MJHT FF:SARGAM(rhythm of love)part:12 uptd(oct 30) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
do add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA

HEY!!! hieeeeeeee!!!!
Was waiting for ur 1st part for such a lonnnng time.............😊
Loved Samrat Nupur dialogues... thnxx me too loved them....
Bhai behen ho toh bilkul inke tarah........ u see me nd mah bro...
I was laughing so much while reading this update... aap hassey humey khushi hui..:)😊
It was fun filled and real cute....
Update soon..Thnx for the pm and pm me in the future too...will do so....
I'm waiting for it desperately.....😊
Loads of love
Tina
muuah!!!! take care:)

Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: angel.ridz

hey juhiii!! hey ridzyyyy!!

now it's meee 😊
thanxxx for the update
late kiya but is baar mafi dedti hoon par
agli baar sonch na bhi mat ... okay:)
awesome part .. thnxxxx
achi satrting thi
aur sammy ka dialouge

main masoom baccha mera haal toh main hi jaanta hoon........mast tha....mujehy bhi bahut aachey lagey yeh sarey dialouges,,,

and that hunter wali was supererb thnxxx
aur next update kab kar rahe ho??? hmm...sooch ke bataungi..

jaldi nahi kiya tho main tho tumhe nahi chodne wali...

cont sooonnnnnnnnnn will try to do soon...
wating for the next part ....glad u lyked it,...

Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Bul3

very nice part 1....really liked it...especially Sam-Nups bro-sis teasing..continue soon..



thnxx glad u lyked it....thnxx

will try to do soon...

Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Senny

hey honey its awesome, you are a rocker, all your ffs and updates have always rocked, beautiful i am so excited to read the next part man.



hie!! thnzz really glad u lyked it...
thnxxx😊
hm....nxt part toh update karney main thooooodi si der lagegi!! par sorry!! im telling u the fact,...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
hi, nice part...continue soon...plz pm me thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
madam kunse amavas ke chand ko karoge
update???
jaldi karooo
plzzz
Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: nupur786

hi, nice part...continue soon...plz pm me thanx


thnxx!!! glad u lyked it!!
will surely pm u..
Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: angel.ridz

madam kunse amavas ke chand ko karoge
update???
jaldi karooo
plzzz


aabhi bas 5mins main...
Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Sargam (rhythm of love):


hello every one!! im reallyreally very sorry!! for not posting my update for such a long tym..was busy..hope u all understand me...nd here comes ur nxt update so enjoy...

~~*~~Part 2:~~*~~

Gunji leaves...

Dia: okay aunty aab hum bhi chaltey hai

Dia: okay bye everyone..

Uday: bye every one

Dia nd uday leaves..

Benji: sab chaley ja rahe hai aab mujhey bhi chalna chahiye! Bye auntyjii bye sam..bye mayank..nd goes to the door bye hunter wali nd leaves..

Sam nd maynk laughs..

Nup: hunter wali.. bachu aab toh chala gaya par kal toh aayega hi na aur bro tum log hasna bandh karo..

Mm: haan bhai hasna bandh karo.

samrat: hello mam chaley ya yahan hi rehne ka irada hai aunty ko sataney ka irada hai kya???

Nupur: waise mera mann toh yahin rehn...(before she completes her sentence)

mayu chokes out water what he was drinking..

mm: array mayu sambhal ke..

Sam: dekha sis!! Tumne yahn sirf rehne ka naam hi liya Mayank ko itna bade shock laga no waoories mayank main sis ko yahn nahi chodunga aunty ko aur sari society ko punishment nahi dunga..chalo sis lets go..

Nup: bye aunty nd hugs shilpa aunty

Sam nd nup leaves..They reach home

Nup: Dm..dm dm (runs nd hugs dm!!)(dai mom..their care taker... both Sam nd nup loves her alottt..)

Nup: dm pata hai aaj hu

Dm: baad main pehle jake tum dono fresh hoke ao..phir baad main baith ke batein karengey theek?...aab jao

Sam hugs dm..: aacha aab jao sis tum jakey fresh ho kar aao jab tak dm mujhey sir pe maalish karegi.hai na dm..

Dm: bilkul...par tum bhi fresh hoke kyun nahi aajatey...

Sam: fresh toh main hoon hi kyunki main hamesha cool hoon..aaur ise zyada feshness mujhey aap ki maalish se aajayegi...chalo chalo dm..(nd grabs dm to the sofa..)

Dm: uffo baba..

Sam:kya hua sis tum aabhi tak gayi nahi fresh hone?? Jao sis...

Nup leaves to her room..

Sam:kya karey dm sara din is hunter wali ke saath rahunga toh sir dard hoga na

Dm: hunter wali..??

Sam: haan dm aap ko nahi pata humari sari gang ne siwai us chashmish ke aur D ke..hum sab ne uska ka naam hunter wali rakah hai..aacha hai na...ussey zyada suit karta hai..

Sam nd dm laughs...nup comes..

Nup: dm aap bhi...jao main aap se bbaat nahi karti..

Dm: aarey nahi nupur...main toh bas..

Nup: haan aap toh bas hamesha bro ka hi side leti ho..huh!!!

Sam laughs...

sam: dm mujhey hai na kuch jalney ki smell aa rahi hai...

nup: huh!! Main aur tumse jalti hoon?? Yeh galat fehmi tumhey kahan se hogayi hai bro??

sam:tab se jab se tumne yeh bad sa face banaya huwa hai..

nup rolls her eyes nd smiles..

nup: aab???(showing a broad smile)

dm : ek mint beta...dm leaves..

sam nd nup are talking about concerts...

after some tym dm comes..

dm: bas!! Aab bahut hogay tumhare yeh concert voncert ki baatein chalo aab dinner karlete hai..

nup: dm...im full..mujhey bhook nahi hai...

dm: aur tumey samrat...???

