sajan ff***love finds its way***update:pg 147 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
nice concept
jaldi se update karo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome.. do cont soon.. eagely waiting.. thnksfor da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey frndzz here is the first update......
part 1.......
(we can see a girl wearing white salwaar suit and sitting all alone in a balcony and she is holding a diary in her hand....on the floor dry flowers and some choclates as well as friendship bands are placed along with a big teddy bear....
we can't see her face but just her eyes....a tear escape from her eye and fall down on the diary page she took the friedship band....)
flashback.....
boy:main tumharay liye kuch laya hoo....
girl:mere liye??
boy:ek chota sa gift.....
girl:par hum abhi abhi dost banay hain....aur gifts....
boy:arey abhi abhi dost banay hai issi liye toh laaya hoo....ye lo....
girl:friendship band??
boy:hmmm humarai dosti ko mazboot bananay ke liye.....
girl:wow....thanks....
boy:u like it??
girl:i love it.....thats really sweet of u....thanks.....
flashback ends.......
girl took the diary and turns some pages and then start reading it....
flashback.......

a girl is standing in a class room in anger and looking at a boy who is giving flowers to some girls....the boy suddenly noticed that the girl have seen him giving flowers to other girls...the girl leaves the class room in anger and the boy run after her...
boy:arey suno toh...ruko meri baat toh suno...
girl:mujhe na tum se baat karni hai aur na he tumhari koi baat sun ni hai...
boy:arey par mujhe toh karni hai....
girl:kyun mujhse kyun karni hai...jao ja kar dekho kahi koi larki reh toh nai gayi....jao sab ko flowers do....tumharay special yellow flowers!!!
boys:arey sorry main wo tumhay nai de sakta tha na...wo yellow flowers frndzz ke liye hotay haina.....
girls:kyun main tumhari dost nai hoon??u r just impossible......
boy:arey nai tum meri dost ho par...
girl:par what???main ja rahi hoon....
(she start walking when she hears these words)
boy:main ne tumhay yellow flower iss liye nai diya kyunki mujhe tumhay red flower dena tha........
(girl stop walking and turn)
girl:red flower???
boy:haan red flower.....
girl:par red flower kyun??
boy:kyunki main tum se kuch kehna chahta hoo....
girl:kya??
boy:i.....i......i love u........
(winds are blowing a tear falls down from her eye she ran towards the boy and they bot hug eachother)
flashbach ends......
(girl is now crying she turn the page of diary and again start reading)
flashback....
girl:arey tum mujhe yahan kyun laye ho???
boy:kyunki mujhe tum se kuch buhat important baat karni hai!!!
girl:important baat???
boy:haan!!!!important!!!buhat buhat buhat important.....
girl:aisi konsi baat hai??jo itni important hai.....
boy:(kept his hands on her eyes)acha abb ankhein band karo....
girl:theek hai baba...
(after somtime)
boy:abb kholo!!!
(girl saw that the whole room is decorated with fresh red flowers and there is balloon on which this is written)
will u marry me????
girl:(unable to say anything)ye sab??
boy:bolo na??kya tum mujhse shaadi krogi???will u marry me???
girl nodded and and hugs him.....
flashback ends....
the girl is still crying.......she now took the choclate wrappers in her hand.....
flashback.....
(girl is working in kitchen when boy came and hug her from the back)
boy:hey jaan...
girl:ay bhagwaan tum ne toh mujhe darra he diya...
boy:ooo hhhhhaaa haaa haaa...
girl:very funny......chalo abb jao mujhe buhat kaam hai.....
boy:arey apnay pati se zyada kon sa kaam hota hai???
girl:pati dev shayad aap ko pata nahi hai ke pyaar ke ilawaa bhi buhat saaaray kaam hotay hain jo karnay hotay hai......abb jao......
boy:nai main nai jaaonga....
girl:arey plzz jao na.....
boy:acha baba theek hai jaata hoo,dekhna tum mujhe yu hi bhagaati ho na...ek din main khud he chala jaao ga!
(girl kept her hand on his mouth)
girl:khabardaar jo doobara aisa bola.....tum mujhe chod ke nai ja saktay samjhay!!
(boy saw tears in her eyes)
boy:arey sorry baba.....tum toh ronay lagi...im really very sorry....main tumhay chod ke kahi bhi nai ja raha hooo......
(he kisses her forehead)
boy:arey jo main laya tha wo toh tumhay diya he nai!!
girl:kyaaa???
boy:dhaan te naan.....
girl:choclates!!!
boy:hmmm...mujhe pata hai ke tumhay cholates buhat pasand hain iss liye main aata hua le aya....aur waise bhi.....
girl:waise bhi????
boy:jo kiss tum mujhe choclates ke baad deti ho na wo aur bhi meethi lagti hai.....
(she hitts him playfully)
flashback ends.....
tears are still falling down from her eyes but there is no one who can wipe her tears.....she took the teddy bear.......
flashback....
girl:arey ye itna bada teddy kiss liye???
boy:ye meri pyari si patni ke lie....
girl:arey par ye.....
boy:tumhay teddy pasand haina??
girl:haan par....
boy:par war kuch nai mujhe tumharay liye acha laga toh mai le aya ..abb thanks nai bolo gi.....
girl:thankss...
(both smile)
girl:i love u.....
boy:(hugs her)i love u 2 jaan!!!
flashbach ends.....
she is now crying evenmore.........
flashback.....
girl:tum kyun ja rahe ho??
boy:kyunki meri meeting hai jaan...
girl:toh meeting cancel kar do.....
boy:main aisa nai kar sakta....i have to go.....
girl:iss baar mera tumhay bhejnay ka mood nai hai....plzz mat jao.....
boy:see even i don't wana go...par main kya karoo zaroori kaam hai iss liye jana padega.....i promise main jaldi wapis aaoga......
(kisses her forehead)
boy:bye.......apna khayal rakhna...........
girl:(crying)tum bhi apna khayal rakhna aur pohanchtay he mujhe call karna....
boy:haan baba kar doonga....now should i go...
girl:(finally smiles)hmm...bye.....
flashback ends.....
girl is now crying like hell........
flashback....
(girl is working in kitchen when the phone rings)
girl:oossi ki call hogi....
(she picks up the call)
girl:heloo.....
from the phone:madam apkay pati ki plane crash mai death ho gayi hai...aap plzz aa kar oon ka saamaan le jayein......
girl:whatttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(girl is now blank tears are falling down)
flashback ends.....
tum ne apna promise kyun tod diya...mujhe kyun chod diya tum ne.....tumhein nai pata main tumharay bina kitni akeli ho gayi hooo....kyun chod diya tum ne mujhe batao.....batao kyun akela chod gaye ho tum mujhe bataooo bataaooo!!!!!!!(she is crying badly)
(she slept there and now next morning)
girl gets up from her sleep and saw tears in her eyes she wipe her tears and gets up she start walking towards the room.....she is now standing infront of the mirror(now we can see her face and the girl is gunjan........................she was reacalling all her moments with her husband i mean mayank.........
gunjan:aaj tumhay guzray huye poora ek saal ho gaya hai par lagta hai jaise kal ki he baat ho ke hum dono saath thay aur khush thay..............(an old men came from the back......)
old man:bityaa!!!
gunjan:g kaakaa.....
old man:bitya aap ne kal jo akhbaar lanay ko bola tha wo main le aya hoo.....ye le lein...
gunjan:table par rakh di jiye kaakaa....
(she took the shower and then came and took the newspaper and start reading)
gunjan:ye job mujhe kissi bhi haalat main chahye....bhalay mujhe jhoot bolna paday par mujhe ye job chahye......iss waqt ye meri zarrorrat se zyada majboori hai...mujhe ye job karni he hogi........
scene shifts to a room where we can see a boy who is freee from all kind
of tension...he is sleeping peacefully.....when suddenly a girl enter the room(she is wearing a white t-shirt with black mini skirt) and grab the bedsheet......the boy is still sleeping.....the girl took the jug from the table which is filled with water and pour on that guy...............
guy:kon hai kon hai!!(he starts shouting when he saw girl infront of him)
nupurrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ye kya kiya tum ne main kitnay mazay say so raha tha.....
(yess guyss she is our nups....)
nupur:mujhe pata tha ke raat ki party ke baad tum buhat thak gaye ho gay aur abhi tak so rahe ho gay....but office nai jana kya samrat??
(and that guy is our samrat)
samrat:jana hai na.....but this is not right yr!!!
main kitnay mazay se so raha tha....
nupur:sorry but main kya karoo late ho raha tha......im sorry....
samrat:its ok.....
(both hug eachother)
nupur:acha abb jaldi se tayar ho jao main neechay tumhara intezar kar rahi hoo...ok...
samrat:ok....
(she leaves from there and after somtime samrat came downstair wearing a back suit.and sits on the dining table's chair)
samrat:good morning everyone.....
samrat's mom:good morning son...
mom:beta u r late!!!
samrat:sorry mom...wo actually kal party se late aya tha toh....

