SaJan FF~~Madly In Love With You~~ (dis-continued) - Page 7

CHAPTER 3 (part-B)

In meantime uday came in library.

U- sorry 2disturb u guys, lekin kya hai na gunjan, der ho gayi hai, aur hume ghar chalna chahiye.

G- oh haan, waise dia kahan hai??

U- dids to benji k saath bahar gayi hai.

G- theek hai, main chalti hun samrat, bye

S- gunjan suno.......

G- kya hua??

S- wo...b..actually.....mujhe chapter abhi bhi clear nahi hai......to...kya tum mujhe kal firse samjha dogi, please?

G- theek hai, main kal tumse subah milti hun, bye.

S- gunjan!

G- (turns back) ab kya hua?

S- bye......n gud night in advance.....

G-(smiles) bye.....aur tumhe bhi advance mein gud nite......

Uday n gunjan leave.

S- ye library wohi jagah hai, jahan main kabhi nahi aaya........lekin aaj? Dude tujhe ho kya gaya hai?? Main aur library mein? Aur wo bhi padhai karne??

He blushes.

S- ye to limit hai yaar........maine kabhi blush nahi kiya, balki mujhe dekhkar girls blush karti hain....lekin aaj to main blush pe blush kiye jaa raha hun.........ho na ho..ye gunjan ka asar hai........gunjan? maine phirse uska naam liya??? Whats happening dude???

At night, samrat was in his room, dribbling his bb n thinking abt gunjan.

S- aaj gunjan k saath spend kia hua time kitna achha tha.....pehli baar main kisi ladki k saath time spend karne k liye bechain tha............bt karein bhi to hum kya karein, gunjan hai hi itni sweet.......itni beautiful........one sec..main firse uske baare mein sochne laga???

Till then Nupur comes 2him.

N- samrat ye lo tumhari coffee...

S- oh thanks di....i really needed it......(thinks)shayad coffee piyun to dimaag thikaane aa jaye.!

He takes a sip of coffee n then looks at nupur.

S- di, tumhe mujhse kuchh kehna hai kya?

N- h....ha...haan ......wo..

S- tum kisi baat ko lekar pareshaan ho, rite?

N- haan lekin........tumhe kaise pata?

S- kyunki tumne coffee mein coffee powder ki jagah chai ki patti daal dia hai.😆...

Nupur looks at him n then drinks a sip of coffee 4m her mug.

N- are haan......sorry samrat wo...

S- aur aisa tum tabhi karti ho jab tum pareshaan hoti ho.

N- tum mujhe kitna samajhta ho na?

S- topic change mat karo aur saaf batao kya prob. Hai?

N- w.wo......baat....ye hai ki....tum......tumhe.....sheena se pyaar hai kya???

As soon as nupur asked this, the coffee mug fell down 4m samrat's hand, bt luckily, it ws not broken.

N- ye kya???

S- nupur pls, mazak mat karo.......

N- main.....main mazak nahi kar rahi hun samrat.....im serious.

S- to fir aisa sawaal kyun puchh rahi ho?

N- jo puchha hai uska sahi jawab do.

S- jawaab tum jaanti ho di.....main sheena se pyaar nahi karta hun..sirf use apna best frnd manta hun.

Nupur takes a deep breathe n says 'thank god'

S- kyun tumhe kya laga??

N- samrat tum agar kisi looli-langdi, andhi gungi ya behri se bhi pyaar karoge to main khushi khushi tumhari shaadi usse karva dungi...lekin pls kabhi bhoolkar bhi sheena se pyaar mat karna.

S- come on di, tum sheena se itni nafrat kyun karti ho?? Us bechaari ne tumhara kya bigaada hai?

N- BECHAARI AUR WO SHEENA????? Mujhe to uske saamne tum bechaare lagte ho...

S- di....par aaj achanak ye sawaal kyun?

N- wo.....aaj savere tumhari shaadi ki baat chal rahi thi na, isliye.

S- sablog haath dho kar mere shaadi k peechhe kyun pad gaye hain?? Maine kaha na mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni. Pehle main apne life mein settle hona chahta hun......uske baad hi shaadi karunga.

