Suman's Realisation For Her Love: An Shraman os part 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy guys i am back with another update.and wish all a very happy new year.
Part4
Sumo has returned to home and mami is angry with her as she has returned late but preeti give excuse of her stuff and suman get excused from the scolding part

Suman is in her room all smiling and thinking of today's incidences.
And there shravan is also thinking the same.

Shravan pov
Aaj mai Jealous hua kyuki mai sumo se pyaar karta hu. I know ki mujhe Jealous ne hona cahiye tha kyuki unke beech kuch ne h pr mai hua
To agar mai sumo ko jealous krne ka try kru to, agr vo mujhse pyaar karti hogi to jealous hogi varna nhi.Ha ye achha idea hai. Ye idea mai pushkr ke birthday suprise mai implement karunga. Lets see what happens.
Suddenly Pushkar enter his room

Pushkar- kya kar rhe ho bhaiya
Shravan- kuch ne tu bta
Pushkar- kl aap free ho kya
( tommorrow is pushkar's birthday )
Shravan- nhi yaar kal to mai bilkul free nhi hu clg ka kuch kaam h, shooping bhi jana h kyu tujhe kuch kaam h mujhse
Pushkar- nhi bhaiya kuch bhi to nhi
Shravan smiles silently and says- okk mujhe lga kuch hai agr kuch kaam ho to bta diya
Pushkar- theek h bhaiya
And he left

Pushkar's pov
Bhaiya ko to kuch yaad ne h ki kal mera birthday hai mai to bekar mai excited ho rha tha. Sumo se puchta hu shayad use yaad ho. And he calls sumo ( excitedly )

Sumo- hello pushkar
Pushkar- sumo kl tu free hai kahi bahar chale
sumo- kal kyu kal isa kya hai
Pushkar- isa kuch ne h bas mera mann kar rha tha ( he gets sad to know she also forgets his birthday )
Sumo- ohhk par yaar mai to kal free nhi hu mera to vo actually.. ( she fumbles and think of an excuse )
Ha yaad aaya kl to mera interview h clg mai so mai to ne aa paungi
Pushkar- ohh achha all the best for your interview
Sumo- thanks
pushkar- chal koi ne mai kissi aur se puch lunga byee
Sumo- byee

Sumo feels guilty for lying but then thinks his birthday will become memorable for what they have planned and gets happy again.

Then sumo calls shravan
Shravan- ha bolo
Suman- tu kabhi bhi hii hello kuch bologe nhi na seedha shuru ho jata ho
shravan- ha to hi hello mai time kyu waste karna
Suman- achha theek h maine tumhe ye batane ke liye call kiya tha ki abhi pushkar ka call aaya tha and she tell him the whole conversation held between them
Shravan- achha mere pass bhi aaya tha vo aur mujhse bhi same pucha
sumo- ohh tere saath bhi, mai to fatafat kuch socha taaki use kuch shak na ho
Shravan- ha par mujhe thoda bura lg rha h uske liye
sumo- relax shravan jb use gift milega apne birthday ko vo bhut khush hoga
shravan- ha ye to hai
Suman- chalo theek hai mujhe kuch prepration karni h to mai vo kr leti hu byee
Shravan- hmm byee

Shravan then calls his frd manya and told her about a plan which is to be executed on pushkar's birthday. And manya agrees to it.

Shravan's pov
Sumo ab pata chal jaega ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ya nhi. Mai janta hu tum karti ho par tumhe hi abhi tk iska ehsaas nhi hai shayad mere ise karne se ho jae

Here, sumo is bussy in the prepration of pushkar's birthday and after 2 hours all work get done.
Then her phone starts ringing. Without seeing the name she picks up the call thought to be shravan's

Sumo- ha shravan bolo
Manya- sumo its manya hii
sumo- ohh manya hii. Itne time baad tumne call kiya kya kaam hai mujhe pta h tum bina kaam ke to phone ne karogi
Manya- hmm vo actually mujhe shravan ka number cahiye tha aur mujhe pta tha tumhare pass to hoga hi to isliye
sumo- ha hai na par tumhe kyu cahiye
manya- vo mai shravan ko hi btaungi
sumo- ( feeling a little insecure) okk
And she gives shravan no to manya
( manya calls her because shravan told him to do that and it is a part of his plan. He doesnot want to hurt sumo but is only trying to realise sumo about her own feeling nothing else and manya is not any negative here)

And sometime
Sumo- shravan tu ready h
Shravan- ha tu aaja
sumo- okk

So here was the forth part of my ff. Think what shravan and sumu are upto and shravan plan will be a success or a fail.
And yess please comment and share your views.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sumo started feeling jealous... Its a good symptoms... Jalkukdi let's see Shravan's plan work out or not...

Shravan will get his love of his life before he goes to London...

Pushkie I feel bad for him I know he will be very happy after surprise birthday party...

Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing
absolutely loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome
Happy new year dear

Loved to watch jealous sumo
Plz create index of all parts
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