MAKING UDAY AND J JEALOUS PG 19 CHAP 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya666

i loved it plzz pm me

and update soon

i really like jelousy grewing between lovers just loved it

(i m so evil )😉

update asap

thank u ..ya i also love jealousy type ff sure i will pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum yaar 👏loved the first part cont soon dear and plzz PM me

if u can🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
THE NEXT MORNING MANYATA WOKE UP AND SAID TO HER SELF YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH AB KAHA JAO GEY BACHKEY YUVRANI MANYATA SEY YA UP COMING MAHARANI MANAYATA YVS SEY HAN NAHI TOH THEN SHE GOT READY AND CAME DOWNSTAIRS AND SAT DOWN IN DS SEAT AND WAS QUIETLY HAVING HER BREAKFAST UDAY WAS STARING AT HER BUT MANAYA WAS IGNORING HER
J;JIJI CAN U PASS THE JUICE
SHE DIDNT SAY ANYTING THEN AGAIN SHE REPEAT THAT MANAYTA GOT IRRITATED
M;OFF HOO JAY UR IRRITATING ME HUM YUVRANI HEI HUM JUICE PASS KAREY OR WO BHE TUMHEY OH PLZ SEEMA JI PASS THE JUICE TO HER
UDAY AND EVERYONE WAS SHOCK OF HER BEHAVIOUR JAY WAS SUPER ANGRY ON THIS AND VB WAS GIGLING
J;JIJI HUMNEY APSEY JUICE MANGA THA OR U ARE BEING RUDE TO ME
M;HAN TOH MENEY TUMHEY JUICE HE DIYA HEI NA KEY ZEHAR OR WESEY BHE HAMAREY PASS TUMHAERY IS STUPID SEY BAATON KE LIYE SAMEY (TIME )NHE HEI SO EXUSE ME THEN SHE WENT TO THE STUDY ROOM TO DO SOME WORK OF RIYASAT WORK AND THIS WAS THE SUPER INSULT OF JAI SHE ANGRILY WENT TO HER ROOM THEN IT WAS EVENING .MANAYTA GOT READY AND WORE A BEAUTIFUL WHITE ANARKALI DRESS WHICH MAKE HER SKIN GLOW AND SHE WORE PEARL EARINGS AND BRACELET THEN SHE CAME DOWNSTAIRS EVERYONE WERE SITTING THERE EXCEPT JAY,UDAY SAW HER AND WAS LOST IN HER AND MANAYATA KNEW THIS BUT SHE IGNORE HIM AND THEN SHE WAS MOVING TOWARDS THE EXIT DOOR WHEN KOMAL ASKED
K;BETA KHA JARAHE AP
M;MAA HUM KISE SEY MILNEY JA RAHEY HEI JALDI AJAEY GEY
K;ACHA THEEK HEI KHAYAL RAKHIYE GA
MANAYATA WENT OFF WITH A SMILE WHICH MAKE UDAY SUSPICIOUS HE SAID TO HIMSELF KUCH TO GARBAR HEI DEKHNA PAREY GA AND HE EXUSE THEM BY SAYING HE HAS MEETING TO ATTEND HE FOLLOWED MANAYATA CAR AND THEN IT STOPPED NEAR A CAFE AND SHE CAME OUT OF THE CAR AND HE FOLLOWED HER TO SEE THAT WHAT HE IS THINKING IS RIGHT OR WRONG?AND THEN HE SAW JAGAT SITTING ON A TABLE WAITING FOR HER HE PULLED THE CHAIR FOR HER AND KISSED HER HAND WHICH MAKE UDAY ANGRY AND THE HE STORM OUT OF THE PLACE AND BOTH JAGAT AND MANAYTA BURST OUT OF THE LAUGH
M,JAGAT MINDBLOWING PERFOMANCE I MUST SAY
JG:THANK U THANKU SO NEXT PLAN READY HEI THEN HE NARRATE THE WHOLE PLAN TO HER
M;YEH MEI NHE KARSAKTE
J;TUMHEY YEH KARNA HOGA UV KELIYE USEY TUMHEY PANAHEI YA NHE YA JAI KO HARANA HEI YA NHE
M;KYA SACH MEI KARPAUN GE
JG;YES U CAN DO IT MANAYATA AND U HAVE TO CHANGE
M;I WILL TRY UV KELIYE KUCH BHE HAAN NAHI TOH THEN BOTH WENT FOR SHOPPING AND BOTH BUY DRESESS FOR MANAYATA THEN THEY CAME TO RAJMAHAL THERE UDAY WAS WAITING FOR HER IN HALL AND WAS HOLDING A FILE IN HIS HAND FOR SHOWING THAT HE IS BUSY THEN MANAYATA CAME HAPPILY LAUGHING AND GIGLING WITH JAGAT THIS WAS MAKING UDAY FACE RED AND HE WAS FEELING LIKE PUNCH JAGAT .THEN KOMAL CAME THERE AND GREETED HIM AND HE TOOK KOMAL ASHRIWAD AND SHE ASKED
K;JG AP YAHAN KOI BAAT THE KYA
JG;NHE AUNTY KOMAL WO BUS HUM MANAYTA KEY SATH SHOPPING KARNEY GAYE THEY JAI HEARED THAT AND BECAME JEALOUS AND SHE CAME TO THE HALL TO LISTEN WHAT IS GOING ON...AUNTY KOMAL HUM MANAYATA KO APNEY DOST KE PARTY MEI LEJANA CHATEY HEI SO IF U DONT MIND
J INTRUPPTED;JIJI KO KYN WO KAHAN PARTY MEI INTEREST HE..MANAYATA INTERUPPTED
M;HOW COME U COME TO KNOWTHAT HUM PARTY MEI INTEREST NHE HEI OFCOURSE HUM HEI AUR HAN SIRF TUMHEY INTEREST NHE HO SAKTA DOSRON KA BHE HOSAKTA HEI THIS MADE JAI MOUTH ZIPPED :p
K;THEEK HEI BETA AP CHALIYE JAEY GA AGAR MANATA KO KOI PARESHAANI NHE HEI THEN VIJAY AND UN CAME OR HUM NHE A SAKTEY
JG;NO WAYS APLOG BHE ASAKETEY I WOULD LOVE KEY AB SAB AEY
J;OFFCOURSE HUM AEY GEY UDAY KEY SATH HAINA UDAY
U;HAN ZAROR
PRECAP;
IN PARTY
UDAY IS ANGRY PLUS JEALOUS ,CLOSE DANCE BETWEEN MANYATA AND-------
JAGATA AND MANYATA MARRIAGE SHAGUN
I AM CONTINUING CHPTER 2 FROM HERE