Sam: dm waise kuch khaas plan nahi hai...agar aap mujehy apne haton se khilaogi toh main toh taiyaar hoon...

Dm: haan chal main tumhey khilaungi..

Nup interrupts..

Nup: mujey toh bahut bahut bhook lagi hai chalo dm...dinner kartey hai..

Dm(smiles): chalo..

Nup: hmmm!! Main ek mint mai aayi...goes to her room..

Sam: hmm!! Dm...ready ho jao..apki pyari si baby ane wali hai..haathon pe bandage laga ke..

Sam nd dm both laughs...

Dm: mujhey nupur ki yahi adat pareshaan karti hai...

Sam: haan dm..

Dm: jo bhi usey chahiye who bolti nahi hai ..aab yahan hi dekho..usey mere haton se khana khana tha toh usne nahi bataya.. aab Bandage laga kar kahegi ''mera haath tooth gaya dm mujhey khilao..'' par agey kya hoga iska..

Sam: dm ...hum hai na uske liye..

Dm: par kab tak beta...nupur ki aisi hi kayi batein hai jo usey chahiye par who batati nahi hai..hum kab tak uske saath rahenge..main toh aab boodhi ho gayi hoon..aur tumhe bhi kabhi na kabhi usey alag toh hona hi hai na...

Sam:nahi dm... main meri pyaari sis se kabhi door nahi hounga

Dm:alag toh hona hi hoga... uski shadi bhi toh hogi naa

Sam:dm... usme kya hai... main uski shadi ek aise ladke se karaunga jo mere sath hi rahega..

Dm:yeh kya keh raha hai tu?

Sam:dm.. main kitna bhi use ladu... par main use bahut pyaar karta hoon dm aap ko toh pata hai naa

Dm:haan pata hai beta ...aab chalo...

sam nd dm on the dinner table..

Dm: nupur beta ..ajao..nupurrr!! dekho maine aaj tumhari fav dish banayi hai..mutter paneer.. aur samrat tumhara rajma chawal..

Sam: wow dm!! love u..aur uske saath koi desert??

Dm: tumhari fav dish ke saath no desert aise kabhi ho sakta hai kya??yeh lo gajar ka halwa..

Sam: wow!! Dm..(hugs dm)

Nup comes down..

Nup: ahh! Dm dekho mera haath toh tuta hua hai main kaise khaoon..

Sam nd dm smiles..

Sam: aah sis yeh kaise hua??

Sam slowly: jaise mujhey pata nahi..

Nup: who..woh..main slip 'ho gayi thi..

sam:agar tum slip hogayi toh tumhare pair ko chot lagni thi'haath ko kaise??

Nup: who..woh..mere haath se vase tu gaya..

Sam: dm aapko kuch tutne ki aawaz aaayi??muyhey toh nahi ayi..

Dm: samrat bas!! Aao nupur main tumhey khilati hoon..

Sam nup nd dm on the dinner table having their dinner..

Nxt scene: gunjan's place:

Gunjan is sitting with her mom..

Gunji: mama.. pata hai (she talks about her day..the concert..)

Sushma(gunji's mom(sm): aacha beta aab chalo bhi dinner karein??

gunji: aaj kya hai dinner main??

Sm:loki ki sabji..

Gunji: nahi maa. Mujhey mood nahi hai..

Sm: aacha theek hai math kaho..main phir kal dedungi bai ko rajma chawal..maine toh tym pass ke liye banaya tha..

Gunji: rajma chawal?? Wow ma..chalo khatein hai..

Gunji runs towards dinner table..

Gunji: arey mama main aabhi aayi..

Nxt scene: mayank's place..

Mm: mayu...dekh gunjan tere liye kuch layi hai..

Mayu: hii angel..

Gunjan: hi.. aunty yeh lijiye rajma chawal..main ne soocha aapko bhi pasand hai toh aapko dedun..

Mm: thnxx beta...

Mayu: maa tum ne toh kaha tha mere liye par angel ne toh tumhare liye laya hai na rajma chawal..

Gunjan: aacha aunty aab main chalti hoon.

Mm: bye beta..

Gunjan: bye aunty bye mayank..

Mayu: bye..

Gunji leaves.

Mayu: aab chaley maa?? Bahut bhook lagi hai..peth main chuhe daud rahe hai..

Mm: haan chal..

Mayu: waise maa tumne kya banaya hai..??

Mm: waise maine toh paneer ...

Mayu: main potato chips se hi theek hoon..paneer mere paas bhi nahi lana..

Mm: arey beta puri baat toh sunle.. mayu tu na yeh adhi adhuri baatein sunna chod de..warna agey problem hogi beta..maine kaha main paneer bananeki sooch rahi thi agar nupur yahn rukti toh zaroor paneer banati..maine aalu mutter banaya hai...

Mayu: thnxx ma...paneer na bananeke liye..aur aalu mutter banne ke liye bhi..

Mm nd mayu both hav their dinner..

Everyone goes to sleep..( sam nup mayu gunji uday nd dia..)

Its about 2:30 am..there's a knock on sammy's door...

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- PREV:Part 1 NEXT : Part 3 -

Thanks for the lovely comments and likes.. :)
Love
juveria..


Edited by thejazzgal - 13 years ago

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