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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

I might have imagined this a 1000 times...what would have happened after that hug...and you described it beautifully in your 1000 th post😆

And those lines man...they are so apt..

Sumo's thought. ..that it was his day and he would have what he desired, haaye. .ladki pyaar mein doobi hai😳

Wow..those 2 S in the pendant. .the sindoor on her forehead. .how she.must have cherished them.

Sitting on that rickshaw at Tom uncle's. .this time with his hand around her. .sigh..ab to main senti go gayi..

Awesome choice for a special post. Sharman unifying. ..oh...what I wouldn't give to see that!

I still can't believe you are a Goldie now...you deserve all this champ. ...and greater heights👏

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

This is what we have missed in the show Sumo's confession after Shravan enters the room but u made it Dipu baby Sumo se confession karwali humara Shravan toh ek tange pe khada sunne ke liye woh bhi kareeb 12 saal se.. 👏.they took their relationship to the next level from BFF to soulmate slowly & carefully.. 😳.bechara he was so overexcited to see her that he forgot to give Tulips which he brought especially for her.. 😉.but last para was really romantic he just wanted to go back to bed again...😉😳 after he saw new glow on Sumo's face.. 😉

Nice OS for your 1000th post. 🤗

Thanks for PM. 😛

Vinu

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Diya

@Sonai_02

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Congrats di !!! You are a goldie now 👏

The OS was awesome !!!

Sorry I really ignored the "16+" word and read the whole of it bcuz I can't help but read ur writings. 😕

I'm your great fan u know😳

Edited by Sonai_02 - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Sonai_02
Congrats di !!! You are a goldie now 👏
The OS was awesome !!!
Sorry I really ignored the "16+" word and read the whole of it bcuz I can't help but read ur writings. 😕
I'm your great fan u know😳

Hmm so nit 16+?? Sona.. too much too soon is no fun hunny. 😆

See how long shraman waited😉

Anyway glad you liked it. Its my bad to make a general post here...

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Thanks for pm...
Lovely OS..
Pushkar teasing sumo 😃 😛
Love Ramnath and sumo's father daughter love..
Sumo and Shravan finally together..

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Awesome OS..

The dinning table scene was so cute.. Pushkar thought that sumo will fight with him but instead she started blushing😆

Nd Sumo's confession scene was beautifully penned❤️.. Shravan toh saare gifts dena bhi bhul gaya😆

Again congrats on becoming a Goldie

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Sumodreamer05

@Sumodreamer05

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Congrats on becoming Goldie..
Wonderful OS.. All the misunderstanding is solved between them..
Like how pushki teases sumo..
Confession is beautiful..
Love all the stanzas..
Finally ShraMan, the soulmates are together

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Its just perfect👍🏼

Pushkar's teasing was fun!

I loved this Ramnath!

Finally the two souls became one!

In love with your writings!

Keep the work going on!

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Res... yaar. Sorry had to finish my next update, it's been so many days. Unress after that.

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Congratulations for your 1000th post Dipti. . Awesome update as usual god agar ye hota last episode me toh kya kamaal hota... I think hm itne sad na hote.. Brilliant job baby ummmaaahhh

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