CHAPTER 2
THEN HE WENTOUTSIDE AND WAS THINKING ABOUT WAT HAPPENED INSIDE HOW MANAYATA WAS LAUGHING WITH JAGAT AND HOW JAGAT KISSED MANAYAT HAND HE SAID TO HIMSELF USKE KE ITNE HIMMAT KEY USNEY MNAYAT KEY HATH KO KISS KIYA I WILL NOT SPARE HIM ,OR MNAYATA ITNEY SAB HONEY KEY BAAD AESEY BEHAVE KAR RAHE HEI JESEY KUCH HUA HE NHE HEI MAGAR HAMEY IS SEY KYA HUM KYN ITNA FIQR KARARHAEY WO JO BHE KAREY HAMEY USE SEY KOI MATLAB NHE HONA CHAIYE WO JO BHE KAREY KARNEY DO THEN MAKING HIS ANGER CALMED HE WENT TO HIS ROOM TO GET READY FOR THE PARTY.AFTER 15 MINUTES HE CAME DOWN WHERE EVERYONE WAS READY AND WAS WAITING FOR MANYATA .
J;JIJI KAB SEY ITNA TIME LAGANEY LAG GAE PATA NHE KAB AEY GE
M;HUM YAHAN HEI JAI OH TUM NEY HAMEY PUKARA OR HUM A GAEY IS KA MATLAB HAMARE LAMBI UMER HOGE SHE CAME DOWN STAIRS WEARING A BEAUTIFUL DARK BLUE GOWN UDAY WAS MESMERIZED AND HIS EYES POPPED OUT AND HE CANNOT MOVE HIS FROM HER JAY SHRUGGED HIM
J(ANGRILY)CHALEY UDAY HUM LATE HO RAHEY HEI
UDAY HAN HANNN
VB AND UNNATI PRAISED HER BEAUTY AND THEN MANAYTA DECIDE TO GO ALONE IN THE CAR BECAUSE SHE IS THE THE YUVRANI UDAY WAS FEELING UNCOMFORTABLE OF MANAYATA NEW BEHAVIOUR THEY REACHED THERE AND THERE WERE MANY REPORTERS AND MEDIA THEY FLASHED ,MANY PICXX OF MANAYATA AND THERE JAGAT CAME AND THEY HOLD EACH OTHER HAND AND MOVE INSIDE THERE THE MEDIA WAS FLSHING PICS AND THIS MAYBE THE HEADLINE OF THE NEWSPAPER THE BLABBERING OF PEOPLE WAS MAKING IRRITATED HE MOVED INSIDE FOLLOWED BY OTHERS WHEN THEY REACHED INSIDE JAGAT AND MANAYATA WAS DANCING A CLOSE DANCE WHICH WAS MAKING UDAY VERY ANGRY THEN HE STARTED TO DRINK AND THEN JAGAT INTRODUCE HIS FRIENDS TO MANYATA AND THEY WERE TALKING WHEN SUUDENLY THE LIGHTS WENT OFF AND A SONG PLAYED AND A SHADOW CAME FROM BACKAND STARETD TO DANCE FOLLOWED BU OTHER MAN AND IT WAS NON OTHER THAN UDAY
Breathless"

