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Posted: 14 years ago

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aish awesome FF loved it keep it up

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hey pooori.... u came to my ff wow.. i love u yaar... ofcourse i will pm u.. thank u for yo lovely comment😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rasikdhara101

okk soo likee....im veryy sorry for not commenting on the other parts....well i wasnt home yesterdayy so yeahh butt....gett ready for my crazii comments hahah =]
I LOVEEDDDD THE PARTS ! omggg awwwww hahaha amraan is soo cute...hee fallin in loveee ;] andd OMGG HAHAHAHA RAHUL IS HILARIOUSS ! ahh i lovee him though ! hahahah omgg....waving like a foool hahaha....ohh god....hahaa hess hilarious ! andd muskaan is like wat the hell man...whos that weirdoo next to that cutiee hahaha.....butt awww......muskaan will be fallin for that weirdoo ;] okk soo anyways....aww...i feel so bad for shilpaa....ughh i hate her maasi or watever.....but aww...shilpa is soo strongg.....andd her sister is soo cute haha ! andd awww the morningg scene with ArSh was cute....there officially friends....soon to be best friends....then like BF and GF ;] oyee hoyeee.....okk anywayss....i soo cantt wait till the next part with likee all these RM and ArSH scenes.....you better updatee soon! =P haha okk ok i know i said awww a lot but its just too cutee hahah....andd and andd...hmmm thanks for the PM's andd updatee soooon =D <3 =]




ohhh ji... ofcourse i was missing yo crazy comments..😆 btw thanxs for yo lovely comment... love ya....😳
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OKKK GUYS... I AM REALLY REALLY HAPPY TO SEE ALL YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS.. I LOVE U ALL... 🤗
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great story soo far, please do continue and please do add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ellooooooo all..... Ayesha here🤗 I cant believe am making a early update.... A lazy bum like me getting up sooo early... but i have a class to attend soo am making a early update.. okk guys i knw many of you are not happy with them returning back.. But unfortunately chudail family is needed...😆 but they wont be coming in this part as they will make a entry in next part... soo enjoy guys the long update....😉

Part 5:
Next morning shilpa's house:

Shilpa quietly set down in her bed... As she got lost in her own world.. her thoughts dirfted back to last nights events....

Flashback:
Armaan: ( cheerfully) heyy shilpaa...
Shilpa: ( little surprised) hiii armaan.. ummm.. wat are you doing here?
Armaan: Actually rahul didnt budge to cook anything for dinner... and me.. i am terrible when it comes to cooking.... soo i thought of coming here to get some snacks...
Shilpa: ( softly giggling) hehhe... okk u better get some food.. okk now i am leaving i have to go home..
Armaan: (holds her wrist and stops) Listen shilpa.... I.....
Armaan stops in mid sentence as his hand made contact with her skin... Once again he was lost in her beauty.. He could see her getting nervous under his touch... A smile came upto his lips as he saw her struggling under his grip.. This was IT ! his heart said... His angel..
On the other hand shilpa was trembling under his touch... Her mind stopped working at that time.. His touch was soft yet firm... She felt a new feeling arising in her heart... What was was it? Why is he effecting her so much... Then came his next move.. Which made her heartbeat stop for a second.. She felt herself being pulled towards him.. Now he was lightly holding her waist.. He back was facing his front.. As she felt his hot breath near her ears... her heart started beating rapidly... She was getting weak under his touch.. And the closeness was effecting her badly... Shilpa snapped out of her thoughts as she heared him speaking softly near her ears...
Armaan : ( in a whisper) Why do u always try to get away... Why dont u just listen to me this time...
Shilpa unable to speak soo she just slowly shakes her head...
Armaan leaves her hand and move infront of her... His heart started beating rapidly when he saw her face... Her beautiful green eyes were hidden behind those eye lashes as she kept looking down... was she blushing? awww she is soo adorable man... Adorable angel.. Armaan thought...
Armaan: ( with a smile) Actually shilpa i need a favor from you.. Uhh me and rahul have decided to take a tour around lonavla tomm... Soo i was thinking if you could become a guide for us.. Uhhh you can bring your friend also with you...
Shilpa: ( in a low voice) Her name is Muskaan
Armaan: okk bring muskaan along with you.. but plss dont say noo...
Shilpa: ( trying to make a excuse) Armaan... ummm.. I have duty tomm.. I may not be able to join .
Armaan: ( with a smile) Shilpaa... Its sunday tomm...
Shilpa: (totally flushed) Uhh yaa... sunday... srry i forgot...
Armaan: ( pleadingly) Plss shilpa.. I would be really happy if you guided us tomm... Plss do come.. We will meet up near this cafe'.. Come at sharp 9 okk.. Byee cya.. Goodnyt
Before shilpa could argue Armaan makes an exit from there....

