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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
You are so vivid. I actually thought of Namik and Nikita in this scene. It would be so nice to see them express on screen like the way you have described. Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey this was so adorable, for a second I started to imagine Nimik ,but hell the reality😭. Anyways it was a great update and ya thanx for the pm😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Awesome
Loved shravan❤️
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
thanks for making it an ss ...m so happy you know...loved the chapter from beginning to end...the love, emotion, trust, mischief, everything was just perfect...from the bed scene to cafe scene till end...
m speechless just don't know wat to say ...feeling overwhelmed after reading it ...loved it really. .thanks for pm...waiting for next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
So beautifully written... I am so glad you took these two to the coffee shop... bechara Shravan toh show mein coffee Pilane. bula raha tha lekin ramu kaka ne band Baja di
But this scenario is lovely ... romance over coffee!!!
Btw i can't wait to find out who gives in first ?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Wow! This is amazing. Pls continue... can't wait 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Pls continue writing.. this is what we all were waiting for .. and u expressed it beautifully !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Love love loved this <3

You write so beautifully:)

The pillow talk and the promise.
*sigh*
So beautiful :D

I love it when they play three questions.
I love it when Suman is all curled up in his lap.
I love it when they talk and rest their inhibitions.
I love it Shravan admires and flusters her in the morning.
I love it when he drops her.
I love it when he calls her Mrs. Malhotra.
I love it when the PCT staff takes his side.
I love it when they confess again and again and the promises they make that are never meant to be broken.
<3 <3

I love it when all you beautiful people write so beautifully on them.
Much love.
-God bless
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
This was awesomeee!!!
I love you writers for filling up the void of EDKV.

Part 1
How neatly you tied up the ends! 👏 👏

The initial awkwardness and then them being so open, both emotionally and ahem...

Shravan's continuous love confession melted my heart and Sumo's reply , that was so much awaited, was so cherished. The flow was beautiful.

The game of 3 questions was fabulous with them trying to solve the mess. This was what they needed, communication.

Man, I adored the way Sumo shivered with his touch. Something so natural to them, yet so new.

And when Shravan took her on his lap... it was palpable. More so for the emotional need to be so close to her.

"Let me hold you so close that we dissolve into each other"

Shravan wants to control despite Sumo wanting to proceed. Banda is hormonally challenged!! 😉

They cherish each other.

And I bet Shravan is gonna lose the dare.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Part 2
This was another masterpiece. There first morning together was beautiful. Hayye!!
Pure bliss.

Uff! Goldfish Preeti had to interrupt them!

Shravan at PCT was such a fulfiling sight and him working alongside her staff was so adorbs. 👏

Their date was fantabulous. Recreating the way it could have been, should have been!!

Mr. and Mrs. Malhotra are too cute for mere words.

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