samrat's dad:samrat........
samrat:yess dad.....
dad:tum aur nupur saath main party kartay ho toh phir nupur kaise jaldi ooth jaati hai.....hamesha oose party ke aglay din tumhain oothnay aana padta hai.....
mom:arey its ok afteralll nupur ko isi ghar main aana hai toh abhi se practice ho jaye gi...kyun nupur???
nupur:(smiles)g aunty.....
mom:samrat bread.....
samrat:yess mom....(now they are done with the breakfast)
samrat:chalein nupur...
dad:bhai kaha???
samrat:wo main office ja raha hoo toh...nupur ko ghar drop karta hoa jaooga....
mom:samrat:tum ek kaam karo....
samrat:g mom.....
mom:beta tum jao main soch rahi hoo ke aaj nupur ko apnay saath shopping par le jaoo......i hope u dont mind...
samrat:oh no mom.....offcaurse not....ok then i have to go....
bye everyone.......
nupur:(stand and hug sam)bye....
samrat:(smiles)byee....
(he left for office)

ok frndzz thats it for today i hope u enjoyed reading it...i will continue it as soon as possible......
do comment......😊😊😊😊







Edited by gunjanmariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Continue soon dear.....................................waiting for the update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey gunjan superb first update the way in flashback you told every part of majan was fab can't wait for sajan's meeting and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeee part dear
loved it
waiting eagerly for sajan's first meet
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum concept..
thnx 4 d pm..
luv u..
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part ws interestin..
luvd it ..
thnx 4 d pm..
luv ya..🤗
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update
you described the flashback very well
poor gunjan
can't wait to read more
continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
aweosem part dear flashbacks were so so sweet t aww poor gunji missing mayu a lot n SaNu scene awesome lol continue soon nw
Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 15 years ago

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