Flashback ends

Muskaan enters into shilpa's room and see her totally lost in her thoughts... She goes upto to shilpa and starts her talk...
Muskaan: Oyye shilpa... get ready naa... we are getting late girl.. Remember we have to meet armaan...
Shilpa: Noooo muskaan.. Am not going
Muskaan: ( little taken back) Shilpaa... What are you saying... look he will be waiting for us.. lets go na...
Shilpa: ( stubbornly) Muskii plss... I dont want to go... I just cant do this plss
Muskaan: ( understandingly) I know why you are behaving like this.. Its the chudail family right... Shilpaa... they are not here... And they will not even get to know abt this.. Shilpa i really feel u should enjoy today.. Atleast for the time being.. Plss lets go na... Plsss
Shilpa : ( giving up) Okk muski.. As you say.. but i have a condition.. Ariya will be coming with us..
Muskaan: ( Cheerfully) Nw thats like my shilpa.. Okk we will take ariya along with us.. Now get ready...

Muskaan's dress: http://girls-fashions.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/ladies-kurta-jeans.jpg
Shilpa's dress: http://images.teamsugar.com/files/upl1/20/202478/17_2008/20080404_103010695824_LRG.JPG
Ariya's dress: http://cdn2.ioffer.com/img/item/158/308/253/hD7jJwWft4mOHCH.jpg

8:20 am Near Star cafe' :
Ariya: Muskii didi... Where shilpa didi?
Muskaan: ( lovingly) Aru... She is inside the cafe' baby... Pammi aunty called her... dont worry she will be back soon...
10 minutes passed by... But shilpa didint come yet.. Muskaan glance towards the cafe' and thinks.. I better go and get her.. muskaan bends to ariya and speaks..
Muskaan : Aru baby.. I am going to get shilpa okk.. U just sit here like a good girl and eat this chocolate.. Am coming with shilpa didi...

As Muskaan made her way towards the cafe' she bumps into rahul.. They keep looking at each other making weird faces.. After sometime rahul notice ariya and speaks to muskaan...
Rahul: hey is she with you? whose child is it?
Muskaan: oohh thats Ariya.... She is Shilpa's........
she stops in mid sentence as she realized she had to get shilpa back here..
Muskaan: ( hurridely) Wait... I am coming... be right back...
With that muskaan makes her way to cafe' leaving behind a shocked rahul... After sometime rahul gets back into the world and speaks to himself...
Rahul: ( in a shock) That means Shipa is a mother of a Child!!

Armaan hurriedly runs towards Rahul who was satnding near the cafe'... He goes near him and speaks..
Armaan: ( panting) Sorry rahul... I just went to arrange a car for us.. U knw...
Not getting any response from Rahul, Armaan shakes him a little...
Armaan: Rahul... bro are u fine? Why are u standing like a ghost...?
Rahul: ( turns back to armaan and speaks hesitently) Armaan listen... u knw.. Your angel.. She is a mother of a child...
Armaan: ( totally baffled) What !! Rahul do you even know what you are saying??
Rahul: Bro i am speaking the truth... See that girl.. Thast her child..
Armaan sees Ariya sitting on the bench... sobbing silently.. He walks upto her and sits infront of her and speaks..
Armaan: Hey dear... I am Armaan... Whats yo name sweetheart?
Ariya: ( between her sobs) Aru... Ariya...
Armaan: hiii ariya... ummm.. where is your mamma?
Ariya looks at Armaan and then point up to the sky....
Rahul: ( confused) Arre... whats in up? when did she go up??
Armaan: ( glaring at rahul) Rahul.... Will u just keep your mouth shut !!
Ariya: ( between her sobs... speaks in her baby voice) Mamma.. Papa... Accident.. Mumma and papa.. went up... They are a star... Shilpa didi.. I want to go to didi..
Armaan: ( feeling bad) Heyyy baby.... Plss dont cry... look mamma and papa are looking at you baby.. they are will cry if u cry... You should be a strong girl.. Just like your shilpa didi..


