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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 11
Kalpi woke up early in the morning and went downstairs. She was surprised to find a not on the fridge.
"Gone for a morning walk. Sorry, you'll have to prepare breakfast by yourself
Preeti"
"As if she helps a lot on the other days" Kalpi shook her head at her friend's antics. However, she was boggled. It was 6 in the morning, and Preeti had never been an early bird. Nor was she health conscious. She wondered if something was up, whether she was upset about something and hiding it from her.
Preoccupied, she opened the cupboard to start making breakfast. But as soon as she opened it, petals fell on her head. She was swayed by the momentary dream like effect, but soon regained her senses. Roses and marigolds, she noticed shocked. But those were her and Raghav's favourite flowers!
She rushed up the stairs to the source of the petals, to fin two baskets, one upturned and the source of the petals, and the other containing more petals, and a note hidden below them.
Whatever was written in that note gave her a feeling recognition, as if it was from Raghav... but it couldn't be, could it? Why and how will he do this? It's impossible... firstly he hates her, she thought sadly, plus he doesn't have any idea where she is, let alone him coming to her house.
'Stop it Kalpi! He doesn't give a damn about you! He hates you! Don't even think of dreaming about him, he'll just break your heart again!'
Thinking about it, Kalpi couldn't control herself anymore. She broke down into tears and kept crying for a long time.
Unknown to her, Raghav silently witnessed everything, hidden beside a window. She suddenly felt his presence and turned, but Raghav had already run away beyond her sight.
That day's events had different effects on Raghav and Kalpi. Raghav lost most of his confidence and again questioned whether he would ever be able to make up for it. In the end he decided to give another try.
Kalpi, on the other hand, became even more sure that Raghav had come there and was internally happy. But she still had her doubts. Raghav had, after all, schemed so much against her, hated her so much, so it was quite unlikely that he would regret his act, let alone come back to her.
A few days later, it was the day for another surprise for Kalpi.
That day, Kalpi woke up hearing Preeti's screams. She went downstairs to find Preeti shrinking away in a corner, trying to run from some invisible monster.
"What is it? What happened?"
"S-sp-spider! Spider!"
Kalpi sighed and looked at the tabletop. There was a small black spider climbing on it. It sent her down her memory lane, back in their childhood when they used to play with such spiders...
"What are you smiling at? Just kill it! Throw it away! Do anything, just get it away from me!"
Kalpi picked it up and threw it out of the window, giggling.
"You're such a baby! I used to play with such spiders when I was five!"
Preeti just stuck her tongue out at her, but Kalpi was hardly seeing. "You know, I and Raghav used to get these spiders to bite us, so that we could become spider-man and spider-woman. We didn't understand any nonsense about radioactivity, so just spider bite was enough..."
Preeti interjected, "Yes, Yes, of all yucky things... by the way, who's this Raghav? Someone special, is he?"
Kalpi froze. So far she'd never never mentioned Raghav in front of Preeti, but today...
She quietly answered, "No... it's-it's nothing like that. He's just an old friend..."
"So? Isn't childhood friendship special?" Preeti said with a mischievous smile. "Anyways I'm going out for a while... got to get that spider off my head..." It was Kalpi's turn to giggle.
As soon as Preeti left, Kalpi's smile disappeared. "What is happening to me? How can I be careless enough to talk about Raghav in front of Preeti?" She wondered aloud as she went towards her room. As she sat on the bed, she was surprised to see a piece of paper sticking out from under her pillow. She reached out with a feeling of deja vu and already knew what it was before she read it - a diary page.
It was the same diary entry which Raghav had written years ago, describing their spider-man - spider-woman plan. Just the writing was different, more mature now, but of the same person.
"Was it Raghav... But he hates writing... and now me too... but its his writing... how can it be... I don't understand..."
She kept wondering, and hugged the sheet to herself subconsciously. She suudenly came back to her senses and went outside. But before leaving, she tucked the sheet safely in a book and kept it in her bedside cabinet.
Raghav saw all this and smiled a bit.
Edited by UB2500 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Hi thanks for the update, was waiting for it.
So Raghav has decided to win Kalpi back 😃 Please do update soon, this is really nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plzz chng the colour of update...seems disaster...
make it wid some sharp colors...its a request
difficult to read with this kind of green color
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lover boy back... loving it...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanchan133

plzz chng the colour of update...seems disaster...
make it wid some sharp colors...its a request
difficult to read with this kind of green color

Sorry abt dat 😉
I'll change it next tym
my color choice is a bit crazy, difficult for me to keep simple dark colors, I lyk a bit brite ones
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Part 12
Kalpi soon got the hang of such surprises, and tried to keep track of it to catch Raghav red handed. She soon understood that Preeti was in on it, and her behaving wierdly means it's another day for Raghav's surprise...

