RECAP--
Fresher's ball...
Raj-Naina dance..
Aalekh-Muskaan fight..
Naina kidnapped..
Raj reaches on time to save her!!
Part-12
"THE EMOTIONAL BREAKDOWN"
Raj-Naina..
Naina looked at him....tears still flowing down....😭😭 Raj couldnt bring himself to say anything....nor could he try to hug her to make her feel comfortable .....
Raj-Main bahar dekh kar aata hoon..
Naina dint say anything Raj went out
He had smacked many of his people unconsicious....and the main guy he tied him and kept...when he came out and saw him...there was a fire in him........which would kill that guy..
Raj started thrashing him...he had dared to play the fool with naina......how could he...
Raj beat him up left right and centre!!.....he just couldnt stand the sight of him.....raj kept on hitting him....punches after punches....the guy got it solid..
One or two more punched and one twist the guy would have said good bye to his life....at the right time abhimanyu and shalu came there....raj had called him and told them to come there asap..
Abhi-Raj..chodho...kya kar rahe hoon...chodho..
Abhi caught hold of him...
Raj-Chauhan tum nahi jaante isney...is kute ne....sala kamina......iss ko maar doon..😡😡😡
Abhi--Raj relax....relax...
Shalu meanwhile made her way to the room....she saw naina crying..and her situation..there was no need to say anything..
She just sat beside naina...and placed her hand on her shoulder....
Naina tried to keep a calm over herself...
she stopped crying..
Raj came back in..
Raj-Shalini...tum main aur Naina rahul ke ghar jayengeyg..kuch waqt ke liye...aur abhimanyu uss aadmi ko KMA le jayega...aur chauhan kisi ko pata na chalein.......dunt make it official.....iss aadmi ko secretly wahan rakho....
Abhi nodded..
Abhi-Main shalu ko rahul ke ghar chodh donga...tum aur naina abhi niklo...main yahan sab dekh longa..
Raj-Thnx chauhan....
Raj and Naina left..
Naina all the time unconcisiously caught her jacket real close....Raj noticed it and felt really bad...he just kept cursing himself..
They reached rahul's house in a while..
Raj took her there..
Rahul who was briefed about the situation from Raj opened the door...he saw Naina in a state of shock..
They settled in the drawing room..
Rahul sat beside her.
Rahul-Naina...Its ok sab theekhh hoga..
Naina started crying..😭😭.in a flash Naina rested her head on rahul's chest...and rahul placed a reassuring hand on her shoulder..
Raj sat opposite Naina and noticed this...
He saw her finding peace and calmness in Rahul's arms...like she would with Navin....why wasnt he able to provide that peace to her...he wondered...he brushed aside those thoughts...
10 minutes later shalini came...
Rahul took Naina to the room..
He made her sit on the bed...and was about to give her a glass of water
Shalini-Stop Rahul....
Rahul-Shalin tum yahan??
Shalini-Ahh please Naina ko kuch mat doo...
Shalini signalled to rahul and rahul left the room..
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20 minutes later shalini came out
SHalini-Shes in a state of shock...thodi scared hain...she'll be fine soon......waisey what should abhimanyu do with that guy?
Raj-I am coming with you...i'll handle that guy.....
There was silence..
Rahul-Shalini woh Naina..
Shalini-I knoe tum kya puchna chathe hoon Rahul......its naina's good luck Raj wahan waqt par pahunch gaya....there are a few signs of physical abuse....but baat itni door tak nahi gayyi....
Rahul was silent.
Shalini-She was not raped..
Rahul and Raj were silent..
Shalini-Main wapas academy jaa rahi hoon....I think tum duno ko bhi nikalna chahiye..
Raj-Naina ko
Shalini-Le chalna hoga...aggar kisi ko shak hua toh naina will have to face more questions....please R.V......lets get back!!
Raj nodded..He requested shalu to come later with Naina...he left...
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he sat in his room....when abhimanyu entered..
Abhi-Raj yeh sab kya hua??
Raj was deep in thought..
Raj-Yeh sab kaise ho gaya ...maine kaise honey diya?
