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Posted: 11 years ago

Two more characters are included.

Our dearest Ajji and Tina (Antara's friend)


PART 2

Machmach teased Antara whole day showing Raghu's pictures. Antara saw maximum number of Raghu's picture with Rukhsana and was some how feeling jealous. She had not even met him but still Machmach knew about Rukhsana and Raghu's relation, but he choose to kept quiet he wanted to have fun. On the other hand, Raghu always knew of Machmach as Antara's elder brother.

At Night

The door bell of Naik Mansion rang and Satya himself opened the door thinking it will be Ashok but it was a suprise. It was Ajji, Raghu came down and hugged Ajji she was confused that why everybody is so happy today.

"Ajji kya howa" asked Raghu. "Sab itne khush kyun hai? asked Ajji.

"Woh mummy ji ajj nah Raghu key liye rishta aaya hai, or to or Larki key Daddy aj milne arehe hai" replied Daya very happily. "Deva, mere ko laga ki Larki arehe hai. Waise hai kon yeh log" Ajji inquired.

"Maa woh hai na Kaul Industries key Ashok Kaul unki beti Antara" Satya sajd. "Ohh woh Ashokii, woh to bade ache log hai or khandan bhi bohat acha hai. Antara ki dadi yani DJ or mein bohat ache dost thy" Ajji said. By now everyone was on sofa and they had forgotten that Ashok was coming, but the bell made them realise that. Ajji became very happy with the Satya's decisoin and she was supportive in that firstly, Raghu and Antara should met.

This time Raghu opened the door it was Ashok. He touched his feet and Ashok hugged him. He was greeted and welcomed by all. "Ishaan kyun nahi aaya"? asked Satya. "Satya woh ek important meeting attend kar raha hai or phir kal woh US ke liye nikal raha hai to woh nahi aa payega".

Everyone talked alot and Ashok told a lot about Antara to Raghu. Satya said, "Antara and Raghu should talk to each other". Ashok gave Antara's number to Raghu to talk directly and decide where and how to met. Raghu was more then happy and he didn't knew why. They had dinner together and Ashok remembered his mom when he had seen Ajji. On the way back to hotel Ashok had told Antara that Raghu is going to call her.

Now Antara was all nervous it was the first time she was going to see a guy and that also the Naik's boy, Raghu Naik. Oth the other side, Raghu was so happy that he wants to dance and sing for one girl whom he never met.


Naik House

Rukhsana said, "Raghu when will you call my bhabhi for the 1st time". Firstly she teased him all sitting in the hall laughed on seeing his flushed face.

Dadi, "Tu kyun sharma raha hai Chintu tu toh mera sher puttar hai sharma toh woh rahi hogi. Hayee par tu phone kab karga?". But Raghu was taking his sweet time deciding. He was thinking how would she react and what to talk. Well 1st call and how can you ask for a date. He was damn was confused.


Kaul House

Antara was waiting for Raghu's call. Here also the teasing was on and Antara was waiting for call in same dilemma what to talk to him. How can she but her phone bought her out of thoughts she was in room and waiting for his call when her mind drifted off into deep thinking. But when phone rang the butterfly in her stomach started to dance she was hoping it was him but it was Tina her only girl friend. She was dissappointed and this was being clearly heard in her voice as she picked her phone. "Hello" she said dissapointedly. "Hi phone nahi aaya nah uska??" Tina asked teasingly. "Tujhe kaise pata??" Antara asked curiously. "Teri awaz se saf pata chal raha hai" she said smiling and Antara understood it. " Waise how do you know that he is gonna call??" Antara asked. "Machmach ne bataya" she replied. Tu rukk mein tujhe thori dair baad call karty hoon. Abhi tu us Machmach ke bache ko marti hoon, uske pait mein koi baat nahi rehty". Saying this Antara took her phone in hand and she ran down to get Machmach. Machmach was sitting with Geeta buttering her to make gobi key parathey for breakfast next morning. When Antara came down shouting, "Machmach tu ruk ab" she said as she ran down. "Tina ne call kardiya lagta hai aunty jee ab aeyga maza" he said so that only Geeta could hear, "Naughty" Geeta said said smiling. Antara ran upto him and he ran behind sofa she went towards the sofa and they both look like Tom & Jerry. Continuously running behind one another. When Antara's phone rang and she thought it must be Tina before picking Machmach commented, "Haan ajj kal toh log phone sath ley key ghumty hai jaise kisi ka call aane wala hai". Antara ignored him and picked up thinking why did she bring phone with her?? Panting panting she picked up the phone. "Tinu bola nah mai baad mein call karogy, abhi yeh Machmach ke bache ko dekh lo pehle" without realising who it was...


"Antara", Raghu said in deep voice making Antara shiver. She never knew his voice was so deep and sexy. "Hello" he repeated waiting for some answer which brought Antara out of her thoughts. She actioned Machmach something and ran up to her room, till now she hadn't said a word but making Raghu realised she was still there she took deep breath in middled to calm her breathing down. She finally locked her door and said, "Hello". "Hi" he said again. " Should I call back if you want to catch Machmach??" "No don't worry I am already in my room".

