(MG) FF: Me, myself and I... and you?! P9 page 32 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Loved the first part 😊
Please add me to the PM list....

consider it donee😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Liked the way Maan n Geet were Tit for Tat for each other
Liked Geet's concern for Maan
Maan was listening to Geet n convenceing himself saying that he was doing it for Dadima
Dadi was sweet here

thanksss😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ansah

it is very nice start...totally rocking loved it

just came across this...must say u r very good

aww thanksss😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: vinithaa

nice update....plz continue

thanksss vinithaa😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: LoveManeet

this ff is really interesting!!!
could you plz pm me when you update 😃

suree and thanks for liking ittt 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
PART 3
recap; maan thoted: why im i likin this concern, why do i feel atractive to geet... me MSK i cant i must nt, likan wen she is around i dont nw how to yell at her, or-- or be mad--- or be msk at that time i just maan... just maan

time ticked away... ever1 had left leaving maan geet alone in the office on 6th floor, it was 7, geet looked outside, 'rajjio aur titto kub ka ghar ponch gaya ho gay... ' just den her cabin fone rang

maan: geet cum to my cabin

geet went inside

maan: so look i have these flies dat need alot of attention in order us to proceed wid--

maan looked at geet and geet seemed lost sumwhere

maan: GEET

geet jumped on her name

geet: ji sir??

maan: i said these fliess...

geet: yes sir...

geet left...

maan thoted: kya hua ta geet ko

and maan decides to go to her cabin and opens the door and hears her saying

geet: hai babaji maan sir kasey bol ta hai, is sa toh bater ta kay main unka green tea na deythi, toh unki awaz bhi tik na hoti, so he wouldnt have talked so loud... da time is 7:40... almost 8, he doesnt care about dadi, or sumthing, wen will h go hme... like kaam pe kaam mujha bhi ghar jana hai, rajjio aur titto kub kay mera wait kar raha hoon gaa

maan knock on the door to let her nw dat he is there so she can stop talking

geet gets up 4om her chair...

geet: maan sir... ap, mujhai bohla liya hotaa...

maan: no, just go hme

geet: aur ap

maan: i have work to do...

geet: likann

maan: I SAID NA... go hme

geet: bt i cant go hme untill u go hme

maan: fi9 den im going

geet smiled and thouted: did maan sir listen to wot i said... is he mad at me?

both were in the same elavator for goin down

geet: sir... did u listen--

maan: i have listened to alot

geet thinks: geet khabhi toh chup kar jaya kar...'sir i was just saying datt

maan steps out of the elavator

and starts to leave and geet runs up behind him

geet: maan sir, maan sir, plz liten na, wot i said i didnt mean, its just the 1st day of the office and so my lil sis and bro must be gettin worried for me, so 4om tomorrow i promise they wil be no more problem for me workin late at nite

maan: hmmm

and starts to walk away and stops

maan in a frog voice: do u need a ride hme

geet again runs behind him

geet: nhai it is okay, and wot happened to ur voice... main kya ta ka itna na bolya ga likan nhai, u will nt listen to any1 will

maan: and jo-- maan coughs more...

geet: kya jo...

maan opens his mouth

geet: nw how asked u to talk

geet pulls out a pen and writing pad 4om her bag ' nw rite kya hai?"

maan writes and den gives her the paper and geet reads out loud

geet: i was cuming to you, to ask you to make more of that green tea, bt u wanted me to stay sick so i wouldnt be able to rasise my voice

geet looks at him and forces a smile: nahi sir bilkul nhai, infact if u didnt say go hme, i was abou to get u more green tea

maan looks at her wid suspicous eyes

geet: fi9 sir, im lieing, i was worried about rajjio and titto,dat if the had reached hme or nt, bt i neva said any of that stuff by my heart... how about i make u sum off the green tea in my house... yes it is a gr8 idea cum lets go

geet starts walking and maan thinks: uff yeh larki kya chezz hai???

