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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved the role reversal Annz.😆
beautiful update.
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annie 🤗 OMGGG! YOU are amazing writer 😛 i would loved to read you had writing whole story its great 👏 ..you are a one of the amazing story writer .I have enjoy myself after read mayurFF kaisa hai yeh khumar ch:twenty story .

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so romantic liked it specially irritated mayu.
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hey annie
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Annuuu, another updateee! Yaaay=D Woahh, you update soo phaaast. I haven't updated my FF sincee monthhsss. So yeah am really proud that you update on time for your readerss, well donnee! Coming to the updateee, I loved it! Loved the pink font youu usedd ;) And woaaahh, honeymoon huh ;) Was an amazing part, you write so perfectly, and your descrption is amazing! Lovedd this chapter, so romantic. Love your style of writing, it's so different from other peoples! Lovee the waay, you have them doing dialoguess. Basically everything was perfecttt. You should be proud of yourself that you writee so beautifully, keep up the amazing worrk, I'm looking foward to your next part! Takecareee. And all the best for your exams, study hard and do well <3 x
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Part A and B were so nice cute and Romantic..
and he was afraid of rides 😆
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Cute and romantic update Annz😳

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loved the romance annie

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Wow aussum update
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Chapter Twenty-One(a)

Sometimes... life becomes more beautiful than you had imagined. Something like that was happening to them. A beautiful start which has no end... a story which isn't limited to any end, was their story. Both enjoyed each other's company so much that they forgot the outer world in each other's arms. They were lost in their own world, the world which had them and only them. A new feeling... a new hope... a new dream...everything was so fresh. This start was a little unusual but really exciting, enthusiasm was beating in their hearts. The sun smiled up looking at them both, sending its rays down on the honeymoon suite's windows to wake them up. Both of them opened their eyes together. And found out each other lying by each other's side. He kissed her forehead with all the passion he had. She replied with a bold kiss on his cheek.She slowly flipped herself to his side and got wrapped into his arms. He loved seeing her by his side, lying like an angel in a white nightie with "sindoor" of his name on her forehead. He felt like kissing her deeply, madly and eternally, and to never leave her side. Beautiful feelings rushed their hearts. Hearts raced... and feelings got deeper. They never had thought a feeling could be so beautiful, they had never seen an enthusiasm greater than this. All was so beautiful, they didn't want to let the passing moments go. They wanted to stop all the passing moments so that the happiness remains there and never leaves their destiny.
Finding a feeling much more pleasant than this wasn't possible for them. These were the best moments of their life, the best feelings of their life. He had hugged her tight, and she comfortably had put her head on his chest. Such a lovely feeling it was... both of them felt so complete with each other, they forgot the world around them. She felt the safest of all in his arms.
Soon when Mayank looked at the watch placed on the side-table near the bed, it was 1 in the noon. He looked at Nupur and laughed.
Mayank: Finally tum officially Mrs.Mayank Malhotra ban hi gayi.
Nupur: Matlab?
Mayank laughed out loud.
Nupur: Mayank! Hass kyun rahe ho?
Mayank: Dopahar ke 1 baj rahe hain..
Nupur: OMG!
She snatched the watch from Mayank's hand and looked at it. Her eyes were left wide-open. She was too shocked to speak something more.. Mayank kept on laughing on her.
Nupur: Han toh late toh koi bhi ho sakta hai.. iss mein hasne wali konsi baat hai?
*Mayank this isn't good for your health.* *Tum Mayank ho khumbkaran nahi..* He said quoting her words.
Nupur, who tried to cover this thing again, said,
Nupur: Mayank.. Tum toh roz late hote ho na.. Main toh aik din hi huyi..
Mayank: Han toh I am proud of myself atleast maine apni adaat toh nahi badli. Leikin aaj history mein pehli baar, NUPUR dopahar ke 1 baje uth rahi hai. I am so proud of you Nupur.
Nupur: There's nothing to be proud about. Tumne meri bhi adaat bigaad di.
Mayank: Oh! Yeh koi infection nahi hai jo mujhse tumhe lag gayi. Tumhara apna kasoor hai.
Nupur: Mera?
Mayank: Kisne kaha tha itni late sone ko..
Nupur: TUMNE!
Mayank: Maine kab kaha?
Nupur: Leikin kiya toh..
And she started blushing.
Mayank: Aur maine... kya kiya?
He said naughtily.
Nupur became shy.
Nupur: Main change karke aati hoon.
That was the maximum excuse she could make.
She stood up and tried to leave. And she soon noticed his hand on her hand and with a jerk; she was back on the bed. He had pulled her back on the bed and she fell on him. Such a heavenly feeling it was now. She was lying above him and he looked at her with his naughty eyes and she was becoming shy. But both of them were feeling too good to pull each-other aside or help each other to stand on their feet. He embraced her in his arms and kissed her cheeks.
