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music.doll

@music.doll

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Hey this is soo cool. Afterall its ur creation. more comin up after reading

4 now*silence please*lol<3

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music.doll

@music.doll

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

Haha tht was sumthing refreshin. LMAO. I am soo sleepy as i slpet at 2 last night but after readin this i am refreshed. This is ur magic Nj. FF likha aur neend gayab.lol.😉

No but seriously its funny, witty and entertainin at the same time.

Thanx 4 wakin me up nutty<3

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@spln

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#173

anytime RJ...it was obsolete but that was my first attempt much before the fics that with the end of term on my head n the abs crappy frustrating dmg track !!!!

oki...me gone go for a wile....be back later!

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: missypatel

I woke up this morning,
several times in the period an hour
'TeeT...TeeT' went my alarm twice,
i shut them off and felt so nice
but not for long, can i ever be wrong
and in came my niece shouting "MASI" song
I opened my eyes and gave her a stare
"Get up! I have school! Take me" she shared
"Ya! Am up! Be down!" i said as i cudn't care
Tucked back in the cozy blanket,
picking up from my paused dream
"MASI" get up nooowwwwwww" came a louder scream
I was up, against my will, but still
dragged myself to the washroom
scrubbed my teeth, made them gloom
a quick shower on a Friday morning
I scrunched through pair of clothes, without a warning
Skipped down the stairs and gulped down some milk
And so, here i am sitting in the library, thinking of silk... (ahha cudnt think of ne rhymer ter)

krats! i hope this made me laugh....a lil bit!! tis 1 was for u! =)

nij~

Haha nij....thanks a lot. It did make me smile and that too when it was almost impossible for me to be smiling...haha...i was struggling with my economics notes and than thought of checking out if theres any new poetry posted here and came across this one...

and it had me grinning just to see you get up sooooo early iin the morning....and aww your neice woke u up...give a hug to her...good she did so now u will learn to sleep on time and whose dreams were u having😉..and the whole rhyming ways had me laughing...silk?? where did that come from...gud u posted a nutty poem for it was becomin 'a home to heartbroken poets'

ahh!!! me loved it yaar...i think am gonna write one too...to make u smile....oh yes am gonna do that...i think we all should

and guys thanks a lot for the compliments on the poem...its still to be completed...will do it sometimes.

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simran1285

@simran1285

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#175

hello chicas so what do you guys do here, I haven't gone back and read all the pages but will do when I have some time; but speaking of poetry I'll throw one out there; Nij your's is too cute made me miss my neice like anything; she's a racket as well and insists on sleeping with me when she's around; not that I mind that but urgh her kicks at night leave me gasping for air

did I mention she has the cutest way of snoring; at night however it's not so cute I am usually cursing and yelling "Shut up kid"

anyways enough rambling here I goes...

So I've been wanting all week to watch this movie

but at my house there is a line for the TV

my brother bores me with ESPN

while my father refuses to miss the news on Zee TV

I have a mother who enjoys watching the tiffs between a husband and his biwi

oh, when will I hold the remote and get my turn at the TV😆

Ahem, Ladies this poem is an unfortunate truth of my life, my brother is now standing behind me begging me to get off the PC because mom is watching Boogie Woogie😆

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#176

gosh nj!! tht was hilarious i was crackin n on d floor in so mny of those bits!! n more so cuz i cud imgae each one of tem doin it..n so unlike ter charac frm DMG!! ahahhah!! dt was sum fun!! LMAO!! nuttterrrr!!!

simran!!
ahha yaah i koe...tem kids r so cute otherwise..i like tem wen tey hve ter mouth shut...otherwise m either runnin bhd tem 2 shut up...or else holdin ma ears n runnin aay frm tem...lol!! i cud lke imagin u wit yur lil one...ahhah!! totallly!!

but nevertheless luved yur nutter verse..hhaah its usually d sme in ma house too..bt juss wit ma aunt n 2 kidz..lol fightin for d remote!!but its a scene u juzz cnt miss!! :)
lets hear few more frm u!!..

nij~

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: missypatel

awww ani tht awesome 👏 maybe we shud do it yur way...🤗...yayyy!!!!
i luved it gurl....honestly i wish i cud do sum lke tes...u nailed it..juss perfect...wit every big of 'armaan'!!
phew!! finally!! we got d nuttery out of u....abt time!! luved it!! toooooooo gud!!!!