Nupur pinched herself slightly.

N- ouchhh!!!!

S- ye kya kar rahi ho?

N- dekh rahi hun ki kahin ye sapna to nahi?? Mera bhai samrat shergill, jo sirf present mein jeena jaanta hai, aaj wo achanak future banane ki baat kar raha hai??? Kya baat hai!!!!👏

S- (grins) tumhara bhai kabhi kabhi serious ho jata hai.........ab mujhe sone do aur tum jao so jao.....

N- are are jaa rahi hun baba, gud nite...sweet dreams!!

S- (thinking of gunjan) wo to aayenge hi😍.....

N- kuchh kaha tumne??

S- sweet dreams of mayank 2u di.........

Nupur blushes n goes.

While samrat sits on his bed.

S- abhi jab maine mayank ka naam liya, to di ne blush kia.........infact, main jab bhi mayank ka naam leta hun, to wo blush karti hai..........

Samrat hits slightly on his head.

S- dude, tu theek to hai na?? ab di mayank se pyaar karti hai, to uska naam sunkar to blush karegi hi na?? lekin fir main kyun gunjan ka naam lete hi blush karne lagta hun?????kahin main usse pyaar..................NO WAYS!!!!! Pyaar?? Wo bhi pehli nazar mein?? IMPOSSIBLE!!!

He switches of d lights n lays on bed 2sleep.

S- waise.......love at first sight k baare mein to suna hai.............to kahin mere saath bhi to aisa....................(smiles n goes 2sleep)

Next day, gunjan was searching 4samrat......she met sheena in her way.

SH- hey hii gunjan?? Itni jaldi mein kahan jaa rahi ho? Abhi to koi class bhi nahi hai.

G- wo.....main actually samrat ko dhoond rahi hun....wo....

SH- sam ko?? Kyun koi kaam tha usse??

G- haan.......actually.......usne mujhse kaha tha ki use mujhse padhna hai.

SH- (laughs) sam aur padhai?? I don't believe this!!

G- kyun? Samrat ka dimaag kaafi sharp hai......wo academics mein achha perform kar sakta hai....

SH- thts not so true......jo kaam kisko suit karta hai use wahi karna chahiye.....ab dekho na, agar tum western dress mein college aao, to sab tumhara mazak banayenge.....ya phir agar tum disco mein jao to tumhe wahan insult sehna padega....

"aur agar tum mandir jaakar arti karo to bhagwaan ko bhi pachhtaawa hoga ki unhone tumhe banaya hi kyun??" a voice came 4m back.

Gunjan n sheena looked back. Dia was standing there, she came 2 them.

D- kyun, theek kaha na maine gunjan?

G- dia pls!!

Sheena felt like 2kill dia.....bt she controlled her anger n went 4m there.

G- dia, kya zarurat thi wo sab bolne ki sheena se?

D- gunjan, usne indirectly tumhari insult ki aur.....

G- usne meri insult nahi ki, usne sach kaha.......aur waise bhi, tumhe beech mein bolne ki kya zarurat thi?

D- kyunki tum to kabhi usko jawaab deti bhi nahi, aur main tumhari insult hote nahi dekh sakti hun.

G- usne meri insult ki hi nahi....

D- tum kabhi nahi samjhogi gunjan ki sheena kis tarah ki ladki hai.....uska bas chale na to sammy ko humse aur uski family se door karde....

G- dia pls. chhodo.....ye batao ki samrat kahan hai??

Dia's anger changes into a big smile as she heard samrat's name 4m gunjan.

D- ohooo kya baat hai, dadi to kehti hain ki morena mein to tum ladkon ko aankh utha k bhi nahi dekhti thi.........par aaj to tum samrat k baare mein puchh rahi ho!!! Gr8!

G- dia!!! Mujhe samrat ne hi kaha tha ki main uske kuchh doubts clear kardun.

D- wo bb court mein hai........jaldi jao.

Gunjan goes, while dia hurridly runs 2canteen.

In canteen, uday n benji were gossiping, when dia came 2them.

B- hii dia!