Abhi-Yeh sab tum kya keh rahe hoon Raj...baat toh aise kar rahe hoon ki naina ki saari zimmedari tumhari hain..
Suddenly raj got back into his sense...what was he talking..
Abhi-Raj tum humse kuch chupa rahe hoon...
Raj-N..nahi toh aisa kuch nahi hain chauhan..
Abhi-Raj....sallon ki dosti hain ....itni aasani se jhuth nahi bol sakte hoon.....
A tear rolled down his eyes...😭
Abhi--Raj please humein batao yeh sab kya ho raha hain??
Raj-Chauhan mera yakken karo....main tumhe iss waqt..kuch nahi bata sakta....chauhan....already meri aur naina ki jaan ko khatra hain....abb tumhari jaan bhi main khatre main nahi rakh sakta...please chauhan....mujhe galat mat samjhna...😭😭
Abhi--Nahi Raj...hum aapko galt nahi samjhte...hum jante hian ki aapko humari parwah hian...lekin iss waqt humein aapki maddad karni hain...
Raj-Nahi chauhan.......main yeh nahi kar sakta..
Abhimanyu had never seen Raj so agitated...so restless.....feeling so helpless...
Suddenly something striked him..
Abhi--Kya iss sab ka navin se koi sambandh hain?😕
Raj was shocked......he dint believe it..
Raj-Navin.....chauhan tum
Abhimanyu gave a sarcastic smile..
Abhi--Maine kabhi tumhe itna betaab bechain nahi dekha......bas jantey hian yeh sab navin ke barrey main hi hain........bas wahi ek tumharey jeena ka maksat hain...........
Raj aggar aapko kisi bhi mood par humari zarrorat hoon toh hum aapki maddad apney marey huye dost ki maddad karney ke liye humesha hongey..
And abhi left with a tear in his eye..😭
Raj felt sorry but he couldnt do anything either!....
He couldnt tell him..
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Shalini returned late to the academy with naina....raj was waiting for them...
Shalini came to rajs room and informed him that Naina was in her room.......
Raj slowly walked towards her room..
When she opened the door...she looked normal...not the deadly state she was in hours ago..
She had freshend up and all...
Raj-Kaisi hoon??
Naina smiled..😊
Naina-Achi hoon...
Raj dint knoe what to say or do...he dint knoe why he came here also..
Naina-Andar aao..
Raj-Ahh...
NAina--Raj its ok...andar aa jao....😊
Raj entered..
Naina got some coffee..
She handed it to him..
Naina-You knoe I am a psychatrist..
Raj was confused....like he dint knoe that...🤢
Raj-I knoe..
Naina-Mera matlab tha...i can control my mind...i bring people out of this kind of trauma....then why not my own self...jo bhi hua.....i am now in control of myself...
uss waqt thodi shocked thi bas....reflex you see....right now i am completely fine...and i knoe nothing happened....
thnx to you...aggar tum waqt par nahi attey toh i cant even imagine what would happened....i dont want to imagine..thnx Raj..
Raj--Naina.....yeh toh mera farz tha......lekin uss mein bhi partially fail hi hua hoon..tumhari dekh-bal nahi kar paya.....actually main toh kuch nahi kar sakta..
Raj was getting senti..
Raj-Navin ne doo loggon ki zimedarii soopi thi............NAvin ne martey martey mujhse tumhara aur sheetal ka khayal rakhna ko kaha .....aur muskaan toh waisey bhi meri zimedari hain jo main sambhal nahi paya.. ....(a tear rolled out)....muskaan ka toh khayal hi nahi rakh paya....aur aaj tum bhi.....wahan sheetal bhi..
He started crying....😭😭
Naina-Sheetal bhaiya ki girlfriend na?
Raj nodded..
Naina-Usse kya hua??
Raj-Kashmir main kuch din pehle ek mission ke duraan usko enemy ne capture kar liya tha...aur woh kuch din lapata thi...aur abb woh mili hain...bahut hi buri halat main....she might not survive..
Raj was crying...