Armaan sees Ariya smiling widely... Soo he smiles back at her and get up only to see a scared Rahul with a sorry look..
Armaan: ( in anger) Rahul.... U are such an Idiot man.....!!
Rahul: ( with his bechaara face) Sooo srry Armaan.. I actually thought.... Srry man...

Armaan and Rahul stops their talk as they saw Shilpa and Muskaan coming towards them.. Shilpa quickly runs to Ariya and hugs her tightly...
Shilpa: Sorry Aru... didi had to do some work..
She then takes Ariya into her arms and looks towards Armaan
Shilpa: ( hesitently) Armaan... I.. I want to take Ariya also...
Armaan: ( with a smile) Ofcourse shilpa.. I would love to take Ariya with us.. Guyys lets get going nw..
With that they drove off to different places.. Having fun and totally enjoying each others company...


Evening In Armaan's cottage:
Muskaan: ( with a big smile) Armaan.. Thanxx for the trip.. We really enjoyed.. Right Shilpu......?
Shilpa: ( with a shy smile) Umm.. yaa ... Thank u armaan for such a lovely trip...
Armaan: ( winks to her and speaks) The pleasure is all mine... With that he starts looking at her lovingly..
Muskaan: ( gets a call) guys... be right back...
As Muskaan leaves... Armaan starts up a conversation...
Armaan: sooo shilpa... Do you believe in love??
Shilpa: ( little surprised bye the question... But she directly looks into his eyes and speaks) Noo Armaan... I dont believe.. I just cant...
Armaan: ( Taken back by her words) ooohh ... But shilpa...
As he was about to continue... Rahul and Muskaan walks into the living room..
Muskaan: Sorry guys.. I have to go.. Have got a urgent call from pammi aunty.. Shilpa.. I have to go to cafe' now.. Plss you wait here until i come back.. I will be back after one hour.. Plss wait okk..
Shilpa: ( nervously) ookk muski... But plss come back soon...
Rahul: Come muskaan.. i will drop you to the cafe'

With that Rahul and Muskaan leaves from the cottage... Shilpa looks at Armaan awkwardly... Ariya also was sleeping...sooo now she was alone with him.. Suddenly it starts to rain.. When shilpa saw it was raining... She excitedly runs outside leaving a smiling armaan behind...

As shilpa was buxy playing in rain.. Armaan watched her from distance and walks towards her getting drenched in the rain.. He goes near shilpa and speaks..
Armaan: ( naughtily) Shilpaa... dont you still believe in love.....??
With that both starts to laugh uncontrollably.. And starts to play in rain like small kidz.... Forgetting all sorrows and enjoying themselves in the lovely rain...

Aai Meri Subah Haste Hasate
Boli Aankhen Tere liye Sandesha hai
Haan hai
Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Koi khushi aane ka bhi andesha hai
Haan hai

Aan haaan
Gulabi si subah
Aan Haan
Sharabi si hawaa

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

Raahein waahein bole baatein rumani
Aao Baitho suno baatein kahani hai
Haan hain
Tazzi tazzi lage humko rozana
Teri meri baatein yun to purani hai
Haan hai

Aan haaan
Khayalon se paale
Aan haaan
Yeh zindagi chale

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye
LyricsMasti.com

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Mein pyasi thi nirashi
Tu pani ki surahi

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

Tujhe dekha to khila hoon
Teri chahat mein dhula hoon
Mile Mandir Mein jo ____
Mein to tujh mein yun mila hoon

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

Aan haaan
Dhundhe na abb koi
Aan haaan
Mein khoya Tu Khoyi

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye


Note: Guys plss do comment and tell yo views...


