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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys thank u soooooooooo much 4 liking part 2 of this ff. i m so happy that u like tmy ff.
now i m going to update part 3 that too full of fun. this ff will also be serious as story proceeds. there will be problems in mayur love story bt till than enjoy their fun


PART 3
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As mayank has lost the keys n sammy n mayank were waiting 4 benji as he was having the duplicate keys
S: benji tu chabi de raha hai k nahi
B: arry konsi chabiii
sammy n mayank together: duplicate chabi jo tere pass hoti hai
B: acha wo chabi
S n M: (again together) ji han wahii chabii

benji moving some feet back

B: wo to apartment k ander dinning table pe hi reh gai thi subah........
M n S: (together).......... kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
M: tune aaj hi wo keys ander chorni thien kya? ab ham kya karien
S: wahi jo hamesha krte hain
B: jo krna hai karo bt main iss dafa lock man k pass nahi jane wala.........hamesha tm dono mujy hi bejte ho..........iss dafa khud jao
M: dekh benji bas aakhri dafa............aage se main khud jaon ga
S: matlab dobara keys gum krne ka pora plan hai...............ye to tm kabi keh nahi sakte na k aainda gum nahi karon ga....
M: dekh sammy tm ye mujhy baad main keh lena abi isse bejho na.............main buhat thak chuka hon already
samrat turned towards benji( before samrat say anything)

Benji: no way main nahi jaon ga................khud tm dono gunjan k ghar ja k dinner karo gay aur main yahan lock lagwata phiron.........kabi nahi
mayank n sammy's plan was to go to gunjan house n have dinner.
S: dekh benji please ja na....tu wahan baad main aa jana
B: bilkul nahi........main bi abi hi jaon ga
S: (in irritation n anger) to phir maro tm bi
they all went to gunjan's house

GUNJAN'S APARTMENT

Mayank knocked at the door
Udhay: ( he is here complete dodo of mjht..........n brother of gunjan) kon hai?
M: tmhare hone wale jiju
U: (recognising voice to gunjan) arry gunjan tm ne dulha badal lia
G:kia??????
U: mayank keh raha hai wo mera hone wala jiju hai
G: udhay bhaiya ye kia bol rahe ho aap? kahan hai mayank
U: wo bahar hai
M: (outside the house) ye tera saala apna damag lara raha hai andar..........isse to thiek krna hi pare ga
gunjan opened the door
G: arry tm log yahan iss waqt
B: han wo sammy tmhare bagair udhass ho gya tha(Gunjan slightly blushed at this n samrat was busy in lookin at her lovingly)...................waise tm lagon ne abi dinner to nahi kia ho ga....hai na?

M: (glaring at benji)........wo iss ka matlab hai tm log disturb to nahi hove
G: arry nahi nahi tum log aao na ander
U: waise ham log dinner hi krne wale thy.............waise tm log to dinner kr k hi aaye ho gay............kyonki mere khane k baad tum logon k liye to kuch bache ga hi nahi
G: (glaring at udhay) aap log ab aaye ho to hame join karo........plz
S: ab tm itna insist kr hi rahi to chasmish to why not
after having dinner benji went to lock man to open the lock n he fitted a new one in their door

AT NIGHT

Benji n samrat after changing into night dress went to sleep bt mayank had to complete some important file. after completing that he put this file at safe place so that he could easily get that in the morning. actually he wanted to be more cautious this time abt file n after that he also went to sleep at 1:30 am

MORNING 8:30

S: mayank uth ja jaldi................1 gante se tujhe utha raha hun bt tu uth hi nahi raha........uth ja nahi to utha k bahar phaink don ga
M: mujy nahi uthna............pehle hi raat ko buhat late sooya tha..........aur tu abi bi sone nahi de raha
B: ab iss ka kia karien........hamien office bi jana hai.............ander hi band kr jaien kya(smiling mischiviously)
S: band to nahi karien gay.........aur chabi to isse kissi sorat nahi deni...........(after thinking a bit)........benji zara help krna


N: ok aunti........main chalti hun.........oh.hh.......hhho.....ohhh (she somehow saved herself 4rm falling becoz of some thing placed at ground)...........ab ye konsa naya tareeka hai
she moved some steps farward bt before she say anything she heard a shriek.........a painful shriek
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

N: o my god...... ye kia kr rahe ho
M: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..................piche hatoooooooooo.............ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
N: wat do u mean pichy hatoooooo
M: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...............mera hath choroooo
N: wat the hell..........mera damag kharab hai jo main tmhara hath pakron gi
M: ahhhhhhhhhhh...........arry niche dekho
actually nupur was standing at mayank's hand................
she after looking quickly moved two step back
mayank got up holding his hand n spoke loudly
M: kya problem thi tmhien jo subah subah iss tarha yahan aa gai ho
N: what???????
M: waise to buhat kehti rehti ho etiquettes nahi hain mujy......tmhe itna bi nahi pata k kissi k ghar aane se pehle door pe knock krte hain
N: excuse me.....come again............kiss pe knock krte hain??????
M: door pe.......kabi dekha nahi hai kya........us door pppppppp(turning towards a direction bt there was nothing)

actually samrat n benji had put him outside the apartment with his clothes 4 office.......as they can never give him keys now........

