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Aakansha Agarwal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

hey awesome part
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Res! Will comment on this and the last part after reading it now!

*Edited*

Part 3

I really feel for Ridzy, though Armaan is showing his love and concern for her, she's only taking it as a change in his nature and that too only for her. She's feeling like she's forcibly tying him down to her when that clearly isn't the case.

Aww I want them to get married! Its just gutting to see AR like this! Their dreams crushed due to one incident and its heartbreaking to see the both of them in this condition! Though its only Riddhima that's suffered the physical injury, both are them are suffering from an internal, emotional injury to their hearts.

Ugh! Do I need to say I HATE Shanky? I mean wth! His ungrateful attitude is disgusting! I can't believe he actually said to Ridz, that her going abroad for treatment is pointless, I mean which father does that? He's meant to encourage her and raise her hopes!

After all this he still has the guts to point fingers at Armaan! Ugghhh I detest him to the greatest extent! I'm glad Riddhima stood up for Armaan and set it straight with Shashank. Armaan wasn't going to do it any time soon so I'm happy that his better half did it for him!

Part 4

Again, Riddhima's insecurity are hindering her relationship with Armaan, I understand that she fears of losing him but shutting him out is not the best option!

Loved seeing the understanding and caring nature between both Armaan and Nikki.

I'm glad that AR have talked it out, now they don't have to confine any feelings within! Hoping to see there love develop again and overcome the mishap!

Gotta say Anku, your doing a fab job so far! Keep it up! :D

Edited by lil_mizz_shawty - 14 years ago

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purpleekajenian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

WOW!!! BEAUTIFUL!👏 FULL OF LUVVV N CARING... LOVED READING IT.. OH I LOVED WHEN I GOT THE PM,I WAS SO SLEEPY BT COULDN'T RESIST MYSELF READING THIS.. THNXXXX ANKITAAA😃...REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO READ THE NEXT PART... UPDATE IT SOOOOOOOOOON.. WILL BE WAITING FOR THE PM IMPATIENTLY 😉

HAVE A NICE DAY😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

STUPENDOUS PART !!!YOU ARE AN AWESUM WRITER......KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

OMG THAT WAS SOO DAMN GOOD!

YAY THINGS ARE LOOKING BRIGHTER NOW :D

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Coffee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Hey Ankita !

Gosh gal, u r an amazing writer. M completely spellbound with ur writing. U got a great prospective of looking at things!
Love the way you brought understanding between the two in a new way . Rightly said by you, Troubles make them apart but times of despair make them more closer than ever.
This completely justifies the title, 'Core Of My Existence' ! 😊

Cnt soon. Thanks for d pm.

Love
Vini

Edited by coolvini4u - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

superb part!!!

i lovd armaans n nikis convo im glad niki helpd him realise riddhimas feelings

OMG the AR convo was soo emotional their love is soo strong that nothin can cum in between :)

riddhima is so luki to hav armaan as a partner..im glad shes finally believin she can get betta

i know armaans gona stick by no matter wot

continue soon x

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Pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

OMG! finally the happy times 😳

aww I loved Nikki and Armaans convo! the way Nikki made Armaan understand, nobody could do it better! I love love love the way you write! I know i have said it many times, but seriously you are amazing!!!! Ridz and Armaans convo was portrayed really well! the hugs :D and I love that you mentioned the bullet! I wish Armaan had asked Ridz that in DMG! That was one thing I had really wanted Armaan to ask her when he was fighting for her! glad I could read it here atleast 😳

Thank god finally Ridz is confident on getting better and at least she's going to try it for Armaan 😃

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

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Again, some very very painfully beautiful moments in this part too..
Felt so miserable for Armaan when Basket was shutting him out, but then also loved the way Nikki was able to help Armaan understand better, how to handle Riddhima!
Loved loved loved the Armaan-Riddhima conversation, how Armaan is able to explain to Riddhima and make her see just how much she is the reason for his existence!!!
Gosh, Armaan is just simply too PERFECT !!!!
Loved his final reasoning: " Why did you have to take the bullet for me Riddhima ,why did you have to come in the way and save my life ,why did you have to take that pain ,that which costed you so much ?

Am glad that Riddhima finally gets it, that just like she cannot exist without him, he cannot exist without her !!
Its just so good to see her willing to give her all simply for Armaan's sake, towards getting better!!!!

Fantastic update, Anku!!
Love you!

Edited by armaania13 - 14 years ago

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samiyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

First of all I am soo sorry for my really really late reply, I was studying nonstop :(. Well I loveeed your update! The beginning was emotional but I loved the convo between Armaan and Nikki.

The ending was soo cute lol I couldn't stop smiling and couldn't stop saying aww! You're an amazing writer anku keep it up :). The part where he questions her about the bullet, omg it brought back memories of DMG 1, but I loved how you wrote the emotions and feelings of Armaan and Riddhima. You've written the part where he questions her beautifully.

The best best part was the ending when they hugged, I could totally imagine KaJen hugging and it was the most cutest thing ever lol.

I won't say update jaldi se this time because I have exams end of this week and all of the week after so I won't be able to read the next couple of updates :( BUT that doesn't mean I won't reserve a spot lol as soon as you update I'll try my best to reserve a spot to comment <3

ILY I'm loving your update!!😳

Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago