SR/A: Being Here, Only Ours Today UPD:1/18/12 P 30 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 6:

Oh the GPS..i knew it would fail..lol…the one in my car is pretty useless too…lol once my family went on a road trip n my dad trusted his GPS so dearly n we spent like 2 hours trying to figure out the way…hahaha bt it was funny… k now bk to the story ..a new doctor….hmm I wonder if its Abhi…SO AN are entering soon…n the last part….he had his blackberry n forgot abt it…lol…yup..that's our sid!! :)

n was arjun driving that truck?..i am really curious to know what happened..

Part 7:

ok..im wondering if this is turning into a horror story or what…this is first SR ff that's possibly turning into a horror story..who is that guy that stalking over the couples….part of me is telling that it is Ewwface n part of me is telling that it is abhi….plz if its abhi, then its for some good reason…I wonder when will they reach goa at this rate….

Part 8:

Aww...it was cute how they fell in love…I soo wish there are guys like that in real world….bt..sigh…its too good to be true..loved the vm n lol sid's attempt to impress his soon to be father-in-law…I am remembering one of the earlier parts where sid needs pep talk from his FIL to propose his GF…lol…

Part 9:

"DAat, Chi, n Haat"…lol reminded me of SGP…

LOL sid, "they watch too many hindi serials,"….hahaha….aww poor shravan…he has to stay away from his wife…Aww..very cute SR's song…I bet when next time Ridz is mad at him…all sid needs to do is play that song…

Part 9 again…

"PMS will be sent out tomorrow."…lol the first time I read that as P.M.S

I was blushing while reading this part till I got to the end….OMFG..sid dancing in rain without his shirt on that too with ridz…*faint*…this was really hot n sexy update…omg…as I read SR ffs, I hate those CMG cvs sooo much…I really wanted to see SR dancing in rain, bt nooo..they showed ewwface n miss. Confused in the sequence…thanks aishu soo much for this rain sequence….n now that I have read all the parts, I am getting really impatient to know what happened exactly n where is ridz….plzzz update ASAP!! :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updates...
next time do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
*Reserved

Buhahahhahaha...🤣 God, i could fall off the chair... Mallu☺️... Hilarious i tell you... I read that part twice making sure i haven't made any mistake while doing so...😆

Thank God, you explained it clearly😆...

Anyway, back to the part, It was super awesome... So Lord of Besharmi at task...😉

Gonna Read next part😛

N hey yaar, It's Mauritius...

Mwaaa⭐️
Edited by Liashna - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@LoveSR 😳sowwwyyy

@himu, u get a different post for all ur catch up comments😆 look how special you are!👏

@sonia, abey oye, shut up. ok fine. sorry i gave u all a heart attack with my fast updating 😆. the credit truly does goes to the Besharam Squad, o these comrades...they inspire me each day *wipes away tear* jeeti raho, phoolo phalo! jeeti raho mere bache! aha! i stole an idea?! i read ur ff and half the time i go DAMN IT! i was gonna do that it sucks, i should know 😡
ok fine. great minds think alike and all that jazz...

@tanni dont you love that song?!?! I LOVE THAT SONG! and thats our motto, well it is now cuz i say so, Besharam Squad, crossing all limits...even if there are none 😎.

@mala thank youuu and ill pm this time lmao

@CHECHI!!!!
*runs like they do in movies to give you a hug* *bowing down now* ashirvaadam tharanam guru, thankal illyandu, ithu indavullyayirunnu!

ab aap logone lord rakha hai tho..i have to live up to myself na😉😆
the dressing room shall never be the same...i know that now...never again. never...again...but i mean..jacuzzi...😆
our theme song should be talli from ugly aur pagli or whatever...i love zat talli songzzz

@besharamsquad 🤣 idk who that was...but thank you 😆😆😆😆😆

@veena thank you 😆

@Harshu bless you my child😎 err i have no idea what to say when people hail to you...😕i should find out... well considering half your comment was ☺️ me thinks mes dones my jobs...
how MANTALLY MAGNIFICENT!

@harshita thank youuu

@zaq im going to sound like an idiot, considering duh the update was a bday gift of sorts for you...but umm...no i infact did not realize ur bday and sids bday are so close 🤣 how Mantal of me 🤣 i like this hailing thing...keep it going subjects!
tauba tauba! i can imagine ki what u were thinkingsss soulys na...hum kabhi nahi sudrenge 😆
umm you found ur ass though right?😕

lmfao o god that was cheesy joke! zaq im talli! ali was the one that drank and here i am...

@ali nanni 😆 and thank you 🤣 ellam angeyude anugraham kondu thanne😆
Edited by malluangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi😃

Hello ji!

Namaskaaaram!

Ok so this is the small part before the major Sid's bday party part for which there is a note down there \/

Ummm after that we go into the deluctable even more happy vacationing time part. YES, i Know you're going like will there ever be a REAL problem.

Why yes, yes there will.

Let's just them enjoy while they can huh?


Also. If you want me to PM you...like this post, because I'm done with the pmming 200 ppl thing. Really I am, it's a waste of my time, and a waste of theirs too.

So kindly press the little button and we shall all be happy!


