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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: pul18

ya dear..... 😊
don't worry....
i don't know abt ur prob. but sab thik ho jayega.... 😊
meri batain god bahut sunte hai....
ha ha just chill ok😉
😊 my wishes always with u sweety
tc....... 😊

yaar it means sooo mcuh
thankssssss🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
hellooo! awesome update noha:) very very interesting!

looking forwrd for next update!

hurry uppp

ps:it's good to be back after 16 days without internet:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Deizy

hellooo! awesome update noha:) very very interesting!

looking forwrd for next update!

hurry uppp

ps:it's good to be back after 16 days without internet:)

thanks shunshine and wow 16 dayz!! im glad u got it back😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
N o t e : Soo yeah im posting the updt today & i might updt tomorow aswell, if my wish come true tomorow (im waiting for a very very important phone call) and if i hear what im yearning to hear for the past 1 month i promise i'll atleast post 2 more chapters
... plz plz pray for me
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C hapter VII :
Strange how raindrops taste like tears without pain..
In the early light of sunbeams Gayatree knocks in Prena's room. At her surprise, the door is unlocked. As she peeks in, she sees the bed untouched. Completely taken over by bewilderment, she suddenly notices the balcony's door wide open. Horror-stricken, she sees a pale Prena lying on her swing. Rapidly approaching to her, she touches her cheeks delicately, as if otherwise her doll would break apart. Leisurely, Prena opens her reddish eyes and gets up after a couple of minutes.

-gayatree revolted: Prena, what are you doing here? Thank God, ur dad was extremely busy in the morning and he didn't came to meet u. Or else, he would be shattered watching you like this.What am I saying!...Prena are u feeling sick? did u eat something that u are allergic at ...

-prena trying to lie, fakes a smile (feeling brainless for her unusual yesterday's behaviour): I'm fine aunty, calm down! Actually I couldn't resist myself getting wet in the rain,u know the usual routine!

-gayatree groaning: Prena!tumbhi naa,ok enough tum fresh hoke ayo and aaj school ki chouti! If u want u can invite Dhara to join us later on, in the evening.

Prena smiles still trying to feel joyful enter to her cozy room. After half an hour, Gayatree trying to boost her princess's mood invites Prena to make some fresh home made muffin. Both of the ladies joins the kitchen and get set for the recipe.

-gayatree: u are cooking for the first time Prena, once ur dad will be returning home, he will be very happy and proud of you

Deep down, Prena wishes that her dad likes it because this is a way to apologise for her random attitude last night , hence she is extra careful while cooking.It is almost lunch time when someone rings at the door bell. Prena rushes to the entrance partly cover with flour.

-Prena, cheerfully: Dad,aap!wow u came earlier!im soo happy.u know I have a surprise for u

-Anurag: sach! Guess what mujhe bhi tumhare liye ek surprise hai.

-Prena childishly: tell me DAD!!

Anurag just turn his head and enter to his house.

-Anurag:baat mein Prena..

Few min later,Anurag and her daughter join the dinning table and Prena brings her very first meal made by her own hand and put it down near her dad.

-prena: tharam!!!! Here u go Mr Bassu, freshly cooked muffin to start umm nooo to almost finish a wonderful day!

-anurag happily: Wow Prena! They smell so good! Way to go beta

-prena: thx dad. Ok now it's my turn. What's my surprise?

And prena gains her seat.

-anurag tasting a muffin:well jab meri choti si pari,itni achi sey muffin bana liti hai too ...so I was wondering why not start planning her wedding with a dashing prince!

Prena totally thrown away by shock and disbelief just glares at her dad with wide eyes. Suddenly she jumps from her chair and with wide gesture.

-prena screaming: WHAT!..i mean common it's a joke right!!...i just stepped in college dad and I don't wanna get married..e..

-anurag interrupting his daughter's complaints: Prena,shusss calm down princess!
He holds her daughter's hand and make her sit once again.

-Anurag, slowly: Prena beta,im not telling u to get married tomorrow,with some guy that u have never met.I'm telling you to take in consideration and tell me what u think about my suggestion. I mean I've seen u guyz together. And I must say u two look perfect together. And chach kahoon, I curse myself for ignoring him all this time.
Unconsciously deep down in Prena's heart, Nihaal's face appears. She remembers him dropping her out in her house and the awkward behaviour of her dad. As much as she tries to ignore, a dreamy smile keeps resurfacing on her face.

