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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Wat was that

It was Geet's rght to get angry
Koi avein news deta hai kay
Liked the way Maan clamed Geet
It was good



afsha i had to change the track mid way cuz i had a different idea LOLZ that's why it was very very stupid
but next updates gunna b WAY better :P😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow that was so nice i just read all of the chapters
loved all of them
thanks
please do PM me when the next one is updated
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy
nice and emotional part
ahem ahem next part :P
cont soon

luv harneet
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update
it was sad but nicely written
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice update.... plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey sorry fo late reply :)
Just read the last part i knw i was missing something lol
Loved it awww it is so sad
Wish no one would have cancer in this world...it is so hard for da families
Am glad tht maan tried to make geet laugh lol..i loved it when he said u look scary lol
Geet and mom have a great relationship and i loved it how maan is confortable with her parents
Please continue soon asap lol
Will be waiti g
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Continue soonn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
Guys here is the next part!! A full Maaneet part so comment okay!!

Oh yeah.....
WARNING: Do not read if under 17

Chapter 33:

She went up and while realizing that she had been a bit too harsh on him by slightly ignoring him. He used to fall asleep waiting for her.

She felt frustrated.

"Main bhi na Maani ko aise hi tang karti rehti hoon!" she said while hitting her head slightly with her palm.

Then she had a naughty idea. Of course, she had to say sorry he was her lovable husband.

Maan walked into the room feeling cold, it was very chilly outside.

"Geet? Geet? Kahan ho?" he said walking over to the wardrobe area.

"Yahan bhi nahi hai?" he said getting worried.

"Change kar ke dhoond leta hoon"

He then walked into the bathroom shutting the door behind him. He turned to see Geet.

She was sitting inside the jacuzzi playing with rose petals and foam.

He smirked.

She turned to him'

"Light dim hi rehne do" she said softly.

He went over to her sitting on the edge looking at the scented candles all around the bathroom.

She blushed.

"Geet tumne mere man ki baat pardh li" he said naughtily.

"Achaji?" she said turning to him slightly conscious so she gathered the foam around her.

He looked at her beautiful eyes now playing with the foam the lids so creamy and smooth. Her hair into a messy wavy bun with a few strands hanging out here and there. And then he saw the silver strings on her shoulders.

"What were those?" he asked himself.

He moved closer to her startling her by kissing her eyelids.

She looked up to him lovingly. Her eyes sparkling and the foam on her cheek and neck.

He bent further down running his nose along her neck.

She gasped.

"Kya hua?" he asked kissing her on her jawline.

"Maan your stubble is soo prickly'" she said looking at him softly.

"So? Your long hair gets in the way of us at night. I don't say anything because I love it" he said poking her nose.

"I love your stubble too, I never said I don't" she said raising a hand out through the water.

The silky hand made him loose control.

He quickly unbuttoned his shirt feeling the heat.

She looked the other way embarrassed of what was to happen.

He smirked seeing that reaction, then continued to strip.

He then gently went into the water.

She stiffened feeling his bare form behind her.

He now fully concentrating in a sensual mood caressed her skin moving up her arm all the way to across her back.

He leaned in to kiss her there.

She closed her eyes as he gently moved her towards him. Her back was now relaxing on his chest.

She sighed. He started to kiss her shoulders and bit them there. He sucked on her neck.

"Maan" she gasped as his wet mouth tingled her.

"Yeah?" he said nuzzling her hair.

She just forgot everything lost in him'

"Bolo bhi?" he said after a few seconds.

She just put her head on his shoulder resting.

He kissed her cheek.

"I love you so much'with each passing moment I fall in love with you again and again" he said with his lips on her nape.

She then raised an arm to place it on the back of his head and moved his head towards her.

She turned to meet his eyes as he moved in to kiss her.

They started off slow and then got intense. He now turned her to kiss her even deeper. He moved her closer onto him by pushing her against him. She now put one hand on his chest and the other in his hair. She clutched his hair tighter and moved her tongue quicker as the feeling of her on him while her each on his sides made her burn up.

He caressed her back as he felt her hook.

"Geet?" he said seductively.

