes away many times, she too made him groan like anything, finally after a little more teasing session,

when they felt they're ready to merge in each other, they're ready to become one in true meanings, armaan pinned her hands on her either side of head and made his way towards her making her tremble and scream in pain, he immediately hugged her while caressing her hair and showered many kisses on her face, then rested his head on her shoulder, riddhima closed her eyes to get the feel of heaven, their soul were rejoicing, dancing with joy, their heart beats were also giving tough competition to each other,

riddhima moved her hand in his hand, each and every part of their body was filled with contentment, finally this night made the end of their long kaal ratri, they're one, they became inseparable yet again, how much they waited for this moment they themselves don't know, today satisfaction was falling from their faces in true senses, their heaven's just limited to each other arms, they're the grace and glory of each other, their pride lies with each other,their definition of completeness lies with each other, this's their relationship full of warmth, passion, madness, sereneness and purity, they're the true definition of soulmates….

Both were lying in each other arms totally satisfied, after a moment as armaan tried to detangle with her, riddhima holds him and shaked her head, armaan settled back on bed and pulled riddhima in his arms and kisses on her forehead with all the love, riddhima moved her arm around his waist…

R: I love you jaan…

A: love you too… waise tumne ek baat notice ki?? (riddhima looked him questionably) pichle 10 saalon mai ye pehli aisi anniversary hai jo humne apne room mai actually celebrate ki hai.. (riddhima's surprised and started remembering her each year and realized he's true, she got happy and hugged armaan tightly) happy anniversary jaana.. (riddhima nodded, armaan caressed her hair lovingly and after few minutes she fell asleep in his arms with a lovely smile on her lips)

To be continued..

Precap: armaan thinking about last one month, AR little cute moment in washroom and kitchen, attacking of everyone at their home….

Just can say stay tunned..

Next update: Sunday(15th jan)

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Ankita..

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 13 years ago
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Phir se nayi duniya bani...mehke zameen tere kaaran
pehle kahan aisi thi main..main hun hasin tere kaaran..
Zindagi mein meri..asmaan ki inaayat hai tuuu...
Dil ki khushi..dil ki pyaas tu..Mere tann mein meri saans tu..
Kami thi jo mujhmein..wohi toh mohabbat hai tu..😊


A: tumhe bolne ki bahut aadat hai' yeh tere liye tha Mottiii🤣🤣🤣 khud pe hi taunt maar hi hai...tashan hain tere👏🤣

Kichyyy... ☺️ armaan ne ek baar kaha..maine 3 baar kaha RELAXXX🤣

you know jab sher bhukka hota hai to wo nahi dekhta ki wo kaha aur kaise khaa raha hai, phir to uss jungli sher ko paet bhar jaane ke baad hi hosh aata hai'baad mai mat pachtana, beech mai rokna chahogi to bhi rok nahi paaogi Ahem ahemm...*cough**rough cough* 🤣🤣🤣My jaw dropped when Armaan made that remark😆 (shekshyyy) OYE HOYEEE... soundsss HOTTT☺️ *shamm aa gi meko*

tumhara hi sirfira aashiq apne pyaar se Tumhari mehnat par mitti dale to uss mehnat mai bhi chaar chaand lag jaate hai, aisi saugaat bhi to khushnaseebo ko hi milti hai 😊😊😊 This was awww😊

A: aaj last time khud change karo, uske baad ye meri hi duty hogi☺️ dil bole shikdum shikdum☺️..

she started feeling very anxious, very nervous yet was happy, as if butterflies were playing in her tummy, her heart beats were also eratic, she moved her arms around armaan's neck and placed her head near his heart, his heart's also banging against his chest's wall.. Dono taaraf aag hai lagi..dono taraf pyas hai jagi..dono taraf ek jaisa haal..dono taraf dil hai bekrar...Isi ko toh kehte hain PYAR😛😍

"RIDDHIMARMAAN MALIK NEST'

HEAVEN FALLS HERE"

After reading last 4-5 updates..readers have come to know where the actual heaven falls frm😊 "BEAUTIFULLL..nd Out of words Surprise'' 😊😊😊😊


she found the statue of her and armaan on table, the same statue which she made for armaan 5 years back and it got broken on valentines day:sab purana wala continue ho raha hai toh gaana bhi aana chahiye na?? aisa sama naaa hotaaa..kuch bhi yahan na hotaaa...mere humraahi jo tum na hote😊😊

A: (in her ears) riddhima pichle 5 saal tumhari jindagi se permanently delete hone jaa rahein hai, bas tumhe sab khushiyon bhari baatein yaad rahe baaki sab tum bhul jao ...mujhe bhi part no. bata diyo😆 taaki main dobara uss hisaab se padh paaun..jismein woh 5 saal na hon..


riddhima's again shocked seeing herself clad in wedding attire 😊 Sundarrr...

ammi mujhe bhi dulhan banna hai...Shyam sundar ki☺️☺️☺️☺️ 2 dozen bangles daal ke☺️☺️


A: matlab mere dil mai ek khwahish thi shaadi se pehle ki mai tumhare saath ek night spend karu, you know like that🤣🤣🤣🤣 Naughtyyy..


