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Natalie Abraham

@-DulceMaria-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Really Enjoyed the first part and yeah even i got confused when i read author's name just before the part😆

and Happy Birthday Yogitha😃

Natalie.

P.S:- keep PMing me😃

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Minita

@xxxxminixxxx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hey guys(all 5 of u)

just read ur ff

and i cant beilive there are going to be 5 updaters

yay yay yay

btw could u guys pm me when u continue

that would be a real help thnx

~minita

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Nidha..thnx a lot 4 commentin..n 4 d sweet poem too..

thnx Radhika

thnx Mona..will cont ASAP..

thnx Natalie...will def PM u...n srry abt tat..😳..will def PM u!

hey minita..thnx...will PM u 4 sure..!

-Manzz,Niky,Rakshu,Yogi & Aish

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Hey guys very soon u r going to get update........so stay tuned......

Love u..

Aish,Rakz,Manzz,Niky n Yogz

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Thanx a lot Riddss & Natalie(-DulceMaria-)...........

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

PART - 2

Recap:-

He was just going to say greet her but then he heard a shriek come from the door of the classroom..!

"DIIIIIIIIII!!!!"

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Anjali was shocked hearing the sudden outburst of her sister,n embarrassed too.She need'nt need to call her 'Di' in front of the whole class, she was just one year elder! "Ridzi kya hua?!"😲

Ridhimma was very angry seeing that boy again who made her fall! She just could'nt stand him n he did'nt even apologise decently! "Di! Aap iss nautanki se baat kar rahe hai?!"😡

Then she pointed at Armaan ,"Hey you..you, what are you doing here??" said the girl in great anger.😡

"Excuse me! I study here dear" repled armaan coolly.

"That dosen't mean its your own property, how could you hit me and go??" the girl became all the more angry.

"Hit you???" Armaan was totally confused until he recalled the scene that happened in the morning.

"So I said Sorry, Rite".

"So, u you had to say sorry to me"

"Ya, now i take my sorry bak"
Ridhimma got really angry. "Just don't think u can get away that way!"
Armaan was giggling, "Oh! Ok do anything u want to me!". He said opening his arms as if surrendering to her.
Just then,Ms.Tamanna entered the class. Ridhimma gave Armaan an evil look n sat down in her place.Armaan took his seat next to Anjali.
He whispered to Anjali, " you and ure sister are totally different!"
"Excuse me?"

"Come on, I mean she's so dumb n stupid, n ure so hot n nice!",he said winking.
Anjali was'nt sure she liked this guy,but he seemed to be the hero of the class & being friends with him would be helpful.
"Thanks. But you dont know her that well. She has a heart of gold" she said
"Ya..watever" sniffed Armaan.
Just then, armaan got an idea!
He tore a paper from his notebook & rote something on it & then he threw it on riddhima.
Riddhima was confused, she looked here & there to get a clue of who rote it, when she couldnt see anyone, she opened the chit.

As soon as she was about to read it, Miss. Tammanna saw her distracted & said "Riddhima! You are a new student here rite? & still you are not at all attentive in class", she scolded her.
Ridhimma was really hurt. She felt like she was going to cry. This new school was turning out to be bad for her. She first was pushed by a guy n got hurt & know the teacher was scolding her ,which had never happened!

Just then Anjali came to her rescue, " Maam,it's not her fault'"

Miss Tamanna interrupted , " Sorry Anjali, I know that you're her sister but she can take care of herself n tell the reason for her own mistakes, u don't have to safeguard her!"

Armaan poked Anjali , " Yaar,kya kar rahi hai? Chod na..uski galti hai..you'll also get into trouble!"

Armaan was laughing to himself. Anjali thought it was better to keep quiet now.

Ridhimma did'nt knew what to do! She was blank , she could'nt find excuses because she was never caught doing anything wrong before -- she never did anything wrong!

"Riddhima,I'll have to send you out of class, u were not paying attention & now you're weeping without answering me",Miss Tamanna said.Ridhimma suddenly realized that there were tears on her face n she wiped them n stammered "S..sorry..mis..miss Tamanna..".
"Please go n wash your face n u can stay there till my class is over,come back in the lunch time. You can get the notes from your sister."

Ridhimma very embarrassed just moved out of class not looking at anyone. She was walking in the corridors when suddenly she noticed some seniors walking around so quickly ran into the washroom. She cried for 5 mins ,n then thought it was not my fault,I seriously need to get back to whoever threw this chit! She then, opened the chit n saw a message written in bold '
"WELCOME to the Horror Land Riddhima "

-Armaan 😉
She was asking everyone if they knew who this Armaan was, but nobody seemed to know!
Then suddenly she heard a voice say "I guess u're looking for me Ridhimma!"

She turned around only to notice the guy, who had spoiled the very first day of the school.

"YOU!!! so you are Armaan" she went near him furiously.

"Only because of you, i am feeling soo embarresed. Something like this has never happened to me. Now you will have to pay for this. You just wait & watch what I do to you" Riddhima was going red with anger.

PRECAP:

"Ridhimma pass the ball here!",said Rahul.

Ridhimma chucked the ball towards Rahul .

And * BANG*

"WHO THE HELL?!"

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Hey guys..here's the 2nd part of the FF...hope u like it...thnx 2 Niky 4 helping me with this..! 😃

Love

-Manzz,Rakshu,Yogi,Niky & Aish

Edited by aish_punk - 16 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

woah dear🤗 its mind blowing one⭐️ superb dear😍 so he insult her😭😭😭 & even due to him he got Punishment😭😭😭 very bad Armaan😭😭😭 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Smile in pleasure,
Smile in pain,
Smile when trouble pours like rain,
Smile when someone hurts u,
Smile coz someone still loves to see u smiling."