SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63 - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Amazing update Grace...
I loved ArDhika scenes more than ever... The hug 😳
The old couple was so cute...
Neil escorting Rads out of the office 😆
Neil suspects Manya to be Sam's bf 🤣
(I hope it's Manya only)
I am excited to see what Neil does 😃


Thank you 😃

I really enjoyed writing that hug scene too slowly but surely we are seeing Ardhika get closer 😉

Neil, Neil, Neil...what are we going to do about him? 😕 😆 we will see if he lands himself into any sort of trouble 🤓
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lavv

ok...thanks for d update grace...part 1...nice...so its gng to b a lengthy one...

wen i logged in, saw ur update...felt happy...then renu's update...nice day...

k liked d tile...i think both r gng to think abt d lines, wat z there btween them hard...for sure...

liked arjun making ginger tea n thier conversation...especially dadaji n arjun...now arjun knows y radhika tells stories for a single question too..n non stop chatter box type...his analysis abt radhika's mom n dadaji was nice...

u answered d upcoming questions abt radhika working at arjun's place wen she can work at her house n all...

n neil n sam z being too much making radhika out of d office...



//i vl b happy, if i work at dat office...paid leave wen i get cold too...lol...just kidding...i know we hav work from home rule for dat...//

so rana z back...so its tuesday...nice...

liked d detail u gav abt arjun trying to solve a puzzle...all set to impress dadaji it seems...bcz nevr knew he works on puzzles n sudoku except work...n he didnt even know dat dadaji was already impressed r8...

i liked d line arjun said abt his mom n radhika's mom ...vl get along great was so nice...n it seems he wishes dat, if they exisit...he rarely says few things, so it was nice to hear n feel...

n dadaji telling arjun, abt having their own wen u r sick was good...he knows something z brewing btween these two...more than dat now arjun knows radhika's family/especially dadaji knows each n every detail happening in radhika's life..n surroundings for sure

arjun arranged picnic...nice...

u know wat i liked most in this update...d way u made arjun know dat radhika also faced pain...n how she z still chirpy n dealing d situation boldly...n how u made arjun revive his past to radhika...d way u come to dat point z nice...and d last hug was needed n perfect to d tile start ...

dat old man n lady was nice...d old guy appreciating old technology n d lady running vth time n making him understand dat...nice...

radhika voicing out her past only made arjun realise d tru possiblities of a person's life...its not always bed of roses...n it triggered him to take her to d factory...

i remember abt this factory n samrat n nandhu's few dialogs...arjun guilt only made me think some way he felt responsible for their death...

d reason u gav z also apt...

n dat guilt vl never leave him...n remembering d past//i dnt think he forgot abt it for a day also...in d first place...seconds n minutes n hours he for got d past vth radhika for sure...lol// definitely made him vulnerable bcz he flet he z d reason...n radhika gav d needed support n she vl make him realise, he z not d responsible...may b their conversation vl trigger abt d cause of accident...n all...



u filled d day, for good purpose..more d cute romance...this reveleation z wat he needed to let go of d guilt n set d things r8...n d hug n y he took radhika to d factory vl make him know y she z important n wats thier relation on dat basis...i am hoping he nevr took any of d relatives n friends to dat place ot he visited it often...very nice...

coming to neil, i am gng to think its manya or some gal...she z gng to enter it seems...n neil z gng to b in some trouble like always...n we r gng to enjoy it for sure...


so a get together plan z on d way...

//lemon rice n papad...total indian food...

hmm..take care...looking forward to read d next update...






I really like the title of this chapter myself 😆 that is why there is going to be a part 2 because I just couldn't write everything I wanted into one chapter...it would have been far too long

Arjun and Dadaji Convo

Personally one of my favorite scenes I've written

Dadaji seems to have something up his sleeve 😉

Ginger Tea and Familya

Arjun's slowly letting his guard down and letting Radhika enter his world even though he had said he would stay away from her or had warned her to stay away from him. But now we know why because he feels guilty about his parent's death. That somehow his words that night resulted in their death. And maybe a part of him thinks people who get too close to him will go away from him.

It's still just the beginning for Arjun and Radhika we will see how their story unfolds 🤓

I was trying to decide how I was going to write about Arjun's past and his guilt. And then this picnic scene with Radhika's revelation of her own past just came about and it just lend itself to a perfect segue to Arjun showing Radhika the old factory and him revealing his past to her.

Obviously there is more to the story about the death of Arjun's parents. The family dynamics changed after it and I've been hinting that throughout. How is Nandini, Samrat, and the rest of Arjun's family involved? You'll just have to continue reading to find out 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for taking the time to comment! It really means a lot 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good one...I really want to see how Neil handles Manny and what turns it would bring to their relationship and plz plz some romance or at least the start of it between Neil and sam
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -GayathriK-

Wow!!!

I am still in my sweet Ardhika land! That hug just took me off from the world! 😉 It was emotional, comforting and awesome! It felt like both of them were sharing the hard part of their tale and being a support for each other!
Loved the dadaji and Arjun conversation! Seems like dadaji has caught a hint of the Ardhika element in the whole sick and stay home thing! 😆
Poor Neil has to find out this manny now.
I cant wait for part 2 now! :P
Continue soon 😃


Thank you for the lovely comments!

I really enjoyed writing the Arjun and Dadaji convo 😆 Dadaji seems to know something is brewing or is at least up to something on his own

Ardhika ❤️ hug and past revelation scene was another one I enjoyed writing

Neil, Neil, Neil...I am so mean to him 😈 we will see what troubles he ends up landing himself into
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hanishank

Grace...
the update is surprise... thank u so much

I liked it very much...ending is superb..consoling eachother is too good...

now I guess Neil will turn to detective :-)

amazing ur description is...and the story telling


Thank you for the kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Ardhika comforting each other what more can you ask for?

Hope to do justice for Neil and Sam in the next chapter 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic part Grace😃

Loved Arjun's conversation with Dadaji⭐️


Thank you Nonie12345 😃

Arjun and Dadaji convo was one of my fav scenes I wrote 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hari1403

Grace u r amazing dear.

Loved everything in this update dear. Ardhika's picnic,old couple, Neil's curiosity ,dhadhaji n arjun's convo,ardhika's convo after that phone call,arjun's words in factory..,everything is superb dear.
Will be waiting for part 2 of this chapter.


Thank you so much hari1403 so glad you enjoyed this chapter!

Personally two of my favorite scenes I have written so far is the Arjun and Dadaji convo and the Arjun factory scene 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive

Loved the update Grace. You are taking the story ahead very smoothly and interestingly . Keep Rocking !!👍🏼


Thank you so much ArthunaAlive so glad you are enjoying the story thus far. Hope to continue to make things interesting 😃

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