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Posted: 15 years ago
omggggg sajan were chooo cute
awesome update
loved it
continue very very soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi Maisha,
nice part.
now sjaninas r also happy.
great update.
and congo u finished 50 parts.


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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. waiting for the next part, continue soon. thanks for the pm. sajan were too good.
Edited by aamirkhanfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt..!!
loved sajan part a lot..
cont soon..
thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt dear
loved it
nice trick to hide shoes
thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome ud
loved it
ples cont soon n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantastic Update!!
Samrat is TTTOOO cute!!!
u know i was singing that same song before reading this part.
Its an awesome song!!
Plzzz continue soon!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
he nice update
thanks for pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear nyce update....
cont soon...thnkzzz 4 da pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=51
all of them brought riddhima home..musskan n anjali did the arti....after that riddhima came in....then it was time everyone to go home..all of them went home..only three brothers n riddhima were late..
r=ma bohot thak gayi hu.....
s=bhabi ap jake aaram kijiye..bhai ap bhi jayiye...
ar=ha..tum dono bhi sojao...
m=ek minute sam....
s=oh ha....
they bought a gift for riddhima..
s=bhabi ye apke liye...
m=hum donoki taraf se....
r=ye kya ha????
m=ap khudhi dekhiye......
riddhima opened it n saw a pic of her with sayank which was shot on the mehendi day....
r=are ye...bohot hi pyaara ha gift ha...thank you both!!!
m=apko pasand aya..
s=yehi humhe accha laga
ar=abhi gud nite...i'm really tired...
r=gud nite...
AR went to there room..n sayank went to there rooms..
nupur...
nupur was very happy....she was smiling dancing...enjoying....n then she jumped on the bed...
n=by god..mujhe to yakeen hi nahi horaha ha ke uss saru akru mayank ne apni dil ki baat kehdi..aur kaha to kaise?? ekdam romantic style se...thanks god..mujhe mera pyaar dene keliye..par ridzy di ko bola hi nahi ye baat..abhi bol du????? nahi budhu..abhi nhe ma disturb anhi kar sakti..kaal jab pakferokeliye ayengi tab bata dungi.....par mujhe abhi mayank se baat karni ha.....
mayank..
m=thank god aj nupur se finally bol diya..kitna mushkil ha kisiko propose karna....abhi so jaata hu..booht thak gaya...
he throws his cell on the bed n also jumps on the bed n in a minute falls asleep....
nupur takes the cell n calls maaynk...but as our darling mayank was sleeping he wasnt picking it...mayank was in deep sleep....
n=uffo....ye phone kyu nahi utha raha ha?????? kkabse baj raha ha.....phirse kari hu...
after trying many times nupur gave up....
n=thik ha.,....nahi uthata ha to na uthaya!!! mujhe bhi usse bat nahi karni ha....
gunjan...
gunjan was still blushing n feeling samrat's words..she was opening her jewelerys n thing about samrat...
g=samrat....ye ma sirf samrat ke bareme kyu soch rahihu????? shayed kyuki woh mujhse sochne par majboor karraha ha....uske haar bate..har ehsaas..mujhe uske lie sochnepar majboor karraha ha...lekin kyu??? aur samrat bhi to kuch nahi bolta..ke uske dil me saaf saaf ha kya???kab bolega????
AR
riddhima n armaan came in the room...
r=armaan itna andhera kyu ha???
a=kyuki mane tumhare lie surprise plan kia ha.....
r=tumhara surprise ma kya andhereme dekhungi???
a=ek minute..lights on karta hu....
he turns the lights on...riddhima's eyes falls on the walss...n doesnt move from there as...she seess..Image13.png image by kaarox6k4q6br1-1.jpg image by amby-030
n many other pics of her.....
r=armaan ye sab??? tumne kia??????
a=mera kamra ha...humari tasveere ha..to manehi kia hoga na...
r=par.....
a=hum donoke sath betaye hue har palko ma yaadgar banake rakhna chahta hu....
r=armaan..i love u...
n she hugss him..
a=i love u too.....
r=ye sari tasveere bohot hi acchi ha.....mere khudke pass shayed itni tasveere meri khudki nahi ha..jeetneki yaha ha...
a=tumhara sab kuch ab yahi par milega...
saying he comes closer to her but riddhima smiles n pushes him back n sits on the bed...
a=are..ye kya??? come on yaar..ab to mana maat karo..i'm your pati yaar..
he also sits beside her...
r=meri marzi..aur tum ladkoko aur kuch sujhta nahi kya???
a=are ma baki ladka thori na hu ma to tumhara pati hu.....
r=accha ye sab chodo ye baato hum honeymoon pe kaha jayenge?????