-Anurag: If I tell you that me and my closest buddy think that u and Laksh make an awesome jodi...

-Prena shell shock: WHAT!

-Anurag: dechko Prena,I'm just telling to reflect on what I have said. Besides we were only thinking about getting you guys engaged and after one year tie the knot. Look Prena if you have any objection about Laksh tell me. And if u have someone in ur mind'well u can' share it with me.

Prena keeps quite with no answer.

-anurag: I knew it!u would never disappoint me..Think meticulously Prena and lemme me know ur verdict at night.
****
At the Sinhghania's house

Mr Arjun Singhania announces to Laksh, about his proposal with Prena. Laksh on the 12th cloud, hugs his dad and happily gets back his room. At the same time Dhara, who also acknowledged by the good news enters in her brother's room.
-dhara thrill: I'm so happy bhaya.I knew it !i knew it!!!
Laksh with a huge smile brightening up his face, runs to Dhara and hug her tightly.
****
At night, Prena trying her best not to think about her hasten wedding, forcefully reads one of the book she rented from the library the other day. Eventually, the clock points out 9 o clock and she decides to go into her father's room. Along the way, she practices to put into plain words that she isn't ready to get married. Absentmindly, without knocking at the door , she comes into her dad's room, who was holding his neck painfully.

-prena suddenly concerned: dad aap thick toh hain naa?

-anurag shocked to see his girl: who kuch nahin Prena,I was just..

-prena warily: dad ur neck is flushing all red.I'm so sorry I haven't noticed it earlier,what happen to you dad?

-anurag: ...this...it's no..no..thing

-prena furious: dads don't try to lie to me! Why do u look so uncomfortable?

She takes her dad and makes him sit on a swinging couch, while she sits down on the cold floor.

-prena: now tell me

-anurag: ...well, today a very awkward thing happened to me. At first, a young tall man which whom I had a feeling of already perceiving him somewhere... or perhaps a since of dj vu? Turned out to be a ... I must say a dangerous goon entering to my cabin. He started blabbering nonsense stuff ......He even accused me about the death of his brother or something...Whatever r..

-prena horror-stricken : WHAT!! Ussne aap ko mara!

-anurag: it's nothing sweetheart,he just pushed me.

Prena gets up and panics.

-prena fumbling in anger: dad,from now on,ur guard must be always present inside ur cabin.What is this! How come some gangster dares entering to my dad's cabin and blame u for something that u haven't even done!!

-anurag: calm down prena,it's nothing mamouli si baath hai. Anyway Prena I have to go outside .U want it to say me something?

Prena looks at her reserved yet fragile dad for a long time and takes some deep breaths

-prena: dad I agree for the marriage.

Anurag pleasantly surprise hugs her daughter and she leaves his room.
Prena didn't' knew what to say or how to react. She just knew that she couldn't hurt her dad any further. Her anger and anxiousness falling out-of-the-way, left place for a numb and anaesthetized sensation. She goes to the washroom and pours some cold water on her fatigued face as she looks up on the mirror. Her sight still disturbed by the water drops, she perceives for an instant the glimpse of Nihaal reflecting on it.

Nihaal still staring at the mirror seal up the gap between them...

Prena baffled closes her eyes and reopens in disbelief.

In one brutal shot Nihaal smashes apart the crystalline mirror of his room.

-nihaal serenely: this is ur peaceful life Mr Bassu,and this is how I'm gonna asphyxiate it. Tab maja aye ga when the night's gonna creeps in and I'll be heavenly cradle by ur hushing screams echoing into my soul.

****

Prena turns around and hits her head in the wall.

****

He moves towards the window and put his flamboyant red hand, inflicted by the glass in the calm rain.

****

-prena whispers to herself: ouch what's wrong with me

Taunted by the peaceful light rain, she comes within the reach of the window and loges out her soft and delicate hand outside.

