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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey jannat, I truly loved ur post especially ammi's paret coz I love armaan/KSg soooooooooooooooo much, plzzzzzzzz continue................👏👏👏
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THNK U SO MUCH U ALLLLLLLLLLL MADE MY DAY................
Ur comments encourage me a lot….thanks a lot once again, keep on giving me ur support……..THNX 4 APPRECIATING SOOOOOOOO MUCH LUV U ALLLLL

NOW TIME FOR UPDATE PART 1 HERE U GOOOOOOO




HANSRAJ COLLEGE CANTEEN

LETS LOOK AT THE OVERVEIW,WAT'S GOING ON IN CANTEEN'''''''''''.😉


RAINBOW gang siting around a table''''
RAHUL-MUSKAN are lost in each others eyes'.nd imaginig abt their future'..😳


SHILPA staring SIDDHANT, where as SIDDHANT is busy in literally killing his sandwich''..(hungry man)😆
ANJALI is beating ATUL continuously 4m last 10 mins'bcoz of sum reason😭


and all other students are looking towards them with shocked faces nd have-u-guyz-lost-it look
BUT there is a guy sitting with dem'''..looking at them with his sweet million dollar smile on his face 😆'''..


and now he changed his sweet smile into naughty smile nd thinking AISE SHANT MAHOL MEIN TUFAN LAANE KA MAZAA HI KUCH AUR HAI''''LETS SEE'''😉

ya hold ur breath girls its non other den ARMAAN MALLIK sooooooooooooo ready for the roller coster ride

armaam -AR,,riddhima - RI,,siddhant - SI,,shilpa ' SH ,, rahul ' RA ,, muskan 'MU ,, anjali 'AN ,, atul 'AT''

AR (smile) '😛 hey main coffee lekar ata hu nad sid tere liye juice order karke ata hu'''.getting up from chair

SI (questioning face) '🥱 kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,maine toh nhi kaha aur aur tu kabse meri health ka dhyan rakhne laga'????

AR(wid wide smile) ' 😊 kyuki bahut jaldi tujhe juice ki jarurt padne wali hai (said with a wink 😉)

(arman went 4 their nd sid continue wid his sandwich)

Suddenly

SH (cutely) - sidddddddddddddddd 😛

SI (irritated & busy wid sandwich) ' ya babes

SH (shyly) ' I LOVE YOU 2 😳

SI(shocked nd bcoz of dis sudden attact of shilpa his whole sandiwich comes out from his mouth but apne apko sambhalte hue'') ' but shilpu I never said I luv u to u '(wid question face )

Arman is back wid his coffee now

SH (innocently) ' u lier kal raat ko kaha tha

SI (now he glared ) 'watt ??kis gadhe ne kaha tumse yeh?????

SH 'ammi ne (pointing towards ammi)

Sid looked at ammi who's laughing like a manic 😆

SI 'ammiiiiiiiiiiiiii (scream) ,aaj main tujhe jaan se maar duga''..aur apne in 32 daato ki publicity karma band kar (while pointing towards ammi's teeth 😆)

AR (trying hard to control his laugh)- yyyyyyyy r u feeling jealous''..???? (matching with his tone) nd ya now stop behaving like a poor kid nd wait for another blast ha ha ha ha 😆(turns towards anji) hey anji ab toh isse marna band kar bichar laal pila hogya hai''😉

SI (pleading tone) ' no plz ammiiiiiii

AN(angry) ' atul agar agli bar tumne mujhe mehbuba kaha na toh main tumhare saare daat tod dugi

AT (putting hand on his mouth) ' 😭 sorry anji next time nahi kahuga'.par plz mere daat mat todna varna main khana kaise khauga'''

Atul said sorry to anjali while others laughed 😆

Suddenly muskan 's cell started ringing

MU (smile)- hey it's a msg

AM (excited) 'really ??read it na''''.

After reading msg holding rahul's collar

RA ' watt??

MU (angry)- kal tu movie dekhne gaye tha??????(asked to rahul)

While other are looking at them like dumbs

RA (with sudden fear) ' nodded as yes

MU (with ready to murder look) ' ab kahega ammi ke sath gaya tha hai na '..bol bol

RA (now more worried) ' ha muskan but how you know???

MU (glared at him) ' oye kaankhjure, tujhe sharam nhi ati

JHUTHEEEE''..muskan shouted 🤢
🤢

RA (confused) ' par muskan yahi sach hai''.

