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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Awesome part
Update soon please 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Heyyy Rachel ,
whats up ? hey did i tell u . you have a beautiful name ??
well im telling u now :)

Rach dere are two things i hate in my life i.e misinformation and late information
and ajkal life mere saath yahi kar rahe hai ,

My screen gt ruined and i had to wait for its repair when i went to get it , the shopkeeper told me , it cant be repaired .

i gt new one , i just hated that he took two days to tell me that nd #2 when i log in , i see no pm (yes im talking abt ur update :😡 or nt even ur post been updated )

how would i know u updated huhhh ,

today i feel like reading ur os and requesting u to update and what i found ,
u already updated 😡😡😡
man i am Sonu Nath . , gets angry easily !!

so here is a dhamkish advice , pm or just update ur title with the word update .
plzzz

ok
now coming to the update :D

you sure ur writing first time , cuz i am having a hard time believing it :D

EXCEPTIONAL WRITING

and believe me i mean it .
so so so well written . cant tell u , specially with hindi dialogues , u nailed it ,

The mix of Raghu feeling is sooo well described and i just love how u describe , he can hurt her but its a big NO NO for others .

Goldsmith ki tu watt lag gaye 😆
and the doc scene ,

its just so confusing and contrasting ,

he is bottom to top in love wid her but didnt know his feeling ,

i justtt love it , its what i call an interesting work , where u just want to read more and more .

too good Rach. dialogues are tooo goood to be true ,

you have get the nerve of Raghu character sooo right and last dialogue when he says , he just dont cry on every lil thing , its mean but its cute , just like him

too good and i love how Antara is on silence mood , cuz she knows she is wrong and do remember what had happpend last time :D

Take a bow Rachel

and i want UPDAte and when i want it , i want it :D

plzzz updateee .,
abhi tu main pyar say bol rahe ho , u dont want my wrath 😆
kidding , great job !

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
its mind blowing dear ...loved it tooo much ...Raghu is just lik this ...i loved how u potrayed his character ...awesome ..
plzzz continue sooon and plzzz add update to ur title ..and pm me whenever u update ..
am dying to read more ...👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Here is Part - 3 of my SS. Hope you guys enjoy.
The doctor starts treating Antara's wounds. After it is done, doctor tells them that they can leave now. Antara thanks him.
They come out of the clinic. Raghu is in sheer pain but he does not express it. Antara suddenly stops, goes close to Raghu and takes his hand in her hand. She checks his hand out and turns back pulling him along. Raghu turns red with rage but is stunned to see her concern. Mera Maahi starts as she is facing forward and hurrying up to the doctor's room inspite of having injured feet and bewildered Raghu is looking at her from behind and is in a state of awe.

They enter doctor's room.

Raghu is surprised that Antara followed his footsteps and did not even knock before entering inside.

The doctor on seeing them again in his room, is flabbergasted and scared.

He starts praying to God to protect him but at the same time is confused to see Antara infront of him and Raghu behind her.

Antara : *Very politely* Doctor please do his first aid also. He is badly hurt.

Raghu : Aye. Bola na tereko...

Antara : *Interrupts* Raghu please? Aaji ke liye.

Doctor : Raghu bhai. Your hand is in a band condition. Let me please do the first aid.

Raghu does not respond and sits quietly.

Antara finally beams a bit in satisfaction.

After the required aid, they leave. This time with a lil' distance in between them, without any arguments and complaints. Turning their heads towards each other in between, while the other is looking away.

When they reach the parking area, Antara calls out Raghu.

Raghu : Bol?

Antara : Your hand is hurt. And the distance to be covered is long too. I think you should not drive and we should take a taxi.

Raghu : Bola na main tereko ki main koi dhudh peeta bachchaa nahin hun. Dobara samjhaun kya? Gadi chalani hai, hand pump se pani nahi nikalna hai.

Antara : Par Raghu...Aaji ko bhi bura lagega agar..hum..aise...

Raghu : Aye. Tu ek baat bata mereko? Why do you always get Aaji in between?

Antara : Kyunki hum donon unse jude hue hain aur main nahi chahti ki hamari ladai ki wajah se un par ya unki tabiyat par koi bhi asar ho.

Raghu : Han...vo kya hai na..tabhi tune vo sab nach nautanki main hissa liya...

Antara : Raghu...tum abhi bhi mujhe galat samajh rahe ho...Let us take a taxi please.

Raghu who is on his seat by now.

Raghu : Tereko aane ka hai ki main jaun?

Antara : You go. I'll take a taxi.

Raghu : Chup chap baith ja Antara.

Antara doesn't respond.

He gets down in all his anger and goes near her. As he forwards, she moves back. He pins her to the wall, and stares at her. Antara looks away and he is still staring. And a tear trickles down her right cheek. Raghu sees that and feels bad. He moves away and hits his hand(the one which is hurt) on the wall.* He is in a really confused state of mind*

Antara is scared after witnessing that. She doesn't speak anything. Raghu leaves and goes to the parking reception to pay some amount and returns back.
Raghu holds her hand and walks out of the parking area.

Antara is baffled up. *She thinks what is he upto now*

Raghu : *Shouts* Taxi.