a=abhi tak socha nahi...
r=kyu?????
a=kyuki...do din phirse hospitals..patients...appointments..surgerys is bareme socha anhi riddhima par you dont worry ma manage kar lunga aur thorihi din me tumhe leke jaunga..
riddhima saw that he was trying his best to take her out but was tiierd of his work.,...n she smiled
r=armaan..ma mazak karrahi thi....mane tumse esehi kaha..tumhe kya lagta ha agar tum abhi kahoge to ma ja sakungi??? nahi aur tumhe bhi jane nahi dungi..kyuki hum doctors ha..humare lie humara kaam pehle ha..rite???
a=rite...
then armaan kissed her forhead n riddhima rested her head oon his chest..n further..the lights off....
next morning...
nupur was very angry that she has been trying mayank sicne the night but he wasnt picking it....
n=samajhta kya ha??? mera phone nahi tuhata?? isse to ma....
she was going to throw the phone when gunjan came...
g=di kya karrahiho??????
n=kuch nahi...
g=itne gusse me kyu ho?????
n=accha dikh raha ha kya?????
g=ha..
n=jisko dikhna chahiye pata nahi woh kaha jake maar gaya!!!!
g=di kiski bat karrahiho???
n=kisiki nahi..
g=accha thori der me di aur jiju pakfereke liye atehi honge tayyar hojau
n=thik ha....
mayank...
he woke up very slowly..
m=bohot dinoke baad aj kitni acchi neend se jaga hu...warna nupur ne to sab kuch bechan karke rakkha tha!!
the he got up..freshenup n came to his cell....n saw...
m=oh no!!!! 50 missed calls...kiske ha??? NUPUR???????????????mayank tuto gaya..teri lovestory ke beginning ke din hi nupur gussa????
riddhima had done the pooja...while armaan n samrat had also been ready....
s=good morning...
r=gud morning...mayank kaha ha???
s=atahi hoga....bhabi apko pakferokeliye nahi jaana kya???
r=ha..aur tum dono bhi ayoge mere aur armaan ke sath...
s=bhabi hum???
r=ha..mom ne bola ha..so come on..ready hojao...
s=thik ha..bhabi.....
sharma mansion....
nupur came down wearing a blue salwar kamiz...gunjan was wearing pink n was in the kitchen...thent he door bell rang...nupur ran n opened it....it was riddhima..she was wearing this....
she hugged her sis n jiju
n=ayiye na di.....jiju plzz come
they went in...
n=hi sam....
s=he nupzz...
m=hi nupur....
seeing mayank nupur left from there...
s=isse kya hua???
m=abhi aya......
m=nupur meri baat to suno......
n=tumhe mujhse baat karneki fursaat milgayi???
m=esa nahi ha..kaal raatko ma sogaya tha isiliye...nahi utha paya subhaha jab dekhha to tumhare misscalls mile par jab caal kia to tumne nahi uthaya...
n=woh..thora gusseme thi....
m=abhi nahi ho?????
n=nahi........
m=so hug???
n=abhi nahi...sabke samne nahi badme....
m=par...
n=chupp...
shilpa=kaisi ho riddhima???
r=ma mai bilkul thik hu....par gunjan kaha ha???
n=aur kaaha kitchen me..ma bulati hu...
s=nupur ma jaata ha..
n=sure...
he went to the kitchen n saw gunjan was making roti..her hand was in the aata...n she didnt see samrat...her back was facing him...samrat sometime stareed at her from the door..he was lost in her...memerized in her beauty then slowly approached to her..n was very close to her.....she still didnt notice him....then samrat saw gunjan;s hair was coming on her face n she was trying to move it but for her hands couldnt...samrat came forward n blew them....by now gunjan realized his feeling..she turned n saw samrat standing so close that there noses were touching..n lips were just not inches far...both were lost.....after sometime gunjan came into sense n turned her face n moved aside...
g=tum..tum kab aye samrat?????
s=patanahi....tumhe dekke bhul gaya.....sabkuck
gunjan blushes..
then mayank n nupur comes
n=samrat tumto usse bulane aye the na??? aur khudhi baat karne laggaye?????
s=ab...sorry...
n=gunjan jake hath saaf karle....
s=nupur washroom....
g=ma dikhati hu.....
sajan went
n=chalo..meri maadat karo...ye khana bahar lena ha...
m=ma????
n=chupop chap karo....
m=pehle hug karo......
n=mayank....
m=nahi...
n=thik ha..akhe band karo....
m=ok..
mayank cllosed his eyes n raised his hands..instead of hugging nupur kissed him on his cheeks n ran away....
m=woh!!!!

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