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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Navi_44

hey just read ur pm..and came here

loved teh intro..its really good..
please continue..if u have a pm list..add me to it :)



Hey dear,

Awww thanks im glad u liked it! will make a pm list soon😆😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainab.A

hey i like ur story...:)
plz PM me when u update..



Hey Thankz soooo much for reading it! will update soon and PM u😉

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Intro Part on Page 1 recap:

The Maliks in Bangalore... U are introduces to Sid, Naina, rahul, Armaan, Riddhima malik... They share a very cute family bond, its Sid-naina's Bday!

Yuvi shares an amzing bond with his bro atul and bhabhi anjie aswell and his angel, sweetheart anu...

Tamanna is Shub-keerti's daughter and loves her parents alot... she loves prayers etc.

Tia is a sweet childlike personality who gets irritated if her sleep is broken😆😆

Muskaan is a sweet girl living with her two year old daughter siya... she's just moved to mumbai😊

Made a VM for this FF and a Banner!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJUPmfYI944[/YOUTUBE]

Life' Destiny' Love

Tum Miley


Part 1- Lifestyles & Pehli Mulaakat😳

Bangalore' next morning you see armaan, rahul, ridzi, sid, naina and dadi sitting at the table.

"Bachon, aaj tussi sab jaa rahe ho? Saal me ek dafaa to muskil se aate ho aur ab'" she looks sad.

"daadi, aayenge na waapis" armaan says and goes to hug her.

"haan haan tum logon ka pata hai mujhe, pehle to sid aur naina har mahine aate the lekin ab tum teeno ki tarhan doctor ban gaye hain to ab to daadi ko koi nahi dekhega" she says pouting like a child, all of them were smiling and looking at one another'

"daadi, hum doctors ban gaye to kya? Aapko to pata hai na, main thori zyaada time wahan tikne waala hoon" sid says with a smile and hugs her, she smiles and hits his head "pagla" and the rest look at him angrily "SID" they all say in unison.

"kya??" he says innocently.

"Dude.. once u enter sanjeevani No shararat" rahul laughs and sid looks stressed.

"Bhai aap bhi kya bozo ko samjhaa rahe ho? Wo thori na samjhega" naina smirks and teases him, sid runs to catch her but she gets up and starts running'

"kya kaha??? Bozo kaha, ruk tu aaj to main tujhe, chutki' ruk chutki"

"Bozo tune ek baar phirse mujhe chutki kaha na" she says still running'

"aaj to teri kher nahi"

"Bhai' Big bro bachaaaaooo"

"sid' SID, RUK JAA" armaan shouts.

"no big bro always aap usse hi support karte ho" sid says pouting while naina hides behind armaan.

"Okay' continue, gift nahi chahiye to no probs" he says acting and suddenly sid's face lightens up and so does nainas.

"Oh god I forgot' Big bro mera gift" naina says.

"Nahi pehle mera" sid pushes her.

"nahi mera"

"Mera"

"mear" they continue arguing while ridzi and rahul stand and laugh at armaans state.

"CHUP' dono ko gift milega theekh hai" he says and they stand like disciplined children.

"armaan main soch raha tha, in dono ka sanjeevani me kya ho? You knw how strict they are there?" rahul says and sid-naina give eachother killer looks.

"I know, meri bhi yehi tension hai, plz tum dono kal sanjeevani me yeh childish behaviour matt karna okay" armaan says and they nodd there heads like good children, then after a serious moment "Ab gift do na big bro" naina says and they all laugh, he takes them outside and shows them there gifts, he hand both the keys of there brand new Ferraris' naina gets a yellow and sid a red' they both are over excited, they have a huge smile on there face and rush to there cars.

"OMG big bro this is the bestest gift! Oh thank you" naina rushes back and hugs him.

"ya, this is simply a beauty" sid says and hugs him, armaan smiles.

"maine socha tum dono ab 21 ho chuke ho so freedom key ke saath car ki key bhi" he laughs.

"kool, ab hum drive pe jaayein?" naina and sid look at eachother smirking.

