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Posted: 12 years ago
I am extremely sorry Vidhi
I know I am like super late in commenting
The story is so interesting
With each chapter it leaves million of questions behind
Uday character has two shades
One that he shows in front of Manyata
And the other behind her
Eagerly waiting for the story to proceed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Update soon na vidhi it's being ages since h haven't updated really can't wait for the next part


Sorry have been busy lately !
Will update soon ... Maybe tonight or tomorrow ... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chocohollic

I am extremely sorry Vidhi
I know I am like super late in commenting It's ok !
The story is so interesting
With each chapter it leaves million of questions behind
Uday character has two shades
One that he shows in front of Manyata
And the other behind her
Eagerly waiting for the story to proceed


Thanks Mona !
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 6

Uday looked at Manyata's face as she lay unconscious on the passenger

seat of his car while he was driving.

What has she been doing in London ? Why didn't I think about this before

…? How come did she shift from Mumbai to London and is she …. Alone ?

He felt his breath hitch as he saw her gaining consciousness.

Manyata slowly opened her eyes only to be captured by another pair of

intense eyes. Both stared into each other's eyes for a long time trying to

search for something. Manyata looked away not able to bear his intense

gaze.

Though Uday had confessed his love she still felt uneasiness with him. As

though he would harm her … as though he is not her Uday …

She chuckled at her thoughts trying to unease the tension in her.

Manyata, you are behaving silly. Why would he hurt you ? And of course

he has not been zapped somewhere …

Though she tried every way to relax her nerves, she failed desperately.

Both didn't say anything as though they found some solace in the silence.

Each other who they seek,
With silent words they speak !

After a long time, Uday said, "Princess, when did you shift to London?"

Manyata was shocked. Though she knew he would ask this sooner or later,

she was still not ready for it. Her heart said to tell him the truth while her

brain disagreed and she finally listened to her brain.

Uday clicked his fingers in front of her bringing her out of his trance. She

looked at him and realized that he has been waiting for an answer.

"Umm … nothing much. I just shifted to London for a change."

Uday looked at her with raised eyebrows and she knew that he was not

buying it but still she didn't say anything instead looked away. Uday let the

matter drop though he was curious to know the reason.

Manyata suddenly realized something and asked him, "Uday, where are we

going ?"

She felt her nerves panicking.

"Princess, we are going to a restaurant because I know you must be

hungry as you haven't had dinner."

Manyata looked at him while he stared back. Both had numerous questions

but maybe they themselves didn't want the answers …..

Uday opened the passenger door and forwarded his hand to Manyata. She

nervously kept her hand in his while he smiled back at her.

Both walked inside the almost empty restaurant and sat down at a secluded corner.

The waiter walked up to take their order.

"Mushroom ravioli" Both said in unison while the waiter smiled a knowing

smile and walked away leaving behind a flustered Uday and Manyata.

As the food came, they silently ate while stealing glances at one another.

Uday was about to ask something when Manyata's phone rang and she

looked at the caller ID and paled. Though Uday notice the change in her,

he kept quite. She picked up the phone. After a brief chat of which all that

Uday could gather was a bunch of whispers, she kept the phone.

Uday was about to ask her something when she interrupted, "Uday I am

sorry but I have to leave."

Uday was fuming inside but remained calm on the outside and said, "It's ok

I will drop you."

"No .. No I will take a cab." Manyata fumbled with her words.

"Manyata, I said I will drop you." His voice oozed out authority and she

dared not argue further.

They both walked out and sat in the car and drove away.

In the car, Manyata fell into deep thought.

In between all these ups and downs of my life, I can't ignore Maan. It is

unfair. I will sort out my life and Uday later but why should he suffer ?

The sudden jerk at the car stopping, brought her back to the present. She

looked out of the window to see that they had reached Rohan's house.

Rohan was to go back for his practice and so he wouldn't be here and

anyways she couldn't go to her apartment because oldie must be waiting

for. And there would be only Maan in the house and ….

Oh no ! Maan is here and Uday … God what am I to do ? Didn't you find

anyone else to burden with problems ?

She stepped out of the car hoping that Uday would drop the courtesy to

come and leave her at the doorstep. She had enough for a day and

couldn't stand anything else. And she wasn't sure to how Uday would react

to Maan.

But all her efforts went in vain as she heard a voice from behind.

"Princess, wait I will drop you at the doorstep."

She turned back and gave him nervous smile and waited till he joined her.

Both walked till the gate of the house.

Manyata stopped outside and smiled at Uday and said, "Goodnight !"

Hoping that he would get the signal to leave but luck wasn't on her side.

"Princess, come on ! You wouldn't invite me into your house ?"

"Oh I am sorry. I forgot …" Manyata cursed her luck and took out the spare

key. Opening the door, she hoped that Maan would be asleep by now.

She hadn't taken a step into the house and switched on the lights when a

small figure jumped up and hugged her tight.

"Mommy !"



So how was it ?

Good or bad ?

Did it make up for the long wait ?

Do leave behind your likes and reviews !

Will be waiting to read them !




Vidhi


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome vidhi just loved it loved the restaurant scene... Wait did I just read it right this maan is calling manyata mummy how? Now I'm really curious to read the next part and want to see uday's reaction please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing parts Vidhi

Just finished reading all the parts

Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vidhi, i loved it very much. And manyata nd maan?? Waiting fr da next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update vidhi
restorunt scene ws nice
maan say mummy to manyata wht ws uday reaction n ye kiska bacha hai manytauday ka ???
So many que bt wait fr nxt update
thanks 4 pm n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey!😳
awesome update
& loved the restaurant scene
i'm really curious to read next chappy
please update it soon
btwn thanks for the pm

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