ShivAnya SS Truly Madly Ghostly - Chap 4, pg 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Vyom is manipulator 😲

Shiv's words had some hidden meaning. 😕

Shiv's closeness effecting Sharanya 😆

Thanks for PM Lara


Thanks to you for commenting.❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Awesome update... plot is getting more interesting now.

Is shiv really flirting... i doubt !!!
Loved reading it.
Do update soon.

Apoorva


Thanks, Apoorva!

Let's see what's happening and why...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
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Originally posted by: orion23

My place!

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Lara🤗

Zoya!

I'm so in love with this series, I honestly can't wait to read more! Its like I want to read everything right now! 😆

Aw... thanks!
But you need to wait to read everything, because I would need to
write it down first. 😆

Coming to this update, loved it buddy! Out and out, loved it

Thanks!🤗

The strumming of a guitar! Now she loves it
Shiv, the name has some major feels, add Namik's gorgeous face to the tally and I'm already in love! So I'm not surprised Sharanya feels something to ❤️

That is inevitable.

He is still surprised she can see him 😆 Me likey!

He stopped singing at night for her, oh my heart 🤪

The ghost is a gentleman.😉

Smirking face! 😳

It's easy if one put their heart to the task! He's a romantic too! Jaan legi Lara tu ek din!

Ahem...😳

Vyom Bedi! HE's here! Hot shot prof! Batao! I can't wait to see how this pans out. He is intriguing. The best part? He knows he is magnetic and I have a feeling he will use that to his advantage.

Let's see... 😉

There is a hammock! I love hammocks! They are so comfortable. Best place to read 😃

True.

So, they have similar tastes in poetry! Lord Byron, no less! I can imagine the timber he must have recited the couplet in, my soul ☺️
Byronic musician? Is that even a thing? I love it!

What can I say - Byron and a dead soulmate sounded to me like a perfect match. 😆
I'm super pleased you liked it and the Byronic musician term.😳

Sharanya the baboon! 😆 I don't blame her, who wouldn't!

That's right.😆

Hammock and his giant form 🤣
At first my mind went to the gutter then I imagined the hammock break and I laughed and then it went to the gutter again.. I'm hopeless!

I'm even more hopeless as the creator of the potential scene. 😆
Welcome to the gutter...🤣

He was awaiting her invitation! GentleGhost! 😎

Nice name... 👏😎

The whole next bit gave me feels, so many feels... My emotions were all over the place. I've read this update about 5 times since and this bit I've lost count of.. Its sheer brilliance Lara! This is the kind of writing that made me fall in love with your works in the first place! ❤️

Wow... you read it 5 times!
My heart.❤️
Thanks!

He's accustomed to bulbs blowing around him and many people already complained.. Tell me, can Shiv not leave the home he is in? I know you won't but no harm trying 😆

lol... 😆
Let's just wait for the twisty next bits of the story. 😉

I'm not sure why but his "You're upset"makes me love him more. As though her happiness and contentment is all he cares about 😳

It will only grow intense. Just wait for it. 😉
But it will definitely be a challenge writing down the progress.


Blessing in disguise! Pleasure! Desire! Sharanya is not the only one deep in the gutter here! I have hopes now Lara! You have to pleasure my mind in the way I desire 😉

Have patience, girl.😉

Cold wind, opened the book! Shiv! Ah!

I'm in blissful zone now Lara! I need more! A lot more! My thirst for this story just keeps increasing! I'm hoping you will satiate soon!

Soon... very soon. Tomorrow in fact.😃

Can't wait!

Cheers!

Zo!

Love you so much, Zo!
You're wonderful person.
And your comment as usual made me so happy.
Thank you so much.
Take care.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

I will tomorrow.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

YASSS! I'm floored with this update. You are so creative. I love the ShivAnya conversation and her thoughts...dirty thoughts. 😆

Vyom's into was nice. He seems like one of those Casanova kind of professors. Just a thought. 🤔

Continue sooner and thank you for the PM! 🤗

~ Mrina <3


Thank you so much, Mrina!

I'm totally pleased to know that you liked the updt that much. 😃
Love you!

Will updt tomorrow.
Take care.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Joyness

Read all updates together Lara...just superb...

Loving the way you are writing a ghost story


Thank you! 🤗
I hope you'll enjoy the future chaps too.
Take care.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Vyom bedi - professor / manipulator 😆

ShivAnya are coming close

Shiv on sharanya territory! 😳

Read all part in one go..It's awesome! 😃


Thank you so much, love! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Thanks!❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Ranified009

I've read and written on Byronic heroes...never a Byronic singer before😆. I've been through Childe Harold, Beppo and Don juan (just first two cantos) and successfully failed to recognize the source of the verses you used... please enlighten me. His romanticism is raw and intriguing.

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

The poem is Byron's "There Be None Of Beauty's Daughters"

And about Byronic Singer term -- Sharanya is quite amusing, isn't she? 😆
Keep reading to see further escalation of her creative name callings and terms. 😉

So the friendly neighborhood spirit seeks an accomplice in her...and she like a moth to fire can't resist...

Exactly.

And that "I'm used to it" for the lightsout was a bit of a something for me...I'm a bit oversensitive.
I wonder what the professors got to do here! He better not treat the ghost as an apparition of Sharanya's mind :'(

The professor will play a big role in the future. Will reveal in time...😉
The fight's going to be more between science and faith.

On edge of the seat for the next one Lara :D

The chap's ready, will updt tmrw.
Thanks and love you!🤗


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Read all 3 chapters in one

Simply awesome


Thank you so much! 🤗
I'm so glad you liked it.

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