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Posted: 17 years ago
omg..kat i loouuv dis party u brought in....man i love da twists n turns...gr8 idea 😛 😛 n ur keerti shubhankar scene....da best...

geet awsm yaar..ridz wearn red 😳 😳 armaan ki bolti to band hooni hi thi..atul faintn 😆 😆 u v got me dyn here...how wil rahul say nythn...me thinks woh donno ek dooosre ke baal noochte noochte confess karenge
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 😆
yaar..i really wanted to do that..but abhi continue nahi kar paaungi..since i have fever and mom is telling me to sleep..so i'll take a lil nap...
d101 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
dats k sweety..u take care..get wel soon..sweet dreams
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh geet u also have fever..i also have fever from 3 days!!!i just came back from the doctor's an hour ago..u noe blood test.mayb i have jaundice..anyways take care yaar geet
we dont want one of our star writer to get sick..do we?
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol geet u ill like me as well... awwee get well soon great update 👏 👏 👏

@deeps updated daisies!! 😉

Ok i think where missing lovely at the party 😉 ...

Pragati honey u update
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Posted: 17 years ago
i wud but i am bizy with the index...have u read any part of my ff till now?
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Posted: 17 years ago
OHKY GUYS..INDEX UPDATED ON PAGE 1..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
cooollllll 👏 👏 👏 ...

@Pragti Im still half way through uf ff... my hindi is not that brill so im still understanding it 😛

Love Kat
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Posted: 17 years ago
thx for the wishes guys..but i just cant stop writing...

ok here goes the next part...

the guys go sit with their respective gals...rahul goes to sit with muskaan but sees that muskaan isnt there...but aman is..

rahul :um guys..muskaan kidhar hai...

suddenly all the lights go out...
then a voice very familiar

musku:um..hi guys..aaj main aap sabse kuchh kehna chahti hoon..more specifically rahul se.

rahul is veryyy much shocked to speak..

muskaan:rahul...tu aur main bachpan se saath hain..kutte-billi ki tarah ladein hain but hum kab dost ban gaye pata hi nahi chala...is ladayee ko karte karte kab tujjhse pyaar karne lagi pata hi nahi chala..
rahul..tu bhale mujjhse nafrat karta ho ...par maine dil se hamesha sirf tujjhi ko chaha hai..aur koi banda mera khankhajoora thodi na ho sakta hai...i love u rahul...i really love you.

rahul slowly gets up amidst the silence and goes up to where muskaan is standing..the light reflects a tear drop on his cheek..just a single one but enough to show his love...

rahul:muskaan...main bhi tujjhse bohot pyar karta hoon..tabhi toh ladta hoon..tujjhse zaada khoobsoorat koi nahi hai..tujjhse zaada pyaara mujjhe koi nahi hai.plzz would u do me the honour of staying with me always?

they hug and rahul kisses her on the forehead...they come back on the table,hand in hand..looking just like two people in love should look...


shubhu:wow muskaan..kya bola...tum bhi rahul..lagta hai ujjhe tumse kuchh tips leni padengi...

in a flash of inspiration..he gets up suddenly..faces keerti and says
shubhu:keerti..meri peeli pari..meri peeli hitlerni...plzzz aaj mujjhe kehne do..i luv u

keerti:DR SHUBHANKAR..aapne kya socha..aap mujjhe peela peela bologe aur main haan kar doongi...especially when my fave colour is GREEN??

shubhu(v scared now):um...ok..hari pari?hari hitlarni?

keerti:haan..that's better..ohh shubhu..i luv u too... 😳

they suddenly start kissing...
fortunately..armaan stops them and they go outside...
😆 😆

sorry guys..kya karun...romance ke saath humour toh daalna bohot achha lagta hai...

atul:um..main jaa raha hoon...

armaan:kahan champ?

atul:arre meri landlady maya ko paani nahi deti..main doonga jaake...

he starts to go...

angie:atul...

atul:nahi anjali..plzz aaj kuchh mat bolna..ab main samajh gaya hoon..ki tum mujjhse pyar karti hi nahi ho...khush rehna anjali...bye..

he goes outside..

angie goes running...
angie :ATUL ruko toh sahi...tumhari himmat kaise hui presume karne ki??

atul:sorry anjali...

angie:kya sorry...tumhe pata bhi hai ab tumhari yeh silly baaton pe mujjhe kitna pyaar aata hai?

atul:sorry anja-KYa??

angie:haan atul..main bhi tumse bohot pyar karti hoon..

atul:omg..sachhi anjali...toh phir suno...
arre...sorry..

angie:kya hua?

atul:woh..maine tumhare liye itne saare sher learn kiye the...sab bhool gaya...

angie:koi baat nahi..mere jaan-e-jigar..hum saath milkar sher seekhenge,ok?

atul:ok..ab main maya ke paas jaata hoon..

angie:nahi ..mat jaao..aaj maya ki mummy ke pass ruk jaao..plzz?

atul says ok and they go back inside....

ab agli instalment mein baaki ka...plzz batana..
pragu dear..get well soon to u too 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i am going to continue
it's my first time so please bear me
and geet very nice and cute part luved it
all r sitting inside sab sath me baithe hai
except armaan and riddhima
riddhima is acting as she is still angry with armaan for what he did yesterday
then armaan goes to ridz and asks her for dance
but she says no
then anje says c'mon ridz ab maan bhi javo
dekho na luver boy tumhe manne ke leye kitne mehnat kar raha hai
then ridz thinks for a movement and then agrees to dance with armaan
armaan takes her her hand and foes to the dance floor
and while going there he says sorry to ridz for what he said yesterday ridz gives a it's ok look
the song hum tum little song is playing
and a dance to it very passionately
dono ek dusre ke aankhon me dub kar nach rahe the
then armaan whispers jaan mai tumse bohot pyar karta hu mughse kabhi mat ruthna
ridz gives him a very loving look
and lays her head on armaan chest and both continue to dance
meanwhile keerthi and shubh also come to the dance floor and start dancing
seeing them atul also asks anje for dance
even they come to the dance floor and start dancing
to a sweet and romantic music being played
rahul and muskaan just sit on table and watching each other lovingly
rahul holds muskaans hands and says
tum mughe itna pyar karte lekin kabhi nahe bola
then muskaan says mai tum hare kehna ka intazaar kar rahe the lekin tum apne dil ke baat mughe kabhi nahe bataye
then even they decide to dance and go to the dance floor
now all the pairs r dancing
and enjoying eachother's company
and they r loving it


hope u all like it
i know it's not so good
but please bear me
cause it's my first time
ans sorry for the mistakes

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