maan follows her despite thinking she is crazy and thinks "why im i following here?" in the car and geet tells the driver it is HP(lolz could think of anything else)! line house #30

maan thoted: hp lane... huh, yeh toh mera ghar hardly 5mins ki drive yeh phir 10 15mins ki walk par hai...

soon dey reached geet house 'plz cum in'

maan followed her and thoted main yaha kya kara hoon, like i can find tins of doctors and medicine, phir kyun main geet ka ghar ah gaya??

geet: cum in, cum inn, plz take a seat here, and i will be back

maan sat down on the sofa and titto came

titto: who are you?

maan quickly says: msk

titto: kyon se k??

geet cums in: titto he is my boss, maan sir

titto: no, he is sum k... rite-- titto looks at maan

maan: i said msk

titto: c geet didi, i said ne he is sum k

geet: titto its late go and sleep like ur rajjio didi

titto: im goin i was just waint for u

titto leaves

geet: im sorri, woh bacha hai na

maan takes a sipe and looks around and sees 3 rooms at the end of the sitting area

maan: no problem... so u hve a nice house

geet: hmmm

maan looks at a photo- 'family photo' geet looks at the photo and kinda gr8 teary eyes 'its a nice fmaily photo, you guyz look reali happy... so where r ur parents?"

geet looks down: dey have passed away.... last month

maan looks at how sad she is scunding and feels treiable for asking

maan: im sori to hear so

geet: no problem...

geet wipes off the tear 4om her eyes

maan thinks: gosh y m i feelin bad if she hasw gotten tears in her eyes... i suck wid tears, wot do i do... yes kenkerchief(sori dont nw how to spell dat)

maan: geet eh laylo

geet takes it and wipes off her tears and puts a smile back on: bt is it okay...

maan thinks: she is so sad phir kyun she is smiling?... should i ask her, no i will ask her later

maan: ummm, thanks for the tea

saying dat he gets and starts to leave and geet leaves him off to the door

maan in his car thinks: poor geet so much has happened wid her, yet she still manages her smile... how can she do dat

lost in those thots he goes to his room, and falls asleep

next morning

again geet is runnin late and yells

geet: oyee, hold the elavator door plzz

this time the person inside does hold it and to her surprise it is maan sir

geet: arey wow maan sir... apne door aj pakar liya...

maan: yea i thot i shoud do sumthing nice for a change

geet smiled embrassly: yea sori about maan sir

maan: well i actuly held the door cuz i those flies quick, and yes the most important thing

geet listened to him carefully

maan: we are goin to mumbai

geet: i wil be goin as well

they both steped outside

maan: no, it will be me and my secatray onli

geet: okay sir... heyy woh toh main hoon

maan: geet ur soo sloww

geet: ap bhi toh seedhi baat nhai karta

maan: kya??

geet: nhai kuch nhai... bt rajjio and titto... for how long will we be out for

maan: wot do u mean

geet: i mean ek din ya du din

maan: yes it will take at least 1day... b4 u ask yes it will mean we will have to stay one nite in mumbai

geet: bt my bro and sis

just den they both see dadima, and she goes and hugs geet

dadi: dat is no problem i wil tc of dem

geet: likan dadimaa how can i...

dadi: look how many times do i have to tell you dat dont be formal wid mee

geet smiled: g dadimaa

dadi: anways i came here to talk 2u maan about the rasika prject... like she isnt agreein on anything..

maan: dw dadimaa u should rest.. and yes i will take care of the rasika project wen i return 4om mumbai

dadi: okay

maan: nw go hme and rest

dadi leaves 4om thier

precap: geet starts to breathe fast and suddenly she holds maans hand titely... and maan look at geet deeply and geet doesnt nw, as her eyes are shut veri tite....!!!

hope u guyz liked... plz commenttt!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
aww great post... plz write and index on the front page.. its difficult to know which page has the new update..
amazing update... waiting for more...
*cheers*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
nice update yaar. it is hand kerchief r u say hanky.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
great update
do continue
cant wait to read da nxt part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee update.
Loveee the part.
Precap looks veryyy interestinggggggg.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima

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