Comments have been returned on page 22 and 24 😃


Part 11: The Sun's Revenge

Sid stared dismally at the crashing waves. Off in the distance, a trunk clad Shravan and Arjun tossed their respective partners into the waves, laughing at their sour faces. Saachi and Arohi pummeled them with fists as their tanks and shorts got wetter and wetter, chilling them to the bone, yet they laughed along with the guys, indicating they weren't as annoyed as they wanted to be.

Siddhant sighed in forlornness, looking wistfully back towards the hotel in which Riddhima was probably sleeping by now. He turned back to watch his friends, catching the eye of a bikini clad foreigner who winked at him suggestively, eyeing the red trunks he had on with a simple white shirt. Stealing his eyes away he shook his head in dismissal, sliding further down the beach chair on which he lay. He pulled his white fedora further down, shutting his eyes as he decided to take a nap.

So what if his friends AND fiance forgot his birthday, they'd watched that awesome movie last night and had ice-cream!

"Moshi Moshi," he whispered sadly, settling into an agitated nap.

-/\/\/\-

Riddhima's lips tightened as from the hotel lobby she distressingly watched her fiance, who looked dejected watching their friends enjoying themselves. According to the plan no one had mentioned his birthday, making plans at breakfast to spend the whole day on the beach. She had opted out, however, citing a headache as a reason to go back to her room and avoid Sid. She had struggled with keeping the secret all through dinner, the movie, and breakfast thing morning. She'd noticed Sid's questioning looks towards her and knew that unless she found a way to steer clear of him for the rest of the day; his party would no longer be a surprise.

-/\/\/\-

His fingers brushed lightly over her arm, tracing a path towards her hand, entwining his digits in between hers. Another hand ventured over her waist, clutching at her through the sheer red material of her dress, eliciting a sensuous moan. His lips brushed finely over her tender petals, causing her to gasp with pleasure. Her eyes were hooded as he titled her face upwards. Slowly, measurably, he brought his mouth down upon hers, enveloping the softness within him. A blissful groan erupted from the back of his throat as she pressed herself upon him, a hand clutching at his half undone shirt while the other pulled at his hair.

He lost his sense of place, time, or destination as he passionately moved with her. Pushing her down onto the beach chair, he lifted his head to observe the sunlight playing upon her golden skin, reflecting off of the perspiration glazing her skin as she panted heavily below him. She called out his name as he descended down upon her again. Just them, Siddhant and Riddhima, on an abandoned beach, on a beach chair, hearing the crashing waves, feeling the warmth of the sunlight, just them. "Sid," her enthralling voice called out, "Sid'" He nuzzled her cheek, loving the way his name sounded coming from her, "Riddhima... "

"SID! ABEY OH!"

"Riddhima?"

"Riddhima nahi, uski baap!"

"Dad? What are you doing here?"

"O my god, he is impossible, SID! WAKE UP!"

Siddhant's eyes flew open, shutting immediately as the bright sunlight scorched his eyes, "what the'"

"Did you enjoy your nap?"

Siddhant rubbed at his eyes as he recognized Shravan's voice, he simply groaned in pain, how long had he been sleeping?

"Wanna go inside before you turn into a sun dried tomato?" Arjun asked. Siddhant squinted his eyes open, shuddering from the pain the simple effort gave off, Shravan, Saachi, Arohi, and Arjun stood peering down at his red body.

Great.

Sunburn.

On his birthday.

Which, of course, no one had remembered yet.

He got up wincing in pain, ignoring the snickers of his so called friends, Sid headed towards the hotel. He needed a bath'in lotion.

-/\/\/\-

Riddhima bit her lip as she peered around the corner at Sid waddling awkwardly towards his room. She gasped softly seeing how red he was, slapping her forehead in dismay she watched hidden from view as he painfully opened the door, his face stuck in a frown.

She pursed her lips as she thought of what to do, leaning against the wall she tapped her chin'sunburn'.OATMEAL!

-/\/\/\-

"Sirs!" Arjun and Shravan stopped in their tracks as a hotel employee called out after them. They had been walking towards the suites, Saachi and Arohi's arms wrapped through their respective partners as they whispered sweet nothings back and forth. With a comforting smile, they now sent the girls off, blowing kisses as they disappeared. Their eyes followed them with hawk like accuracy until they disappeared around the corner. Then they turned to the man behind them, both sets of eyes held devilish glints as they leered down at the short man, "kaam hogaya?"


I promise to actually send PMs this time 😆 *expertly ducks the shoe*


Umm so I'm going to be tweeting updates from now on.

So add me there, malluangel:



Ok guys, I need your help, along with your comments, what do you want to happen on Sid's surprise birthday party!?!?

Edited by malluangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
why so short 😡😆

n Sid's bday party...don't you know😉☺️😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

why so short 😡😆


n Sid's bday party...don't you know😉☺️😆



sputters and coughs. why yes zaq. yes i do.



😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: malluangel



sputters and coughs. why yes zaq. yes i do.



😃


good then make use of it😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty


good then make use of it😛




...yes sir.
maan.
i mean maam.
i mean maam-sir!😳


comments returned btw 😆 on p 24
Edited by malluangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: malluangel




...yes sir.
maan.
i mean maam.
i mean maam-sir!😳


comments returned btw 😆 on p 24


Yayyy!!! 😍☺️

aight let me chk😛

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