wats dt u guys tell me..u got a way wit words....haaha its time i tell u d same...u got a way with words and such classy dt too!! :D

haah nj tld me 1nce...watever goes in verse it doesnt alays have 2 be d "perfect" word for the line..soo i say...dnt worry abt fixin it...we ain't puttin it up for competition...!! i think i lke d way it is...hmmm ma best line i say..." shriek in glee..not a dream..." luv dt 1...
is i must say..i cud visualize an image of u guys...d whole yur frdz gawkin at u bth..n whole shocked lookz...ahaha!!!

wonderful job dne here anita =) keep up wit it!!

nij~

Aww thanks NIj! I'm flattered at your compliments since this is my first actual attempt at poetry...😳 What can I say...My motivation, other than you guys, was Armaan...sigh...😆😳 I was pretending to be Ridz in the poem..LMAO!

You could write like 989898 better ones than this Nij...lol...

LOL..I got a way with words..WOW, im being sent to seventh heaven with the compliments* Blush*

I love NJ's advice..Will keep it in mind for next time indeed! Aww Im glad you liked that line!

LOL..I was pretending to be Ridz in this poem..since I bet there is no guy in the world who actually is like Armaan...LOL😆

Love, Anita

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

[Quote=Jia..]OMGGGG OMGGG Anitaaaaaaaaaaaaaa wat was this???? Hailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa u drove me crazy with this, its the most wunnerful piece 👏 👏

Anita !God ur so freakingly talented, i saved this up, its such a masterpiece, am stunned girl!!! 👏
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Jiaaaaaaa!

Aww so sweet! I'm like flattered seriously! Poetry is not my cup of tea...but since all of you liked it, I will keep at it! Aww, Im flattered again that you saaved it! Aww I love you!

Thanks Jia! *blush*

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My heartbeats grew erratic

As blood rushed to my cheeks

One look at him

I promise, you would have fallen out of your seat...

Tall, handsome, and muscular was he

His eyes sparkling like crystals

Would make your jaw drop down to your knees...

His well-toned body, his washboard abs

Would make you shriek in glee

Oh God, please tell me

This isn't a dream...oh god teme too...coz ani making me sooooooo dream now hahah...ani wat a role out of his looks, did u like grab all that there is to stallone, matt demon, hugh grant....n make it this guy we all know well!!!

As I pinch myself

I open my eyes

Relieved to see

That the scene in front of me

Indeed isn't a dream...

With a killer smile flashing on his face

His dimples setting in deep

He gradually makes his way towards me

As I feel my heart skip a beat...

The other girls in my class

Look at us with disbelief

Jealousy took over their faces

As they saw him and me...pray be true i wasnt there hun, i wudnt just sit around being jealous, i d get up make my move n get the guy till u dreamt on lolzzz!!!

His friendly "Hi"

Did wonders to me

As he shook my hand and softly pecked at it

I felt myself go weak in the knees...

As if that wasn't enough

His name seemed to cast a spell on me

For it was as magical as he

Hidden desires seemed to unlock themselves out of my heart

As he repeated his name for me

His husky voice rang in my ears

As he annunciated his name for me slowly

The name was Armaan

As desireful as he!...my fav lines indeed, nothing beats the tremendous impact in lines as simply put forth as these!

Okay so I didn't like the end of the poem..I felt I could have done better! So I want comments now! LOL..I want input = D

Love, Anita

great job ani...i lovd it totally perhaps u shud email it to KSG....like his id or something, or the SBS folks...he oughta realize, abt time, shraddha aint the only one crazy in love with him hahaha[/Quote]

Aww NJ thanks a lot for the amazing detailed essay! I loved reading your input and thoughts on the lines..They made crack up...lol...

What can I say...My inspiration for this poem was KSG! sigh..*goes into dreamworld once again.*..lol..

LOL...Hmm so you not the jealous type..LMAO..Gonna go steal my man..LMAO...

Now that I think about, my fav lines in the poem are also the last two...It flowed together now that I read it again! Thanks NJ!

OMG NJ! You giving me all sorts of crazy ideas..Watch me wake up tommorow and email the poem to SBS so they could send it to KSG..OMG what a suggestion...LOL..Thnks NJ!