ShraMan OS | Labour of Love [16+] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such perfection.
These moments are so nicely written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the pm...it was beautiful...sumo is going to be a mother n obviously shravu will be an overprotective father n husband like always... n they're painting the room of their upcoming child...that's so cute... loved the talks while they were painting... especially the one you couldn't resist to touch me n he said don't tempt me...otherwise the walls are never going to get painted... their small bickering loved them... n the paint romance...that's new ... loved the chapter...have already read ur another os n ss m waiting for next part... waiting for next pm :) .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear..its very very lovely..😊
The concept of painting room is so cute..loved it a lot..👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous shot dear... 👏
ShraMan painting for their children and their teasing..
Aww so cute yr..
Beautiful
Love it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The first thing that left my mouth when I read the first three paragraphs was "YASSS". Sumo would SO be checking Shravan out like that, and this is probably really sad but I can totally imagine Namik's arms, hot damn.


I love how the fandom collectively seems to agree on the fact that Shravan would be a doting father and go on crazy shopping sprees. Ugh, I am so sad we don't get to see Shravan with his baby, there's just something really heart warming about watching huge intimidating men with little babies that warms my heart.


I like that you brought up Shravan's insecurity because of his own father because I feel like that would be the first thing on his mind when he finds out he's going to be a father. And Sumo is always there to reassure and support him, sigh, I miss ShraMan!


Awww, Winnie the Pooh stencils, you're killing me Serah! So cuteee!


I love that you explained their decision to paint the room themselves, it is so sweet! Shravan is so cute, I love your version of Daddy Shravan. Of course, he'd worry about if the baby likes the colour or not. Omg, "chubby miniature Sumo", the mental image is making me so happy right now. I was thinking about how Shravan would let his little princess paint his nails, have tea parties with her and watch her favourite shows with her the other day and now I am getting those feels again GAH.


I LOVE paint wars! Damn, that went from sweet to hot real quick girl. You're really good at writing these sensual scenes, and I adore the banter + dialogues in between, it makes everything so much more enjoyable to read. Plus, your dialogues are so witty and cute that I am giggling right along.


I love love love this piece, it's so adorable and you ticked off all the "Typical ShraMan boxes" - sexual tension, cuteness, competitiveness, teasing and bantering! I hope that room gets painted in those 8 months for chubby miniature Sumo or lanky miniature Shravan, hahaha! Keep these one-shots coming Serah! :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was awesome sauce!!
The seamless merging of friendship and their amour.

Aww!! The paint fight was sweet. Shravan would have been a wonderful father. I can't stop gushing imagining this giant with a miniature Sumo/Shravan. Just like Shinchan and his parents!!
😃

And I an sure he would raise a hellraiser with Sumo being the disciplianarian.

Their futuristic happiness is contagious. Loved their banters, the fights about the coming baby. And it soon escaladed into the paint fight and then they couldn't keep their hands odd each other.

This was love.

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