MU (irritated) ' ha bol na ammi se puch le beshak''.bol bol ruk kyu gaya bol na CHUHE (mouse)

Yeh wahi sab kyu bol rahi hai'rahul correct the question idiot kyu nhi kaise 'ha'.ye wahi sab kaise bol rahi hai jo main kehna chahta hu isse kaise pta ki kal main isse bina btaye ammi ke sath movie dekhne'''''..OH MY GODDDDDD I M SUCH A JERK toh ye AMMI ka machaya aatank hai rahul thought

"AMMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII" shouted rahul 😡

Come on man I m not deaf'''''kyu mere kaano ko damage kar rha hai arman said innocently

"MAIN TUJHE" RAHUL SHOUTED 😡

JAAN SE MAAR DUGA ARMAN SHOUTED ND LAUGHED LIKE A MANIC 😆

SIDDD MERI JAAN BEST OF LUCK'''.ARMAAN SHOUTED B/W IN HIS LAUGH nd ya muski uska collar chod aur baith ja'''jaan legi kya uski'''.😉

SI (pleading with eyes for sum mercy) 'no ammi plzzzzzzzzzzz main hath jodta hu'''aur kuch nahi'..

SH(cutely ) - sid maine kuch socha hai

SI ' KYU ?? I mean tum itna kyu sochti hu shilpu ????jarurt kya hai khud ko taklif dene ki???(with don't say any thing look)

AR(naughtily) ' are sid sharma kyu raha hai???(turns towards shilpa) shonna tum bolo na wo wasie hi na keh raha hai'tumhe toh pta hai na sid ko kitni sharam ati hai'''.😉

Now atul anjali rahul muskan are eagerly waiting for shilpa''..to start saying'

SHILPA nodded a yes where as SID is giving killing looks to ARMAAN

SH(blushing) '😳 maine socha hai shadi ke baad hum ek month khub shopping karege,uske next month hum roz movie dekhne jayge'..uske next month daily party karege''uske next month hum kahi ghumne jayge like goa,shimla,etc''blushing more''..aur hum every month ek party jarur rakhege aur uske next month

SI(cutting her) ' aur uske next month hum roz mandir ke bahar baithege

SH(innocently) ' wo kyu???

SI(with coldness) 'bhikh magne ke liye''''

As sid completed his line all started laughing like manics

10 MIN. LATER

Arman lokking at shilpa's sad face

AR(concern) 'hey shonna watt happen ???

SH (sadly) ' ammi tum kaise bhul sakte ho???(now all are confused like wat is she talking abt)ek month pehle jo humne paid (plants) lgaye the ajj unn par fal (seeds) aane wale hai

All 'wattt(with confused face)🥱

SH(with little crying voice) 'results'kal result aane wala hai aur maine toh papers mein kuch nhi likha tha

AR (naughtily) ' ha pura time sid ka didar jo kar rahi thi'''..😉

Shilpa blushes ''.sid pinched ammi's hand''

AR(shouted) ' AOUCHHHH 😕

NAINA ENTER'S IN CANTEEN

AR (tired) ' oh god muje utha lee

Na-ammi(shyly) main uthau??😳(actually she heared only last words UTHA LE ahe thought he need her help in picking up sumthing)

"Babes main mujhe uthane ki baat kar raha hu naki aalu ya gazar uthane ki jo tum itna excited ho rahi ho'''.so chill" '''. arman said like a child 😆

naina says hii to everyone nd her eyes stopped on sid

"how can I forgot dat incident he insulted me"''..naina thought 😡

*******************FLASHBACK*******************

COLLEGE AUDI

hey naina hiii , how r u???? shilpa askes naina cutely 😛

hey dambo u mind ur own business and.. naina said rudely 😲

SI-y d hell u behave like dis???nd how dare u??tum shipu se kasie baat kar rahi thi (with anger) 😡

NA(rudely) - I m not talking to u so get lost 😕

SI (smile) - ya where u stays nd learn all these manners '''rite ur all time fav. Place😉

All others who where standing near them started laughing''''''..😆

****************FLASHBACK ENDS*****************

"NAINA...NAINA'.NAINA"''.ARMAAN SHOUTED 😕

NA- ya

AR- kaha gayab ho gaye thi''..

NA-nothing.jst thinking abt result ''(in low voice)ajj btati hu tumhe sid ke bachhe'.😉

Muskan who heard naina 's word sid ke bachhe''..

"WATT?????WOH KAB HUE" MUSKAN SHOUTED LOUDLY''😕

MU(little anger) ' guyz you all are so jungli'.nd bewafa like dis rahul(slapped on rahul's arm)

And other's looking at muskan with coacked eyed nd "jawani mein satiya gai hai" look

MU-aise kya dekh rahe ho''..is sid ke bache ho gye and no one told me???????😕

All r listening muski's complaint on the other hand naina worked on her plan'''..😉

Naina came forward with a glass of juice in her hand

NA-hey sid juice 4 u''''.

