MayUr FF... Hum miley ge ..Last part on pg 78 - Page 27

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the part
hope mayur jaldi mil gaye
the flash backs make the present mmnt even more emotional 😭 feeling bad fr nupur n mayank .

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Posted: 14 years ago
cool update diii...nyc FF...awesum concept!!!!
eagerly w8in for ur next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update maria!
felt bad 4 nups... but i hope evrythng wud b 5n!
cant wait 4 d next update
continue soon!
luv ya sis!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry i m la8 its superub thanks 4PM me
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmph!!! why am i not getting pms 4 this ff?????😡😔..u forgot ur sis kya??😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Writer note
hello friends...
Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful comments n responce🤗🤗🤗
i am really happy to see ur responce..🤗
i tried to write long part...i hope u ll liked it..ll wait for ur precious responce😳
Love
Maria...remember me in your prayers😳
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hum Miley ge

Part 10

"I love you Nupur"

She opened her eyes and looked towards him..she wanted to hug him,to cried her out in his arms'''

But she couldn't as it was not easy for her to break all the rules of society, to break all the restrictions which people had impose on her'.

"Mayank it's too late now'.everything is changed.Mayank i am not that Nupur whom you loved I know you still love me..but I lost all the emotions,all feelings which was related to our love..Time changed everything"

They were still in that position..their faces were so closed to eachother..their hearts were still beating in same rytham..their eyes were showing the immense,unconditionally love for eachother..he could listen her heart beat..

"Nupur we have chance'."

"no Mayank'we have no chance why you wanted to walk on that road where is only Pain..i don't want you to suffer"she looked straight into his eyes tried to show her emotions which was she tried to hiding but now it was necessary to tell him as she could not see him in pain

"if you are with me..i can overcome all the hurdles, I can bear all the pain"

He said cupping her face in his hands '

"Nupur God gives us second chance and I don't want to loose it"

"I want to be with you Nupur..i cant live without you'you are my life..my first and last desire'every way of my life ends on you'your Mayank is nothing without you..we already sacrificed our love but not now"his every word was showing his love

"Nupur..i want to marry with you"he said lovingly while her eyes were wide open with shocked'

"Mayank.its not easy..it cannot happen.. why don't you try to understand"?she said shrugging off his hands

"it can happen Nupur..if you say "yes"I promise I will do everything right.i just want your answer'"

Their eyes met for a moment and she lowered her eyes''.her mother in law words were echoing in her mind,she could bear pain ,tantrums but she could not see him in pain..

"Mayank I want to go home back'everyone will be waiting for me"she said plainly looking straight..

While he looked at her for sometime when he noticed she was not ready to listen him he turned her face and started car'

He was hurt and she knew she was the reason..

He moved car towards her house and increased the speed'Nupur steal glanced at him and tried to controlled her tears

"How she wished to spend her whole life with him?"she thought and a lone tear came out of her eye

Mayank turned his face towards her and found her lost in deep thoughts'

He wanted to hugged her tight,to enveloped her in his strong arms,to remove every line,scar of pain from her face and filled her life with colours..

Abhi waqt hai mere saath chal

Abhi waqt hai mere saath chal

Abhi paon main hain musaaftain

Abhi raaston pe garift hai

Abhi haath rakha hua hai waqt ke baag per

Abhi meherban hain rahguzar bari door tak

Abhi hoslay hain jawan mere

Abhi dil main chalney ka shauq hai

Abhi manzilon ka yaqeen hai toh junoon bhi hai urooj per

Yahan aik jahan main kitney jahan hain

Abhi daikh apni umeed ke kisi badbaan ko khol ker

Ye jo kishtiyaan si rawan hai seena-e-ab per

Isi aag ki hain nishaaniyaan ye musaaftain

Koi hasratoon main suna gaya hai basharaatain

Abhi waqt hai mere saath chal

The entire journey both were silent..he was a bit angry with her as she did not want to understand truth,reality'as she was scared of society

The car stopped near at her house..without saying anyword he helped her to open her seat-belt.their hands brushed and both looked into eachother eyes..he turned his face in other side as he was angry with her'and Nupur couldnot help but smiled at his childish behaviour,,,he always did the same whenever he got angry with her.

"kabhi nahi badle ga"she shook her head in disbelief

"I am sorry Mayank'I know I hurt you"she said while tried to turned his face towards her

"I am angry with you"he said in a bit anger again turning his face

"Mr.Mayank sharma mujhe ap ko manana bhi ata hai"she said and leaned her face towards him and about to kiss on his cheek when she realized what she was going to do..

It was present not past.she moved away..he felt pain to see her like this'

"Nupur I don't want to talk to you"he said turned his face in other side

She smiled at his act..she came closed to him and hugged him from back tightly..

"I am sorry"she and Mayank turned around towards her

"if you thinks I forgive you because of your hug so its not right"he said showing her his fake anger

"ohh toh Mr.Mayank mujhe se bohat naraz hai'you know Mayank mujhe patta hai tumhain kaise mana na hai"encircling her arms around his neck she said looking into his eyes..

"kaise"he leaned his face towards her

She blushed and lowered her eyes,placing her lips over him..she showered her love on him..and he tightly enveloped her in his arms pulling her more closer to him..

"Nupur"he kept his hand on her shoulder and she hugged him..he was surprised at her reaction but then he tightly hugged her back

"I am sorry Mayank..i know I have hurt you"finally she broke into tears..

"you did not hurt me at all"he was trying to console her but he wanted her to cried her heart out infront of him ,he wanted to know all the pain which she was trying hide from him..

"I cant fight with this world 'everyone already snatched everything from me..i am scared Mayank"

He raised her head and wiped off her tears with his thumb..

"Nupur you are not alone..i am with you..why are you feeling scared"cupping her face in his hands he softly kissed her eyes..she felt her all sorrow pain got vanished..

"Mayank I have no courage,strength to fight with everyone..no one will accept our love"

"Everyone will accept our love..trust me Nupur"he said softly rubbed her cheeks lovingly with his hands

"Mayank I have nothing to give you"she said plainly

"I have no demand..mujhe kuch nahi chahiye sirf tumhara saath chahiye Nupur..i just want to be with you"

"Will you give me your hand in my hand?"he said straight looking into her eyes and Nupur felt truth confident in those words.

She nodded her head and hid her face in his chest..he felt his shirt getting wet he knew she was crying and he promised to himself he never let tears in her eyes..

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Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope mayank can do what he said. and takes away all her pain.she's been through a lot.
amazing update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maria very nice Part, i know Mayank will not anything Wrong, i trust him, want to see then together soon, Lovely Part
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god how sweet couple. i am waiting for the next update eagerly

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