If our love was a fairy tale
I would charge in and rescue you
On a yacht baby we would sail
To an island where we'd say I do

And if we had babies they would look like you
It'd be so beautiful if that came true
You don't even know how very special you are

😳
You leave me breathless
You're everything good in my life
You leave me breathless
I still can't believe that you're mine
You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful you're leaving me
Breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made

And if we had babies they would have your eyes
I would fall deeper watching you give life
You don't even know how very special you are



You must have been sent from heaven to earth to change me
You're like an angel
The thing that I feel is stronger than love believe me
You're something special
I only hope that I'll one day deserve what you've given me
But all I can do is try
Every day of my life😳

do listen it it nce and my favourite

THEN MANYATA WAS LOST IN HIM HOW SWEETLY HE WAS DANCING HE WAS DANCING FOR MANYATA AND HE CAME CLOSED TO HER BUT HE GRAB JAI HAND ,SHE WAS STANDING BEHIND HER FROM INSIDE MANYTA WAS SUPER ANGRY BUT DIDNT SHOW IT, SHE WAS LIKE TO GIVE HER SWEAR WORDS TO KAMINI JAY .THEN A MAN ASKED A DANCE FROM MANYATA SHE DIDNT SEE HIM BECAUSE THE LIGHTS WERE OFF BUT WHEN HE ASKED HER FOR SHE HASLITEN THAT VOICE BEFORE BUT WHERE THEN SHE DIDNT CARE WHO HE WAS SHE JUST WENT WITH HIM TO MAKE UDAY JEALOUS.WHENN THEY REACHED TO THE DANCE FLOOR THEU STARTED TO DANCE AND THE MAN CAME MORE CLOSER TO HER IN EACH STEP WHICH MAKE MNAYTA UNCOMFOTABLE AND THEN SHE TRIED TO LOOK WHO WAS BUT COULDNT SEE HIM UDAY WAS LOOKING AND WAS VERY ANGRY AND THEN HE LEFT THE DANCE FLOOR AND STARTED TO DRINK VERY BADLY AND WAS WHEN HE DRINK ONE GLAAS AND SAW MANAYTA AND THEN AGAIN HE DRINK IN EACH EVERY CLOSENESS OF BOTH MAKE HIM ANGRY AND HE USE TO DRINK THEN THE SONG FINISH BUT THE MAN WAS HOLDING HERR THEN THE LIGHTS CAME AND SHE WAS SHOCKED TO SEE WHO IT WAS HE WAS SMIRKING AND IT WAS THAT BLOODY AKASH WITH WHOM SHE WAS DANCING UDAY WAS UPRO TAKE ANOTHER DANCE WHEN HE SAW AKSH AND THE POSITION HOW MUCH CLOSE THEY WERE AND HOW HE WAS HOLDING HER FROM WAIST HE WAS HOLDING THE GLASS WHEN HE BROKE THE GLASS IN HIS HAND HIS HAND WAS BLEEDING AND HIS EYES WAS RED WITH HATE AND PAIN .
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ?
PRECAP;
AKASH AND UDAY FIGHTING AND MANYATA KE SHAADI KA SHAGUN
Edited by mahilove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: killerashish

awesum yaar 👏loved the first part cont soon dear and plzz PM me


if u can🤗

DONE CHECKED IT AND PM ALSO 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
awesome
awesome
i loved the whole thing
beautifully written
and imagined
please please please update soon
thanks so much for the pm
u rock and so does your writing and imaginations
cant wait to see jagat and manyata dancing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome

awesome
awesome
i loved the whole thing
beautifully written
and imagined
please please please update soon
thanks so much for the pm
u rock and so does your writing and imaginations
cant wait to see jagat and manyata dancing

thank u thank u and thank u ya i will update today but who said that she will dance with jagat dear she will dance with him but she will with someone else also
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: mahilove

thank u thank u and thank u ya i will update today but who said that she will dance with jagat dear she will dance with him but she will with someone else also


i know the other one will be uday
can we get some more moments between jagat and manyata
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: vampire12345678


i know the other one will be uday
can we get some more moments between jagat and manyata

no dear u are wrong ya there will be to much of jagat and manata that uday will hurthimself :( upps meney to adha baat he diya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: mahilove

no dear u are wrong ya there will be to much of jagat and manata that uday will hurthimself :( upps meney to adha baat he diya


i am now getting excited
please please update soon
please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
ur updates are really interesting.
cont. soon.
thnks for the pm

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