D- hhiii.....ab meri baat dhyaan se suno....aajse sammy aur gunjan ko milaane ki zimmedaari humari hogi!! Ok?

B- done!!

U- lekin kyun dids???????😆

D- (angrily) dodo, gunjan tumhari fav. Sister hai na??

U- of course dids, mere liye itne cuisines jo banati hai.......

B- to kya tu nahi chahta ki uska koi achha sa bf ho, jo hamesha uska khayal rakhe??

U- chahta to hun, par sam.........

D- DODO?????????😡

U- oohhh.....ab....a.....b....samajh gaya! Isliye tum unhe milaana chahti ho!

B- thank god ye samajh gaya.........warna isko samjhaate samjhaate poora din beet jaata!

D- ab chalo guys, wo dono bb court mein hain.

U- haan to hum wahan haddi mein kabab kyun bane??🤣

B- what?

U- I mean a ......kabab mein haddi kyun bane??

D- silly, hum bas aaspaas ye nazar rakhenge ki sheena wahan naa ho........warna wo un dono k beech kabab mein haddi ban jaayegi!

B- come on lets go..........

They make their way 2wards bb court.

In meantime, gunjan reaches bb court n looks for samrat. She found samrat dribbling the ball n finally he made a basket.......another basket........again a basket........he made nearly 8-9 baskets, when his eyes went on gunjan. Both were lost in each other.

Samrat's POV-

I just don't kno wat happens 2me whenever I look at gunjan......she seems 2b d most beautiful girl 2me.....whenever shes around, I cannot focus on anything else......shes so beautiful😍......i cud nt help myself 4m going 2her.

Gunjan's POV-

God! Hes so charming n irresistible...........his attitude, his style, his face.....evry thing is just perfect abt. Him........i cudnt help myself bt blushing like hell..........i saw him coming 2me.....as he came closer......i was completely in his thoughts...........he was sweating as he played, bt evn then he looked attractive😳.......

S- hey?? Gunjan????

She came out of his thoughts.

G- ha....haan??

S- hiii......tum.yahan kya kr rhi ho?? I mean, dia aur baaki sab to canteen mein hain na?

G- haan.....par.....maine socha ki.......abhi main free hun.....aur economics ka lecture cancel ho gaya hai.....to main tumhe wo kal wala chapter samjha deti.......

S- gr8 idea....to chalo.......

G- lekin.........tum to bb practice.......

S- ye to hota rehta hai.........

Samrat noticed Benia n uday hiding behind a pillar.

S- hey guys tum log wahan pillar k peechhe kya kar rahe ho??

Benia n uday widened their eyes as sam caught them😲. They came 2sajan.

B- w......wo.......wo......actually.......hum......hum....

U- don't worry sam, hum kabab mein haddi banne nahi aaye the!!🤣

Benji n dia looked at uday angrily, while sam n gunjan were confused.

S- what?? Kabab?? What haddi??

D- w........wo.......dodo k kehne ka matlab ye hai ki.....ki......

B- ki.....hum pillar saaf kar rahe the.

G- kya??

S- pillar saaf kar rahe the?? Lekin kyun?

D- wo....kya hai na, aajkal college property ka koi dhyaan nahi rakhta hai, isliye humne socha ki hum hi thodi bahut safai karlein! Kyun benji?

B- correct correct!!

S- tum log bhi na, pata nahi kya kya karte rehte ho. Anyways, library chalein gunjan??

U- wow sam kya baat hai? Tu aur library??

S-(looking at gunjan n slowly speaks) wahan gunjan ko bina kisi disturbance k achhe se dekh sakunga😍.....

Gunjan looks at him in confusion.

B,D,U- what??

Samrat comes in his senses.

S- a.....mere kehne ka matlab hai ki............wahan....bina kisi....disturbance k....chapter par achhe se.....dhyaan de sakunga...

B- oooohhhhh!!!!!!!

Benia n uday pass secret smile 2each other.

D- chalo guys, ab hume in dono ko akela chhod dena chahiye!

Sajan looked at dia wid blushed face.☺️

D- ah......i.....i mean ki.....agar hum tumlogon k saath rahenge, to tumhe disturbance hoga na? isliye u guys carry on, hum chalte hain.