Edited by aish_lovv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HAHA OMGG I LOVEDD THIS PART ! hahaha omgg yaar...im lovin this FF....haha ok awwww the flashhbackk was soo cute ! i gott lil butterfliess in myy stomache...hehe....okk anywayss....haha awww shilpa getting all worried and doesnt want to go haha....muskaan was all excited to go....andd all the dresses were cutee ! i loved them !...andd then awww rahul and muskaan....soo cute ahha...andd omgg ahhaah i love rahul ! HAHAH ! i love how hes likee thats shilpas childd haha omgg that was hilariouss ! andd then awwwwwwww that was soo cute....armaan iss soo kind and caring and cute....lovee him ! andd hhahaah omgg rahul....wheres up haha....awww.....and awww love how armaan is soo goood with kids...and haha i could just imagine armaan and rahuls faces when they found out that she was shilpas sister ! haha armaan all mad and rahul all scared....omgg rahuls shocking face when he foudn out that thats her "baby" omgg lmfao haha....ok anywayss....awww soo sweet how armaan doesnt mind ariya comingg with them....andd omgg awww wooo hooo....haha loved the do u believe in love....and woo everybodys gonee....and noww the rain scene =D omgg i soo cantt wait till the nextt aprt ! andd omggg i lovee thisss songgg ! you always use the perfect songs ! anyways....thanks for the PM and updatee sooon! =] <3


andd to the replyy for the last comment:
haha awww....i love when u say ohh jii....i find it soo cutee haha....i loveee itt ! andd awww haha....well watever i say comess from the heartt =] andd lovee yaa tooo ! <3 =]
Edited by rasikdhara101 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rasikdhara101

HAHA OMGG I LOVEDD THIS PART ! hahaha omgg yaar...im lovin this FF....haha ok awwww the flashhbackk was soo cute ! i gott lil butterfliess in myy stomache...hehe....okk anywayss....haha awww shilpa getting all worried and doesnt want to go haha....muskaan was all excited to go....andd all the dresses were cutee ! i loved them !...andd then awww rahul and muskaan....soo cute ahha...andd omgg ahhaah i love rahul ! HAHAH ! i love how hes likee thats shilpas childd haha omgg that was hilariouss ! andd then awwwwwwww that was soo cute....armaan iss soo kind and caring and cute....lovee him ! andd hhahaah omgg rahul....wheres up haha....awww.....and awww love how armaan is soo goood with kids...and haha i could just imagine armaan and rahuls faces when they found out that she was shilpas sister ! haha armaan all mad and rahul all scared....omgg rahuls shocking face when he foudn out that thats her "baby" omgg lmfao haha....ok anywayss....awww soo sweet how armaan doesnt mind ariya comingg with them....andd omgg awww wooo hooo....haha loved the do u believe in love....and woo everybodys gonee....and noww the rain scene =D omgg i soo cantt wait till the nextt aprt ! andd omggg i lovee thisss songgg ! you always use the perfect songs ! anyways....thanks for the PM and updatee sooon! =] <3


andd to the replyy for the last comment:
haha awww....i love when u say ohh jii....i find it soo cutee haha....i loveee itt ! andd awww haha....well watever i say comess from the heartt =] andd lovee yaa tooo ! <3 =]



awww dear.... i really love yo comments... its sooo cute.. and ya i really love that song myself.. and i put songs according to the scenes.. thank u soo much for loving this ff and yo cute comments.. love ya...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_lovv



awww dear.... i really love yo comments... its sooo cute.. and ya i really love that song myself.. and i put songs according to the scenes.. thank u soo much for loving this ff and yo cute comments.. love ya...😳



haha anytimee....yourr writingg is just too goodd =D omgg i know right ! andd yeahh i saww that haha....butt its likee amazingg how all the songs go with the scenes...i love that ! anytimee hahaha.....love yaa =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the part, you used Bheegi Si on KaSh aahhh,,😳 too good, please do continue and thank you for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey ayesha!
Great part..
A very cute part..
Especially the convo btween arman n aru!
The dresses wer also cute..
Thanks 4 the pm..
Continue soon!

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