"uh uh' itni jaldi nahi" he holds them back "kal tum dono ki cars ka license bhi aajaayega aur hum Mumbai bhi chale jaayenge, then you can test drive!" he tells them and they moan'

**********

Muskaan gets up in the morning and tries to settle down, she goes shopping with siya' she finally gets in some furniture' a bed, a couch' a swing' kitchen stuff' and some toys for siya' at night muskaan was exhausted and at eight PM she took siya and fell on her bed for some sleep.

**********

The maliks were back in Mumbai, naina was in her room getting bored, she gets a call.

"haan, cool get there me coming" she says smiling, and gets up she changes into a mini dress and leaves. Ridzi was sitting and reading her magazine while suhaan played around.

"arre naina kahan chali?" ridzi asks.

"Bhabz im going to the Disc, big bro se kehdena main late hoongi, see ya" she goes out and ridzi nodds her head.

"Okay" ridzi shouts out still reading her magazine, just then sid comes out on the fone.

"yeah dude aa raha hoon" he says and ridzi smiles.

"Twins hain to dono ek hi time pe bahar jaate hain" she smiles to herself.

"bhabz'" he starts but she talks in between.

"Boldoongi'" she says and he smiles and goes to hug her.

"Luv u bhabz" he says and rushes out.

***********

Tia was sitting with abhi-nikki and watching a movie, she was eating chocolate because the suspense was killing so she was biting her chocolate and watching intensely, abhi-nikki see her and smile'

"Mama a b kya hoga??? Mama agar usne unki jaan leli to?" she asks innocently worried about the movie.

"baccha its just a movie, apni mama ki tarhan behave matt karo" abhi says with a smile, his hand on tias head.

"dada tia is not a baccha" she says sweetly pouting.

"Kya kaha tumne?? Main kaise behave karti thi?" nikki asks abhi angrily and he gets worried.

"who' umm, main to bas' "

"tumhe main abhi dikhaati hoon" she gets up and he runs, tia watches them with love.

"Thank you god ke aapne tia ke parents ko itna sweet banaya' kitna love karte hai na ek doosre se? god tia ko bhi mamma-dadda jaisa love chahiye, but not now, abhi tia ko fully doctor banna hai phir okay" she says looking up with a smile.

**********

Tamanna was sitting in her room and looking out the window at the moon'

"jab bhi chand ko dekhti hoon aisa lagta hai koi chehra dikh raha hai' lekin dhundhla saa, kab dikhaao ge uska asli chehra mujhe?" she asks sweetly just then her mother enters.

"beta' yahan ho tum? Kya hua? Kya dekh rahi thi?' keerti asks.

"Kuch nahi maa, bas chand ko dekh rahi thi"

"Accha, waise tumhe sona nahi hai? Kal jaldi uthna hai yaad hai na?"

"Ofcourse maa, kitne time se iss waqt ka wait kiya hai maine' ab late thori na hoongi"

"Good, chal soja, kal subha ko main tujhe drop kardoongi okay" she says and moves her hand through tamz hair and leaves, tamanna smiles and then turns to the moon.

"ab main so jaati hoon, bohot late horahi hai, jaldhi mujhe uska chehra dikhaadena okay" she smiles and turns to leave when she hears a bang and looks down, there was a jeep that banged into the tree, she looks down worried, she couldn't see who it was but it was sid and he was drunk, she just nodds her head "aaj kal ke larke apne maa baap ki izzat mitti me milaane pe tule hote hain, issh I hate these kind of boys" she says to herself and goes to sleep.

**********

Yuvi was finally taking the flight, it was a late night flight insisted but AA.

Anjie had tears in her eyes "apna khayal rakhna, aur roz phone karna, zyaada koi se involve matt hona aur khana time pe khaana aur'" she wouldn't stop so yuvi cuts her.

"Sab karloonga bhabhi! Bas aap apna khayal rakhna, bhayya ka dhyaan rakhna aur meri sweetheart ka bhi! Main sambhaal loonga" he says and hugs her then hugs atul.

"bhayya, chill main thori na moon pe jaa raha hoon"{ he jokes while atul keeps hugging.

"bhayya aap mere champ bhai hai na? to bas" he says and atul feels down.

"haan ek zamaane me champ tha, kitna time hua yeh word sunne huye" he was getting emotional once again.

"Oh yess, aapke best buddy armaan ke mun se sunne ko taras gaye hain' bhayya ek din yeh intezaar khatam hoga aur aap miloge, okay! Now chill aur apna khayal rakhna, okay, bye" he finally leaves with all three of his family members crying.