She slowly stood up and rushed inside the washroom to get freshened up.
The afternoon was romantic too... they went out for a lovely romantic lunch, and shopping, and the night was double amazing. They both fell on the bed together and the hugs and kisses of each other were enough for them to relax after a big day. The gentle kisses and the small gestures of love were so beautiful to forget the fact they both were tired.
Days, and the three weeks passed. They went back,
A beautiful fine morning, while tying Mayank's tie Nupur was constantly smiling and blushing. Seeing her blushing like that, Mayank wondered the reason behind her such behavior. Mayank: Kya baat hai Nupur.. aaj bada smile kar rahi ho.
Nupur: Kyun na karoon.. aaj mera pehla karvachaut hai.
Mayank: Oh my God! Tumne bhi vrath rakha hai kya?
Nupur nodded with a smile.
Mayank: Yani aaj tum bhi pura din bhooka rehne wali ho.
Nupur: Han.
Mayank: Nupur, tum aaj sach mein kuch nahi khao gi?
Nupur: Nahi.. *pause* lo tumhari tie bhi ho gayi..
Mayank looked at her with a sad face.
Nupur: Aise kya dekh rahe ho. Pata hai, aise tumhari umer lambi hogi aur tum hamesha mere saath rahoge.
She said and wrapped her arms around his neck.
Mayank: Leikin tum kaise rahogi poora din khaye baghair?
Nupur: Come on Mayank. Main dunia ki pehli ladki nahi hoon jo vrath rakh rahi hoon, by the way tumhe office nahi jana kya?
Mayank: Jana hai magar..
She puts a finger on his lip.
Nupur: Bas. Mayank, relax. Aik hi din ki baat hai. Chalo ab jao..
Mayank kissed her cheek, this was the usual buh-bye kiss she usually got. He climbed down the stairs and she kept on standing on the stair-case and then said,
Nupur: Mayank, nashta toh kar lo!
Mayank: Nupur main late ho raha hoon, office mein kuch kha loon ga.
Nupur: Acha suno.. aaj ghar jaldi aana han.
Mayank looked back and smiled. And passed a flying kiss while leaving.
That evening, Mayank returned from his office early. He was tired though but he searched for Nupur everywhere.. and when he reached their room while searching for her... he found her standing in front of the mirror, looking like a bride in red but soon he noticed that she was struggling to tie her back-knots of the shirt.
He went there, and while throwing his coat on the bed he went to Nupur and held her knots. Nupur noticed him standing behind her. She looked back and blushed a little.
He slowly tied the knots and kissed her back, gently. And then, he moved his face to her shoulder and placing it on her shoulder he asked her, "zyada bhook toh nahi lag rahi na."
She gave an awh-ish smile while adoring his love for her and nodded a no in reply.
Mayank: Aaj tum bilkul dulhan jaisi lag rahi ho..
She smiled.
Mayank: Bas kuch kami hai.
Nupur: Kya?
She said while looking at the mirror again, to see what wasn't there.
Mayank then picked the sindoor box and clutched a little bit of it between his thumb and finger and went near Nupur. She looked at him while smiling. He slowly picked up her "bindya" and put the sindoor there, then placed the "bindya" back..
He then went inside, and changed into a white-kurta and pyjama.
Both of them sat on the bed while talking and their constant eyes were on the window behind them to see if moon was visible.
Finally, "chand nikal aya", that's what they heard from downstairs. They both rushed to the little-terrace of their room.
Nupur, after praying in front of the moon. Looked at Mayank through the same "chani" (sorry I don't know what it is exactly called in english.) by which she had seen the moon. She did his aarti, and then bowed infront of him to touch his feet, though he stopped her in her way down. Then, Mayank made her drink some water, and gave her a morsel of the food.
About an hour later, they both were sitting downstairs with Mayank's parents. While discussing Mayank and Nupur's first karvachaut, Mayank's dad suddenly inquired, "Mayank tune kuch khaya kya?"
Nupur: Kya matlab?
MD: Arre Nupur beta.. office mein toh isne kuch bhi nahi khaya... keh raha tha ke bhook nahi hai. Isne ghar mein kuch khaya kya?
Nupur understood the hidden meaning behind Mayank's behavior in the office regarding food. She was about to reply when Mayank quickly answered,
Mayank: Han dad maine toh Nupur ke saath hi kha liya tha.. hai na Nupur?
He eyed Nupur to stay quiet.
Nupur: Han dad.. Mayank theek keh raha hai. Maine aur Mayank ne aik saath khaya.. abhi.
She had double feelings inside, 1. her concern, he hadn't eaten anything since the morning which wasn't good for him. 2. she loved the feeling which came to her mind after knowing how much he loved her.
In a few minutes, they both went back in their room. Both of them changed their clothes and sat on the bed.
She was constantly trying to have an eye contact with him but he, he wasn't looking at her. He knew she would be angry.
She then cupped his face and turned him towards her.
Nupur: Kuch khaya kyun nahi?
She asked with concern.
Mayank: Bhook nahi thi..
Nupur: Meri ankhon mein dekh ke bolo..
Mayank: Han toh kya hua Nupur... tumne bhi toh kuch nahi khaya tha na.
Nupur smiled. She kissed his forehead.
Nupur: Tum yahin ruko main ayi.
She went downstairs and after a few minutes, she was back with a tray of food.
Mayank looked up at her and smiled. She sat near him, and started feeding him with the food.
"She's the most caring wife ever." echoed Mayank's heart.
"There could never be any husband/lover better than him." said Nupur's heart.
-end-

Thanks for reading,
I am eager to your reviews.
Love,
-Annie

Edited by -Annie- - 14 years ago

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