He got up and stood in another corner...
Naina went behind him and kept a hand on his shoulder..
He turned around...
In a flash god knows what went through both of them......in a few seconds they were eloped in a hug...
Raj was crying his heart out.....he had failed miserably in his duties......he jus hugged her tight.....😭😭
And Naina was silently wepin out her sadness to him...and she felt sad for him too.......she also clunged to him...as tight as possible........
They stood in that posture for quiet a while...none realizing what they had done....
After a while Raj broke from the hug.........
He looked at her....he looked into her eyes....deep into her eyes.....and she stood motionless......she first looked down knowing he was staring at her......she then looked at him....straight into his eyes.....
Raj dint know why but he leaned in...he leaned in making his intentions obvious.....naina got a control of what was happening...she turned away immediately
A tear rolled out from her eyes..
Raj wiped off that tear...
Naina-Wohh...
And Raj dint let her finish....he placed his finer on her lips.......naina closed her eyes....she dint knoe why was she feeling this.........his slightest touch drove her crazy......she slwoly opened her eyes........her heart beating like it had never before....
Raj suddenly moved from there...
He remembered Rahul's word at the restaurant.....he moved away from her....he couldnt do this....but why...why was he so drawn to her.....another tear rolled out from naina's eyes...😭
Raj confused stood facing his back to Naina...
Raj-I m sorry....
Naina dint say anything in return....
Raj walked out of the room...
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Naina sat on her bed and wept....
What was wrong with her.....why did she feel so bad....she dint knoe why....was he about to kiss her..no...no no she was dreaming..no it had happened...naina was confused....
Raj in his room sat and smashed a glass on the floor......what did he do a while back.....she had already undergone such a trauma.....and he......raj felt disgusted....under normal circumstances what e did was wrong and in this situation....he felt miserable..
She was almost raped sometime back and he was......what was he doing???
They both were at a point in life where they dint knoe what to do.....nor did they knoe what they had done and why..
20 minutes later Raj got a call.......and whatever he heard from the other end left him shocked...😲😲😲
He fell on the sofa...
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There was a knock on Naina's room door..
She saw a shocked Raj..
Raj-Naina....main kashmir jaa raha hoon....abhi issi waqt.....sheetal ki tabyat bahut kharab ho gayyi hain......woh medicines ko respond hi nahi kar rai....she jus doesnt wanna live....aur
Naina--Aur???
Raj--Main chatha tha ki tum mere saath chalo....shayad navin se related kisi se milegi toh usse jeena ka koi karan mil jayey....please Naina!!!......please sheetal ke liye navin ke liye...please..mere saath chalo....
Raj folded his hands....tears flowing continously...😭😭
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Within half an hour Raj and Naina were on their way to kashmir....They had informed shalu about their sudden exit....she promised to handle evrything there...
Raj while driving the car was also crying.....he was too restless....suddenly the car came to a halt...
Raj had stopped the car.......
He put his head on the steerin....and was crying......he was so restless...
Naina had never seen Raj before this way........he was so upset for sheetal...
😭😭
Naina-Raj.....tum please aise mat roo..
Raj-Naina.....aggar sheetal ko kuch ho gaya....toh main navin se kiya wada....😭😭
And he wept...
Naina-Raj....yahan dair karne se baithar hain hum wahan pahunch kar dekhe...please gaddi chalao..😕
Raj nodded and started the car.........barely 5 minutes later their jeep escaped a major accident....A truck was coming from the opposite end and Raj almost lost control...
Naina-Rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjj kya kar rahe hoon..😲😲😲......tum uthroo....main gaddi chalati hoon
Raj-Naina...i m fine
Naina-Chup karo........uthr jao..😡
On Naina's insistence...Raj got down and naina drove..
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RAMYUVAK HOSPITAL
Raj--Captain.Sheetal Singh.....kaunse rooom main hain??
Nurse after about 2 minutes..
Nurse-Sorry sir..unke barrein main hum aapko information nahi de sakte....special case hian
Raj-Dekhiye main army se hoon...unse milna bahut zaroori hain
Nurse not convinced
Raj pulled out his card....
