Originally posted by: lavv
ok...thanks for d update grace...part 1...nice...so its gng to b a lengthy one...
wen i logged in, saw ur update...felt happy...then renu's update...nice day...
k liked d tile...i think both r gng to think abt d lines, wat z there btween them hard...for sure...
liked arjun making ginger tea n thier conversation...especially dadaji n arjun...now arjun knows y radhika tells stories for a single question too..n non stop chatter box type...his analysis abt radhika's mom n dadaji was nice...
u answered d upcoming questions abt radhika working at arjun's place wen she can work at her house n all...
n neil n sam z being too much making radhika out of d office...
//i vl b happy, if i work at dat office...paid leave wen i get cold too...lol...just kidding...i know we hav work from home rule for dat...//
so rana z back...so its tuesday...nice...
liked d detail u gav abt arjun trying to solve a puzzle...all set to impress dadaji it seems...bcz nevr knew he works on puzzles n sudoku except work...n he didnt even know dat dadaji was already impressed r8...
i liked d line arjun said abt his mom n radhika's mom ...vl get along great was so nice...n it seems he wishes dat, if they exisit...he rarely says few things, so it was nice to hear n feel...
n dadaji telling arjun, abt having their own wen u r sick was good...he knows something z brewing btween these two...more than dat now arjun knows radhika's family/especially dadaji knows each n every detail happening in radhika's life..n surroundings for sure
arjun arranged picnic...nice...
u know wat i liked most in this update...d way u made arjun know dat radhika also faced pain...n how she z still chirpy n dealing d situation boldly...n how u made arjun revive his past to radhika...d way u come to dat point z nice...and d last hug was needed n perfect to d tile start ...
dat old man n lady was nice...d old guy appreciating old technology n d lady running vth time n making him understand dat...nice...
radhika voicing out her past only made arjun realise d tru possiblities of a person's life...its not always bed of roses...n it triggered him to take her to d factory...
i remember abt this factory n samrat n nandhu's few dialogs...arjun guilt only made me think some way he felt responsible for their death...
d reason u gav z also apt...
n dat guilt vl never leave him...n remembering d past//i dnt think he forgot abt it for a day also...in d first place...seconds n minutes n hours he for got d past vth radhika for sure...lol// definitely made him vulnerable bcz he flet he z d reason...n radhika gav d needed support n she vl make him realise, he z not d responsible...may b their conversation vl trigger abt d cause of accident...n all...
u filled d day, for good purpose..more d cute romance...this reveleation z wat he needed to let go of d guilt n set d things r8...n d hug n y he took radhika to d factory vl make him know y she z important n wats thier relation on dat basis...i am hoping he nevr took any of d relatives n friends to dat place ot he visited it often...very nice...
coming to neil, i am gng to think its manya or some gal...she z gng to enter it seems...n neil z gng to b in some trouble like always...n we r gng to enjoy it for sure...
so a get together plan z on d way...
//lemon rice n papad...total indian food...
hmm..take care...looking forward to read d next update...