Mayank totally shocked at where he is n that too infront of nupur
N: actually na main zara market ja rahi thi.........kaho to mental hospital phone krti jaon
M: no thanks.........tm jao jahan ja rahi thi
N: u r right........phone ki kya zarorat hai............tmhe wo jahan bi dekhien gay foran hi mental hospital le jaien gay
nupur left laughing at mayank......
n mayank was now remembring his sweet friend in very sweet words..............u can imagin wat would be those sweet words

he qiuckly fetch lock man by himself..........that man was also amused at this new way of opening door each time
he opened the door breaking the lock n fitted a new one
mayank after getting ready searched 4 his file..........that wasn't visible anywhere
M: kahan rakh di thi main ne file...........ab main kya karon.........meeting 9 baje thi aur ab 9:30 ho chuke hain.............aaj to hitler mujhy kacha chabba jaye ga........
he again started searching file
M: bara prove kary ga dado ko k main khud kuch krna chahta hun..............aik file to sambali nahi jati.......khud ko prove kia khak karon ga...............aik to file gadhe k sar se singh k tarha gayab hai..........aakhir kahan rakh di main ne
after completely changing the shape of apartment...........simply we can say.........koi cheez apni jagah pe nahi bachi thi.........so after doing all this he pulled the mattress of bed in irritation n rage n file was there under the mattres
he himself has placed file there so that he could easily get that file in the morning.............bt all thanks to his great memmory
than in hurry he locked the door n rushed to office n again in stairs he bumped into nupur.........bt this time nothing was broken.........as she wasn't holding anything

nupur was abt to start her lecture on decent boys n discipline bt mayank before letting her say anything
M: nupur plz abi nahi...........main pehle hi 1 ganta late ho gya hon..............aaj ka dose wapsi pe....please
after saying this he rushed to office
and as usual was scolded by his boss bt this time badly n that too very badly

IN THE EVENING

Mayank came back home. he was hell tired. he put his hand to pocket 4 key bt again it wasn't there. than he remembered that he has forgotten the key in the lock bt it wasn't there now n door was also locked.

M: oh nooooooooooooo. aaj nahi.... aaj to mujy sammy aur benji zinda nahi chorien gay...main pehle hi hitler se buhat karwa chukka hun aur abi to nupur ki bi subbah walo dose rehti hai.....ab kya karon main.....
after 5 minutes benji came.......

B: oh hi mayank.......aaj bahar hi.........subah thiek se tyar to ho gayr thy na (trying to make fun of mayank)
M: dekho benji mujy subah k bare main yaad na karwao............pehle hi meri subah buhat achi guzri hai aur ab to main apni sham bi imagine kr sakta hun k kaisi ho gi ye (making sad face)
B: ohhoo so sad..........bt shaam tmhari achi hi ho gi......wo sirf issliye k chabi hamare pass thi
benji tried to unlock the door bt
B: ye chabi lag kyon nahi rahi
M: aur lage gi bi nahi
B: ji nahi...........yesahi chabbi hai
M: chabbi sahi ho gi bt lock sahi nahi
B: kia matlab
M: matlab yeh k...........then he told him morning story
B: wat..............to tu chabi lock lagane k baad nikal nahi sakta tha.........kitna time lag jata tera chabi nikalne main
M: dekh jo hona tha wo ho gya..............ab please tu ja aur lock man ko bula k laa...............
B: main bilkul nahi jaon ga..............yaad hai tm ne kaha tha k kal main khud jaon ga............aaj ka plan to tu ne khud hi banaya tha na
M: please benji bas aaj last time chala ja...............main subah bi gya tha aur wo hanss raha tha subah mujh pe
B: jaise wo mujh pe nahi hasse ga na mere chache ka beta jo lagta hai wo

nupur came out of her apartment n said
N: tum log aaj phir shuru ho gaye...................dosron ko tang krne k zyada shouq hai tum logon ko...........aik pal bi shanti se rehne nahi dete.........discipline naam ki koi cheez bi tum logon ki life main............n (like this she goes on and on and on)...............ab kuch bolo bi
B: aap ka full stop aata to hum kuch bolte
N: shut up
B: aap phir shuru hone lagi hain kya
N: mujy laga iss dunya main sirf aik pagal hai(pointing towards mayank) bt nahi jo log iss k sath rahte hain wo normal to ho nahi sakte
M: wat do u mean?
N: aik dafa kehna se samajh nahi aata kia jo tmhe ab main iss ka meaning bataon
after saying this she left

