Golmaal(AK, AR, SD, PH, KA) Part-11 PG 24 03/05 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part

i really liked the way u introduced anjali and the way she described her relationship with her friends and her mom cant wait till she comes to india.the charachter sketch of all the three families was really good.cant wait 2 read the next part.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2


"Anju… my pumkin, chunky chocolate Happy Birthday Baccha" Kussum entered into her darling daughters room

"Thanks mom" anjali said in her usual chirpy voice "my gift" she extended her hands towards Kusum.

"here" kusum put a packed gift in her hands "and the party is at 7 in the evening so you better be ready by 6:30 I don't want the guest to wait"

"mom wasn't that supposed to be a surprise" anjali whined

"well it would have been dear if you had not done all the preparations by yourself.. and that buddy of yours would have filled the house with flowers as per your request last night" kusum said in an as a matter of fact tone.

Anjali frowned "mom get off saggy he is the best"

"no darling I don't deny the fact he is the best but I also emphasize on the fact he is the right choice for your life partner"

"mom don't start it again"

"no anjali this is the last time I am asking you get married to your sagar" Kusum ordered her 20 year old

"mom please I quit" Anjali walked into the bathroom and shut the door behind her.

Again today saggy's mom Mrs sindoora singh the match maker must have called mom and asked her my hand, Sin aunty has a one track mind ever since she has seen me she has wanted that I become her daughter in law, she had first targeted me for BB but BB chose AD and now its saggy and this isn't the first time it has happened, No matter how many times me and saggy had said no for this but parents will be parents through out their lives.

Even though aniket uncle is cool but he has no control over his wife, or rather should I say his home minister. Sin aunty completely controls ani uncle, but they do make a cute couple and they both love me like hell. But I don't know how they would react when they would know about by Nach preparations they hardly can guess.

"Saggy you are here just wait till I finish my breakfast" Anjali gobbled the glass of milk and ran to hug Sagar Singh her buddy "boy oh boy.. you are late again and where is my gift" she questioned

"one at a time ann… uff well your gift is the party which I am sponsoring tonight and the special gift would be" he winked at her "I booked your tickets for India You are leaving tomorrow night" he whispered in her ears

"really" she screamed in happiness and hugged him again "buddy you are the best"

"you too and you know I will be there after a month so you will only have to be alone for a month and the rest of the 5 months I would be there 24*7 with you" he hugged her back

"sagar beta tum dono ka milaap khatam ho gaya ho toh preparation kare" kusum asked them

"mom humne saari preparations ker li hai ab bus party shuru hone ki der hai" saggy touched kussums feet and took her aashirwad.

"ji mom aap tension mat lo uske liye ann hai naa" saggy pulled anjali's leg

"bus ab tum aa gaye ho toh kya tension hai" kusum smiled at sagar

At the rocking Party of Anjali Kapoor

Anjali was too busy with saggy and her friends AD, BB Ansh, Yuggie, Virnda, Jaaz and Shabbo. She hardly had the time to notice that her mom was in serious discussions with her sin aunty, ani uncle, kumkum aunty and prince charming discussing something really important.

"Attention everyone" prince charming shouted at the top of his voice.

Anjali and sagar who were dancing with others also turned to see what was going onn

"On the occasion of my Jaanu's birthday I take the pleasure of herby announcing her engagement with her best buddy saggy"

Anjali and Sagar stared at each other in horror where as there friend group looked really pleased as the other three were already couples. "Jaan come here" sumit called anjali towards him "saggy tum bhi" then he looked at sagar

" nahi uncle I am ok here" sagar spoke

"are bhai tum dono waise toh nahi sharamate ab kya hua hai??" sumit caught their hands and dragged them to the centre.

"ab yeh dono formally rings badal lenge" aniket called out, anjali and sagar were forced to exchange rings in the presence of others and now they were officially engaged.