Taxi wala stops.

Raghu : *Opens the door* Get in Antara.

Antara thinks that he is just sending her away alone. She is about to say something...when Raghu also sits beside her in the taxi.

She loses her mind. She is really annoyed to bear his fickle mindedness.

The taxi wala starts and they leave.

Antara sits close to the window and is looking outside, lost in her thoughts while Raghu sits a few cm away from her, and relaxes onto the seat with his hands folded under his head.They are on a highway, and suddenly the taxi stops. The taxi wala tries to restart but the taxi doesn't start.

He gets down and opens the bonnet and starts checking the engine.

One hour passes by. It is dusky now. Antara is worried and scared.

Raghu is helping the taxi driver, but without any result.

Raghu : Aye miss call...bahar nikal. Humko lift leni padegi warna puri raat yahin is taxi main hi nikalni padegi.

Antara comes out. Par Raghu yahan toh door door tak kuch nahi hai.

Raghu : Mumbai ke gadi wale kya aj ghar se soch ke nikle thi ki Antara aur Raghu ki taxi kharaab hone wali hai aur unhe lift ki jarurat padegi toh hamein inki gadi ke peeche chalna chahie.Intezar kar...mil jaega truck wala.

Antara : *On hearing truck, overreacts* Truck?

Raghu : Tu bole toh tere liye helicopter bulwa dun?Aur vaise bhi ye taxi pakadne ki jidd bhi teri hi thi, toh bhugat ab aur ho pareshaan.

Antara is miffed and looks away making a cute irritated face.

Raghu : *To the taxi driver* Bhau...tumi pan chala majha barobar?( Brother, you also come along with me?)

Taxi : Nahi bhau.Dhanywaad tumcha pan me ata ikde taxi madhe jhopnare ani udya sakala mi yethuna sodata.(No brother. Thankyou.But I'm going to sleep here itself in the taxi now and tomorrow morning I'll leave from here.)

Raghu : Thika Bhau. Swatachi kalaji ghya.Mi udya tumcha sathi mechanic pathava.(Okay. Brother.Take care of yourself. I'll send a mechanic for you tomorrow.)

Raghu can see a truck at some distance, coming towards them. He goes on the roadside to stop it. As the truck approaches him, he asks for the lift.

The driver is a Sardarji.Raghu is amused after a long.

Raghu : To Sardarji, bringing on his humurous side, Oh paaji! Kya baat! Kolhapuri Mirchi ke desh main Punjabi Lassi da glass.

Sardarji : Oh ji! Vadiya kaha. Assi mirchi khaake lassi peete hain.Bolo ji...kidhar jana hai.

Raghu : Sardarji, taxi kharaab ho gayi. Shehar main chod do.Wahan se aage chale jaenge.

Sardarji : Ji jarur. Tussi baith jaao aaraam se peeche. Kudiye nu sambhal ke chadana ji. Girlfriend hai twadi?

Raghu : Nahi. *Again with anger*

Sardarji : Naraaz mat ho ji aap. Baith jao. Main pahucha dunga aapko.

Raghu : Han baithte hain.

Raghu calls Antara and tells her that Sardarji will drop them in the town. He lends her his hand and tells her to board the truck with his help.

Both of them board the truck and Raghu calls out loudly asks Sardarji to start.

Raghu and Antara are sitting quietly. Raghu notices the fear on Antara's face .

Raghu : Do not worry. I'm there. Nothing will happen to you. He will drop us safely in the town.

Antara : I'm worried. It is already very late.

About then, Raghu notices the fleeing truck zigzagging down the highway. He gets up in a muddled state, guessing that something is wrong and they are in utter danger.He takes his head out and tries to look over at the cab area to find out what is wrong,but without any help.

Antara who is really scared and is about to break down, stands up too.

Raghu : We will have to jump off from the truck. Do not argue or interrogate me now. We have less time and if you want to stay alive, agree with me. Keep shut and hold my hand.

Antara nods in agreement.

He lends his hurt hand and takes her by the waist from another hand and plunges off the truck along with her.

They gush into the jungle and keep rolling down for sometime,in each other's arms,until they are stopped by a tree. Without any distance,amidst the forest,upclose, Raghu looking at Antara and Antara's eyes are closed and he is covering her from the back totally just to protect her from getting hurt,and Mera Maahi tu in the background.

Leave your views. They mean a lot. <3

Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have to go , so i reserved(r) my place :D

you know its good to be the first one :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonu-monu



i have to go , so i reserved(r) my place :D

you know its good to be the first one :D

LOL. My bad! Okay.
Awww...hehe..Love love!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Jst found ur story...read all the chaps in one go...nd im madly in love with thos...u r an amazing writwr wjo portrais raghus difficult character sooo beaitiful...loved it when u let him speak in marathi nd punjabi..

Plzzz pm me whenever u update dieing to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg,I just loved it..Plz plz plz update soon..I so waana read more…Take care

Geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
please update soon
love ur story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Interesting soo far!!..
Like the story line.. Raghu's mixed emotions is definitely confusing Antara aswell as hurting her..
please pm me if do send out pms...Thanks!..

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