The drizzle rinses out the blazing red blooded hand of Nihaal while preparing to inflict another hand the same crimson color on her innocent palm.... the flaming red mehendi's color of her departure...
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: noha450


<div></div><font color="#ff0066">thanks shunshine and wow 16 dayz!! im glad u got it back😉</font>



yep yep 16 days i ws without any cmnction....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
wowwwwww:
amazing noha

u are doing great jobb!

plzz post the next part soonnnnnn

noha you have my prayers! good luck 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Deizy

wowwwwww:
amazing noha

u are doing great jobb!

plzz post the next part soonnnnnn

noha you have my prayers! good luck 👍🏼

aww thanks shona 🤗 xoxo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
ohhhhhhh 😛
noha..... 😛 😛
😛 😛 😛
it pleasure to read all ur update..... 😆 😆
😆


it getting more interesting..... 🤓

m super excited for the next chap... 😍
n tc of ur self 😊
Edited by pul18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: pul18

ohhhhhhh 😛
noha..... 😛 😛
😛 😛 😛
it pleasure to read all ur update..... 😆 😆
😆


it getting more interesting..... 🤓

m super excited for the next chap... 😍
n tc of ur self 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks yaaaar☺️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

C hapter VIII :

Despite the sun rose high up in the sky, the curtains are fully closed, letting the darkness submerge in Prena's room .Entirely covering herself with the satin sheet, she tries to take shelter from the vivid light which still finds a way to pierce thru the white fabric and forces her to wake up. Releasing a breath of annoyance, Prena checks her cell and leaves for her college.


****

.:At the college:.

-prena: kya baath hai Dhara,why did u want it to meet me so early?
-dhara happily: Prenaaaa!! Tum bhi naa,I've tried to call u the entire night,but u were out of reach.anyway the thing is ...should I call u bhabhi or prena or both!....u know im SOO HAPPY PRENA!!My happiness can't be described into plain word!!!my best friend and soon to be bhabhi, isn't just FANTASTIC!!!
-prena avoiding her gaze : dhara actually I think the principal want it to see me aswell, soo I'll catch yaa later on.
-dhara:well..
Without even looking back, Prena leaves the canteen.

****

Nihaal who didn't slept throughout the night, arrives for the last time at his college. In fact, he had to arrange some bureaucratic formalities concerning his drop out from the institution.
He arrives in front of the director's room but it seems there is already a girl with him. The door is left half open; hence he could perceive their conversation. While leaving Nihaal is doomed at his place.
_

:.Conversation in the bureau:.

-Director:....congratulation missses Bassu,im sure Anurag ji must be extremely happy.
-Prena:thx for ur well wishes but may I know why u called me?
-Director: ohh its nothing Prena, go enjoy 'I'll talk to u later..

_
Nihaal utterly distraught doesn't know what to think or reflect. Somehow he didn't want it to perceive Prena as the murderer's daughter. A heart wrenching feeling overcomes in him. How could he inflict such a deep wound to her? Somehow he couldn't redeem such a smiling angel into someone as shattered as him. Nihaal tries to persuade himself that it's a mistake, that she isn't the same girl'but somehow her broken soft voice is constantly proving him wrong.

-Nihaal calming himself: it's a misunderstanding, it can't be "her", and there is soo many girls with the same name. Common Nihaal....and even if it's her...
While leaving the principal's cabin, both come face to face. NIhaal desolated keeps staring at Prena and abruptly turns aside and let her go.Prena who is already mad at his principal for digging on her personal life walks furiously till her locker. She throws up some of her books in her bag and eventually turns around. Seeing Nihaal once again, her anger unknowingly fades out.

-nihaal in a low, broken voice: Prena im sorry..

-prena confused, and already half smiling: ..kya?

-nihaal under his breath: ..mujhe maaf kardo'magar one need to p
ay his deeds...

-prena smiling:.. Tum kya...

-nihaal looking straight in her eyes: one need to pay his deeds..what ur father did can't be forgiven..he destroyed everything Prena......

Gazing into his eyes, Prena drowns into these grey reddish eyes, as if they had a story of their own, merely waiting and imploring to get unveiled.

-nihaal whispering:... how a sinner can walk away without being punished...

:::Flashback:::

-Anurag: well, today a very awkward thing happened to me... A young tall man which whom at first I had a feeling of already perceiving him somewhere...Turned out to be a ... I must say a dangerous goon entering to my cabin. He started blabbering nonsense stuffs ...He even accused me about the death of his brother or something'whatever... he pushed me hard on my desk and...
--

As if hit by a thunder, every single particles of her soul start blazing.

-prena almost screaming: tum... so it was U.... HOW DARE YOU!!!