As dia turns, she purposely pushes gunjan slightly n she collides wid samrat. They don't fall down, but r standing very close 2each other. Gunjan's heartbeat has increased, while samrat is admiring her angelic beauty.

Benia n uday enjoyed dis scene, while sajan were lost in each other. Samrat's strong arms encircle gunjan's slim waist involuntarily, n gunjan fixes her hands on his strong chest.

After some time, gunjan realizes tht they r in college n shes too close to samrat. She starts looking around. Sam notices tht she was feeling uncomfortable, so he let her go away by removing his hands 4m her waist.

S- a....library chalein?

G- hmmmmm................

(they proceed 2wards library.)

luv, ria

Hey ria i ws waiting for ur updt from yesterday nd nw u finaly post it. thnx a lot .it ws awsm updt yar fabolous, mindblwing. too gud yar too gudd.
but plz plz thda jldi updt krna .kya kru u write so excellently ki i jus cant w8.
luv u
vritika

tht was soooooo awesomeeee part

thnx a lot 4 d update............

awesome update

Awesome Part...
Love Sammy...
Hmm..He Falling In LOVE!!
Pllzz Cont Soon!!😳

CHAPTER 3(part-C)

In library, samrat n gunjan were abt. 2start their study session.

S- gunjan....wo......

G- kya hua?

S- main.....sorry kehna chahta hun.

G- sorry? Kisliye samrat?

S- wo...actually...abhi abhi jo bb court mein hua.....tum uski vajah se uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi........i swear maine jaanbujhkar nahi kia........tumhe bas...girne se bacha raha tha.

G- koi baat nahi samrat, maine tumse kuchh puchha thodi hai? Ab padhai shuru karein?

S- (smiles)hmmm.....

They started studying, while sheena was standing near d door n watched them studying, talking n laughing 2gether. She got more n more jealous 2see them.

SH-(thinks)aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua hai ki samrat college aaye aur mujhse na miley.......aur aaj wo library mein padhai kar raha hai........aur wo bhi is behenji k saath??? Actually ye gunjan hi problem hai........dikhne mein jitni innocent lagti hai, utni hai nahi........ladkon ko apne bas mein karna kitne achhe se jaanti hai ye!!

1hr had simply passed in finishing d chapter.

G- I hope ab tumhe chapter samajh aa gaya ho...

S- h...haan....bilkul!

G- waise, maine project par kaam shuru kar dia hai.

S- thts nice........lekin mere bina hi?? Bhool gayi kya ki hum partners hain??

G- nahi samrat, main bas ye chahti thi, k pehle tum chapter samajhlo. Agr basics clear nahi honge to project par kaise kaam karoge??

S- (thinks) gunjan mere baare mein kitna sochti hai..........di k baad gunjan hi wo pehli insaan hai jisne mere baare mein itna socha hai.......

Gunjan waves in front of him.

G- kya hua, kahan kho gaye??

S- a......kahin bhi to nahi...

G- to fir chalo, class ka time ho gaya hai.

S- class? Par bell kab baji?

G- abhi abhi, jab tum najane kahan khoye the. Ab chalo.

They both stand n walk forward, when sheena comes 2them.

S- hiii sheena!

SH- jao, main tumse naraaz hun.

S- naraaz? Kyun maine kya kiya babes?

SH- tum hamesha college aakar mujhse milte the, lekin aaj to tum........kuchh zyada hi busy ho.........

She looks at gunjan with a pissed expression.

S- wo kya hai na, tournament mein bahut kam din hain, to bas, usi ki practice kar raha tha......isilye bhool gaya........

SH- come on sam, main bevakoof nahi hun......tum yahan.........library mein bb practice kabse karne lage?

S- forget it babes, maine sorry kaha na??

SH- sorry kehkar mujhpar ehsaan kar rahe ho?? Main tumse bahut naraaz hun....

S- are par.........

Sheena goes 4m there, wid an evil smile. Gunjan was feeling guilty.

G- wo........sheena meri vajah se naraaz ho gayi na?