B: kitna bolti hai yaar (amaized at nupur)
M: uss pe baad main hiraan ho lena abi jao aur lock maan ko laao
B: main nahi jaon ga
after 1 hour samrat came n looking at both of them standing outside said

S: tum dono yahan khare konsa dam parh rahe ho
M: khull ja sim sim
S: iss ki bajaye thori si chabbi guma lete to darwaza khul jata............(he said this as he knew that benji had one key)bt
M: tu wo chabbi tum gumma lo na
S: (he tried to open he door)....ye khul kion nahi raha
B: aur khule ga bi nahi
S: kia matlab
than benji told sammy every thing

S: what??????????????mayank aaj main tuje nahi chorun ga
B: to sammy............dont worry bhai main bi iss naik kaam main tere sath hon
benji n samrat started running behind mayank...........n mayank ran to save his life

than after all this they again broke the lock n said lock man to make almost 20 duplicate keys

M: arry 20 kion.............main har dafa aisa thori na karon ga
B n S: tu hamesha iasa hi krta hai
S: aur ab ham risk nahi lena chahte.............tujhe ab jitni keys gum krni hain aaram se krna

after some time...........piya( guys remember na she is nupur's aunt's daughter) came to mayank n said

P: mayank bhaiya ye nupur didi ne chabiyan beji hain ................aur kaha hai k lock lagane k baad chabiya lock main hi nahi chur dete n left saying this

M: iss nupur ko main nahi churun ga................wo kab se mera tamasha dekh rahi thi..........aik dafa bi nahi kaha k chabi us k pass hai
S: tere sath usse yehi krna chahiye tha.............u deserve this
B: bt iss main mera kia kosoor tha..............mujhy bi 4 gante iss k sath bahar khara rehna para
mayank was just listining all this while cursing nupur

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thats it guys...... plz do comment n tell me how was it..............i have worked so hard on this part..........n i deserve atleast 1 comment na.......so plz guys no kanjoosi ok😆........plz guys do comment.............if u dont like than also tell me............please please please.............aur aggar aap logon ko ye ff achi nahi lagti then do tell me.........i wont continue it...........ur comments means a lot so plz do comment.........

one question 4 u all: do u like this mayank or not?


rose.mn thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok guys today a similar scene was in mjht as i have written
bt i haven't copy it 4rm there😆
main ne ye part episode se pehle hi lkha hoa hai.............ok
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Posted: 15 years ago

EDIT

Yeahhhhhhhhh First one to comment
OMG Nupur on Mayu's hand
hahahahhaha
Yaar this part was-was-was
it was awesome
Too good.
I tell you
you are an amazing writter
love this FF too much.
And wow
Mayur saying
Iss Nupur toh chorroon ga nahi kitna tamasha karti hai
lol
love that part.
Do continue soon
I am dieing to know what will happen next.
-Lina-
Booooo
Nikki I do love to be first to comment.😆
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
grrr... LINA! I like to be first
leken yeh Lina
ab mein usko chodogi nahin 😆
coming to the part
as usual it was awesome
haha, about your note of the similar scene
it happened to me too
For Gunjan's wedding in my ff
I was going to do Salaam E Ishq
then last week,
I see that they're doing that too
seems like the creatives have gone into my head
and took out the ideas 😆
sorry getting off topic
I loved the scene when Nupur sat on Mayank's hand
anyways continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update
I love each and every update of this ff
it is just great!!!!!
Btw
I definatly don't mind this mayank
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Posted: 15 years ago
hehe...............wht an update....mayur kabhi toh 'wid peace' baat karenga na?mujhe usi din ka intezaar hai...n 20 keys ka idea bhi too gud tha....😆😉.........n yes my dear i'm lovin mayu of ur ff a looooooooot.....so plzz continue soooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy
It was an amazing update
Bechara mayank
First boss then benji then samrat then nupur
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
I must say everytyme i read ur updte m lyke burst out laughing all the time.........u hve shown true boys kinda attitude.............love ur ff.............m nt regular in commenting plz dun mind that bt i laways do read ur ff......................keep up the good work and thora speed up karo pl...........
-nautankidollz- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyi really really enjoyed it jaan
thanks so much 4 the pm
pls continue soon n lov ya bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear....
awesome upd8....
it was verryyy funny.....
nups was standing on mayu's hand...LOL...😆😆
seriously amazing....
i am not used to mayu being sooo careless, but this is what ff's are all about...u add a bit of ur personality to the characters, twist and turn their behaviours...by this u imprint ur own personality on them, most of the time u dont come to know about this....but think....are the traits in ur charecter, the same as they are in u?? does ur character have the same likes and dislikes as u?? does ur story portray a part of ur thinking??? then, yes...u have shared quite a lot more than just a story with us....
so i dont mind this mayank, it's entertaining to see him soo careless for once...
hope u dint get bored by my loonnnnggg comment...
thnxxx 4 the pm....
loads of love,
jigi...

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