pappa,jaldi aa jaana (for 'KASH' fan) - Page 9

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story ko zyaada drag kaarna hamesha acha nahin hota...khaas kaaar aisi story ko zyaada kheechne se kabhi kabhi boring laag sakte hain..so i suggest make this a short story...its not ki mujhe yeh ff achi nahin lagi..aisa bilkul nahin..but mein baas as a friend advice de rahin hoon..bohat ffs ke saath meine ne aisa hote hue dekha hain..jaldi dekha do ki armaan kahan kaisa hain...aur do no ko mila do...

amazing update yaar

awesome update...keep up the good work :)

hey punam that was a cute and sad part

did she left d house
continue soon
n thx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

story ko zyaada drag kaarna hamesha acha nahin hota...khaas kaaar aisi story ko zyaada kheechne se kabhi kabhi boring laag sakte hain..so i suggest make this a short story...its not ki mujhe yeh ff achi nahin lagi..aisa bilkul nahin..but mein baas as a friend advice de rahin hoon..bohat ffs ke saath meine ne aisa hote hue dekha hain..jaldi dekha do ki armaan kahan kaisa hain...aur do no ko mila do...

hey meri chulbuli,impatient friend.....meri ye short story hi hai....mai sirf apni 'prince and princess' ko dmg blog friends ke request pat thora sa extend ki hun....kahani ko kheenchna meri aadat nahi,but climax tak toh jaane do yaar....ishliye maine likh diya hai,"plz.keep patience'...mai faltu masale daal kar story ko kabhi bhi badhati nahi....promise mai bore nahi karungi....bas mujhe arman ke bina riddhima ki life kaisi ho sakti hai wo dikhana hai...and plz.thora patience rakhkar kahani padhna ,promise tumhe bahut achcha lagega....love

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Anjali started to cry.."atul,ridhzi pata nahi kahan chali gayi hai….mom ka phone tha.subah uthi to ridhzi ghar par nahi thi. Arman ke baad wo ghar se hi nahi nikalti…papa ko bhi bata nahi sakti,wo aur tensed ho jayenge…

Atul : "plz.anjali,tum toh bahut brave ho,aise nahi rote..chalo hum arman ke ghar chalte hain.

Atul and anjali came to arman's home.mom ne bataya ki subah uthkar dekhi toh riddhima ghar par nahi thi.

Nani(crying) : " kahan gayi hogi meri bachchi?kuch ho na jaaye usey…..

Atul : " nani,usey kuch nahi hoga. Anji socho wo kahan ja sakti hai.
Anji : "mujhe to kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai.police mein report karen?
Atul :"nahi,abhi nahi.dekho, riddhzi arman ko dhundhne nahi ja sakti,keunki wo janti hai ye impossible hai,toh?

Anjali (thinking something) : "to wo wahan ja sakti hai,jahan arman jata tha.uski jindagi arman ke khyalon se judi hai,wo unhe aur jyada feel karna chahegi.

Atul stood up immediately….chalo anjali,let's go…..
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" Bull's eye!Can we have the ball please?"

" Ye bin maangi advice dene ka shauk hai ya aadat?"

" Yo basket..in points par itna khush mat ho..agle hafte tak change hojayenge."....................

Riddhima muskurai…."paagal!….kitna tang karta tha usey! Kitna chidhti thi usse!! Feer kaise uske pyar mein doob gayi!!har waqt bash ,'riddhima,kab humari saadi hogi? Basket kab hum ek ho jayenge?"…aur feer saadi ke baad ye 5 saal kab beet gaye pata hi nahi chala. Aajkal riddhima bahut careless ho gayi thi,hospital ki duty karke tired ho jaati thi. Arman kitna khushamad karta,"chalo na basket ,mujhe meri basket ke bina basket khelna achcha nahi lagta,promise mai tumhe jitne dunga..par wo mana kar deti thi.isliye to ab bete ko lekar aane ki baat karta,mano uska birth hote hi wo apne papa ke saath basket ball ground aane lagega….

They came to riddhima…
All : "didi,aao na humare saath basket ball khelne"

Riddhima smiled.."arman bhaiya ka intjaar nahi karoge? Usey aane doh na…

Rohit : "jarur di,hum toh unka intjaar karte hain roj,lekin hum practice bhi karte hai,nahi toh bhaiya aakar kahenge na "bachchon,tum sab mera naam kharab karoge kya?...hai na friends?

Sabhi : "haan ,haan ….chalo na didi aap bhi khelo…feer bhaiya wapus aakar surprise ho jayenge na aapko dekhkar…

Riddhima mumbled…."haan,feer uski sikayat dur ho jayegi…aur wo kabhi bhi mujhse naraj hokar dur nahi jayega…..