S- tumhari vajah se kyun?

G- kyunki tum college aakar mujhse miley, usse nahi.

S- hey isme tumhari kya galti hai? Actually, sheena ki puraani aadat hai, chhoti chhoti baton par naraaz ho jaati hai. Wo thodi immature hai, par tum dekhna, thodi der mein wo maan jaayegi. Ab hum class chalein?

G- haan.......

They go.

After d classes, sheena goes in locker-room. She was alone there, sat on a stool n thought abt. Samrat's closeness 2gunjan.

SH- mujhe is gunjan ka kuchh na kuchh karna hi hoga.........uski wajah se samrat ki life mein meri importance kam hoti jaa rahi hai. Kahin aisa na ho, ki gunjan k chakkar mein samrat mujhe bhool jaaye. No ways, main aisa nahi hone dungi.......abhi to filhaal dono ki frndship nayi hai, isse pehle ki ye frndship strong ho aur dono is relation ko pyaar mein badal dein, mujhe kuchh karna hoga😈............

Saying this 2herself, sheena walks out of library, without noticing tht dia heard her speaking 2herself. She immediately went 2canteen.

D- sammy.......tum......yahan??

S- haan kyun, yahan kya sirf uday ka raaj hai??

D- I mean, tumhe to library mein hona chahiye......

S- kyun?

D- kyunki........kyunki gunjan ne tumhe yaad kia hai.

S- gunjan mujhe yaad karti hai?????😛

D- I mean ki.....usne tumhe bulaya hai....jaldi jao sammy.....

S- ok yaar jaa raha hun.......bhaga kyun rahi ho...

He goes. Uday n benji were confused.

U- dids, gunjan to shukla sir k saath hai.......fir tumne sam se kyun kaha ki.......

D- wo sab maine use yahan se hatane k liye kaha tha.

B- hatane k liye??

D- meri baat dhyaan se suno guyyss.....

Dia tells them everything abt. Sheena's plan.

B- yaar itna to pakka hai ki wo kuchh na kuchh zarur karegi.......

U- par ye kuchh na kuchh hai kya?

D- pata nahi, par wo jo bhi karegi, bahut bura hoga.....

B- tumhe kaise pata?

D- uske chehre aur awaaz se yehi lag raha tha......

B- jabtak wo kuchh plan kare, hume uspar nazar rakhna hoga...aur ye dhyaan rakhna hoga ki sam aur gunjan saath hon.

U- haan....agar us sheena ne kuchh kia na, to I swear, chhodunga nahi main use.

In library.

S- tumne mujhe bulaya hai gunjan?

G- nahi to, main tumhe kyun bulaaungi samrat?

S- dia ne to mujhse kaha ki tumne mujhe yaad.....mera matlab hai ki mujhe bulaya hai.

G- dia ne? par class k baad to main usse mili hi nahi........par ab jab yahan aa hi gaye ho, to baitho, mujhe tumhe kuchh dikhana hai.

S- kya?

Gunjan shows him a file.

G- ye hai hamara project file.....kaisa laga?

S- a....b.....achha hi hai gunjan, bahut beautiful.

G- samrat???? Main iss cover ki baat nahi kar rahi hun, mera matlab tha ki maine jo likha hai, wo theek hai na?

S- mujhse kyun puchhti ho gunjan, in sabka to tumhe hi achha idea hoga na??

G- lekin ab to tumhe maine chapter samjha dia hai.......fir tumhe bhi to idea hoga na??

Samrat made a sad face.

S- (thinks) ab main tumhe kaise bataaun gunjan, padhai k time mera saara dhyaan tumhari taraf tha.......chapter par to maine nazar bhi nahi daala...

G- kya hua?

S- kuchh bhi to nahi.....

G- tum ekbaar ise padhlo samrat..

S- a...padhne ki kya zarurat hai gunjan?? Tumne banaya hai, to achha hi hoga.....

G- samrat? Agar sir ne tumse project-related koi sawaal puchh lia to? Tum jawaab de paaoge?? Nahi na? isliye keh rahi hun, tum ekbaar ise dekhlo..