'aapko aur bhabhi ko main phirse Mumbai zaroor le aaoonga, dekhna" he says to himself as he gets in the plane.

************

Next day;

5:30am muskaan gets up and offs her alarm, she was so tired but no choice she had to leave siya to her new cretche aswell and then go to the hospital, it was her first day so she wanted to be very early unlike before, if it was two years ago she was always a late cumer, but now things had changed, everything had changed.

"Ole meli baby ab school jaayegi na? chalo jaldi jaldi uth jaao" she says as siya looks at her and tries to sleep again.

At 6am both mother daughter were ready and muskaan leaves with her, she was really nervous for siya' this was the first time she was going to leave her sumwhere all alone' she was really worried but as she reached the cretche her worries were removed, siya was getting along really well with the care takers and the children, muskaan was happy to see her play there with the children, she watched her for sumtime then left for hospital which was like five minutes walk from here, that was the best part of the cretche, when she booked siya in this was the thing she actually looked at' she cud be with her anytime of the day!

On the other hand, Yuvi was jogging, he's new flat in Mumbai wasn't too far from the hospital aswell but he needed to get a bike, it was on his top list' while jogging he bumped into muskaan who was busy checking her purse for the car key'

"oops im so sorry, actually main.."he starts.

"nahi galati merit hi, im sorry" she says and they both share smiles and start to move then turn back "kya aap jaanti hain sanjeevani kahan hai?" they both asks together and then laugh.

"aap sanjeevani kyun jaa rahi thi?" he asks after the laughter session.

"Im a doctor" she says and he smiles.

"OH wow, im a new intern there" he says and she smiles.

"that's nice, im Dr. Muskaan chadda" she brings her hand forward.

"Nice name, im Yuvraj Joshi" he says and they shake, then yuvi goes back to shower while muski goes to sanj.

************

Rahul-Armaan and Riddhima are at the breakfast table' they look at the time once again.

"Oh no yeh sid aur naina, there gonna get late" ridzi says.

"Its okay, aa rahe hain" armaan says ridzi shoots him a pierced glance.

"armaan sanjeevani hospital hai aur agar mere interns late huye to main unhe punishment doongi" she says and rahul smiles.

"OMG nayi gabbar' remember armaan jab hum interns the tab Dr. Keerti urf Hitler se kitna darte the" he laughs and armaan joins in then stops when ridzi looks at rahul and he gets worried.

"Yaad rakhna main bohot acchi gabbar banoongi" she smirks and they look worried "anyways main to chali I have to get all the paper work ready and interns ka wait bhi to karna hai, plz in dono ko jaldi le aawo" she says and gets up to leave "armaan tum suhaan ko cretche chordoge na?" she asks and armaan says yess and she leaves.

After some time The sleepy heads come down' rahul laughs at there state, they were still in PJs and uncombed hair, naina was holding her head and sid was rubbing his eyes, rahul laughs and armaan looks worried "aaj to inn dono ki lagne waali hai" he says and rahul laughs more "haan totally lagne waali hai"

"tum dono ab tak tayar nahi huye?" armaan asks.

"Big bro, mera sar bohot dukh raha hai" naina says.

"haan haan big bro ne kaha tha na late night parties pe drink karo" sid says.

"U shut up bozo" she says and they both look at eachother irritated.

"tum dono ab bachon ki tarhan larna band karo and get ready, u have a long day to go" he says.

"Big bro cant we just bunk it today? Mera sar bohot dukh raha hai" naina says and rahul laughs.,

"ya sure, internship ka pehla din bunk" he laughs.

"tum dono ko yeh sab mazaak lagta hai?" armaan asks sternly maybe first time in his life was he stern to them "This is a hospital tumhaari school nahi jo subject accha nahi laga to bunk kardiya! This is serious business guys, ab tum dono ko serious and mature behave karna chahiye after all you are going to be doctors" he says and they look 'not interested' there heads were down on the table.

"okay heres the deal' job hi dus minute me tayar hoke aata hai gets to drive the Ferrari" he says and they both jump up and vanish.

**********

Sanjeevani

Muskaan was looking at the hospital' she was walking around' finally she goes to the front desk.