Kalpi again woke up due to Preeti's noisiness. She went outside to find Preeti trying to shift the sofa to another side. She sighed, and before Preeti could give a single reaction, she went back into her room to find Raghav smuggling something under her pillow. She caught him by the arm, and not releasing the grip, took the 'something' out. It was a crystal bracelet that Raghav had gifted her, as a sign of their friendship... she had left it when she came here...
"You can release me, you know, I'm not planning on running away..." Raghav said.
"I know you're not..." Kalpi replied absent-mindedly.
She took a breath and looked at Raghav. Her face was expressionless and her tone oddly stern and cold.
"What I really want to know is... that why are you doing all this? Why are you here?"
"Kalpi... I-I wanted to-I just-" Raghav breathed, "I wanted to apologise to you... I know sorry is a very small word as compared to what I did... but that's all I can say... I don't know how I can apologise for what I did, it was so unfair and mean and-and plain evil... I regret it now, I regret it like anything...I don't know how I can ever get forgiveness... I don't know if I'll ever be able to forgive myself..."
Kalpi interjected, "Do you think I blame you?"
This was a question Raghav couldn't dream of. "Wh-what?"
Kalpi calmly repeated, "Do you think I blame you? For what you did?"
Raghav just stared at her dumbstruck. Kalpi continued
"Raghav, you did what you did because of your love... because you loved Pakhi... and you lost her maybe because of me... Should I blame you for that, for loving a girl? Or for avenging her death?" Kalpi paused and took a breath. "I didn't think twice before deciding to support you in your revenge, even though it was against me... I didn't think twice before involving another innocent into this, hurting him... all because I loved you... What I myself couldn't accomplish, how could I expect that from you? How could I blame you for something, for which I would've been the first culprit to blame?"
Raghav was finally able to say something, "Because I love you..."
Now it was Kalpi who was left speechless. Raghav continued.
"Yes, you should blame me because I did all this despite being in love with you... I didn't think twice before blaming the girl for whom i cared the most... I didn't think twice before brewing up such a plan against the girl who trusted me blindly... I didn't think twice about the plan even when Prem Kapoor entered the scene, I even hurt his ego without a second thought-"
"That was because you enjoyed doing that..."
Raghav ignored her comment, "I didn't think even once as to how he'll react to all this, to what extent he might go to take his revenge..."
Raghav sighed, "For all this, you should blame me."
"I should, should I?" Kalpi smiled "But maybe I can't..."
Raghav also smiled.
"You should really come back home... not only me, your family, friends, I say, whole Mumbai's missing you!" Raghav said, the old energy back into the conversation.
"I'm not that famous..." Kalpi said innocently.
"No, no really... I met SRK the other day, Shah Rukh Khan, really! He also asked about you, asked when you will return..."
"Ha ha ha! PJ again!"
The old laughter and fun had found his place again... Preeti just watched them from outside, smiling.
The three had breakfast together and planned Kalpi & Raghav's return to Mumbai the following day.
After returning to Mumbai, everything happened very fast. Kalpi's family was quite relieved that she was okay. On learning the truth about what Raghav had done, they were quite angry but eventually forgave him.
As to Prem, Raghav had been keeping track of him. When he tried to take help of some goons to 'punish' Kalpi and Raghav, he was caught red handed. The revenge cycle was put on hold before it could become irrevocable.
As for Raghav and Kalpana... they lived happily ever after (as is destined at the end of every story)

PS - Whew! Finally ended it... sorry about the quick ending, just that I'm having difficulty posting often and I'm taking very long breaks...
So this was the ending of this story, I hope you all liked it... Thanks a lot for all your likes and comments!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
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beautiful ending dear...👏👏SRK really it was definitely a PJ 😆
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome! Beautiful love story! I loved it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
brilliant..really nice..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww i loved it
lovely story
really enjoyed reading it
take care

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