'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 100

uh oh! what did u doo!!!
bad move andy!
ab toh there will be adhi's shraadh
lol. mr shark type maut ayegi use
hope u arent planning some tragic ending!
it was awesome update!
loved it to the core
update soon
ughh... this is getting too much interesting

It was superb!

Originally posted by: annabh

thank you for the pm
update asap
now yehhh i am second to comment
i had been waiting for this update since so long i seriously dont get much time to write😭
uday pov was very touching
he explained his reasons of life had to or people are asking why mr shark is so and all that😃
thank god he has controlled over his anger
now no more he is mr shark just a man who
loves his girl a lot ya, how true😳
and now coming to the next part
abh adhi toh gaya i dont think so
i mean he is getting engaged to the girl
uday is totaly mad about
i too at a point do not want mr shark back mr shrk wont be back, but his evil mind😆
but the final verdicts your and yea
would love to see him getting all posssesive for manyata i will try to include that
the end he seemed really angry
but i feel manyata is happy with adhi next chap is manyta pov
ok thank you this was a treat to the upcoming week for me
hugzz anni

thanks anni for the lovely comment, loved it😳

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm updateee andy plzzz dont make uday again a criminal let him be our prince charming uv

thanks huma, all i can say it was circumstances that made uday mr shark and the same will make him back too😳

Originally posted by: catty2000

Superb update Andy !

Great going 👏

Loved it 😳Ahh!! thanks so much vidhi😃

Mr. Shark's or better say Uday's POV was good !

It gave quite an insight into his thinking and life ! ya it was really needed

i liekd teh engagement sequence !

Don't think me mad ... 😆 no of course i wouldn't😃

But you know i didn't want to see Uday changing completely !

I don't mean that he should go around murdering people ... 🤣

But i still wanted that possesive and angry Uday !

And you have kept him totally intact ! same here, i just didnt want him to murder every person he was mad at, i just reformed him

I want to see him win her back !

Though i know its not going to be totally easy ... 🤣 no manyta can be reallly stubborn😆

Continue soon ... maybe next week

Thanks for the PM !

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... It was amazing...

Uday's pov was very well described...

I am waiting for the manveer meeting...

Update soon...

And thanx for the pm...

thanks nithya. Manveer will meet soon, and its gona be fireworks lol

Wow awesome story... Started reading it tiday n finished all chapters in one go... I knw uday killing rajat was wrong n he shud b punished bt this is a story so we cn spare him... 😉 N nw lets concentrate on manveer luv story widout any blood shed, though angry n possessive uday is most welcome...
Want uday to make manyata his in UV style, asking for forgiveness n all does nt suit his character... Waiting for next update... Pls add me to ur pm list