Its sister lovely "hi sister, I was looking for Dr. maliks cabin" she says and sister lovely looks at her from top to bottom.

"helloJi, kaise ho ji?" she says and muskaan looks a little annoyed by the behaviour.

"Dr malik?" she asks again as she would run late.

"wo kya hai na hum aise to kissi ko info dede nahi lekin aap ache ghar ki lagti hain'" muskaan cuts her in between.

"Im dr. muskaan chadda from US" she says maybe it would help, lovely looks at and jumps up.

"Haaye US se? mainu bhi jaana hai US, wahan bohot accha hota hoga na> saaf road, dollar me kamaayi aur handsome munde" she continues blabbering and muski gets irritated.

"Dekhiye aap mujhe bataa rahi hain ya kissi aur se poochoon?" she says irritated and lovely also looks irritated.

"Bataa to deti lekin yahan 3 Dr. Maliks hain aur do aur aaj join kar rahe hain" she says making faces and muski had enuf.

"OMG paanh dr. maliks? Ab mujhe kisse milna tha? Hayyo rabba wo email maine kithe rakha? Uska initial kyat ha?" she thinks and then decides to find out herself.

*********

Sid and naina decide to race and I tell you they were rough, sid takes over smartly by the shortcut and naina almost bumps into an old man that was crossing the road' yuvi who was jogging, saves the man and naina turns the car and it hits the tree' she gets out and looks at her car, she feels really bad and kicks the car.

"Oh madam, dikhta nahi hai kya? Abhi aap inki jaan leleti" he says and she looks at him surprised.

"ek to tumhaari wajah se main race haar gayi, dekh nahi sakhte ke gaari aa rahi hai?" she shouts at the old man.

"aise baat karte hain buzurgon se? and btw galati tumhaari thi" he says and she looks at him irritatedv"aise kya dekhrahi ho? Maafi maango" he says and she smirks.

"very funny, Naina malik aur maafi?" she smirks and he looks irritated.

"maafi to tumhe maangni hi hoga' jaldi maango" he says and she just looks away and starts phoning but he comes close and snatches the phone.

"Miss Attitude, apna attitude kissi aur ko dikhaana samjhi! Ab jaldi maafi maango warna" he says and she looks at him angrily, they have a angry eyelock.

"warna kya?" she asks.

"warna accha nahi hoga, yahan koi tumhe bachaane nahi waala so jaldi maafi maango and you get your phone" he says and she looks annoyed, she was fuming with anger.

"naak itna matt phulaao phat jaayega" he teases and she gets more irritated.

"Sorry" she says and snatches her phone, he smirks and she looks irritated and leaves.

************

All the interns had arrived, tammanna was way early, yuvi was next, tia came with keerti so she was also before time, they were sitting in the hall' rahul enters with naina and sid and ridzi gives them a stern look, they take there seats. Yuvi looks at naina and smirks but she doesn't see him.

Muskaan also comes there and decides to sit and wait for the speech to finish because she knows Dr Riddhima malik is here so she might be the right person' Rahul was looking around and notices muskaan, she was just getting bored with the speech, just like him they had already gone through it so it sounded very boring' he started staring at her as her curly hair flew with the cool breeze actually it was the fan, everytime it turned to her her hair flew and she liked it, she would smile, he was just watching her, he thought she was also an intern. She finally got fed up and decided to take a walk outside till Dr malik is free' she was walking in the garden and rahul was following, he plucks a rose for her and she sees it.

"OMG yeh kya kiya aapne? Bechaare rose ki life leli? How could u do that?" she asks him irritated and he smiles at her cuteness.

"Main to'"

"Main to kya? Jaanti hoon kya kahoge' rose hi to hai, but for your kind information ek rose ki bhi life hoti hai it's a living creature and u just killed it" she says and he looks confused, but decides to surrender.

"Okay im sorry" he says and she makes a confident face "Miss' Naam kya bataya?" he asks, she just looks at him and walks away with a nodd.

"naam to bataati jaao! Miss Rose'" he shouts but she was gone "Hmmm rose, not bad waise bhi rose jaisi to dikhti hai" he thinks with a smile.

***********

after the lecture all interns are at the nurse station' riddhima was going to come and give then duties in ten minutes so they had time to chat with eachother, naina sees yuvi and gives him dirty looks.

