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Posted: 14 years ago

#931

hey guys this is not any right now this is her frnd i request u to wait for an hour as i will just update annie has given me a written form of updates as she is busy....so just wait for an hour or so...please

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Posted: 14 years ago

#932

hey guys here the update goes...
so as u know
sam is in hospital
now its ni8
and neha and evryone else is in sam's ward
saying him gud bye
neha:dad....cant i stay with u
samrat:kyun...kya hua...
neha:mujhe toh roz raat koh aap icecream la kar dete the na
mayank:agar aj dad nahi toh mayank uncle hi sahi...ri8
neha:ri8
mayank:toh challe partener
neha:lets go
mayank:dad koh bye aur get well soon kaho
neha:bye get well soon dad...
and kisses on sam's cheek and leaves
samrat:bye my angel....
and now gunjan is staying with him
nupur:gunjan...agar kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat hui toh fone kar dena han...
gunjan:ok di
dia:take care
gunjan:ok
three of them hug
and dia and nupur leave
gunjan:chalo samrat...ab jaldi seh soh jao...
she kissed on his cheek
samrat:ab toh neend bohot achi aye gi chashmish
gunjan:kyun
samrat:tumne kiss joh kar dia...
gunjan:acha ab makhan lagana bandh aur so jao...samjhe
samrat:ok...
he closes his eyes and go to sleep
now cut to the house...
pranam was not asleep yet...
wen mayank comes to see whether evryone is asleep
mayank:pranam...beta soye nahi ab tak
pranam:neend nahi aa rahi..
mayank comes near
and sits on pranam's bed
mayank:neend nahi aa rahi ya papa se gussa ho
pranam:no dad...main ap se naraaz kyun hoon ga
mayank:may be because...pranam keh papa usse attention nahi de rahe
pranam:actually papa...ab main apko kya kahoon...aap aj kal neha anjali ya preeti di mein itna zyada involve ho jaate ho keh aap mujhe bhool hi jaate ho...and i dont like that dad...coz i love u
mayank:hmmm...toh ab mera lil monster thoda insecure hai....haina
pranam:han....
mayank picks pranam and makes him sit on his lap...
mayank:meri aik baat suno...
pranam:hmm..
mayank:yeh joh tumhare papa haina....
pranam:han..
mayank:yeh na thode se...pagal hain
pranam:kya...
he starts laughing
mayank:han...tabhi toh...woh apni life keh sabse important hisse koh bhol jate hain...pata hai kya..
pranam:kya...
mayank:tum anjali maa aur nupur...meri life keh sabse zaruri parts ho....aur jab tum sab hurt hote ho na....tab tum sab se zyada main hurt hota hoon....samjhe....
pranam:han
mayank::aur pata hai...maine aik plan banaya hai
pranam:kaisa plan
mayank:jab samrat theek ho jayega na...
pranam:han..
mayank:tab main aur tum kahi bahar chale ge...only father and son...nobody else allowed ....samjhe...
pranam:hmmm....
mayank:chalo ab so jao...kal subah samrat se milne bhi jana hai na
pranam:han..
mayank:gud night
he makes pranam lye on his bed
and is about to leave wen pranam holds his hand
mayank looks back
pranam:i love u papa..
mayank:i love u too
he kisses on his forehead
turns the lights off
and leaves
now cut to the morning
everyone at the breakfast table
neha sitting sad...
nupur:kya hua neha...nashta kyun nahi kar rahi...itni sad kyun ho beta
neha:nupur massi....wo kya haina mujhe na mom keh haath se nashta karne ki aadat hai...
nupur:toh kya hua...lets try a change....aj mom nahi hain toh kya...nupur massi par guzara toh ho sakta haina..
neha:hmmm...
nupur:toh chalo aj main aur tum mil kar nashta kare ge...
neha:ok
she smiles

ok guys that was enuf for today
hope u liked it
please rate and comment,
precap:cute bonds!
thanks for reading,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#933

lovely udpate

sam is recobvering so quickly

im happy

aur pranam aur mayank ki convo best thi is update main

pranam is feeling insecure abt losing his father

am eager for pranam n mayanks day out

Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 14 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#934

what can i say u really a awesome writer i just love your ff and OS keep writing

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#935

Nice post annie.I realy like Father and son talk.Mayank is really so good father.

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Kiran..(Kikka)

@SaJanAbhIya

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#936

lovelly part dear!! 😊thnx 4 pm!!

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SoniRita

@SoniRita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#937

awesome update annie sis as usual lovee da update aww so cuteee sajan scene in beginning hayeee gunji kissed him in cheeks woww n den loveee da bonding of mayu-pranaam loved it do continue soon

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#938

Wow beautiful part loved the way neha kissed and said bye to Sam then Pranam and Mayank father son talks and Neha nupur talks were also good loved it do continue soon