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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

First of all thank you for the pm :)

This was sooo good... my breath was also uneven while reading the chapters.. I sooo loved how u wrote how they felt for eachother and how their bodies always betrayed them with its reaction...

Somehow I loved the part the most when u desrcribed how she started to cry in the car... tht was Fab nd so touching..

And obviously I loved the whole last scene!

Now excited wht the surprises r

Plz pm me ;)


Thank you for such a wonderful review ..I am so glad u liked it ..made my day ..will pm u for sure 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Beautiful...that's the best word to describe it..loved it to its very core..one of the best works i hv read on KaSum..u r a damn good writer,and I mean it! My heart was thumping while reading it..I loved each and every scene..especially the phone call and how they meet on the set..and how u described preeti took the cake! Loved it..this is way too close to reality! Neeti being excited for fawad and all..hats of to u for keeping it so real and for ur observation skills!!

I'm waiting very very eagerly for the surprises..to see what will unfold..plzzz do update soon!
Lots of love and hugs :))))


I was waiting for your review ..thank you so so much for encouraging me to write and praising ..I am glad u felt the story how I wanted to tell it ..😳 Your words really means a lot 😊
Will update soon 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Finally got tym to comment. You wont believe I read it in the morning by 5 Am when I had some important work but I chose to read it first. Shows how interesting this story is ! 😃
Coming to the story , I loved their phone conversation ❤️ and also that part where he says " Mein ghar pe aajaoun ? Tumhari yaad aa rahi hai " that was cute. I thought he would secretly sneak into her room and surprise her.
And. .. also that one " kuch kuch hota hai janeman " and " mere khwab mein mat aana let me sleep "
😆 that was cheesy nd filmy too but those lines are my favourite ⭐️
And the part which hitched my breath ! You know it ! That was sooo beautiful !!!!
Like sumona I too thought he was going to kiss her but his sudden grin came back and for a moment it felt as If kapil was totally lost in her beauty and soon he came back to the reality with that grin. Both the chapters were amazing and I loved the role Ali played in that car scene and loving preeti too ! : )

REALLY curious to know what are those two surprises ?!??!? 😊 Waiting for your updates !
Thank you for the PM.

Lots of Love'
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Finally got tym to comment. You wont believe I read it in the morning by 5 Am when I had some important work but I chose to read it first. Shows how interesting this story is ! 😃
Coming to the story , I loved their phone conversation ❤️ and also that part where he says " Mein ghar pe aajaoun ? Tumhari yaad aa rahi hai " that was cute. I thought he would secretly sneak into her room and surprise her.
And. .. also that one " kuch kuch hota hai janeman " and " mere khwab mein mat aana let me sleep "
😆 that was cheesy nd filmy too but those lines are my favourite ⭐️
And the part which hitched my breath ! You know it ! That was sooo beautiful !!!!
Like sumona I too thought he was going to kiss her but his sudden grin came back and for a moment it felt as If kapil was totally lost in her beauty and soon he came back to the reality with that grin. Both the chapters were amazing and I loved the role Ali played in that car scene and loving preeti too ! : )

REALLY curious to know what are those two surprises ?!??!? 😊 Waiting for your updates !
Thank you for the PM.

Lots of Love'


Omg omg how beautiful review !thank you so so much for writing so many kind words ..I am so happy you enjoyed it ..hehe glad that you liked phone conversation ...yeah that line is cheesy sapno me maat aana but that was actually once tweeted by sumona hehe 😆
I am so grateful that all of you encouraging me to go ahead ..with such amazing reviews ..lots of love to you too 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Wait Sumona ne kisko woh line tweet kiya? Kappu ko?
Edited by UrjaLuvsWahi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

Wait Sumona ne kisko woh line tweet kiya? Kappu ko?


Hehe Nai generally she tweeted😛😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anasuya123


Hehe Nai generally she tweeted😛😆


Oh acha haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Aww... This is so cute and beautiful.
Thank you.
And please update asap.
Also pm me please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awesome 👏

eagerly waiting for your next update 👍🏼
please update it ASAP.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I am sorry guys I couldn't post for so long..due to my mother's demise in January ..it took a while for me to start a normal routine...please bear me with mistakes ..


Chapter 5



There was heat, intense and comforting, and she could smell him, intoxicating and sensual. He brushed the curls away from her neck, and she closed her eyes momentarily as she felt the desire pound throughout her body in intense waves. She immediately turns back towards him ,doesn't want to show him how immensely affected she is .. She moaned softly as he hugs her from back tight .. her head titling to the side, and he took advantage, tugging lightly on her earlobe .his face rubbing her neck . His hands were fire on her body...smoothing down..

Months of heated glances, and now he was seducing her, but she couldn't question it, couldn't analyze it, not with his hands touching her so intimately, not with his face pressed against the skin of her neck. She doesn't know why she becomes paranoid whenever he gets so close to her ,whereas inside her heart she gets pleasure in his company ..she is confused ..

"No-o , Kapil..please "..she pulls his hands off her ..turns towards him with her eyes down .."Bata Rahe ho ki main jayun?" She still is breathing fast ..He is smiling at her, arrogant, though his eyes were so dark with want .