Nurse-EK minute sir..
The nurse called a senior..
After 2 minutess
Nurse- ICU 2nd floor......
Raj and Naina rushed...
Outside the ICU they saw another army personnel.....Rajveer had never seen him before.....He ignored..
He looked into the ICU....he saw her lifeless.....absoluetly pale...
He saw a doctor outside,,,
Raj-Doctor....meri baat suniye..aap please humein andar janee dijiye....
Doc-Delkhiye andar nahi jaa saktey
Raj-I m from the army....Captain Shekhawat....please mujhe inki jaan bachani hogi....ek mauka please.....main kya kar raha hoon main janta hoon....
Doc-Ohh alright captain...aap jayiye..aap army se hain...haan haan thekhe....
Naina entered and saw that girl who her bhaiya spoke about.....when rajveer said sheetal she felt as if she knew her...navin always spoke of his friend sheetal...but he never told naina that she was his girlfriend....the once upon a time bublly girl would be like this....Naina felt terible...
Raj sat beside her.....holding her hands..
Raj-Kyun aisa karti hoon tum??...please sheetal mere liye tumhe jeena hoga.....mere liye....please.....tum mujhe aisey chodh kar nahi jaa sakti..............please utho.....pehle navin aur aab aggar tum chali gayyi na main wada karta hoon main bhi tumahre pechee aakar tum duno ko tang karonga...please
And Raj was sobbing...😭😭😭
Raj-Acha mere liye naa sahi...lekin navin ke gudiya ke liye toh tum jee sakti hoon na.....dunt worry navin ke koi ex nahi hain...(raj smiled while crying);.....navin ke gudiya...uski behen...woh mere saath hain...KMA mein....tum usse milna chahogi na......sheetal main jaanta hon tum meri baat sun rahi hoon....please sheetal....wapas aa jao...mere liye.....naina ke liye...naivn ke liye....😭
Naina kept a hand on his shoulder...
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That night passed away...raj and Naina were outside the ICU...there was no news of sheetal recovring or anything..
The next morning Raj saw that same officer who disappeared after they entered the ICU..
That man came to Raj..
Man-Captian Rajveer Singh Shekhawat??
Raj--Yes..
Man-Captain Sameer Kapoor...
He shook hands with Raj..
Sameer played by the dashing & handsome Ankurr nayyar...
Sameer--I knoe aap mere barrey main kuch nahi jantey...Main .... Captain Sheetal Singh ka dost hoon.....
Raj nodded....Sheetal never spoke to anyone much after navin....not any male for sure....then how come......why dint she tell raj about this new friend of hers....😕
Raj smiled anyway...😊
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That afternoon.....Nurses rushed in and out......Raj got panicky with every passing moment....
Finallly after about an hour....the doc came out...He had a kind of shocked expression on his face...Raj's heartbeat increased....Naina who was standing next to him undertood and just entwined her fingers with him....reaassuring him that all will be well..
Will all be well soon??...or will there be more problems in their life....who knows whats in store....whats their fate...their destiny....their fatiny!!..
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Pre-cap!!
Naina-Aap apney bhai se nafrat karti hain??
Muskaan-No ma'am..
Naina-Toh phir unse zyada baatein kyun nahi karti..
Muskaan-Bas yuhin ma'am
Naina-Thats enough cadet.....main ek psychatrist hoon....mujhse kuch bhi chupana bekar hain....so jus tell me damn it..
What will Naina do...will she be able to join this brother-sister realtionship....know more in FATINY!!...
All this and much more on 13th december!!...
Till then enjoy!!..
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Alright...hope you all enjoy this part ...hope you like the entry of two new characters....i will reveal who plays SHEETAL in the next update.....
I want to just pay my gratitude to all the soldiers who gave their lives during the recent mumbai terror attacks.....We are proud of them....and i am very sad about all that's been happening in india in the last 6 months...and pray that we all wake up and fight terror....rightly said "ENOUGH IS ENOUGH"...
Luv
Tina!!...
Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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