"Hi miss attitude' waise I didn't think aap doctor ho sakhti hain' I mean jo doosron ki life lene pe tuli ho wo jaan bachaayi gi kaise?" he grins and she looks at him through pierced eyes.

"Mr fatichar' I don't care tum mere baare me kya sochte ho get that? And zyaada bakwas ki na to' accha nahi hoga" she tells him sternly and walks away he smiles.

**********

A ward boy bumps tia by mistake as he trips over something.

"Huh, How dare you??? bloody ward boy! How dare u touch tia?" she shouts and keeps arguing, sid was watching this and smiling, he goes to her.

"excuse me' problem kya hai?"

"Isne' issne tia ko touch kiya" she says annoyed.

"Oho, to tia isko waapis touch karle hisaab barabar" he says and she looks irritated.

"Tia ko aisa mazaak pasand nahi" she says irritated and he smiles.

"par sid ko tia bohot pasand hai" he says and she looks at him then smiles, they both hug.

"How are u?? its been ages since we met"

"I know america jaake I didn't get in touch with anyone' to tum doctor kaise bani?" he asks surprised.

"waise hi jaise tum banne" she laughs "God school time me kitna mazaa aata than a? oh sid Tia missed u soooo much" she says and hugs him again, tamz was standing at a distance "God jaanti bhi nahi aur abhi se flirting" she looks surprised.

"I also missed my best friend" he says then she starts looking at his hair etc.

"God sid tum itne change kaise hogaye?? Remember school me tum bilkul dihaati lagte the, that bali and all" she laughs and he looks around.

"Shhh tia koi sunlega, I have a reputation u knw and besides tab main chota tha'" he says and she smiles.

"Anyways bohot handsome lag rahe ho" she says and moves her hand on his hair.

"Okay Interns so ready for your first day?" ridzi asks as she comes, they all say yes.

***********

Okay guys that was part one' I know it was like just about the meetings but that's the main part right? Since the name is tum miley its about how all of there lives change after this meeting! Hope u liked this part! Will update it by Friday or latest Monday!

If u liked this part plz hit the LIKE button!

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Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome Part Nadz!! Im loving it!!

Ms. Rose hayye.. I love Rahul and Muskaan too much!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Awesome Part Nadz!! Im loving it!!

Ms. Rose hayye.. I love Rahul and Muskaan too much!!!



Hey sweets😃

Im jst glad u liked it😛 lolz yeah i was wrecking my brains to think of sumthing unique😆😆 i hope that was unique😆😆 at first was gonna make them meet like casual doctors but then i thought if its tum miley it shud be hatke na😆😆 start with a fight😆😆 im jst glad u liked it😛

Luv

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mohit_aggarwal

hey plz pm me wen u cont



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nadz..awesome part...
I just loved the Sid-Naina fight again..😆..lol..but u noe i actually wntd em a couple 1st wen i saw d new promo's..😉..lol..n but they're siblings so atleast dey get some scenes..!..nice..n they were late again..rofl..but they got cars..wow..n they were actually planning to bunk! 😆
Sid met wid an accident..n near Tamanna's house?..hehe..
Muskaan n Yuvi meet..nice..i wonder if dey'll become frndz...
Naina was racing wid Sid n almost injured a man..thats bad..bt Yuvi came to the rescue..!
So Sid and Tia know each other..nice..but Tamanna got angry seeing them flirt..😆
Yuvi and Naina were both not happy when dey saw each other in Sanjeevani..lets c how they cope wid it..!
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
Edited by aish_punk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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love it!! =)
could i be added to the PM list, please?
thanks,
Sab
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Originally posted by: Sab93

love it!! =)

could i be added to the PM list, please?
thanks,
Sab



Aww Thanks!

and ofcourse😃 welcome😉

luv
nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwies!! really cute!1 i lvoe naina-yuvi (duh..lolz) and rahul musk- and sid tia sooo much!!
let me get this straighgt though...tia is shubh and keertis daughter, and how are abhi-nikki related to her...and tamanna is whose daughter? lozl...kinda confused ..😆
BTW: love the nick names..😆
Miss attitude, Miss rose, Mr Fatichar, Bozo😆😆
Edited by *payal_15* - 16 years ago

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