Short Story: An Eye Opener (non investigative) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Reshma.

Achha.. aisa kyu? Because I posted it earlier?

No your story reminded me of the old idea hidden in some corner of my mind. I was free today so wrote it 😆

Love this dialogue - 😊

The starting with reference to flashback was good, it provided a smoothness in beginning.
Duo meeting and having dinner together was nice, the convo was very good and maturely handled👏
Daya saying sorry to abhijeet, and that gap of abhijeet being absent from bureau being filled with the reference of abhijeet being extremely hurt with daya's words and then not able to concentrate on his work was very nicely shown and done..👏

ahan..Purvi..😈 NO COMMENTS..!🤬

Flight scene was nice, i wished you have shown it like, daya after listening to abhijeet put his ear plugs back on..😉😆 phir toh purvi ki jaroorat hi nahi thi.

Very nice work indeed

thank you for this NI Di..😳

Thanks for reading Riya. Actually if Daya had put on the ear plugs that track would still be open. I had to show a solid reason why that Purvi chapter was closed. 😈

Originally posted by: visrom

No your story reminded me of the old idea hidden in some corner of my mind. I was free today so wrote it 😆

awesome Vis di...👏

I understand Reshma.ab kya karen. FW couldn't think of any other name for our dear lady cop. 😵 I couldn't change that.

Originally posted by: visrom

I understand Reshma.ab kya karen. FW couldn't think of any other name for our dear lady cop. 😵 I couldn't change that.

Read it 😃

FW ne jo missing link chod diya tha tumne woh taar jur diya...good job !!!👏