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When atul and anjali came..they saw that riddhima was playing basket ball with the boys….she was playing ,jumping and laughing with the children..anjali ko dekhte hi dourkar aayi.."di,aisa karte hain,hum sab practice karte hain,feer arman ke wapus aane par boys vs girls match hoga….thik hai na??.....

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AFTER 3 MONTHS

Padma : "riddhima beta,tumse kuch important baat thi.
Riddhima : " kaho na ma…
Padma: "beta,ankur ab 3 months ka ho chuka hai,ab uske naam ki puja aur naamkaran sanskar ho jana chahiye..

Riddhima : "arman ko aane do ma….wo bahut naraj hoga…janti ho na kitna gussa karta hai…

Padma ki aankhon mein aansoo they…"beta,arman ko gaye 3months beet chuke hain,tu kuch samajhti hai ki nahi?....kab tak uska rasta dekhti rahegi?..

Riddhima stared her mom a minute and said : "jindagi bhar,jab tak wo nahi aa jata…aur jab tak wo nahi aa jata,uske bete ke liye kisi ko kuch karne ki jarurat nahi…..

Padma was stunned!!. kya riddhima mentally disbalance ho rahi thi? Kya wo saari jindagi isi tarah arman ka intjaar karegi?....

Rivers flowing from her eyes,she ran to her room to hide the tears. She closed the door and started to cry bitterly, she did not notice dr.sashank was there.he came to meet with padma . now a days riddhima behaved with him rudely ,so he only came to get their news and returned at once to his house.

Dr.sashank touched her gently :" padma,kya hua?…

Padma turned towards dr. sashank and hugged him continuing her cry.

Dr.sashank : "plz padma,tell me..

Padma uttered in her sob:"riddhima,usey hum kho rahe hain sashank….uski life arman ke saath hi khatam ho gayi hai…pata nahi kaisi bahki bahki baaten karti hai…….

Dr.sashank : "usey kuch nahi hoga padma,maine apni jindagi mein kabhi haar nahi mani,mai apni beti ko ish haalat se nikalunga…..usey arman ki yaadon se bahar nikalna hoga.hum usey lekar kahin aur chale jayenge,jahan arman ki yadon ko wo bhul kar ek nai jindagi start karegi..

Padma : " aisa hi kijiye sashank, humne apne bete arman ko khoya hai ab riddhima ko bhi kho denge…par wo kya maanegi?
Dr.sashank : "jarur maanegi,meri achchi beti meri baat jarur manegi…chalo mai usse baat karta hun….

When dr.sashank and padma came in riddhima's room,she was arranging arman's dress and books properly.everyday uska yahi kaam tha,arman ke clothes,books sambhalna…aur arman ki pics lekar baaten karte rahna. When she saw dr.sashank, came to ankur and lifted him in her arm and started to blubbering with baby….."beta,bolo..pappa..pappa…beta jaldi jaldi sikh jao,papa aakar sunenge to kitna khush honge na….

Dr.sashank tried to control his tears…."riddhima beta,keun na mai,tum,nani aur padma kahin ghumne chalen?....bahut din ho gaye na mai apni beti ke saath kahin nahi gaya…..

After that incident riddhima did not use to talk to sashank…..so she did not response……
Dr.sashank tried to smile…"aur ish baar to mera grandson bhi hai………..

Riddhima caressed ankur's hair.."beta ,unko kah do ki hum kahin nahi jayenge….papa aakar paresaan ho jayenge na apne ankur ko na pakar?...hai na beta?..hum to bash apne ghar mein rahenge..jise jana hai jaaye……

Dr.sashank came to riddhima and held her shoulders : 'riddhima,khud ko sanbhalo, beta hum arman ko kho chuke hain..

Riddhima burst out with anger…" aapne!!..aapne mujhe arman se alag kiya hai!!!...actually aapne kabhi usey like hi nahi kiya…mill gayi hai na kaleje mein thandak?..ab mujhe jeene dijiye meri tarah…aur mai apne arman ke ghar mein hun,mujhe kisi ki jarurat nahi….

Dr.sashank had lost his words!! Riddhima ne ye kya kah diya!!.…..

"TA-RRA-AK!!!"…..padma slapped riddhima…."apne papa se aise baten ki jaati hai? Pagal ho gayi hai kya??....

Riddhima hugged ankur tightly and started to cry bitterly…"haan ,haan mai pagal ho gayi hun!…arman ke bina mai pagal ho jana chahti hun…mujhe arman chahiye…arman tum kab aaoge?plz.come back….wapus aao arman.......

Dr.sashank bent down in front of ganpati and uttered in his cry………"bhagwan,maine aapse kabhi kuch nahi manga… lekin apni beti ko apne aankhon ke saamne pagal hote hue dekhne se achcha meri jaan le lo…..plz.bhagwan,aap itna to kar sakte ho……plz.arman ko wapus bhej do aur nahi to meri jaan le lo…...