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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Fabulous Job⭐️
Manyata and Uday together at Jaigarh...always wanted something like that to happen in the show.😍
Poor UV...he is going though a lot of pain...
Update soon...tumne adaat bigaar di hai😆

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Hubze

@Hubze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Dam man how the heck I missed it 😲... Just read the whole thing and dude let me tell you you are freaking awesome 👏... Update the next part soon and PM me...😃

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kulsum wadi

@wadi..doll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Hey Megzzz Awesome update
HEY whats up wid Akaash he is two timing Manyata
loving Uday haii FF mei bhit itnaaa hawt hai yaar
PLz jaldi update karna ..

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-Misek-

@-Misek-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Hey Megzz..

I had two parts to catch up with.. I must say they were both marvellous.. Happy that its gonna be 10 parts now.. Can't wait for the nest update.. keep up the gud wrk and I luv the fact that you are updating it fast.. 🤗

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Just read your FF...Its AMAZING!!!!Pls pm me when u update next.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

awesome update manyatha seem to have made a deal with the devil is she stupid akash has his reasons for being they and she is not one of them she is rude to the only person who takes care of her poor uday he should get a better princess thanks for the pm

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sheet_leher

@sheet_leher

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

hi,
I've been a silent reader of your work for quite a long time. your virman fantasy updates were truly awesome and with manveer, well it seems that I'm watching a beautiful movie...I'm always left wanting for more😊

coming back to this story...well you've got me hooked...seriously.
read all the parts on my mobile so wasn't able to post a reply.
but seriously, your writing skills are amazing...it's feels reading a good book and never wanting to put it down!!!
your last two parts scared me...i was reluctant to scroll down and read more, afraid that something might happen to uv and then I'd be all sad and think about him all the time( not that i don't anyway)!!!!
thank god you've made aakash a grey character, i am seriously getting bored with his goody-good image onscreen... udayveer as usual is a mystery, whom i'm dying to unravel but he keeps making me go around in circles!!!!

really waiting for the next update... what had happened in the "past"?
and why this sudden change in UV??? and please tell me that he's not ill...

update soon and lots of love...
asmi

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Somia3

@Somia3

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

when will the next part be up and can you pm

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Readall the parts in one go... really awesome..

do add me to your pm list...

take care

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Troll Master Gogo!

@S.H.I.E.L.D.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Hi, Indigo! 😃

This was a great update. So many twists bundled in one update! My mouth was like 😲. Whats with the multiple personality of Akash? Such a . Cannot wait for the update where Udayveer dishoom dishooms him. 🤣

Uday Manyata: Aww... The flashback was sweet. Great to see that Uday made her see why he wants to marry her, even if other people wants them to get married for political reasons.

I loved everything about the present. I liked how Manyata is a bit taken aback with Udayveer's lack of concentrated attention regarding her. I cannot wait for the part where she comforts him and takes care of his "bug" 😊

Great update!

TC.

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