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Posted: 11 years ago
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Story 1

Good attempt, but a little too straightforward. The given plot description was used with nearly no change in the beginning; you could've adapted it in your own way instead. The overall story was nice and easy to read. Looking forward to more from you. 😊

Rating - 6.5/10

Story 2

Well-written with an engaging plot. Liked how Govind's character was introduced and the buildup of suspense was generally well-done as well. The two halves of the story seemed slightly disconnected in terms of feel. Wonderful portrayal of Rajat in the first half and the climax with the shot being interrupted in the nick of time was fantastically done. Great work!

Rating - 8.5/10

Story 3

Interesting plot and narration, but a bit haphazardly presented with quite a few loopholes. Nevertheless, I liked the buildup of suspense leading to the climax, which was rather disappointing. The minister's kidnapping sequence was interesting. Decent effort overall.

Rating - 7.5/10

Story 4

Nice plot, the Silver Wolverine and all. Enjoyed the code-breaking part and the investigation was well-done as well. Decent roles assigned to all the team members and the finale with all past/present members coming together was slightly cheesy but enjoyable; would be a real treat if we ever get to see that on screen. The narration could be clearer, though.

Rating - 8/10

Story 5

A fairly straightforward plot, but well-presented and engaging. The portion with Daya sir's kidnapping leading to the climax was very well described and executed with appreciable clarity. The culprits' motive was kinda nondescript and while the license-plate codes were good, I find the explanation for the same a little disappointing. Nevertheless, good effort.

Rating - 8/10

Great work, everyone, and best wishes. 👍🏼

Edited by DemonStar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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One request...please reveal writers' name 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: debasree04

One request...please reveal writers' name😛



big deal! we all know the writers.. 🤣 I only am not sure about story 1.

stories 2,3,4 & 5 are by the usual gang of story contest participants. Shreya, GD, Ravi and I. 😆 you can easily guess who wrote which one.
Edited by visrom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: visrom



big deal! we all know the writers.. 🤣 I only am not sure about story 1.

stories 2,3,4 & 5 are by the usual gang of story contest participants. Shreya, GD, Ravi and I. 😆 you can easily guess who wrote which one.


Hahaha...that i know...actually i want to know 1st story writer whom i cant recognize 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think I give U the Result too DEBA...😆😆
I m bit Confuse but I think Story 1 was Done by BINOD...😊
ya SHEROO but I m much inclind towards BINOD...👍🏼

Could I give U the Result on My Expectation basis...😉😉
its quite Similer...😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gadhadada


I think I give U the Result too DEBA...😆😆
I m bit Confuse but I think Story 1 was Done by BINOD...😊
ya SHEROO but I m much inclind towards BINOD...👍🏼

Could I give U the Result on My Expectation basis...😉😉
its quite Similer...😆😆😆


Oh sure 😉
But GD...truly u did lots of effort in ur story...kahan kahan se dhoond dhoond ke idea nikal te ho...I think u love coding-decoding a lot 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: debasree04


Oh sure 😉
But GD...truly u did lots of effort in ur story...kahan kahan se dhoond dhoond ke idea nikal te ho...I think u love coding-decoding a lot 😉


I think I m Crack...😆😆😆
First Position got by DEMONSTAR...😉
First Runner Up got by SHERYA...😉
Second Runnerup got by GD...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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But honestly. every contest I get pissed off...no one reads and rates. Hardly 5-6 people. What's the point really! Why put in so much effort. ..I wasted my entire weekend. First of all the time given to read and rate is not sufficient. Most people will give this as an excuse For that matter even I didn't read and rate the HP story contest. Why should this be held in such a hurry? I will not write for any bday contest.

These 9 contests were making life hectic for me. No time to read pms or watch any nice episode. It was causing so much stress. I am glad it's over. Next time I want to write story in peace...and I want lot of people to read. Even if it's negative feedback it's ok.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: visrom

But honestly. every contest I get pissed off...no one reads and rates. Hardly 5-6 people. What's the point really! Why put in so much effort. ..I wasted my entire weekend. First of all the time given to read and rate is not sufficient. Most people will give this as an excuse For that matter even I didn't read and rate the HP story contest. Why should this be held in such a hurry? I will not write for any bday contest.

These 9 contests were making life hectic for me. No time to read pms or watch any nice episode. It was causing so much stress. I am glad it's over. Next time I want to write story in peace...and I want lot of people to read. Even if it's negative feedback it's ok.


Thats true and its really Stressed so from Next Time, I coompletely Boycott the Cotest especially these STORY Contest...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Honestly, I had decided not to participate because I was really busy...phir bhi when I saw you, Ravi and Shreya deciding to write, I thought chalo...usual gang is there, so let me join. Next time I won't. No point...we 4 and a few others like Deba, Snehal will read and rate. (sorry I didn't mention everyone...just mentioned those who regularly rate)

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