4 hours later:

Anjali and sagar walked on the beach shore "yeh kya ho gaya" sagar said in a dreamy voice "koi humari dosti nahi samaj paya ann"

"haan saggy muje bahut bura lag raha hai" she said in tears

"Ann mein vada karta hoon ki aage kuch bhi nahi hoga jo humare parents karna chahte the voh ker chuke hai but aur nahi…. Ab wipe ur tears and lets pack ur bags tumhe kal India jana hai na.. aur yeh humesha yaad rakhna ki I will always be there for you as a friend"

At the residence of Aniket and Sindoora Singh Canada-

"chalo accha hua ab meri beti ko kabhi unn sawaalon ka jawab nahi dena padega jo mujh se pooche gaye the" kkusum said "koi bhi meri aur sumit ki dosti nahi samaj paya tha tab.. ab being a mother maine apni beti ko uss situation se bacha liya hai"

"kusum control urself" sindoora said "ab dekho yeh toh hona tha naa mujhe to anjali uss din se pasad hai jis din voh iss duniya mein aayi… haan aur ab dekho kal anjali London dancing school jaa rahi hai 6 months ke liye and hum kitne khush hai uske liye"

"haan sindoora… anjali London jaa rahi hai … bus voh duniya mein kahin bhi jaaye India ko chod ke mein nahi chahti ki mere ateeth ki parchaye bhi meri beti per padhe" kussum said " aaj poore 20 saal ho gaye meine apne pati, behen, dever, saas aur beton ko nahi dekha.. bus itna pata hai mera angad ek bahut bada rockstar hai… bahut accha gata hai aur voh sab log aaj bhi acche hai" kussum said in tears

"kabhi kabhi mujhe bahut darr lagta hai kkusum… agar anjali ko yeh sach pata chal gaya ki uska ek poora parivaar hai do bhai hai jo usse palkon per bitha ke rakhege aur ek aise family jiski voh ek lauti beti hai tab kya hoga" sumit said

"nahi sumit mein unn logon ke liye 20 saal pehle hi mer chuki hoon aur uske baad kuch nahi baccha hai" kusum ended her talks.

Kapoor Residence Canada

"India here I come I can't wait anymore" anjali slept dreaming about her venture in India not knowing the stars had just changed their direction

The Kapoor Mansion India:

"Bhai aaj 10 baje ki press conference hai humare naye film ke release ki and phir 2 baje lunch party hai distributors ke saath" dk said as he bit into his sandwich

"hmm DK press conference ke liye tum chale jao mein aaj Mr Yash se milne jaa raha hoon unko ek nayi script mili hai" abhay said

"but bhai abhi toh hum 4 films release per hai ab ek aur bas karo na bhai"

Abhay looked at Dk and then got up form the table and silently walked out of the house "Dushyant tum baar baar usse yaad kyoun dilate ho ki" devyani scolded her youger son

"maa ab yeh sab aur kitne saal bhai maan kyoun nahi lete ki kusum bhabhi kabhi wapas nahi aayegi" Dk spoke in a sad tone

There was silence in the kapoor household now angad who had just woken up walked down to the breakfast table and ate his breakfast silently

"are angad agle hafte tera show hai naa" devyani asked

"hmm dadi and iss baar bhi papa nahi aayege" angad said

"are kaise nahi aayega voh mein tujhe promise karti hoon ki voh zaroor aayega" devyani said

Angad smiled at his dadi she knew how to cheer him up but he knew the bitter truth " dadi aap yeh promise phele bhi bahut baar ker chuki hain" he said "chachi ma mein rehersals ke liye jaa raha hoon"

"angad yaad hai naa tujhe aaj shyam ko party hai ghar per" disha reminded him

Angad nodded and walked out of the house "maaji ab iss ghar mein koi pari hi saari changes ker sakti hai"

"hmm pari toh mein chahti thi.. mein chahti thi ki iss ghar mein ek beti aaye per jo kuch bhi hua usse koi nahi bhula sakta" devyani signed


I really hope you enjoyed this part... please give sincere comments even if you don't like it.

preview: anjali kapoor finally o her way to India ... and the other characters come into picture



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!
i loved this part!
plzz continue sooon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainab.A

hey!<br>i loved this part!<br>plzz continue sooon!<br>



thanks a ton for the appriciation
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part....
forced engagement... fell sad 4 Anjali & Sagar.... but kusum was right on her stance...
just a small request..... can u plz write the dialogues in eng only....
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

nice part....<br>forced engagement... fell sad 4 Anjali & Sagar.... but kusum was right on her stance...<br>just a small request..... can u plz write the dialogues in eng only....<br>continue soon<br>



Thanks a ton you are one of my few regular readers since the time i have written my first fanfic and i am sure i will write the dialogues in English

anjali and sagars forced engagement will land the others in a soup just wait and watch 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i just read the first part and now the secon dthey are booth great... continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank You Very Much .Awesome Part Poor Anjali ..

Thank You for this part .
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks i will 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey i just read the first part and now the secon dthey are booth great... continue soon..



thanks i am happy u liked it

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