"Hmm" she said resting her head in the crook of his neck.

"You'll catch a cold now, the water is colder" he said kissing her back.

After a few minutes she moved and now turned to sit opposite to him. He got up grabbing a towel that was on the side wrapping himself.

He handed her a towel.

He furrowed his eyebrows when she didn't take it.

"Tum jaao, main''.uh'''aati hoon" she said turning bright red.

"Kya hua? Mujhse sharma rahi ho?" he asked now kissing her lips while leaning down.

He then took her hands in his and supported her to stand while she squeezed her eyes shut.

He smirked at this.

But then his smirk turned into a gasp as he saw what she had been avoiding for him to see in the light.

She was now standing in the water rose petals clutched to her bare skin. Her slightly damp hair, and her glossy wet lips. And the most gawking part was that she was wearing a silver bikini with rhinestones on it, and a net patterned matching bottom which was tied to the sides with glittery strings.

He gasped, his eyes widened and he now grabbed her carrying her over his shoulder, towards the bed.

His towel dropped.

She had her eyes closed all the way through. As she felt her every part stick to his skin. He placed her on the bed pinning her hands to each of her sides.

"Maan'..lamps?" she said breathing heavily.

"Will remain on" he said looking straight into her eyes.

Not being able to take the heat, because this was the first time she had done something like this''she struggled to get out of his hold.

He leaned in closer kissing the rhinestones'..

She melted and managed to slide her wrists through his hold which now concentrated on her undergarments.

She covered his eyes.

He chuckled.

"Not this time" he said kissing the part that went up and down heavily breathing.

He then took each rose petal that was stuck to her body off with his mouth. Kissing her there along with it.

She closed her eyes as she felt him pull on the strings''''

She opened her eyes now to feel his head on her chest.

How did stuff like this happen overnight? Clearly she had gone to sleep cuddling with him and now he was on her?

She ran off the bed grabbing his shirt that was on the couch. She came back to pull the spread over him as she turned to find herself being pulled back.

"Maan its-" she started but he stopped her by pulling her and she landed on him.

"'''.Daytime ab uth jao, right?" he said finishing her sentence.

She smiled.

"Chalo ab soo jaate hain" he said pulling her into a hug.

"No'" she said giggling while pushing him off.

"Kya matlab no? Pati parmeshwar hota hai!" he said pecking her on the lips.

"Yeh tumne kahan se suna?" she said surprised by his dialogue.

"Woh, dadi kabhi khushi kabhi gham dekh rahi thi kal" he said hesitating.

"Wow you spied on her?" she said teasing him.

He now flipped their positions being on top of her.

"No, I was passing by when I heard that before I came in here to find you in the tub!" he said naughtily.

"Acha, I see" she said kissing his lips.

After a few minutes of making out she pushed him slightly.

"Ab hato I'm gunna go shower" she said.

"With me?" he said kissing her neck.

"Maan stop it!" she said as he rubbed his stubble on her neck.

"Acha phir meri shirt do?"

"Maine pehni hui hai!" she said looking at her body.

"Take it off its mine!" he said pulling on the collar with his teeth.

"Maan jangli bat bano!"

"Yeh mujhe kehna chaahiye tha" he said moving to lay beside her now.

She smiled.

"Wow what an aim" he said excited.

"What?" she asked turning her face to the direction he was looking at.

And she pushed him and got off as he laughed.

Then she turned over warning him to stop when he whistled at her....

"You are jungli, aur yeh whistle karna kisne sikhaya!!! Zaroor doosri lardkiyon pe bhi karte ho gay!!!" she said as she saw her undergarments hanging from the TV on the wall.

He laughed as she closed the bathroom door.

PRECAP:

Geet going to Swiss.

COMMENT!!
Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMGGGGGGG!!! yeh kya tha?!!!☺️☺️ Tooooo hawt to handle bf!!!!! yaar mujhay sharam arahi hai kuch likthay way bhi, tu bas is say he samajh lay😉!!!!!!!!
Edited by desigirl_18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!!!
I'm too shocked and I'm like ☺️☺️☺️
Please update soon
Loved this one
Thanks

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