(Juice which ordered by ammi for sid)

AR(shocked) ' bas yar aaj ke liye itne jhatke kafi hai .main aur nahi hass sakta''.(turns towards naina)tumne kabhi apne liye machar nhi mara aur sid ke liye juice maar rhi''.i mean layi ho''..

NA-COME ON AMMI

Sid took glass from naina's hand but before sid would drink shilpa snachhed

D glass from sid's hand nd without taking single breath drank full glass''.😆


FEW MINS. LATER''''..

SHILPA STANDING ON TABLE AND ALL OTHERS ARE LOOKING AT HER WITH COACKED EYES AND CONFUSION🥱

SI-shilpu come down''.plz'''..(with requesting) 😊

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO''.TUM UPAR AJAO'.BADA MAZA ARHA HAI''.KITNI ACHI HAWA CHAL RAHI HAI IS TERRACE PAR'''.."SHILPA SHOUTED ''..🥱


PRECAP : TALLI SHILPA

PRINCIPAL IN CANTEEN

SHILPA'S ATTACK ON PRINCIPAL

ARMAAN TRY TO SAVE PRINCIPAL



HIIIIIIIII FRNDS

Dis is first update of my ff hope you all liked it''''..😛

plz read it and tell me if u like it or even not like it.........open to any kind of criticism 😆 so i can make some improvements..........😛

if u like it plz press the like button.........it is exactly right below of the request........😛



LOTS OF LUV

jannat






Edited by jannat4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
OMG OMG Amazing chapter.
Your FF is so interesting and funny that it makes me remind of DMG Season 1.
Ah , I miss cast of dmg 1.
And wow wow Armaan , haye Armaan sachi mein bohut barhe shaitan hain and he hates naina , thank god , Armaan cannot like bad people also😆😆
And that part 'Sid ke bache and muskaan is like kya?Sid ke bache kab huve🤣🤣And sab log rahul ki tarah bewafa hai🤣🤣
And when Shilpa starts next month shopping next month going to goa and sid interrupts and says next month mandir ke baaher bethenge 🤣🤣'wo kyun' , shilpa asked innocently , 'arrey bheek mangenge',said irritated sid🤣

I couldn't stop laughing.🤣
It was amazing chapter please update soon and please pm whenever you update chapter 2.
Edited by Princezz22 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing writing...luvd ur new chapter tooooooo gud👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princezz22

OMG OMG Amazing chapter.
Your FF is so interesting and funny that it makes me remind of DMG Season 1.
Ah , I miss cast of dmg 1.
And wow wow Armaan , haye Armaan sachi mein bohut barhe shaitan hain and he hates naina , thank god , Armaan cannot like bad people also😆😆
And that part 'Sid ke bache and muskaan is like kya?Sid ke bache kab huve🤣🤣And sab log rahul ki tarah bewafa hai🤣🤣
And when Shilpa starts next month shopping next month going to goa and sid interrupts and says next month mandir ke baaher bethenge 🤣🤣'wo kyun' , shilpa asked innocently , 'arrey bheek mangenge',said irritated sid🤣

I couldn't stop laughing.🤣
It was amazing chapter please update soon and please pm whenever you update chapter 2.


HEY THNK U SOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHH MAHI
OH GOSH U LIKED D UPDATE..........THNK GOD..........I WAS LITTLE BIT NERVOUS....BT AFTER READING UR VIEW I M SOOOOOOO HAPPY

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshi_sahni

amazing writing...luvd ur new chapter tooooooo gud👏👏👏



thnk u dear😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HAHA LMFAO ! i loved it !!!! it was amazig ! hahaha...armaan is hilarious ! ahah shilpa and muskaan were like funny as hell haha i couldnt stop laughin...omg i cant wait till the next part ! thanks for the PM and update soon ! =]
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey i liked it very very much ... arman my ammy charater was soooo cute ...and muskan... my jaan ..... was very nice .....!!!

love ur update .....!!! superb ..... !!!

If i am gona produce a daily soap.... i willl surely contact ur for the script ......... !!!! be ready with the script .......!!!!


nice update .. loved it .. majaa aagaya...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update jannat awesome writting gud work 👏👏👏👏👏.am really enjoying it.plz continue soon looking 4ward 4 yr nxt update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hey sweetu,
u r such a amazing writer
felt like watching an episode
keep going baby.
lotz of luv❤️

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