S- wowww gunjan u r rite, u r a genius, u r gr8.....u r fantastic..i love u......

Gunjan was embaressed when sam said 'I love u' 2her. Samrat realized wat he had spoken, he bit his tongue slightly.

S- w....wo....i....i mean 2say ki....i love ur idea.....lekin.....abhi to mujhe bb practice k liye jaana hai......tum ek kaam karo, ye file mujhe ghar k liye de do......main araam se ise ghar par padh loonga......

G- a....theek hai.....lekin fir kal file wapas le aana....abhi bhi thoda kaam baaki hai.

S- as u say......main tumse baad mein milta hun.

He takes the file n goes in bb court.

Samrat reaches bb court. Benji sees him.

B- aa gaye samrat shergill ji.......kabse tera wait kar raha hun, tu tha kahan??

S- wo main gunjan k saath tha...library mein

B- ooohoooo gunjan ji k saath library mein.......

S- haan to isme daant dikhaane waali kya baat hai?

B- hothon pe gunjan ka naam hai, aankhon mein ajab sa intezaar hai, har tarf chhaya khumaar hai, kya yehi pyaar hai?????😉

S- tera dimaag to theek hai na?

B- dia ko bhi yehi doubt hota hai,🤣 par ye sab chhod, tujhe nahi lagta hai ki kuchh to hua hai, kuchh ho gaya hai......do-chaar din se lagta hai jaise.......sabkuchh alag hai, sabkuchh naya hai??

S- ye to gaana hai........

B- haan par situation par bilkul fit baithta hai na?

S- kaisi situation??

B- teri aur......uski...!!!

S- abe uski kiski??

B- tu to sach mein tubelight hai, itni si baat samajh nahi aati??

S- tum pagal ho gaye ho........ab jaldi se practice shuru karo, agar hum ye tournament haare na, to main tujhe nahi chhodunga.

They start their practice.

In evening, samrat was sitting on his bed with his project file n some books.

S- god!!! Ye gunjan ka khayal dimaag se nikle to hi kisi cheez par concentrate karun......upar se ye do-do kilo ki kitaabein😆.......inhe padhte padhte to mere saat janam nikal jaayenge........

Samrat's mom came in his room n sat beside him.

SM- kya baat hai, mera padhai se bhaagna wala beta aaj kitaabein kholkar padhai kar raha hai?? Kya baat hai, kahin tujhe nazar na lage!!👏

S- (grins) aapka beta kabhi kabhi pagal ho jata hai......aur aajkal to kuchh zyada hi pagal ho gaya hai.....

SM- baat kya hai beta, apni maan ko nahi bataoge??

Samrat keeps his head in her lap n she ruffles his hairs softly.

S- u kno mom, mere college mein ek nayi ladki aayi hai, wo dia aur uday ki cousin hai. Uska naam gunjan bhushan hai.

SM- to uska naam tere liye problem hai?😆

S- nooo mom........actually baat ye hai ki....wo meri....project partner bhi hai.....wo sochti hai ki mujhme academics mein achha perform karne ka potential hai.....

SM- arre waah, matlab mere alawa bhi is duniya mein koi hai jo ye sochta hai!!!! Mujhe laga ki sirf main hi aisa sochti hun!

S- mom!!!! Usne hhi mujhe ye file dia hai, taaki main ise padhkar apne doubts clear kar sakun.

SM- ye to achhi baat hai!! Chalo, koi to ladki hai jo tere style k chakkar mein nahi fasi.....ab tu chupchaap baithkar padhai kar.

S- bt mom, aap to jaanti hain na ki mujhe padhai mein koi interest nahi hai? Fir main kyun padhun??

SM- tune ye baat gunjan ko kyun nahi batayi?

S- come on mom, wo itni sweet, caring aur helpful hai, mere baare mein itna sochti hai, aur main usse ye sab kehkar use hurt nahi krna chahta.

SM- bas, yehi hai tere prob. Ka solution.

Samrat looks at her in confusion.

SM- wo ladki tumpar itna vishwaas karti hai, aur ye sochti hai ki tum academics mein achha kar sakte ho...........to bas, padhte waqt uske is vishwaas aur help ko yaad rakhna. Fir dekho, kaise tumhe pdhai khel lagega...