-nihaal ,sarcastically: HOW DARE I!

-prena: u frikking jurk..tumhari himmat kaisi hui'u lifeless fool tumnee...tumne..!!!!! You are the reason why my dad is so badly injured..... Did u even saw how many scars and bruises he had in his face?.....

-nihaal: i can't believe my ears........u are talking about the scar of a murderer?
-prena: ....U know what Nihaal Garewal , people like u and ur brother or whatever truly deserve to be thrown away by a car or WHATSOEVER!!!.................A friendly tips DAFAH HOH JAO YAHAAN SE

-nihaal:SHUT THE HELL UP PRENAA

-prena: CHILLAO MAAT......I can't believe I was actually being nice to u cuz I thought ..I thought..u would be worthy of some respect but tum..tum kya nikhley Nihaal!..... And after all u did... u dare imploring that, it's my dad's fault. U ..u...idiot!!!If it was me instead of my dad believe me I'd throw u up in some prison or a place that u really are meant to be Nihaal Garewal!!!And I'd make sure that every single second of ur existence u suffer ...till God compassion u enough ,to release u from it by giving u death...

-nihaal:THAT DOES IT!!!

-Nihaal thrashes Prena in the locker and holds her tightly in his grasp: BAAS!!!! Bohut sunli tumhari baat misses Bassu. Now it's my turn. Indeed I was fool enough to believe for an instant that u'd be different form ur dad,....tum bhi kya nikhli prena!...ur even worse than him

-Prena disgusted: CHORRO MUJHE'tumhari aukad kya hai to touch m..

Nihaal with a fake smile clutches her hair painfully. Then, he forcefully comes near her lips: I actually pitied u ....magar aab nahin...In the contrary like u, I won't make up a speech.....isme toh koi mazaah bhi nahin hai pe-re-naa ...I have a better approach..joh ji mein aayega mein karunga.....Sincerely I pity u ,u innocent fool,u just slaughtered the remaining of the previous Nihaal'aab mein kuch nahin kahunga..sirft karke d .e k. a. h. u. n. g. a ...I won't even think of the consequences of it, in the contrary I'll laugh my head off.

Prena tries to push nihaal, but in vain. Helpless, all she could do is hanging on to Nihaal's shirt.

For the last time Nihaal move towards her ears

-nihaal, softly like a whisper: like I said to ur dad, ...not soo long ago...,Run..run to join ur defeated dad, go enjoy and have quality moment for ur last time with ur DECEASED dad.

In the vast empty hall, the only tumults echoing are two heart beats palpitating like hammers, expressing the same painful remorse'.

Before leaving, Nihaal slowly removes with his finger the tuft of hair that is bothering Prena's cold face and, he softly prints like a cold whisper, a small yet poisonous kiss on Prena's cheek, while a frozen tear finally rolls down on her face.

-Nihaal releasing her slowly: take good care of ur dad prena and thanks for making my owe much, much easier....And ohh a friendly tips: if I were u, I'd already prepare some white cloths to wear on or keep nearby..
And he winks at an unfeeling Prena who just fells down in the cold floor.
After a couple of minutes Prena abruptly comes back to her senses. An indescribable feeling of anger, hatred and especially pain dispatches to her body. She walks heatedly and along the way removes, erases, wipe out, the hot iron kiss that was inflaming her cheek. Still in wild emotion she arrives at the parking lot and suddenly bumps into Laksh.

-Laksh shyly: hey sunshine,what a surprise, actually I came here to meet u..Woh mujhe tumhein kuch kehna tha'Come down Laksh u can do it!!!!.ummmm Prena since childhood I always, always lo..

Prena not even looking at him simply continue walking.

-Laksh confused: hey prena...sunno toh sahi!

Prena turning into anger.

-prena:KYA!!! What do u want!!!tum bohut khuch ho naa!than good!.. stay that way..no need to thank me or anything!

Laksh shocked, sees Prena leaving in anger.

She madly fumbles and arrives in the college parking lot. Seeing her driver snoring peacefully in the driver's seat, her anger increases even further. Impatiently she miffs and knocks a couple of time in the car window and orders her sleepy driver to wake up. The poor man surprised by Prena's unusual behaviour mechanically asks forgiveness to her. He lets her in and before Prena stares again by the rear view mirror at him, he speeds up the gear.
Edited by noha450 - 15 years ago

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