~^Tera He Pyaar^~ *Part 7 Pg 14* 2-7-10 PM'S sent

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

WOW!!

Part 1 was nice, the whole family setting, and Abbaji looking for Rahul, and the whole family sitting for dinner. It was very nicely conveyed!

RM interactions were very cute! Kind of reminded of HAHK! The way seeing Muskaan shut up Rahul. awesome!

AN and AR part was nicely described too! The way AN are still figuring out each other.

Very well written as usual!! 😳

ps. My name is Shilpa.

Thanks for the lovely update!

Edited by ibdt2004 - 15 years ago

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MERI DOST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAY a new one!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Okay I haven't read it yet, but I'm going to read before sleeping. I'll have peace and quiet. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I'm so excited!!!!!

I LOVE YOU!

komz

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Great part!!

Thanks for the PM..

Do Continue soon!!!

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

yay another ff....lol looking forward to reading it...will you include AA as well?

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prajna

@cupid-struck

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

nice concept.....armaan is quite different......i like the other armaan more.....but would really like to know how the story proceeds.......and RM were awesum!!!!!!!they were soooo cute....plz plz PM me

-prajna

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

hey Imane!!

i loved it!! the story is awesome and i really like the way you started it! I love the character's personalities and the way their depicted in this story too! and i love RM, so im not gonna lie, I really focused on their part(I read their part like 3 times), lol. The story overall was really cute, and I loved the whole shoes scene and Rahul going ''aik saath''! lmaoo, that was so cutee!! The storyline is very interesting with the strict and traditional family and you did a wonderful job with portraying all the characters, I could really understand them, the way you described them; with Nikki being filmy and idealistic, and Abhi being practical and sensible, and Armaan wanting to be childish and independent, and Riddhima being mature and a perfectionist. Like you really followed your character sketch and incorporated their personalities just like you described them, which not many people are able to do this well. And im being repetitive, but I loved the 1st part. and could i be added to your PM list please?

<3 Sab

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

awesome part!!!!

do continue soon...thanks for the pm!!

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pari

@pari_smile

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Imane!!!!!

another ff ffrm u, I jst love ur ff's, they r always amazing and diff

and this one is no exception, luved the character description,

ammy is very diff here, but looking forward to AR, and AN relationship in ths story.

The first part was superb!!!!

U described the family atmosphere really very well,

ammy still the immature one so cuteee,

My fav part RM meeting was so good and very cute,

hayye Rahul tho pehle mulakat mein hi sapne dekhne laga hai😳😆

actually their convo was also funny, luved how rahul jst stoped seeing muski,

Ar and AN feelings were also very well described

AN still trying to get to know eachother

It was an awesome part

thanx for the pm,

looking forward to the next part plz cont soon

luv

pari😊

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it......Awesum..................new one i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo excited......................... I loved every character....Armaan Ridzi Nikki Abhi..Ammanji Abbaji...Rahul....sweetest....also Muskaan.....

The video was sooooooooooooo nice.....the song the ...omg the whole ff is rocking.......

& dont even think of discontinuing.......i loved it............

continue sooooooon.........Pm me...............

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

hey imane..i loved the new concept of joint family...the first part was GREAT as usuall..loved the first part..RM interaction was sooo CUTE..also loved AR and AN...Nikki the filmi girl..lol..well i m reallly ecited to read more parts...please continue soon and thank u sooo much for the pm