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Hello everyone!!!!! Here is chapter 1 for u all.. Plzzz feel free to criticise I u don't like the story...ur suggestions will improve my writing...
Chapter 1
" Suman beta meri red wali tie kahan hai , mil nhi rhi ???came Ramnath uncle's voice
"Sumo tune meri file kaha rakhi hai?? Pushkar yelled
"Are Suman tumhe yad hai na meri friends aa rhi hain aaj, tumne mera fav pasta ab tak ni banaya?? there goes vandy bhabhi
" Aa rhi hu.Pura aasman sar pe utha rakha hai sabne." I muttered descending down the stairs
So folks, if u are wondering who am I?? Lemme introduced myself...I'm the one and only suman aka sumo aka lifeline of malhotra mansion. "Ek kam ni hota yaha mere bina"
Sorry to let u down if u were expecting a typical sweet simple girl wearing salwar kurta, anklets n bangles...coz i'm quite opposite. In pushkar baba's kind words," chatterbox, jhalli and a total tomboy" hey did I forget to mention I'm awesome
I love this family and they all love me more...wanna know how I ended up being here????
Flashback
A little girl was mopping the table., she accidently broke 2 cups.The owner of the restaurant was watching this from far. He walked upto her and held her by shoulders." u lil witch, how dare u broke those cups?? now who's gonna pay for them?" She broke in sobs," Sorry this won't happen again. plzz dont hit me." But the monster didn't listen to her pleas and she ended up battered and bruised. This lil girl was me. i am an orphan 'suman'...meaning flower. But this flower never got a chance to bloom. People say that a lady brought me here. But i have no memory of that lady or my parents...why?? i don't know. I only remember working here day and night like a slave. For every mistake I got a good dose of thrashing. That is why my whole body is covered in bruises and scars, some are fresh while others are healing. Every night i used to get nightmares of an accident. Some voices screaming my name.. i used to wake up covered in sweat and tears. I don't recognise these voices.
People took pity on me but never bothered to help. Until one day... i was washing utensils as usual. Suddenly i felt a tap on my shoulder and i shrieked," Plzzz mujhe mat maro." But there stood a little boy of more or less my age with a guilty expression on his face. He forwarded his hand and said," Hi!! I'm Shravan . Sorry maine tumhe dara diya.. Kya tum meri dost banogi?" I was so happy, i never had any friend so i gladly shook his hand and replied," Main suman...han". I didn't know that this day was going to change my entire life.
Shravan requested his father to let me stay with them. Seeing my pathetic condition he instantly agreed. He was a reowned lawyer and a very noble man. He took me under his care and filed a case against the owner under child labour prohibition and regulation act as i was a minor. When i entered the malhotra mansion i knew my whole life is going to be upside down...
------- End of flashback--------
So now u all are aware of my past...I have to go now...kaha???..,"Arey aaj shravan aa rha hai baba...pure 5 saal bad."
So how was it???? Plzzz do hit the like button if the story interests u and leave ur precious comments ...
Till then take care
PriyamPriyam ❤️
Chapter 1
" Suman beta meri red wali tie kahan hai , mil nhi rhi ???came Ramnath uncle's voice
"Sumo tune meri file kaha rakhi hai?? Pushkar yelled
"Are Suman tumhe yad hai na meri friends aa rhi hain aaj, tumne mera fav pasta ab tak ni banaya?? there goes vandy bhabhi
" Aa rhi hu.Pura aasman sar pe utha rakha hai sabne." I muttered descending down the stairs
So folks, if u are wondering who am I?? Lemme introduced myself...I'm the one and only suman aka sumo aka lifeline of malhotra mansion. "Ek kam ni hota yaha mere bina"
Sorry to let u down if u were expecting a typical sweet simple girl wearing salwar kurta, anklets n bangles...coz i'm quite opposite. In pushkar baba's kind words," chatterbox, jhalli and a total tomboy" hey did I forget to mention I'm awesome
I love this family and they all love me more...wanna know how I ended up being here????
Flashback
A little girl was mopping the table., she accidently broke 2 cups.The owner of the restaurant was watching this from far. He walked upto her and held her by shoulders." u lil witch, how dare u broke those cups?? now who's gonna pay for them?" She broke in sobs," Sorry this won't happen again. plzz dont hit me." But the monster didn't listen to her pleas and she ended up battered and bruised. This lil girl was me. i am an orphan 'suman'...meaning flower. But this flower never got a chance to bloom. People say that a lady brought me here. But i have no memory of that lady or my parents...why?? i don't know. I only remember working here day and night like a slave. For every mistake I got a good dose of thrashing. That is why my whole body is covered in bruises and scars, some are fresh while others are healing. Every night i used to get nightmares of an accident. Some voices screaming my name.. i used to wake up covered in sweat and tears. I don't recognise these voices.
People took pity on me but never bothered to help. Until one day... i was washing utensils as usual. Suddenly i felt a tap on my shoulder and i shrieked," Plzzz mujhe mat maro." But there stood a little boy of more or less my age with a guilty expression on his face. He forwarded his hand and said," Hi!! I'm Shravan . Sorry maine tumhe dara diya.. Kya tum meri dost banogi?" I was so happy, i never had any friend so i gladly shook his hand and replied," Main suman...han". I didn't know that this day was going to change my entire life.
Shravan requested his father to let me stay with them. Seeing my pathetic condition he instantly agreed. He was a reowned lawyer and a very noble man. He took me under his care and filed a case against the owner under child labour prohibition and regulation act as i was a minor. When i entered the malhotra mansion i knew my whole life is going to be upside down...
------- End of flashback--------
So now u all are aware of my past...I have to go now...kaha???..,"Arey aaj shravan aa rha hai baba...pure 5 saal bad."
So how was it???? Plzzz do hit the like button if the story interests u and leave ur precious comments ...
Till then take care
PriyamPriyam ❤️
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