SS:~Mere Ajnabi~ chapter 3 at page 18

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Sunain

Hii Sriya😊
M so glad u liked the Tittle..its my fav too😉
Thank you so much dear!
Glad u liked it!😳

Bring it on...

Eagerly waiting dear...

LavSriya

Quote

Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: LubSha
Res.

Unress.

Hey Sunain,

So sorry for unressing so late. Tum to badi hi chupi rustum nikli, but I'm so glad about it. You are a very good writer. And I love this arranged marraige stories, because it's very relatable. Most love stories start after marriage in Indian culture. You clearly depict the Sumo's predicament. But these two are ShraMan, and the writer is Sunain so I'm in to start a journey with them. 👍🏼

And you can't be an Alligator, you can be a Cute TeddyBear who brings smile on everyone's face.

So see you later TeddyBear.❤️

Lubna.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Castile2

@Castile2

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Unressed on pg. 1

How are you feeling now?

Quote

Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Castile2
Re...
Unress

Hey Bud!
Hii

You asked me to conquer my fears and I did exactly, although on an impulse but I did...all thanks to you Sunain.
I'm so glad u did.

Another thank you for dedicating something beautiful like this to me 😳
Pleasures all mine.😊

You started your journey with 'Humsafars' and now we are at 'Mere Ajnabi'...rings something?!
I really didnt noticed tht...quite a coincidence😳

Coming to the update, this one was engaging. ShraMan having an arranged marriage is anyway exciting in its own... And you add the tadka of 'Ehsaan' and 'strangers' in the mix!!
Thank you😳..wel tht tadka is the main element of this story😉

And you left it all hanging on Shravan! What was he going to say? You have to post this soon...
Will do so as soon as i'm done with Humsafars nxt chap.

Hint/spoiler:"... yaa they both dont know eachother thy have met twice or thrice..thts wht thy think #hint"
Na ji na..no spoilers..agar bata dea tu suspense ka maza kharab ho jaay ga😆

Hmmm this gets me thinking...
Soocho soocho😛

Update soon I'm waiting...
Love
Cas 😳

Casi!

Thank you so much for such sweet words thy mean A lot!

I'm so glad u liked it!

Love you too My Pumpkin🤗

Originally posted by: Castile2
Unressed on pg. 1

How are you feeling now?

Much better😃...just a bit under the weather.

Thank you Casi!

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

Quote

Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: LubSha
Unress.
Hey Sunain,

So sorry for unressing so late. Tum to badi hi chupi rustum nikli, but I'm so glad about it. You are a very good writer. And I love this arranged marraige stories, because it's very relatable. Most love stories start after marriage in Indian culture. You clearly depict the Sumo's predicament. But these two are ShraMan, and the writer is Sunain so I'm in to start a journey with them. 👍🏼

And you can't be an Alligator, you can be a Cute TeddyBear who brings smile on everyone's face.

So see you later TeddyBear.❤️

Lubna.

Thank you so much Lub!

Your words means alot!

I'm so glad u liked it!😳

@Bold

Thts really sweet of you..feeling so overwhelmed☺️

Thank u so much for sucha beautiful nickie😊

Love you dear🤗

Quote

Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Sunain

Jhooti...😲


"warning my comments are not as good as yours"


Yeh kisnay kaha tha...ur comment was way better thn mine...I so loved it!
You pin pointed the miniest details of my update which nobody did and it was so overwhelming to read such a wonderful comment...Thank you so so so much for such a lovely comment!😳
I literally cant stop smiling😃☺️
M so glad u liked it!

So content that my comment made you so happy 😊
N whenever I love some writeup I just feel that as a reader I should point out what I liked the most n how...thats the least I can do when you as a writer put soo much time n effort in writing them... 😊

Update whenever you can n I'll read that TS as well asap..!!
Love ya sista... 🤗

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

Quote

evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

First of all... I am really glad you decided to write again...!!!

Yaar i am such a beep.. this one was dedicated to me also and i am the last one commenting here... 😭

I am so sorry Sunain... Maaafi de de na yaar...

I cant believe that i made you start writing this SS...!!! i am overwhelmed to know that... pata nahi kyon.. but i am really very happy that you decided to wrie and you dedicated it to me.. *wipes happy tears*

And coming to the update... i am loving it already...

Beautifully written. ❤️

Nice concept yaar..

Arranged marriage..!!! That will be interesting to read.. Sumo toh is already bowled over by our Mr. Handsome...!!!

But Shravan ne aisa kya bol diya yaar ab...!!!

Sunain this is so not fair... how could you stop there yaar...

Mera patience level toh bilkul Zero hai... Cant wait to read the next part yaar.

Please update very very soonish...!!!

And very very very sorry for my late lateefness. 🥱

Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago