surya ff Our Dreams UPDATED PART 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u all friends for your precious comments and liking my ff
i definately write next part very soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u all friends for ur lovely comments so here is my next part hope u love it
PART 2
surya checked out of the hotel and went to the khuran's quarters where they had been alloted a house .
the quarters was well furnished and had all the facilities .surya are very happy to see their beautiful small house
NEXT MORNING
sandhya wake up to find suraj sleeping peacefully next to her. she looked at his cute face and wondered how he had becoe so dear to har. she made sure suraj was sleep and quickly placed a kiss on his forehead and goes to freshen up. as soon as she closes the doar suraj opens his eyes with a smile .he pretends to be sleep .
sandhya comes out from the washroom she is dressed in a blue saree . she sees the time it is 8 and suraj has to report at 9 she rushes to make tea.
IN RATHI HOUSE
everyone is ready and by there at dianing table but no one is eating, bhabho finally breaks the silence and tell them that she did this for the sake of her chora .everyone is confused. she says that suraj being the eldest in her family so she wanted him to do something big in his life .suraj has to face difficulties of life and learn to do things own.
he should learn to live independently.everyone is happy now.
here sandhya comes with tea for suraj and wakes him up. he again lies down when she turned the other side
she asks suraj u have to go to hotel if u don't wake up now u will be late and it is badluck. suraj says this day will be very good for him. sandhya is cofused so he says that today for the first time he got a kiss for her[and this will bring him all the luck.
sandhya's face turns red like rose and she looks downs and said i have not done anything like this and ran from there
suraj goes to et freshenes up and and sandhya leaves to make food.she had learnt bit of cooking from her bhabhi before getting married
she hears suraj calling her and she goes to theiir bedroom .suraj asks for his clothes and she gives a white coloured kurta to him.suraj eats breakfast and leaves for office.
KHURANA'S HOTEL
suraj reahes there in tie and smiles to hiself. suraj is looking very ordinary in his clothes so the gatekeeper stops him and arguing with suraj . when suddenly nitin khurana saw him he scolded the gatekeeper and said sorry to suraj for his misbehaviour . and introduce suraj as a head chef of this hotel
mr khurana and the employes welcome him with flowers where some people already know suraj because of the competetion.
nitin shows suraj his cabin and suraj is pleased with it. suraj calls up sandhya and informs her that he reached in time . suraj gets his first order and khurana said u should not to be worry about any thing just order about recipies to other chef and they will make it as u want . you have to just observed their work.
IN CONFERENCE ROOM
suraj proposed his working ideas to other chefs and all are impressed and praises him a lot . one chef said sir your working ideas are very mice but sorry sir u are not looking like a head chef u should change ur dressing sense
mr khurana comes in conference room said tht gentelmn u should not be worry about him from tomorrow we will change him as a five star hotel's head chef. suraj feels uncomfortable about this. he calls up sandhya in the middle and informs her that he would'nt be coming for lunch.sandhya says ok.
SURYA HOUSE
Sandhya hangs up suraj's calls and is feeling bored so she calls chavi. chavi asks her wether everything ok and sandhya replies yes .chavi says that their UPSC eam dates will be declared next week and sandhya gets tensed. sandhya says she don't have any books here for prepration of exams . chavi says pls don't take tension suraj bhaiya will get u all your books .they talk a bit more and then hangs up.
PRECAP sandhya is angry with suraj for coming late from hotel and they spent some quality time together
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!Awesome update raina ..
interesting Precap,Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update Raina
Waiting to see surYa romancing in the next part ...

nd nice that suraj will change his costume 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update Raina 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update raina...
Aww!! surya scene soo cute..
It is good that Bhabho is nice and caring for her son atleast in your FF..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u all the friends for your beautiful comments and liking it
PART 3
CONFERENCE ROOM
suraj explains his plans to his assistant nd he quickly prepares a rough plan of the product nd shows it to khurana
khurana is impressed by him he says that he wants to the fair one as early as possible.
surj is working on the plan when he suddenly looks at his watch its already 9 and sandya is alone at home .
he immediately gets up and rushes off eith his bag .he asked driver to drive fast and reaches home .sandhya opens the door and is not in er best mood .
she dosn't talk anything and suraj tries romancing with her .he says sorry and she gies in . he says that he was caught up with a new recepies and has to submit tomorrow.
she asks him to go freshen up and she'l get dinner ready .they et dinner together and suraj starts working on the new receipies .suraj finishes off his work and sees sandhya who is asleep besides him he takes her in his arms and carries her to the bed and gently placed her on it .suraj is about to switch off the lihts when sandhy holds his hand ,he looks at her she says suraj ji sleep with me don't go away .he removes her hand switches off the light and lies down with her.
IN RATHI HOUSE
Bhabho is worried about suraj and sandhya .she says that its for the first time that she has't seen her chora for so many days.
she is really worried for them and then bhaba sa gets an idea he proposes a plan about going to delhi to see them both.
meenakshi is about to call them and inform them abt their coming when vikram says why can't they give them a surprise.
everyone agrees and decided to give surya a surprise. bhabho asks mohit to reserve tickets for them.
SURYA HOUSE
sandhya wakes up and sees that suraj is already up and she wonders how she reached here.she sees suraj working on his ideas and wrote it on papers. she asks him how she reached here. he says that she was waiting for him to finish his work and don't know when she dozed off .suraj smiles and says that when he is there she dosn't need to worry .
he says that he carried her to the bed .sandhya becomes shy and runs off.
suddenly the door bell rings. suraj opens the door where a person gives him some packets .
sandhya asks suraj about these packets. suarj opens it said khurana sir gave me some new suits as a head checf of their hotel. both becomes happy by mr khurana's gesture.
suraj is getting ready and is wearing a black colour gabardine suit looking very handsome.
he is adjusting his tie when sandhya comes to the room he asks her to help him with the tie and sandhya comes to help him. she is adjusting it around his neck and he is ready for some mischief .he keeps hugging her and tickling on her waist . sandhya somehow finishes it and goes to take his breakfast .
she feeds him and he goes to hotel with a lucky kiss from his beloved wife.
RATHI HOUSE
bhabho and bhabha sa are all set with the packing done . meenakshi has given bhabho pickles and other delicasies for surya.
they start off to the railway station .they get in the train .bhabho had infored sandhya's brother ankur about her visit and he was happy . he said that he too wished to see them.
sorry friends this part is not so romantic but i will give u a romantic part definately .
so bhabho is coming back in suray's life so what should be the next just wait and read.
PRECAP - surya's shoping and bhabho's darshan in surya's house
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i think this is not a good part so nobody likes it .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Raina why r u telling like this ?? Its really awesome..
Liked surYa cute cute romance 😳

nd Suraj's new avatar 😛

bb s good in ur ff and happy to know that she s missing surYa 😃

Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Nice update raina..
Cute surya moments ..
IT is nice that suraj is proving himself in his career..

nice to see bhabho like this

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