hey dear...im vishaka..I now you don't know me but I know you since the twisting kaleidoscope story...can I tell you something..i know you already now it as every member in the forum would have told you so me to be back I will also tell you you are a fantastic, mind blowing, excellent, superb etc,etc writer and honestly im one of the biggest fan of your writings...seriously yaar do you anyway think to publish your stories I'll be the first one to buy it...promise...
and I know that you know I have never commented on any of your stories but that becoz I am a lazy person and was a silent one too but now I promise that I will comment on every chapters and stories..promise!!😃..
ohk so chappy 31..ill start from her hope you wont mind that im not giving review to your previous chappy but you know na im lazy so pardon me...😆😆..but Im telling you that all of your updates is fantastic dear...just loved it...
hmmm so this prem...he is such a cheapo..i thought when raghav declared war and knowing that north has the support of west and south the idiot will realize that the fires has surrounded him and if he move forward he'll be dead...but he is such an idiot , insane man that cant understand anything...even his army's second in command told him that the north will win becoz they are in majority but no idiot man...what to do he don't have mind ..leaving him to you .
hmm so in north they will do partyyy😃😃becoz the heir is on the way😆😆..oh so the temple is ready and while reading ill can just simply imagine the place...even I felt some peace...oh raghav put sindoor in her partition...that's true that red colour is like their love...oh I can just imaging myself standing there and watching them...😳😳...
oh so the practice is going on...yes raghav is right their skills will be tested when they are staring the death on the battle ground...but it true na practice make person perfect however confident we are but we should keep practicing to make ourself perfect becoz no one can get perfect in whole life but we can do practice to improve...ohh raghav is thinking of the families of the army which that jerk didn't...it shows the difference between the king and the lord...I love Thomas can I take him with me when your story is over...pretty please...so kalpi gave him a ball...so this is the raghav and samar's names hidden secret...destined before they meet...friends..so raghav gift is a white handkerchief with R.G and K.G initials...loved it...
so that idiot and army is on their way and south and west is already their.. loved their teasing session but felt bad for arsenio it was not his fault that his wife betrayed him and he became rude...it so good that raghav gave shelter to the east women...all the lords are burning in fury, rage and disgust.. even me too..
when raghav showed kalpi the hidden door and whatever raghav said I felt so much pain but I know you will not let the lord to happen anything ...oh raghav speech was so encouraging and lovely😳 loved it...
raghav was mesmerized by his lady wife's beauty...like always😆😆😆...their love, passion, desire seriously sometimes I think can I ever fell in love with your character then I have already fell in love with...
so in the morning the horn rang indicating the war is going to start soon.. waiting for the war to began and the jerk's head on spike by the lords of north...
so here I finish...update soo...waiting for the next one..
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