. ...".tu bhi na..keya ho jata hai tujhe ? Main koyi jagga daaku Nai hoon.."he laughs loud but stops looking at her serious face "..Acha Chal bata raha hoon" .." Arre humare poori team ke liye bahoot bada surprise hai ..hum pehli baar abroad shoot me ja rahe hai ..abhi tak kisiko nai pata..".Kapil's face lights up with joy and pride ..

"We are going to Dubai darlinggg"!!! Kapil almost screams with excitement ..

"Whaaat!" Sumona also shouts ..."seriously ?" She opens mouth wide .."ohh god ! What r u saying ..I can't believe it ..I went Dubai before too but this is so special! Kab ja rahe hai ?"

"Yes it's very special! "He grabs her shoulders .."u know Maine humesha se aisa sapna dekha hai team ke saath abroad show ka ..I am so happy and proud of my team..

Aur sabse khas baat ,jiske liye main itna Jada excited hoon, Maine mere birthday ke liye udhar ek bahoot badiya plan banaya hai something very special but wo bas hum dono ke liye .., humare liye joMaine kabhi Nai kiya pehle .,kisi Ko bhi mat batana ...secret keya hai maat poochna ,tere liye hai sabkuch ..Pata chalega..udhar Jane ke baad.".he winks eye...

"Oh really !" Sumona smiles at him with twinkling eyes ..".jaise ki ? give me some hint..aur Ye hum dono ke liye kaise ? Baki sare logo Ko keya batayenge ?wo to samajh jayenge na ..and media?"

"Uff kitna sochti hai tu ..itna tension mat le ..main hoon na ..Sab manage Kar lunga..Bas mujhpe bharosa rakh...hai na bharosa? " he looks deep in her eyes with so much love ..

"Batao na keya hai ? This is not fair " sumona makes angry face ..

"Wait karo thoda ...itni bhi keya jaldi hai ..first time we will go together in Dubai..main bahoot excited hoon"

Suddenly something strikes sumona's mind ..asks "preeti ko pata hai ? "

"Nai ..baat chal raha tha par confirmation to usko Nai aaya ..tujhe hi pehle bataya ..abhi usko jaake batayunga...wo to khushi se pagal hoyegi haha..kyu kuch Kaha usne?"

"Naii.. Aise hi poocha .."

"Acha chal bahaar jate hai..."

"Ruko pehle main jaati hu ..Aap thode der baad nikalna .."

"Kyu ? Baadme nikle ya pehle log to dekhenge hi !"he comes more near .. "Arre tune bataya Nai keya gift denewali hai mere bday pe ? Maine itna sare plan kiya ..mujhe bhi kuch to milna chahiye na."..he looks at her intense with his usual naughty smile

"Will think about it ."she whispers ..byee.

Her eyes met his, dark and so sexy. She smiled softly, smug and tempting, before stepping out , shutting the door behind her.

.. He smiles back into the silence ..

Sumona reaches her van only thought in her mind what might he has planned in Dubai , her heart beating with excitement , a grin covered her face which disappears suddenly with nervousness seeing preeti waiting Inside ..

"Hey kidhar thi tu ?main kitna time baithke nikal rahi thi abhi .."

"Sorry yaar thoda important call a Gaya tha .." She could not tell the truth which didn't give her a good feeling inside .

"Haa bata abhi keya hai ? "

Haa. ...she comes near her ..her face is bursting with joys and excitements ...same as Kapil some time before ..

"Maine na ek surprise birthday plan kiya hai Kapil ke liye ..we will not tell him anything but we will call him in name of rehearsal ..and get everything ready ...cake, food, gifts everything...decorate the house .."she keeps on telling what all she has planned..how she has designed to decorate ..who all are invited blah blah ...her hapiness seems soaring up to the sky ...

But sumona couldn't utter a word ..she felt her voice is choked and stopped by something heavy...she kept sweating inside the ac van.. ..her eye popped out of her face ..nervousness, fear ,shock or pain .,she couldn't understand what it is ..but she has never felt is before ...

Preeti finally stops after describing every details of Kapil's birthday she has planned ..her face looked enlighten with thousand neons ..she looks at sumona and asks "how is it? U will help me na ..I need you please .."

Preeti is so much excited she couldn't even notice how pale sumona was looking ..sumona comes out from her frozen posture and blabbers with plain face .."why not? Ye bhi koyi poochne ki baat hai ? I am always with you "..she brings out a fake smile of hapiness .. Preeti phone rings ..she hugs sumona and says "chalo abhi Jana hai ..but don't reveal it to Kapil haan..u have to promise me ..I want to give him a big surprise ..I mean we all will ..."

"Yeah sure ..don't worry ..."

Preeti moves out of the van...Sumona puts herself on the couch to settle down ..she actually feels a pain in her Chest which made her unable to move...what on earth is happening with her ? She just gets flashback of those moments she had in Kapil's van .what should she do now? Should she reveal preeti plan to Kapil? No she can't ..her whole surprise plan will be spoiled ..then should she tell preeti what happened today ..no no that's impossible ...Sumona keeps sweating in dilemma and a lot of unwanted thoughts in her mind .. .her eyes get drenched ..he gets afraid what will happen when Kapil will tell all about Dubai,knowing preeti she can understand preeti will make all her surprise plan in Dubai instead ...and then what about their secret date ..should she tell Kapil not to keep that on birthday ?it may hurt him, he may feel she doesn't not want to be with him ...god ..she just keeps searching some way out from this puzzle...


Continues ...






Edited by anasuya123 - 9 years ago

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