"her image running and armaan's image trying to catch her, armaan trying to do romance with her, she manaofying armaan, armaan taking care of her during pregnancy, baby shower, doing masti with water" 😊😍😊😍😊😍😊


Ammi tune sab kaise plan kiya hoga?? Kaise tele dimaag mai ye idea aaya, kaise tu ye karti hai, tele surprises hamesha readers ke hotto par taala laga dete hai, jaha par humare sochne ka level khatam hota hai, waha se tera likhne dene ka level shuruu hota hai, kaise karti hai tu ye sab hamesha..Baakiyon ka pata ni par meri jaan toh tu sachi mein le legi..muchi mein toh le hi chuki hai🤣 chahe tere hi dialogue chori karke maare but i meaaannn it 😊 *by heart =my nanha dil*

"riddhima kuch sunayi nahi de raha, network problem..",😆 ☺️ main bhi kalta hun aishe☺️☺️


OKKK bohat ho gayi pagalpanti..now on serious note let me tell you that I feeel amazeddd when i see you giving ur best... and this amazing feeling i m getting more and more with each coming update...

I LOVE YOU... *sigh* I'm SO FREAKING SPELL BOUNDED..but want to sayyy all my heart out which has been stucked in my throat🥱...*sigh again* (drame dekh kitne tagde hain mere)🤣



brilliantly written ...Everything was beautifully described..definitely adorable...the atmosphere for the two loveable characters...unka pyar...surprise..sabbb kuchhh..ek ek cheej... ek ek line... sab mein se pyar jhalak ra tha..was just Perfecttt... Awesome job!😊
I hope you know how good you are in this...nai pata toh phir sun le..
YOU ROCKKK JaANEMAN☺️ 🤗
LOVE YOUUU CHUMMI MUCH (nu hai na?)
🤗🤗



Edited by Neha.K. - 13 years ago
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Sanson ke yeh shole saanson mein tu ghole..pal mein pihgal jayen hum
Hothon ke angaare hothon pe hamare rakh de toh jal jaayen hum
Yeh pyar woh aag hai jis mein nahi hai dhuaan
lagti hai jab yeh agan jal jaate hai jism-o-jaan
Aye mere humsafar aye mere jaane jaan 😍


*cough cough**cough cough*

*gasp*

ALRIGHT! awesome update dripping with hotness *swoons*

Yet more proof of why I think you're the best writer..This was so beautifully HOT and well written romance and was so needed right now..

Loved the descriptivness. Beautiful and poignant words, yet a silent but Screaming desired of them wanting each other and loving each other .so Amazing... Beautiful writing as usual!

Beautiful and shekshyyy piece of work..☺️

Dono taraf aag lagi thi...It was PURE Love making... sirf pyar hi pyar tha...khooobsurti jhalak rahi thi...😊

extremely well written. Steamyyy
I'm actually getting goosebumps right now. perfectly delicious...you left me breathless myself.

I think HOT is the only word I can actually think of...
bas na ab kuch aa ni ra bolne ko...

I LOVEEE YOUUU...aiveyi hi panick hoti rehti hai... Bohattt acha saaf suthre tareeke se likha tha...mwaaah meri puchiii...🤗

ps: I want bhukka sher😲🤣
Edited by Neha.K. - 13 years ago
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A vry lovely update ankita. I so wanted k part end hi na ho. Chalta hi jaye chalta hi jaye... Um gonna read it again.
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hey di de update was awesomeee... luvd ❤️armaan's surpise it was amazinggg...
so happy dat dey r back in der sweet home frm wer dey strtd der married life nd r gone strt der life frm der again...kab part read kiya aur kab finish hogaya release hi nahi huwa...
cant wait 2 read de nxt prt...
pllsss try nd update de nxt part sooonnn
Edited by pari_044 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww!
Have no words to say...
Beautiful!

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