MriAra FF||Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi||IMP note pg. 60 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice one..😊
a completely new version of Mj-tara.. interesting.

bring it on!!😃

ps: whats ur name, btw??
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Originally posted by: bright_star89

hey nice one..😊

a completely new version of Mj-tara.. interesting.

bring it on!!😃

ps: whats ur name, btw??



Glad you like it! :)
My name's Kiret 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2


An hour or so later, I walked into my house. "Papa, I'm home," I said, hanging my keys and bag up. "Great, you're home. How was your day today? Did you meet Mrityunjay?" he asked. "Papa, so many questions, all at once?" I said and sat down on the couch next to him. "Today was a good day and Mrityunjay is back. And yes, Aunty called us over for dinner so make sure that you get ready," I said. "Ok, you go and get ready as well,," he said. "Yes Papa," I said and went to my room.

I was really happy today. Mrityunjay was back. I could finally be with my best friend again. I quickly changed my clothes and got ready for dinner. I chose a black and blue anarkali, Mrityunjay's favourite colour combination on me. Or well that's what he said last time. After Papa was ready, we walked to Mrityunjay's house. Mrityunjay and I were neighbors and we had spent our entire childhood together. Even after he had gone to London, I spent most of my time at his house with his mom anyways. We rang the doorbell and Nirmila aunty opened the door. "Taara, you're here? Come on in," she said inviting us in. "Where's Mrityunjay?" I asked. "He's up on the terrace. Go ahead and meet him," she said. "Ok," I said and hurried up towards the terrace.

I was standing on the terrace when I heard the tinkling of bells. It was Taara's payal. I was about to turn around when I felt her hands on my eyes. She always thought that she could surprise me but she never managed to. I always knew she was coming before she reached me. "Taara, I know it's you," I said. "What the- Mrityunjay how do you always know that it's me?" she asked. "Your anklet," I replied. "Not fair," she said and made her sad face. "Hey, don't make faces like that. You look like a big blown up balloon," I said. "Shut up Mrityunjay," she said, hitting my arm lightly.

"By the way, how did you spend the past two years without me?" I asked. "The same way that you spent them," she replied. "I had a lot of fun. You know parties and all, I didn't really have a lot of time to miss you," I said, to annoy her. To be honest, I missed her a lot. "Yeah, yeah. It's not like I missed you either," she said. "Really?" I asked. "Really," she replied and crossed her arms. I loved annoying her. "By the way, I got a gift for you," I said. "Really? Then what are you waiting for? I want my gift," she said. "Your gift is in my room," I said. "Then come on, let's go," she said. She started towards my room and I followed behind her.

I walked into Mrityunjay's room. I actually spent quite a bit of time here when he was gone, remembering all the moments we had spent in this room, playing games, doing homework and what not. "Well, where's my gift?" I asked. "One minute," he said and went to his closet. He pulled out a small gift bag and handed it to me. "Here you go," he said. I took the bag from him and opened it. In there was a box. I opened the box and found a dozen blue glass bangles. I loved wearing bangles. This was probably the best gift ever. "Mrityunjay..." I said. "It took a lot of effort to find these for you. At first, I didn't know what to get you. Then I saw these at a store there and knew that they were perfect for you," he said. "Thank you," I said giving him a hug. "Your welcome," he replied and hugged me back.

"Taara, Mrityunjay, come downstairs. Dinner is ready," Aunty called from downstairs. I broke the hug. I took off the bangles that I was already wearing and put on the ones Mrityunjay gave me. "How are they?" I asked. "Perfect," he said. I smiled and grabbed the bag. "Ready to go?" he asked. "Yup, let's go," I replied. We went downstairs and towards the dinner table. I could bear some hushed conversations.

"When will you tell Taara?" I heard aunty say. "It's not the right time right now. Mrityunjay just came back and Taara is so happy," Papa said. "What do you want to tell me?" I asked. "Taara, you're here? Come sit," Papa said, patting the chair next to him. "First tell me, what are you guys hiding from me?" I asked. I wasn't used to Papa keeping secrets from me. "Taara, we were just talking about your marriage," Aunty said. "Really? Papa, you know na, that I'm not in the mood to get married yet," I said. It was true. Right now I wanted to focus on my career. I had finished college and wanted to get a job soon. "We know Taara, we were just talking," Papa said. "Why don't the two of you sit and eat now," aunty said. I went and sat next to papa and Mrityunjay sat across from me and we started dinner.

After dinner, Taara left with uncle. It felt good to be at home and with the people I love. I headed up to my room. I opened my closet and took out my guitar. It had been two years since I had played it. There was no one to listen to it in London. I remember how Taara loved the tune and would only fall asleep once she heard it. I wondered if that was still the same case today. I went out to the terrace and started to play the tune I always played.

We had gotten home and I went up to my room. I was taking off my jewelry when I heard it. The tune. I could never fall asleep without it. The past two years had been so difficult, but I had recorded the tune on my phone once. That was the only thing that helped me fall asleep. But now he was back. There was something about this tune that made it so special, so magical. I opened the door of my balcony and saw Mrityunjay on the other side. I smiled. He was to busy playing his guitar to notice that I was standing right there. I slowly walled back into my room and closed the door. I leaned against it as I heard the beautiful tune.

A/N: Hope you guys like this update! Leave your comments please :) PMs and colouring later :D

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tara dresses in the colours Mrityunjay likes on her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The terrace scene was cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Mrityunjay loves to annoy Tara and the gift was sweet!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But he has come back from abroad aur koi accha sa gift kyun nahi laaya woh Tara ke liye??😕 😕 😕 😕

It was sweet that she put them on!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara's father is avoiding talking about it to Tara now but I think he would have to tell her soon!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

He wants Tara to get married and I think Mrityunjay is the one they want her to get married to!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Tara needs Mrityunjay to play the tune on his guitar for her to sleep!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I think it is better she gets him for life so that she can sleep in peace with him by her side!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊



Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara dresses in the colours Mrityunjay likes on her!!!!!😊


The terrace scene was cute!!!!😳

Mrityunjay loves to annoy Tara and the gift was sweet!!!!!!😊

But he has come back from abroad aur koi accha sa gift kyun nahi laaya woh Tara ke liye??😕

It was sweet that she put them on!!!!!😊

Tara's father is avoiding talking about it to Tara now but I think he would have to tell her soon!!!!!🤔

He wants Tara to get married and I think Mrityunjay is the one they want her to get married to!!!!!👍🏼

Tara needs Mrityunjay to play the tune on his guitar for her to sleep!!!!!😊

I think it is better she gets him for life so that she can sleep in peace with him by her side!!!!!😊






Firstly thank you for commenting :)
I am glad that you liked the update!
And Taara is a very simple girl and Mrityunjay knew that she wouldlike ssomething expensive... She finds happiness in the smallest things in life :)
The restof your qquestions will be answered in the upcoming updates :)



Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful...beautiful...just beautiful...

Kiret...ur update is just fabulous...⭐️

So many cute scenes are thr...

Awww bangle scene...just beatiful...

Pls update soon...love to read more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Beautiful...beautiful...just beautiful...

Kiret...ur update is just fabulous...⭐️

So many cute scenes are thr...

Awww bangle scene...just beatiful...

Pls update soon...love to read more...


thank you so much!
super glad you liked it!
Will try to update tomorrow if time permits 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a lovely update...looking upto the future updates.
Thanx 4 da PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SONA_

thank you for terracescene



You're welcome! 😊

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