He laughed out, "I am sorry for that". "Thats ok" Antara said smiling to herself. "Antara, how are you??" Raghu was also in his room talking to her. " I am fine how about you??" " I am very good and happy too" said Raghu.

"Why you so happy??" she asked questioningly. "I am taking a beautiful girl on date" Raghu said and Antara frowned. "Who is that girl??" she asked with complete jealousy in her tone. " I think you know her" he said teasing her. "How am I supposed to now any of your girlfriends" she said.

"Do you have web cam??" he asked hidding his laughter. "Ummm yes but shy??" she said. "Because I want to see you". If you are beautiful I will take you on a date" he teased. "Ok do you have a yahoo id??" he asked. "Yes wait let me switch it on". They both switched to webcam n kept their phones aside. Antara was very shy to go face to face but she agreed to it when Raghu asked her if it was ok. Antara was a modern girl but she liked to be with the people she knew and loved. Raghu being a bit different and was extrovert but tried and loved being with loved ones.

Antara finally started the webcam on and was face to face with him. He was lost seeing her, she look so beautiful that he actually stared at her and she didn't come to know even she did the same. But somehow Raghu pulled himself out of staring trance and he saw the beautifulAntara looking at him and she also moved when she felt his flushed faces. Raghu start speaking, "Antara I want to show you the girl whom I am taking on date". He took a mirror and place it infront of the webcam. Antara could see her face and she blushed. "I like you blushing" he said and she blushed more and he chuckled.

"Antara will you go on a date with me not because our parents want it tell yes if you want it" said sweetly. "Yes" she said without even thinking. He knew she said it from her heart and after their discussion and discussing their schedules, they decided to go on Friday when Antara was going to Mumbai for a deal with the retailers. She said she will come on saturday and he said that he will take her out around in Mumbai and on Sunday dinner with him and it was all from Raghu's side planning a full romantic dinner for her and fun on Saturday.

She loved the idea of being married with Raghu in near future. They talked a bit more and Raghu promised to call her everyday till sunday and he said that she can decide yes only on the same day to which she replied we will see. Raghu had made Antara so comfortable with him that they talked nearly an hour both were very anxious to meet each other.


Its funny how two people met in arranged marriage and get married and fall in love and lived happily ever after.

But here that was for their best. They both loved the idea of arranged marriage and now it was going to turn out perfect.

Two strangers met, they get to know each other % they fall in LOVE

here two strangers were Raghu & Antara.

They were gonna met & Definitely fall in Love is it ??

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nikki that was absolutely amazing! I just loved it! (:

First date! Yay!

Can't wait for the next update!

Update soon! (:
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nikki!
what an update girl!👏
a treat to read.⭐️
very subtle...fascinating...magnificent
Emotions are very beautifully penned down 😳😳😳

"Antara will you go on a date with me not because our parents want it tell yes if you want it"

awww...such a cute line...loved it 😳

I know its a simple arranged marriage story but yet it looks very amazing...😃

the way you are penning it down...I know its gonna be an epic!😊😊😊

hats off to you sweetheart for presenting it in a very brilliant and intense way... 👏
do update very very soon..😃😃
I can't wait for long, for their first date together...😉
sending you a gift for such a beautiful update...

sending loads of love and wishes 🤗
Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
see nikki..i am the first one who post review before two yediss kiret n purple😆...okay coming to update..😆

its sooo sweet n lovely FF of urs❤️...it seems i am watching movie of Suraj Badjateya.."Hum Aapke Hain Kaun".n "vivaah" types..n i really loved it..this is so pure.. n so beautifully penned down👏..i am amazed!😛

RAghu-Antu both so excited.😳n at the same time blushing so hard
Thanks for introducing aaji..jab bhi aaji aati hain...whole environment becomes happy n cheerful.😃.antu jealous abhi se!!..😆...raghu planned for date...its good start after first first meet!.😃.waiting for their first date..thank u so much for goody goody update..luv u mwahh!!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dat ws so sweet..
..antu jealous 😆 n raghu eager to talk to antara..n yes its so simple yet sweet stry 😉 finally rantara talked n saw eachother...
gosh both r soo cute...n so is our aji..
waiting fr nxt updare when rantara vl finally ..
meet ...nice n update sooon.. 😊
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww .
Wonderful update .
Loved it .
Thxs for the PM
😊🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 😛
antu already jealous
their phone convo nd they r going to met 😃
do continue asap
thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nikki
this update was fantastic yaar
aww she was waiting for his call
machmach buttering geeta wow hats of machmach
loved their little run around
rantara finally talked hayee
antu jealous of herself lol
I love this story yaar
pls cont asap
cant wait for their first date
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm loving this. .please continue fast!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry nikki for late commenting...
but what a lovely update yaar...
yaar i just love ur stories and chapters... it always gives a feel good type emotion even if you are sad mode..
rantara... haye.. first date...
and ajji aa gayi..yepiee
cont soon... and love you... muahhh

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