FF PYAR YA NAFRAT MG UPDATE COMING SOON - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Hey this was great intro yaar!
I can't wait to read more
I wonder what must have led to their marriage!
Well,whatever it is,it seems intersting!
Thanks for the pm and pelase update asap!
i'm dying to read more!
Thanks again!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
great FF! con't soon
and really pretty suit!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
plzzz do continue sooooooon and pm me plzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
ve4y nice....pls add me to ur pm list if u have ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Hey Sonal
Thanks for the pm n Awwwwwwwwww Sonal ...🤗
loved the concept......
😳
nice intro n the first part is great.....👏
count me in.....😳
PM me when you update next can't wait for next dear hope u update soon n loge part also plssssssssssssssssssssssss
udpate soon dear n do pm me nice name also

love u


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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
It was lovely.add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
oops its just 6mnths of their 2getherness nd they decided 2 part away
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Part 2

'Didi you here? " Pinky screamed and hugged her sister.

"Pinky tum kaisi hoon?" Geet hugged her sister back. It was good to see her.

"I am fine and what about you? In these two years you forgot your family. Not a single call, a letter or anything. We were so worried di"

Geet with teary eyes: I am sorry Pinky but how can you think that I forget you all. Not a day passed which I didn't miss you Pinky. But I had to be independent and I wanted to fulfill my dreams.

Pinky: It's ok di'you are here na'that's enough!

"Pinky Beta who is at the door?"a soft voice called.

"Ma?" Geet looked at her mom'

"Geet" he mom started to cry "tum vapas agaya"

Geet hugged her mom "please ma don't cry I am here na"

"Why are you standing here come in beta" Geets mom said

Geet went and almost all her family members welcomed her with open arms.

Her dad, grandfather, brother, cousin aren't at home and Geet was relieved. She didn't want to face them now.

"Geet go and take a bath. We prepare lunch for you." her bhabi said.

"theek hai " Geet went to her old room. Nothing has changed'Everything was on the same place. She took a long bath. She dressed up and stood in front of the mirror. She was not the same Geet who left her home two years ago. She is a stronger Geet. She makes her own decisions. But still she is scared. How will they react if she tell them about his propose. How should she explain them that she'll accept the proposal? Please Babaji mujhe shakti dedo. She took a deep breath and went upstairs.

"Geet"she heard a deep voice say her name.

"Da'da'dadaji" Geet suttered.

She turned slowly to face him. She went towards him her heart beats louder. She bent down to take his blessings but he walked away without a word. Geet wants to cry but reminded herself "Geet you are stronger now" she followed him she has to talk to him. In the lounge are all the male family members. As Geet entered everyone was shocked except Dadiji. Geets brother wanted to run to his little sister and hug her tight. But then he looked at Dadaji and sits quite there. Geet was disappointed. Her dad stands up "What are you doing here Geet? Why do you come back? Wasn't it enough what you did to your family?"

Geet fought against the tears "Papa".

"No Geet. Don't call me Papa. You lost the right to call me papa" Mohinder shouted.

Now she couldn't hold it anymore. Geet broke down. Even it hurts to see his daughter in this state what she did to his family was unforgivable.

"Stop Mohindar" everyone looked surprised to Dadaji. Nobody expected that.

Geet was surprised too. 'Don't shout at her"

Dadaji went to Geet and hugged her. Now her brother and her cousin welcomed her too with a warm hug. "I missed you so" her brother whispered. All the other family members entered too and were happy that Dadaji forgave her. Only Mohinder was still angry. (Not because of the reputation of his family. No his little daughter went away without a word. He was so worried that something could happened to her).

They had dinner together. Everyone fed her. And Geet was so happy. She was back at home with her family. After the dinner Geet went to her. She opened her Laptop.

She started to chat with someone

Man: hi babes

Geet: hi

Man: i am already missing you

Geet: that's good

Man: do you miss me

Geet thought (to be honest no but I don't want to hurt him)

Geet: yes

Man: Did your family forgive you?

Geet: yes I was so surprised that Dadaji forgave me so fast. But I am so happy.

Man: that's great'So did you tell them about our marriage.

Geet: no give me some time. I just arrived today.

Man: but I want to marry you ASAP Geet. Should I come to India too? I can talk to you family

Geet shocked: no way'don't make it worse at it is'

Man: ok but tell them soon and come back'otherwise I'll come to India'

Geet: ok ok'I am tired I am going to sleep' bye

Man: bye darling'I love you'sweet dreams'

Geet: hmmmm. Good night John'.

She closed the laptop'How she should tell her family about him'She closed her eyes and tried to catch some sleep'

Precap

Second meeting at Pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
oops geet luves sme 1 els ee!! btw when u updating oder ff of urs
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
nyc update and opssssssssss geet loves someone else? hmmm do continue soon

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