Samrat happily hugged her tightly.

S- oohhh mom u r d bestest mom in d world.....

SM- chal ab makhkhan lagana band kar aur padhai kar.

They broke d hug.

SM- waise, tum gunjan ko kitna jaante ho?

S- zyada nahi, lekin project partners hone ki wajah se hum achhe dost ban gaye hain.

SM- samrat, tum gunjan ko kal hamare ghar dinner par invite kyun nahi kar lete ho?

S- dinner??

SM- haan.....isi bahaane tum dono yahan shanti se project par bhi kaam kar sakoge.....

S- (happily) gr8 idea.....main use invite kar loonga. Waise aap mayank ko bhi invite karlo, warna di hamare project k beech bore hogi....aur isi bahaane ek get 2gether ho jaayega...

SM- theek hai. Main use phone karti hun. (thinks) gunjan se to milna hi padega......dekhun to, aakhir aisi kya baat hai usme, ki wo mere bete mein padhai ki taraf interest daal rahi hai.............ladki zarur achhe ghar ki hogi.....

She goes.

S- kal gunjan mere ghar aayegi........lekin main itna khush kyun ho raha hun???? Dude, padhai par concentrate kar, warna kal gunjan aur mom mujhe nahi chhodengi......

He again starts 2study.

Yayyyyyy! Considering what a great writer you are, I am so happy that I'm first! I don't think I'm going to be able to keep up with this though seeing your writing. Pretty soon hon, crazy readers are going to be soo addicted to your ff, if they aren't already. Just like me!

What can I say about your update? Amazing? Nahh, doesn't have the impact I want. Mindblowing? Kinda obvious. Spell-bounding? Uhh, predictable. Fantastic? No, too overused. Okay, so I give up! It was out of the world and I don't know what language they speak in the world beyond earth so I wouldn't know how to describe this magical update. 😊

Awwww! Our Sammy is falling for his Chashmish (well she isn't exactly Chashmish YET)!!! He can't help it! Our darling is charming like that! Ughhhh hate that chaddi aunty! I don't know what's in her mind, but it can't be good considering it is Sheee-naaaa we're talking about! Hope everything goes fine with our Sajan. But then again, misunderstandings have always made their relationship stronger. I loved how Samrat was studying because of his Chashmish! Awww! He was so happy that someone has so much trust in him and thinks that he is capable of doing good in academics! I like Sam's mom! I can't wait for Gunji's meeting with Sam's mom. Samrat can't stop thinking about his Chashmish and vice-versa! Haila, I'm going totally fidaa over his cuteness! My (sorry our) sweetheart! Howz he supposed to concentrate when Gunji is teaching him. My heart goes out to him! Lol

Keep it up Ria! Ur updates are amazing! I can't wait to read more!!! UPDATE SOON!!

Lots of Love,
Tooba

P.S.: Sorry I couldn't comment on your two previous updates! But do i really need to say that they were amazing! If you don't already know it by now, then now you do. 😉 Btw, I really like Dia. Shez such a sweet sis. You keep the essence of Sajan so well in your updates! Love your writing!!

P.P.S: My comments are getting longer day by day. Hope you don't mind my long comments, just like no one would mind your long updates! For me, thats the best thing in the world! I love reading long updates! Don't ever make them short!

Hey ria thnx for updting . very very nice yaar iss sheena ko jldi side krdo.
i cant see sajan seperate aur nxt part kal updt kr dena plz plz . kya kru mjse w8 ni hta bcoz u really write everxthng jo mje sajan kai bich chahiye n i jus luvd it swty.
plz plz
plz plz
plz plz
plz plz
plz plz
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updt jldi jldi krna dear. i thnk tum mre cmmnt sai hi bta skti ho ki mai nxt updt kai liye kitni xcited hun. i jus cant w8.
anyways u hv done excellent job.
n i jus cant w8 for d nxt one.
sry agar kuch zada ho gya ho tn but i jus cant control.
luv u
vritika

superb part dear!!!!!!!
loved it