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Posted: 14 years ago
hay... just managed to finish reading all the lovely comments. thanks yar. you have no clue how much i love it.. :D
& i am updating... will try my best to describe everything :D
have faith in me
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r u gg to update all the parts in one go
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waiting to unfold the suspense😍
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me waiting like anything👏👏👏
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itna mat satao ki mar hi jayen ab wait nahin ho rahi hai pls cont soon
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please make it fast...............i am waiting........god i have to complete my practical file.....and i am reloading this page ......every 5 min......please update soon.....this suspense is killing me.............
u changed maan from a super hero to cheater............
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eagerly looking forward to :) please post soon, suspense ko break karo please please ...
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waiting for the suspense... heartbeat is exploding.... hope it comes out to b something acceptable ... nahi to its going to b painfull... 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

***PARADOX***
part 71
THANKS for all the lovely comment
loved them all


ok... i think 3-4 more parts... will Post all today.. then all done... :)
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Geet stood under the cold water. Trying to calm her self down. Seems like someone just stole her life! That b**** sam! That! She threw the base near the shower & broke the whole glass door. Maan rushes in instantly. Only to find geets hand cut. Deep. Blood oozing out of her hand. He screamed. She might be bleeding but it was hurting him... Maan rushed under the shower. Quickly catches clasping Geet. She was about to faint. He quickly takes her in. Covers her wrist. Her cut wasn't that deep she probably fainted due to the pressure. Maan banshee her wrist. Dressed her up. He changed him self & brought geet to his embrace. She was in deep sleep. Maans heart was thumping. He could clearly here in in the room. It felt like it was about to come out. His phone rings again & again but he ignores. His life! What she was about to do. He was scared. He could bare anything but not geets pain. What he have done? He held Geet tighter & tighter with every passing second. With every breath he took. He felt like some one was about to steal his life. He could never afford this. Ever. His love. Just his. Since the day she was born he claimed her. His sweetheart. His jaan. His love. His Misti. All he could whisper was he sorry! He should have explained everything... But how could he. He was scared! Scared of this! Maan was in fear when she wakes up what he will do!

Maans cell rings again. This time he answers.
Phone- mr khurana?
Maan- yes?
Phone- mrs khurana is still in ICU! Very critical condition! Could you please make it here!
Maan- no! No I can't! Sorry!
He cuts the call & switches it off. He didn't care at all except geet. It's just her who maters to him! Yes he felt selfish not to be there for her when she was always there for him! In every problem! Every emotional needs! Every dangerous situation she ever feel in. He felt selfish that he wasn't there for her! But he is willing to be selfish. It's about his life! & it's only Geet. No one els. It's just her that matters the most. He hugs geet back.

USA hospital-

Aryan & prena walks in.
Aryan- how did she managed to have this dangerous accident?
Prena- I don't know! I have only told them to...
Aryan- enough! You can't do anything right can you?
Prena- it wasn't me!
Aryan- I think it's time to tell the whole family about maan & sams marriage.
Prena- now?
Aryan- this will put pressure on maan. He will easily break down after this... Specially near at the MD election again......

Both looks at Sammera. Who was nothing but a puppet. Like maan & Geet.


UK-

Geet spines round. Facing way from maan. In tears. Maan hugs her from the back. She snaps few time bit maan wasn't willing to let her go that easily.
Maan- you have to here me out.
Geet "I am not! Get off me!"
Maan "no! I won't!"
Geet faces him. "what do you want to say? Huh? That you have another wife! You bloddy merry Sammera? & when this afire of yours have been going on for? Tell me? Since school! Collage?" geet pushes him off & gets up flowed by maan. She was about to fall back... Maan holds her but she snaps. "so tell me when did you sleep with that b****! oh yes! Your so call of control! You satisfied with that b****!"
Maan "GEET!" she was walking backwards & her words were only tearing maans apart. How could she think like this? Wasn't there any trust in our love... Her words maan felt low & sick.
Geet "so tell me! When? When you never called me! Day after night I waited for you! Then! You were in bed with her satisfying your f**** need! USA! You are sick.... Honeymoon! Hu... What to sleep with that b****?" she shouts. "oh yes! You can share your bloody talk with me! Your f**** best friend or wife! So how long you have been married for? Then why did you merry me? If that b**** was your wife! Why did you merry me?" Geet went mental. Snapping everything near her... Whole floor was scattered with broken glass. Cloths! "wait! Wait.... if you are married then this bloddy marriage is not legal! You b****!" maan comes close. Hurt. Very hurt. He was angry but at the moment geet was out of her mind. He was scared that she will do something stupid. Geet pushes him off. Slaps his chest.... Maan tries to hold her but she just slaps him...
Geet "you bloody acted out everything just for a kids haven't you! Because that b*** can't have one! You b***!" Geet had lost it. Her anger. She was in tears. The fact that maan lied about everything....
Shila walks in herring all the noise. Shocked to see everything scattered every where...
Shila "what happen? Are you two alright?" geets eyes were bright red in anger... Maan managed to het grip on her... But no use... She hated his touch now. She hated him! Hated him for everything.....
geet "I want to go to USA. NOW! she demands..."


next- USA or INDIA?
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Paradox me sad sad nehi hota ek happy update de do na waiting😊

*edit*
shayad kuch der baad
loved it though
why r aryan n prerana trying to publicize their marriage
have to wait till next update
Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago

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