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Posted: 15 years ago
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All the best 4 ur result 👍🏼
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nice ss dear
hey dear its ok
all the best for results
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The story is exactly like the movie, "What happens in Vegas!"
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hey.........
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hey debadrita

nice and cool start. it is a bit like "what happens in vegas" . waiting to know how you take it further. looking forward to the first chapter.

thanks for the Pm and continue soon.
loads of love..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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a new note

my results are out😛
n i scored a good percentage😉
thanks for all your wishes😛

i will continue ASAP😃

n ya the intro is like what happens in las vegas😊
but after reading the next part u will understand its completely different😛
because it will go my way :P😆😉😛

till then love u all

DEBADRITA😛
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congrats dear
now it's time for treat
so update soon
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Time: INCIDENTAL OR COINCIDENTAL MEETING


Riddhima came to stay with her friend cum brother Atul's house and was really excited to meet Anjali'Atul's wife'..as she had never met her before. They both became very good friends after having a chat. They were having their dinner while Anjali said "Riddhima do you have any problem if my brother comes here and stay with us'as you are a family member now I should take your permission also.."'."Bhabi 'you don't have to take my permission'..of course you can call your brother'I will be really happy :) "'"So Riddhima actually he will come tomorrow evening and I will not be there actual there is a very important meeting tomorrow'can you please take care of him when he comes..".."Bhabi'you don't need to tell me'your guest means my guest too'of course I will take care of him'please do not worry about that"'."Thanks Riddhima you are a sweetheart"'

Next day
"tring".."Tring".."Coming"'replied Riddhima'"I guess its Anjali's brother .." she said to herself' As she opened the door she was shocked.. :O''"YOU"'And her face turned red seeing the person'it was none other than ARMAAN'Both were shocked to see each other'.
But two people were really very happy to see this'those two people from far way said "Step 1 COMPLETE" :P

FLASHBACK

ANJALI

Anjali is Armaan's sister'she was talking to Rahul who was telling Anjali how Armaan got married accidentally and how the girl named Riddhima was not at all interested in Armaan and left him there using the dirtiest slang. Armaan who had been a hunk was First time dumped by a girl'who didn't even give him attension. A girl who was different from other girls'she was like a superwoman. Armaan used to dump girls but this time it was someone who dumped him. A very unique type of a girl'listening to this Anjali was surprised as no one dared to talk to Armaan that way'but that girl'she is just awesome'.Anjali was eager to meet the girl who dumped her handsome brother Armaan.

ATUL

Atul, Riddhima's friend cum brother who knew Riddhima from a very small age as they were brought up in the same orphanage, came to know about the new year's incident'that she got accidentally married'he was really shocked'.that how can one get married accidentally'.but still when Riddhima said that she will never again thought about that day and will focus in her career Atul was really happy to hear that'as Riddhima was a strong girl'..and could deal with her own life in a right way.

Atul was married to Anjali but Riddhima had never seen Anjali as she couldn't attend his marriage because of her exams. So she never had a chance to meet Anjali. Atul bought a new house before marriage..so that he could focus in his personal life as well it was near to his office'.

Few days later: TOP SECRET :P

Few days later when Anjali in their new house i.e. the house which Atul bought before marriage were discussing about Armaan's business while talking about Armaan she remembered that she did not tell Atul about Armaan's accidental marriage ''so remembering the incident'she started to narrate about it to Atul'.Atul was shocked hearing this as the same thing happened with Riddhima. Atul asked Anjali about the girl's name who got married to Armaan'Anjali replied"Riddhima'that what Rahul said and I seriously wish that I could meet her as she can only handle my stupid brother Armaan." Atul was shocked that Riddhima got married to Anjali's brother. He started laughing as both will be a GREAT COMBINATION TOGETHER WITH LOTS OF CONFUSION BINGO STYLE 😛. Atul said" Anjali, you know something your wish can be fulfilled soon' As I know the girl very well"'She said"How"'."Anjali do you remember that I have a sister cum friend named Riddhi'..her full name is Riddhima'she also narrated me the whole incident few days ago'.Anjali I promise that I will get them together.".."THANKS ATUL..I LOVE YOU'Riddhima is really the perfect girl as I know said me before that that Riddhima is a very good girl'and is independent'.both together will be fantastic 'I really want her to be my bhabi'please GOD I hope my wishes are fulfilled."'"I love you Anjali'..If destiny wants them to be together your wish will get fulfilled soon"'

Atul invited Riddhima to stay in his house for few days while Anjali invited her brother Armaan to come and stay in their house for few days ''

FLASHBACK ENDS

Atul and Anjali smiled and gave a hi5 to each other as they completed their first step. They were too happy to do so' Anjali said "oh I m waiting to see what happens next'I m so excited.."'"Now can we please go inside..pleaseeeeee'.My leg is paining standing here for 2 hours.."'Atul said making a baby face'"Awwwwww so sweet..i love you..lets go inside :)"


Note- this was supposed to be a one shot'but I didn't get time to write'I have not written the next part yet..so I will change this to a short story'and please do comment'DO NOT expect me to update soon'because I m very lazy'..and my brain too is lazy''so till then this is the next part

Love
Debadrita

Edited by choco_pie92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey deba....
awesome part...really interesting concept....looking forward to it...
pls continue soon..
luv u
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Hi
Lovely Fic...
Amazing part...

Thanks for the PM...
Continue soon

Luv Shatakshi

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